Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Strawberries? ❯ One ( Chapter 1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
This is my first attempt in what I hope will become a series of SasuNaru-centric ficlets.
If you have any ideas you would like me to write, just let me know and I would be honoured to try them. No promises they'll turn out properly, though.
The idea for this ficcy came from the doujinshi `Coming out' by Shishimaru. Hence any apparent similarities.
If you don't like yaoi, then I advise you not to read this ficcy. It is rated `M' for a reason.
Disclaimer: If I owned Naruto, do you seriously think I would be writing fanfiction?
“I like you”
Naruto and Sasuke sat in the ichiraku ramen restaurant. They both wore the flak jackets that would tell everybody that they were at least chuunin. In fact they were jounin - and the best of the best. Several empty ramen bowls were scattered around them, the result of a half hour of Naruto's slurping.
Sasuke blinked at Naruto “Of course you do. Would we be friends otherwise?”
“I don't think you understand” Naruto grinned mischievously “And people say I'm stupid”
Sasuke scowled up at the taller man “If there's something I don't understand then it's because there's something you're not telling me, usuratonkachi”
“Very well then. Maybe you'll understand this: I wanna fuck you, Sasuke” Naruto somehow managed to say this without the slightest hint of pink brushing his flawlessly tanned cheek.
Sasuke, however, fell off his chair.
Everybody in the immediate vicinity stopped to stare at the graceful, perfect, and above all, proud man who had just fallen on the floor for no apparent reason.
Naruto looked down at him, torn between worry and laughter. `Maybe I went a little too far…' he thought. He decided that laughing at Sasuke now would not be the wisest of moves - his pride had been hurt enough as it was.
Sasuke picked himself up off the floor and strode out of the restaurant without so much as glancing in Naruto's direction. Naruto followed, hands in pockets, whistling cheerfully.
Sasuke finally slowed as they neared his house. `What was Naruto thinking to say something like that in a public place? Was he joking?' Sasuke recalled the hint of seriousness and apprehension in Naruto's otherwise confident and carefree smile. Not joking then. `But we've been friends and rivals for years… and now he wants to change that?' Sasuke became aware of a persistent whistling behind him. He turned and faced Naruto.
“Why are you following me?” he demanded
Naruto stopped whistling “Because you never told me not to”
When Sasuke continued to glare at him, Naruto's grin faded. “I'm sorry” he rubbed his stomach nervously. “I went too far, I guess. It was stupid of me to think… I guess I really am an usuratonkachi” he grinned once more, but there was no trace of humour in his eyes. “I'm sorry” he repeated, before turning away.
“How long have you felt this way?” Sasuke managed. He was pleased to hear his voice betray none of his inner turmoil.
“Damn near seven years” Naruto said quietly. “I guess I should go now…” he trailed off miserably and began to walk away from the love of his life, feeling as though his heart was breaking.
Sasuke watched Naruto walk away. Even in his misery Naruto walked with his head held high, a habit from long years of striving desperately for people's acknowledgement.
“…No” Sasuke called softly, surprising even himself. “No, Naruto, don't go”
Naruto turned and regarded him with sad eyes. “What is it, Sasuke?” Naruto fought to keep his misery from leaking out into his voice.
Sasuke hesitated, not sure what to say, then realised he was standing in front of his house. “Would you like to come inside?”
The faint glimmerings of hope dared to show themselves in Naruto's expressive eyes. “Yes” he said simply.
Naruto followed Sasuke inside. They both removed their flak jackets and hung them on a hook behind the door. A part of Naruto's mind noted that he'd never before seen the inside of Sasuke's house. He looked appreciatively around the room. It was clean, and the furniture was stylish and still practical. Yet the room seemed to have an unlived-in quality. Naruto noted that the rooms he passed as he followed Sasuke to the kitchen had the same aura of clean neglect. The house was mostly unused. `Sasuke musn't have many visitors' Naruto mused.
Naruto's thoughts were interrupted by Sasuke's enquiry: would he like something to drink?
Naruto decided on tea. As Sasuke busied himself making it, Naruto sat down at the bench and let his eyes wander around the kitchen. Now this was more like it. The kitchen still had the same abnormal neatness as the other rooms he'd seen, but at least it felt lived in.
Sasuke handed Naruto his tea and sat down next to him. Naruto contemplated the amber depths of his drink.
“Naruto…” Sasuke ventured hesitantly after a few minutes of silence. “Do you… love me?”
Naruto looked up from his tea in shock and stared at Sasuke, who blushed. “…yes” he managed to say quietly. He braced himself for the explosion he was sure must come. Instead, he was startled to feel Sasuke's tentative lips on his own. Naruto reached up with one hand to lightly brush Sasuke's cheek, while his other hand pulled the man closer.
