Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Silver Flash ❯ Chapter 3 ( Chapter 3 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
qHi everyone!! Thanks so much for all those he reviewed and all those who didn't but added me on their alert so when I update again they can see the chapter.
I decided to write the 3rd chapter without my editor again, but like I said before I soon as I get ahold of him he shall fix all my mistakes and make it better. Just because he's the best EDITOR IN THE WORLD!!!
Either way, I got home from work and I checked my inbox on hotmail and I was like wow….more reviews. Seems like everyone is liking the story so far.
So Character pairings so far…seeing as I think it is Important to get this done first.
Characters
Naru/Hina - 6
Naru/Temari - 5
Naru/ten - 2
Naru/Harem - 2
Naru/Tsunade - 1
Naru/ O.C - 6
Naru/Ino - 1
Naru/Kurenai - 2
Yaoi - 1
I'm actually alittle surprised that no one has voted for Sakura…oh wait…just got a Review for
Naru/Saku
Ok. So it seems that the Naru/OC is winning so far…I had to put one down from my friend who read the story and said she would like to see a Naru/O.C fic.
But so the ones in the lead are
Naru/Hina - which I've heard most say its been over done a lot…
Naru/Temari
Naru/OC.
I'm sorry but those are the ones your going to have to choose from. I can't keep the voting going on much longer…I'm running out of things to write…haha…Not really. Just really want to keep the story going and not drag it out of very long waiting for votes.
I'm going to be introducing the OC in this chapter as well as maybe bring in Temari for a few moment.
Declaimer - Do not own Naruto…Only the random things he does…XD
UNEDITED CHATER 3
~Recap~
“I give this battle another 2 minute” the real Naruto said as his cloned seemed to just be enjoying himself only to watch Sasuke try for another Chidori on him. “ Neh…Clone-chan…” a voice said as everyone looked at where that voice had come from “dissipate” was all that could be heard before the clone nodded and dissappeare. In the time while Naruto had waited for his clone to win he had closed his eyes and just lay against the wall, but once his clone disappeared Sasuke had no target infront of him instead of the real thing. Naruto had opened his eyes when he heard the voice but it was too late, Sasuke was only a second away. A blast was seen as the group saw the figure sitting ontop of a corner building before jumping down in the dust cloud. “Aru!!!!” Naruot shouted alittle angry “why the hell did you do that!!” everyone heard as the dust started to disappear around the tower as they could see Sasuke pull his arm out of the wall.
The dust cloud started to get blown away by the wind as two figures could now be seen. One was Naruto…but the other one…they couldn't figure out who it was…..
~End of Recap~
You could hear Naruto shouted at the person that was barely standing 3 feet from him. All you could see was the shadow of the new intruder. The dust had started to clear as you could now start to see the figure. They were wearing a smiliar cloak to what Naruto was wearing. “Kiba…his scent…??” Sakura asked looking at her Inu training friend. He nodded as he took a sniff of the air and shook his head “…I cant smell him either….Its the dust….theres to much of it” he said hoping that was the reason to his failed smelling senses. The group was now able to see his head…well only slightly, this person seemed to be a lot shorter then Naruto, him now being about 6 feet tall. In the years that had gone by he had grown to be a long and very hot Naruto, or so some of the villiagers thought even though they didn't know he was the Kyuubi Container. Either way, the group could now see that the second intruder was no Kage Bunshin like some had thought it was. The person that was standing beside Naruto just punched him slightly, they weren't even taller then his shoulder the top of their head just barely reached it. As the smoke started to clear the new intruder turned to face the group before Naruto was about to walk over to Sasuke but was just being held in place by a glomp on his arm. Sasuke on the other hand wasn't very pleased with the fact that instead of hitting Naruto he had hit the Hokage Tower wall. “what the hell…” he muttered as the person walked over to him “ hey…I gave you a chance, to hit him….it just shows you that he's much more stronger then you for now…” the female voice said grinning just like Naruto had been earlier though this one was different. It was coming form of 4” 5 inch girl with much longer hair then Naruto's was. She didn't even look like she was Genin she barely looked 13. Her cloths were completely black as the wind blew some of the cloak out of the way allowing Sasuke to see that she had a skin tight outfit underneath that covered both her arms complete all the way down to her knuckles. Her hair much similar in colour to sasukes black hair was pulled up high as it covered her face was being covered much like Naruto's, though the only difference was that her hair was almost down the floor. If Sasuke didn't know any better, it would seem like this girl was copying Naruto's attire. Sadly it was not the case she dressed liked that for a reason. “ You used to be friends with this weakling??” the girl asked as Sasuke was about to punch her when she grabbed in punch in the palm of her hand. The entire group watched in aww as Naruto just shook his head. Sasuke couldn't believe it a little girl had stopped his punch with no effort at all. “ Don't underestimate me just because I'm small” said her voice which came out in a more sadistic tone smirking directly at him. “Enough Aru…” Naruto muttered dully.
