Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Something different ❯ Visit through Suna ( Chapter 1 )
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By: Dark Luna 
Rin is able to go to Konoha to visit Lee, Neji and Tenten. She passed through Suna on the way.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Comedy | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 01.24.2007 | Updated On: 01.24.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 536 | Status: Completed
Rin is able to go to Konoha to visit Lee, Neji and Tenten. She passed through Suna on the way.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Comedy | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 01.24.2007 | Updated On: 01.24.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 536 | Status: Completed
Dark Luna: Well, I’m back!! Since people asked me to continue with the Rin and Lee pairing, I will! There will be some NejixTenten scenes.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Masashi Kishimoto does..
Chapter One
“Thanks, Mom. Oops, sorry. Forgot you didn’t like to call that.” said a happy girl and hugged her mother, who was reading a magazine. “But remember, don’t tell them.”
“Why?” asked the mother, as she looked up from her magazine to her daughter.
“It’s a surprise.” said the girl. “I’ll go and pack.”
She turned and left. She was so happy that her mother agreed. She hummed a tune as she walked to her room.
“Now what to bring?” said the girl, thinking her thoughts out loud. She walked to her closet, and opened it. She reached in, and pulled out a pink shirt. She shook her head and started digging into her closet, throwing items she wanted in her bed, and the others in a corner. There were clothes of different colors in her bed.
“Yep, that’s it.” said the girl, and took a suitcase and started putting her clothes into it.
“Miss--”started one of the maids, who appeared at the door.
“I’m ready!” said the girl interrupting the maid.
“Ok, your carriage that will take you to Konoha is ready.” said the maid.
“Thanks.” said the girl, and walked to the front. The maid picked up the suitcase, and put in the back of the carriage. The girl was about to enter the carriage when someone pulled her back, and said “Have fun.”
“I will.” said the girl and smiled.
“Good, but you will have a bodyguard.” said the mother.
“What? Why?” said the girl, mad that her mother didn’t trust her, but that would explain why her mother didn‘t said “I coming with you of course.”
“You really think I’ll let you travel alone.” said the mother and laughed.” Now, hurry.”
“Fine.” said the girl, and sighed. She got in, and her bodyguard sat next to her. Even though her bodyguard was a female, she looked like she could kill you so fast that you won’t know what happened. She had black hair in a ponytail, with a few stands hanging out. She was wearing a dark blue dress with a white moon on the back, with fishnet stockings under the dress. She was carrying a katana, and had a weapons pouch on the side of her dress. The bodyguard was green in her face, probably from the motion of the carriage.
“Bye, Rin!” said Izumi loudly from the house and laughed.
“Shut up!” yelled back Rin, as she stuck her head out the window. “Mom!”
Two days have passed, and Rin was getting close to Konoha. They were now in Suna. They stopped because the person driving the carriage needed rest, and the horses too.
Rin was also tired of being in the carriage. She took a deep breath and let it out. She inhaled the crisp, stale desert air, and had to cough. She looked around and saw a building with the word Kazekage on it.
“Rin, you have to follow us.” said the bodyguard, when she saw Rin wasn’t moving.
“How does she know my name, yet I don’t know her name?” Rin thought to herself.
“Um.. What do I call you?” asked Rin, as she followed her bodyguard.
“Um.. Tsuki..” said the bodyguard coldly.
“Ok.” said Rin.
“She reminds me of someone who also speaks coldly.” thought Rin.
Rin saw that they were going to that building with the word “Kazekage.”
Rin also pulled her own brown hair into a ponytail, because the winds was getting stronger, and the wind was whipping her hair into her face. Rin saw that the people that were walking down the streets before were getting less. Rin walking faster, trying to get picked up by the wind.
Finally, they reached the building and got inside before it became a sandstorm. Rin took her hair out and shook the sand out of it. She saw jounins walking around. Tsuki was talking to a blonde girl person, with a giant fan next to her.
“Hm… she seems younger than the jounins walking around.” thought Rin, and walked to Tsuki.
“How long are we going to be there?” said Rin, looking at her hands.
“Wait, Rin.” said Tsuki strictly.
“Your name is Rin?” said the blonde girl.
“I heard that name before, and that Rin that she described looks like this Rin.” thought the blonde girl.
“Why?” asked Rin rudely, and looked at the girl.