Sasuke moaned as Naruto deepened the kiss. `Oh God, he tastes so good' Sasuke thought. Both men began striving for dominance. Tongues and teeth clashed passionately. Naruto moved his hand down to lightly caress Sasuke's butt, noting with amusement that the other man made interesting noises.
Finally, Sasuke pulled away. “Bedroom” he gasped, trying desperately to control his mind after that amazing kiss.
Naruto growled his agreement, and, picking Sasuke up, carried him bodily to said room. He placed Sasuke on the bed before pressing his body against the smaller man and kissing him even more hungrily than before.
Sasuke gasped as he felt Naruto's wandering hands on his chest. He'd never imagined that mere touch would feel so good. Naruto chose that moment to discard Sasuke's shirt, then removed his own before continuing his ministrations to Sasuke's torso.
Naruto began alternately kissing and licking his way down Sasuke's chest. Sasuke arched upward, trying desperately not to cry out as Naruto's roving mouth found his nipple. Naruto rolled it experimentally with his tongue before gently biting it and moving on down his chest to his stomach, closer to the man's throbbing erection.
Upon finding his path blocked by Sasuke's trousers, Naruto growled in annoyance and all but tore them off him. Sasuke's boxers soon followed his trousers. “Nnnn! …Naruto!” Sasuke finally gave up all control as his arousal was engulfed by the warm, wet cavern of Naruto's mouth.
He bucked wildly, thrusting himself down Naruto's throat, causing him to choke momentarily. Naruto held him down, humming. Sasuke moaned as the vibration coursed through him. He was going to come soon, he knew it.
Naruto ran his tongue around Sasuke's member, his hand lightly brushing Sasuke's sensitive balls.
“Aaaaaaagh!” Sasuke cried as he came in Naruto's mouth. Naruto choked on the musky substance for a second then swallowed.
“Do you have a lube?” Naruto asked in a hoarse voice as he struggled to remove his own trousers.
“No” Sasuke said flatly. “I didn't exactly expect this to happen”
Sasuke stared as Naruto removed his boxers. The man truly was beautiful, his tanned skin, under which rippled well-defined muscles, glistening with sweat. Unusually for a jounin, he had very few scars. Those he did have simply added to the dangerously sexy appearance of his body.
“You don't have anything? Body lotion? Something?” There was a pleading note in Naruto's voice.
“Body lotion” Sasuke admitted. “Top drawer”
Naruto strode over to the indicated drawer and opened it, removing the bottle of body lotion. He peered at it curiously. “Strawberry scented?” he said in amazement. “Hey, I told you I thought I smelled strawberries last week!”
“That's not important” Sasuke said hurriedly.
Naruto's attention was pulled back to his persistently throbbing erection. “You're right” He moved back to Sasuke.
Kissing him passionately, he covered his fingers in the body lotion and inserted one into Sasuke, who moaned.
Slowly, he inserted a second finger and scissored them before inserting a third. Judging that Sasuke was ready he removed his fingers and coated his arousal in the lotion, then positioned himself carefully at the man's entrance.
Naruto broke the kiss. “Tell me if it hurts too much, ok Sasuke?”
Their eyes locked as Naruto slowly slid into the smaller man. They both moaned. Naruto fought to stay still for a moment. Sasuke felt so warm and tight he nearly couldn't control himself, but he wanted to let the other man adjust to the new sensation.
“Move” Sasuke begged hoarsely.
Naruto obliged, pulling Sasuke back into the kiss and slowly moving in and out of the man, looking for the `sweet spot'. He found it.
“Aaaaaaaaaagh!” Sasuke clung to Naruto as sweet waves of pleasure crashed over his body. Now that Naruto had found that spot, he hit it again and again, his rhythm growing faster until they were both almost delirious with pleasure.
It felt so good that Naruto couldn't take it any more. Moaning Sasuke's name softly, he spilled his seed inside the other man. Sasuke came for the second time a moment later, releasing in a mess that covered them both.
They clung to each other, riding out the orgasm. Then they lay still for a while, neither man willing move away. Then Naruto pulled out of Sasuke and lay down next to him, holding him close.
“Does that mean you'll go out with me?” he whispered.
Sasuke looked at the man he now realised he loved more than anything else in the whole world.
“Yes”
The idea for this drabble came to me one day as I was trying to help White Alchemist Taya (she doesn't like shonenai of any sort)think of an idea for a SasuNaru ficcy. I decided to follow it and see where it would go. Naturally, Sasuke is the uke because, with a name like that, I figure he's made for the role. That and the fact that I'm tired of Naruto always being the uke, poor boy.
This is my first attempt at yaoi, or any sort of romance really. That means I would particularly appreciate helpful. Even flames are welcome, though if they are pointless and/or useless, I will laugh at them.
Also, my thanks to Iccena and Boey (sorry, forgotten penname) for helping me with some minor wording details which had me totally stumped. I have too many damn words in my vocabulary.
Thanks,
Queenphoenix.