“Of course that will be enough” said another female voice behind Sasuke who was down standing near the Hokages' newly designed door. Aru just started at the person and smiled as she ran back towards Naruto and stood behind him popping her head from the side.
`…That girl….somethings up with her….' Kakashi whispered to the group as they all seemed to nod at his comment.
“ahh…Tsunade-Ba-Chan…” Naruto said not really scared of her. “ finally decided to wake up” he asked disrespectfully knowing it would piss her off. “ no one calls me that” she said rather angry as she clenched her fist and threw a punch at him. Though for some reason Naruto couldn't move as he looked down at Aru for a moment as she smiled at him ` this is payback for leaving me in that village' she thought to herself smirking as Tsunada make contact with the top of Naruto's head slamming him down directly into the ground.
“huh….why didn't he move out of the way…” Sakura asked as she watched what was going on.
“it appears…That that little girl was holding him down somehow…'' a voice from behind Sakura said as she jumped out slightly. “ SHINO!!” she shouted not being able to believe that he had actually talked for once other the on a mission. “….hn....When my bugs told me something interesting was happening here…I decided to come see for myself” he said as another figure appeared with a few others. They used to be known as the Rookie 9, because never had it happened that 9 teams had graduated and passed the Sensei tests so easily. “You guys….Your all here….” Sakura said in abit of shock. They were all still very good friends, but since she was Tsunade's assistant she knew that some of them had been on missions. The word must have spread quick that Naruto was back in town she had thought as she looked at them all. “ so where is that Silver Flash anyway??” Shikamaru said looking around “ I heard he's amazing at planning strategies on the stop…” he continued as Neji nodded in agreement with him. “We all finished our missions earily when we heard that the Silver Flash had decided to head for Konoha” Chouji said. “ We got worried that he might try to do something to the village” another voice said smiling as she walked out from behind the group. “Hinata!!” Sakura shouted giving her a big hug “I haven't seen you in over 3 months!!” she stated looking at her “yes…it was a very complex mission” she mentioned. Naruto listened in on the converstation as he started to get back up slowly ` I'm going to get you for this Aru….' He whispered as she just smiled at him and then jumped him from behind as she was now on his back. “ehhh….are you shitting me….you telling me that's the Silver Flash…he's got a freaking 12 year old with him….how bad can he be” Chouji said starting to laugh slightly “no …Chouji…hold on….” Sakura tired to tell him but was cut off by Kakashi pointing to Naruto or actually the person on his back who's chakra level was now through the roof “…………..Aru?” Narut said looking up at her. She didn't like behind called a 12 year old…even though she looked like one. He tried to grab her before she jumped off of his back and speeded at chouji
“Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!!!” Naruto shouted as it appeared right infront of Chouji who was now just starting at what was going on. As were most the group. Neji and Hinata had only been able to notice the spike in Chakra as they looked at her seeing that she had much more than her little body could handle. “Your lucky…” Naruto said smirking at Chouji who stood there in shook still not knowing what had just happened. Naruto's Bunshin had taken the hit for Chouji, if it hadn't Chouji could have been deeply injured. How you ask? Well Aru dispite the fact that she was in the boy of a 12 year old, that was really only a Henge that was really well hidden, No one would be ever able to tell the difference between her henge.
~flashback~
Soon after the fight with Sasuke, Naruto had woken up and began walking towards the opposite direction that Sasuke had gone. `an inch closer….and he could have killed me' he thought to himself as he groaned in pain. He had only been walking for over an hour but to him it seemed as if ithad been days since the battle with Sasuke. His chest was slowly healing but it hadn't healed very much since the falls, sighing slightly he knew that he had to find a place to rest. He had remembered that on his way towards the falls he had seen a cave not much farther from where he was. Once he had reached it he ventured inside in order to stay away from the cold breeze that was following the night, looking slightly shocked when he saw that there was a light coming from inside the cave, he followed it to find himself inside a laboratory, much like the one he had heard Orochimaru had. Looking over the files that had been scattered on the grouned he was able to make out a few workds out of them “….Test Subject 26, reading high levels of aggressive behavior” he said out loud as he looked at another
Note 3 - Test subject 26 does not seem to want to respond to any treatment…..
Note 10 - 26's aggressive patterns have worsened
Note 50 - experiment failure…terminate Number 26
Naruto looked through them but couldn't seem to make ends meat of anything that it said there. Probably had something to do with all the blood he had lost just trying to find the place. He grounded again as he went to look around to make sure that there was no one around. What he found he wasn't expecting at all corpse of people laying around the room as if someone had massacered themwhile they were trying to escape. He looked over to see that one of the bodies was laying ontop of a very large container that could probably fit a body inside. He moved the corpse out of the way and then opened the container very slowly with his one good arm. His eyes opened wide as he saw a girl covered in a fresh coat of blood from head to toe. Looking back at the corpses and then back at the girl he couldn't undertand how the blood was so freash seeing as the corpses were probably about 4 months old…and rotting.