“Don’t give me an attitude?” said the blonde girl, and picked the big fan.
“What attitude?” said Rin, sweetly and innocently, hoping to make the girl mad.
Rin could see that it worked. The girl gripped her fan, and was about to swing it but a hand stopped the fan. The blonde girl turned around and saw her red-haired brother, who was the Kazekage.
“oh, it’s you Gaara.” said the blonde girl.
“Are you starting trouble, again Temari?” said Gaara and sighed.
“Sorry to make noise, Kazekage.” said Tsuki and bowed. “Right, Rin?”
“Yeah, sure.” said Rin, and rolled her eyes.
“I thought the Kazekage would be old, but I can’t believe he’s the Kazekage. He’s kinda cute..” thought Rin.
“Rin.” said Tsuki threateningly.
“So can I help you?” asked Gaara.
“Yes.” said Tsuki, and started walking to the Kazekage’s office, and Gaara followed.
Rin was left in the hallway with Temari.
“So..” said Rin, and played with her hair, trying to break the silence.
“What?” said Temari, and putted her fan back on the wall, and sat down a red chair behind a wooden desk.
“What’s her problem?” thought Rin, and walked to the window. She saw that the sandstorm was calming down.
After ten minutes of silence, Garra and Tsuki came out.
“Well, see you there.” said Tsuki and looked around for Rin. She spotted Rin near the window. “Rin, let’s go.”
“Huh? Ok.” said Rin, daydreaming and followed Tsuki.
“At least I won’t see the rude Temari in Konoha.” thought Rin, as she walking out of the building. The sandstorm was gone now, and there were piles of sand where there were none before.
“Just wished I could see Gaara again.” thought Rin, and blushed when she thought of the red-haired boy.
Rin followed Tsuki to the carriage and when they rode away Rin couldn’t help but think she want to see Gaara again. She wanted to know what the Kazekage was like. She remembered that Tenten had mentioned he was Lee’s opponent in the Chunin Exams.
“Wish I could see that.” muttered Rin, looking out the window. Then suddenly something clicked.
“Oh my god!” yelled Rin.
“What?” said Tsuki, looking at Rin, with her face a bit green again.
“Nothing.” said Rin. She had just remembered that Tenten told her that she lost to a blonde girl named Temari in the Chunin Exams.
“Wow, that Temari beat Tenten.” said Rin, softly.
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So what do you think? Review and tell me! Next chapter Rin is in Konoha!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Masashi Kishimoto does..
Chapter One
“Thanks, Mom. Oops, sorry. Forgot you didn’t like to call that.” said a happy girl and hugged her mother, who was reading a magazine. “But remember, don’t tell them.”
“Why?” asked the mother, as she looked up from her magazine to her daughter.
“It’s a surprise.” said the girl. “I’ll go and pack.”
She turned and left. She was so happy that her mother agreed. She hummed a tune as she walked to her room.
“Now what to bring?” said the girl, thinking her thoughts out loud. She walked to her closet, and opened it. She reached in, and pulled out a pink shirt. She shook her head and started digging into her closet, throwing items she wanted in her bed, and the others in a corner. There were clothes of different colors in her bed.
“Yep, that’s it.” said the girl, and took a suitcase and started putting her clothes into it.
“Miss--”started one of the maids, who appeared at the door.
“I’m ready!” said the girl interrupting the maid.
“Ok, your carriage that will take you to Konoha is ready.” said the maid.
“Thanks.” said the girl, and walked to the front. The maid picked up the suitcase, and put in the back of the carriage. The girl was about to enter the carriage when someone pulled her back, and said “Have fun.”
“I will.” said the girl and smiled.
“Good, but you will have a bodyguard.” said the mother.
“What? Why?” said the girl, mad that her mother didn’t trust her, but that would explain why her mother didn‘t said “I coming with you of course.”
“You really think I’ll let you travel alone.” said the mother and laughed.” Now, hurry.”
“Fine.” said the girl, and sighed. She got in, and her bodyguard sat next to her. Even though her bodyguard was a female, she looked like she could kill you so fast that you won’t know what happened. She had black hair in a ponytail, with a few stands hanging out. She was wearing a dark blue dress with a white moon on the back, with fishnet stockings under the dress. She was carrying a katana, and had a weapons pouch on the side of her dress. The bodyguard was green in her face, probably from the motion of the carriage.
“Bye, Rin!” said Izumi loudly from the house and laughed.
“Shut up!” yelled back Rin, as she stuck her head out the window. “Mom!”
Two days have passed, and Rin was getting close to Konoha. They were now in Suna. They stopped because the person driving the carriage needed rest, and the horses too.
Rin was also tired of being in the carriage. She took a deep breath and let it out. She inhaled the crisp, stale desert air, and had to cough. She looked around and saw a building with the word Kazekage on it.
“Rin, you have to follow us.” said the bodyguard, when she saw Rin wasn’t moving.
“How does she know my name, yet I don’t know her name?” Rin thought to herself.
“Um.. What do I call you?” asked Rin, as she followed her bodyguard.
“Um.. Tsuki..” said the bodyguard coldly.
“Ok.” said Rin.
“She reminds me of someone who also speaks coldly.” thought Rin.
Rin saw that they were going to that building with the word “Kazekage.”
Rin also pulled her own brown hair into a ponytail, because the winds was getting stronger, and the wind was whipping her hair into her face. Rin saw that the people that were walking down the streets before were getting less. Rin walking faster, trying to get picked up by the wind.
Finally, they reached the building and got inside before it became a sandstorm. Rin took her hair out and shook the sand out of it. She saw jounins walking around. Tsuki was talking to a blonde girl person, with a giant fan next to her.
“Hm… she seems younger than the jounins walking around.” thought Rin, and walked to Tsuki.
“How long are we going to be there?” said Rin, looking at her hands.
“Wait, Rin.” said Tsuki strictly.
“Your name is Rin?” said the blonde girl.
“I heard that name before, and that Rin that she described looks like this Rin.” thought the blonde girl.
“Why?” asked Rin rudely, and looked at the girl.
“Don’t give me an attitude?” said the blonde girl, and picked the big fan.
“What attitude?” said Rin, sweetly and innocently, hoping to make the girl mad.
Rin could see that it worked. The girl gripped her fan, and was about to swing it but a hand stopped the fan. The blonde girl turned around and saw her red-haired brother, who was the Kazekage.
“oh, it’s you Gaara.” said the blonde girl.
“Are you starting trouble, again Temari?” said Gaara and sighed.
“Sorry to make noise, Kazekage.” said Tsuki and bowed. “Right, Rin?”
“Yeah, sure.” said Rin, and rolled her eyes.
“I thought the Kazekage would be old, but I can’t believe he’s the Kazekage. He’s kinda cute..” thought Rin.
“Rin.” said Tsuki threateningly.
“So can I help you?” asked Gaara.
“Yes.” said Tsuki, and started walking to the Kazekage’s office, and Gaara followed.
Rin was left in the hallway with Temari.
“So..” said Rin, and played with her hair, trying to break the silence.
“What?” said Temari, and putted her fan back on the wall, and sat down a red chair behind a wooden desk.
“What’s her problem?” thought Rin, and walked to the window. She saw that the sandstorm was calming down.
After ten minutes of silence, Garra and Tsuki came out.
“Well, see you there.” said Tsuki and looked around for Rin. She spotted Rin near the window. “Rin, let’s go.”
“Huh? Ok.” said Rin, daydreaming and followed Tsuki.
“At least I won’t see the rude Temari in Konoha.” thought Rin, as she walking out of the building. The sandstorm was gone now, and there were piles of sand where there were none before.
“Just wished I could see Gaara again.” thought Rin, and blushed when she thought of the red-haired boy.
Rin followed Tsuki to the carriage and when they rode away Rin couldn’t help but think she want to see Gaara again. She wanted to know what the Kazekage was like. She remembered that Tenten had mentioned he was Lee’s opponent in the Chunin Exams.
“Wish I could see that.” muttered Rin, looking out the window. Then suddenly something clicked.
“Oh my god!” yelled Rin.
“What?” said Tsuki, looking at Rin, with her face a bit green again.
“Nothing.” said Rin. She had just remembered that Tenten told her that she lost to a blonde girl named Temari in the Chunin Exams.
“Wow, that Temari beat Tenten.” said Rin, softly.
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So what do you think? Review and tell me! Next chapter Rin is in Konoha!