He screamed in pain moments later as he held his chest thightly before falling to the ground on his knees groaning in a termendious about of pain. Only seconds later he passed out from the pain to see that the girl inside the container was slowly getting out.
The container that was holding the girl had been sealed, but do the the face that the man hadn't had enough time to seal her in died before he could punch in the codes to lock her in there and destroy her body. Her eyes slowly started to open as she looked around slightly notice the smell of blood on her body. Moving slowly she got up putting her hand on the side of the container pushing herself up. She couldn't have been much older then Naruto, but there was something completely different about her. As the 4 month old blood dripped off her body, one could tell that her arms and some of her lower back was covered in complex seals which seemed to suck up the blood. It was rather discusting to see as she just smirked evilly. She looked down to see that the scientist that she had attacked when they had tired to kill her were all now just corpse…but something was different, there was a body laying there fresh blood getting on the dusted floor. Tilted her head slightly as she looked at him “ I don't remember him…'' she said to herself as she turned him over with her foot to see where the blood was coming from. Blinking when she saw it was coming directly from his chest `…he should be dea....' she was saying but stopped in mid-sentence as she saw it slowly healing itself… Kneeling down she touched his wound as he flinched painfully. Getting up slightly and then walking over to a cupboard and opening it she pulled out bandages and then walking back to him as she cut his vest and shirt off of him making it easier for her to tend to the wound. Most likely a few days later had passed before Naruto finally woke up. Looking around he was surprised to see that he was no longer in the lab…had it all been a dream his mind had made to trick him. Seconds later the girl he had seen in the container walked in “…your awake…” she said slightly not really surprised “ I was wondering when you would finally wake up” she told him as she put some good on the counter “where are we??” Naruto asked looking around franticly “ummm….someones house” she said blankly with no emotion.
Naruto just started back at her. “ what your name?…” he asked her at point blank as she just stared back at him “ …Number 26” she replied “ what number where you??” she asked back looking at him actually seeming interested “huh…what are you talking about…Number…My name is Uzumaki Naruto” he told her “…U….zu…ma…ki…” she repeated having a hard time repeating it. You could tell she hadn't talked much in her life. Her vocabulary didn't seem to be very much only a few words at a time.
Naruto just started back at her. “ what your name?…” he asked her at point blank as she just stared back at him “ …Number 26” she replied “ what number where you??” she asked back looking at him actually seeming interested “huh…what are you talking about…Number…My name is Uzumaki Naruto” he told her “…U….zu…ma…ki…” she repeated having a hard time repeating it. You could tell she hadn't talked much in her life. Her vocabulary didn't seem to be very much only a few words at a time.
“I have no name…” she replied “ only what they called me” she told himas she got up. Naruto didn't mean to stare but when he saw that her whole body was covered in bandages well mostly her arms, tights and lower part of her torso he bagan to question her “..huh…why do you have bandages” he asked her looking at her “….I hurt people that see them” she replied looking down slightly.
~end of flashback~
Chouji had been very lucky indeed, the sleeve that had once covered the little girls arm down to her knuckles down seemed to be holding onto the Bunshins troated as her eyes glowed a deep deep red along with the markins on her arm. Much like Sasuke's cursed seal but only the opposite, these weren't given to her… she was born with them and even a henge couldn't cover them.
“Aru…Clam down, Chouji didn't mean to say you looked 12” the Bunshin said as the real Naruto seemed to be pre-occupied with trying to hold back Tsunade from storming over to her. He didn't want to make Aru more angry then she already was, no one could tell what she would do, though he could probably imagen. Aru's eyes widened when she noticed she was holding onto the Bunshin and then look as quickly as she had grabbed on. The Bunshin started to cough slightly holding his neck slightly as fizzling sounds could be heard as it had quickly started to heal. Her colour had now gown back to a light pink as she just began to blink “huh…….Naru-chan….” She said looking at him, the clone had really been Naruto he had done a replace jutsu with his clone, knowing full well that his clone wouldn't be able to handle her strength “…You almost had me that time…” Naruto said smiling as he rubbed the back of his head.
“Aru…Clam down, Chouji didn't mean to say you looked 12” the Bunshin said as the real Naruto seemed to be pre-occupied with trying to hold back Tsunade from storming over to her. He didn't want to make Aru more angry then she already was, no one could tell what she would do, though he could probably imagen. Aru's eyes widened when she noticed she was holding onto the Bunshin and then look as quickly as she had grabbed on. The Bunshin started to cough slightly holding his neck slightly as fizzling sounds could be heard as it had quickly started to heal. Her colour had now gown back to a light pink as she just began to blink “huh…….Naru-chan….” She said looking at him, the clone had really been Naruto he had done a replace jutsu with his clone, knowing full well that his clone wouldn't be able to handle her strength “…You almost had me that time…” Naruto said smiling as he rubbed the back of his head.
Chouji watched on in utter shock, along with all in Rookie 9. The ones that had had their bloodlines already active had watched the few moments. Sasuke has been as well, he was frozen in his spot as he watched the girl in horror triple her chakra level in a matter of seconds.
Naruto just started to laugh as she gave him an angry look “I could have killed you….baka….!!!” she shouted at him as Naruto just continued to laugh turning around “ neh…Chouji…good to see you again….glad to see you haven't changed” he said as everyone just started at him “EHHHHH….NARUTO!!!!!” they all shouted at the same time. “…that's my name…” he said smriking the wind blew again as his Bunshin was still fighting with Tsunade….well more like Arguing with her. “I'm fine Aru…really…Don't worry about it…I know how you get” he said smiling at her “besides…you know I wouldn't be here without you” he whispered to her grinning as she nodded slightly. “so Kiba…how long did it take you before you found my scent…” he asked looking at Kiba how looked like he was trying to avoid the question. “hehe….wellll….Akamru and i….” he started to say “ couldn't find you” he finished “Neither could we…” Shino said as well. Sakura couldn't believe it …moments ago he was acting like a sadistic killer and now he was acting all friendly. Sasuke had finally appeared beside her as he watched what was going on. They all were accepting him back into the circle, though how much Naruto let them see was up to him. Sasuke did notice something different, Naruto no longer had blood red eyes but they had gone back to sky blue. He smiled like the old Naruto and laughed like the young Naruto.
Something was differently wrong with this picture, but if he tired to confront him now…that little girl would attack him…that he was likely sure of. He stood there quietly as Naruto seemed to jump away from the group “ I'm sorry…but you may think I'm back here for you….but I'm not” he said looking at him with a slight grin on his face. “ you all ditched me long ago….i have no connections to you anymore” he said as his red eyes seemed to return. “ Naruto….” Tsunade said as she had his clone in a headlock “ you seem be be relaying on the Kyuubi's powers” she said looking at him as he smirked “ actually honorable Hokage….Sorry to disappoint you…” he told her smirking “ I'm not, I've made no deal with the Kyuubi to use his powers….” He told him “ I'm using my own power….The changes you see are all natural….with alittle help from a good friend of mine” he said as Aru nodded her head slightly as she jumped on his back again. Naruto gave her a smirking grin “I'm only hear on business….” He told her “ and then various people got in the way” he told her looking at Sasuke who still had his Sharingan powered up.
“what business could you want with Konoha” she asked giving him a strange look. From what she had gathered this wasn't the same Naruto anymore…something had changed him completely while he was gone, and this girl….there was something strange about her aswell, but she couldn't seemed to put her finger on it.
“Naru-chan…” Aru whispered to Naruto as her body was tembling slightly. After so many years, the seals that were on her body, had begun to grow once again. It had only happened once while he had been with her, but she had told Naruto that it happened 4 times previous to that when she had been in the lab. She never really told him the extent of what it did to her body but it was one of the reasons why she hid her body under a henge most the the time. Only Naruto now knew her real form “I'm here because I need you to look at Aru” he said looking at Tsunade seriously.
“And if I refuse?” She asked back not even thinking about her answer.
“Then I will destroy Konoha off the map”
~end~
I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter….again this is the un edited version just like Chapter 2, but I did send the second chapter along with this one to him so I should get them back at one point today/tomorrow.
I really liked writing this chapter…the the flashback was hard abit cuz I didn't know what to write for it. It all just came to me. Either way, I hope you like the OC character I added. She actually very cool…well maybe only to me…probably only to me…. She more sadistic then Naruto but has a more serious attitude then him.
I really hope everyone enjoys it…cuz …I still don't know which pairings its going to be. I've chosen the three with the most hits they are:
Naru/Hina - 6
Naru/Temi - 6
Naur/OC - 6
Those are the 3 you guys have to choose from. I just don't think I could be able to do a Naru/harem on my first fix. Maybe in later ones I promise. XD
Anyway please review and let me know what you think. It ALWAYS helps in letting me know what you guys want from my story.
Anyway…I'm off…I don't seem like I have enough time to sleep before I have to wake up again….only 2 hours..guess I'll just go shower and watch a movie.
Just check back in a FEW DAYS…or actually the same day!!....I'll probably have both edited versions of Chapter 2 and 3…I just feel bad making you guys wait for the next chapter.
Enjoy!!! ….Don't forget to REVIEW!!!