Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ The Elite Sannin! ❯ The Return ( Chapter 2 )
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By: sephydaangel 
when the elite arrives what will he stir up and who is the mysterious ninja he finds read and find out
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Adventure / Drama / Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 02.24.2007 | Updated On: 02.26.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 185 | Status: Work In Progress
when the elite arrives what will he stir up and who is the mysterious ninja he finds read and find out
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Adventure / Drama / Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 02.24.2007 | Updated On: 02.26.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 185 | Status: Work In Progress
once again i dont own naruto this is chapter two in my escapade tell em who you would like to pair up in this one id love to know but like i said this si just a fling im doing it crammed itself in my head and is screamign to get out so vote for pairings
Chapter 2: The Return
" after so many long years" he thought "too many i guess i should have returned sooner" he sighed a bit "thats what i get for being so stubborn i guess" *narrator* this is drake legendarry elite sannin rivaled to be the one that can singlehandedly destroy the kyuubi if he had to but instead he decides to test the vessel that carried it that vessel being naruto his armour looking like an ancient samurai fire red as if it was burning in the sunlight a staff on his back and a sword on his side hes stands looking down at the hidden leaf village just outside the forest his journy was to be a long one with this kid but inbetween then and now he was going to hang around and take in the village as he starts down the path leading to the village he sees a couple of anbu and waves them off and says* "no worries guys im just here to pick up someone im not starting trouble like i did last time so go on" with that they left but he noticed someone up ahead someone he didnt recognize" hmm now who could that be" he thought he could tell it was a female but who he thought he shrugged and kept towards the woman*
Tenten sighed as she walked down the dirt road, she was mumbling stuff to herself about losing once more to Neji the last time they sparred. 'Why am I so weak?' She asked herself in her mind, and kicked a rock in the dirt, sending the flying across the path. She thought she heard a voice and spun around on her the heel of her now black sandals to see who was there, but she saw no one, so of course, she continued her walk, thinking to herself. 'Why can't I be stronger... he always beats me.' She kicked at the dirt like she did with the rock, until she heard footsteps somewhere behind her, and figured someone must be there... but she only kept walking, digging a hand into her weapons holster and pulling out a kunai just incase, trying to keep her guard up so incase there was an unknown ninja around, she couldn't have anyone attack her, not now. She needed to get stronger. "Whos there..." Spinning around once more, she stared at the man behind her, raising the kunai.Drake had raised his hood to hide his face and dawned a mask that resembled a fox and he sttod there silently not saying anything"..." his stance was neither offensive nor defensive he was just standing there not really paying to much mind that he was being threatened as if he really cared anyways because there wasnt a ninja alie that could beat him or at least not in the life time so he just stood there looking at the girl stidying her movements. Staring still, Tenten moved into a fighting stance, and kept the kunai raised. "Who are you?" She didn't move any more than that, she only continued to stare at the foxy mask, blinking a few times and wondering if it was just one of her ninja friends trying to creep her out or something. Starting to smirk, she figured it had to be, but she didn't know she was wrong... - "Naruto, I know its you, take that mask off!" She giggled alittle nervously, putting the kunai back in the holster, looking back up to the man, slanting her eyes.- "N-Naruto I know its you, take off the mask..." Drake only shook his head no saying that it wasnt him but still nothing more just staring at her blankly from behind the mask but amazingly he stood firm as if death could not make him budge watching wating for her decision wether to move or attack either way she would move so he waited for he awnser to his unasked question. Blinking a few times, Tenten stepped forward some, and flicked the nose of the mask, tilting her head to the side. "Are you dead or something?" She grabbed him by the shoulders, and started to shake him, abit wildly. "NARUTOOO!" She called out, even though she THOUGHT she was right infront of him. "Stop trying to scare me, I KNOW its you." Obviously, she didn't. "Take off that mask, come on, I'm not scared!" She poked the mask in the forehead and kept staring, starting to wonder if it was actually him. now Drake raised an hand put it on her shoulder and trickled chackra from it just enough to tell her that was enough it was like shock treatment to her sending an elictrical charge throught he but only enough to maybe make her hair stand but enough to let her know it wasnt naruto Tenten watched as he placed his hand on her shoulder, and she jumped some as he as he sent that shock through her. Moving back some, she stared at him, then her eyebrow twitched in annoyance... that wasn't Naruto. "W-who are you?" She tried not to sound a little creeped out, but she was, she had no idea who that was, and thanks to him, little frizzies popped out of her bun, making her hair look messy... not like she noticed. from behind the mask a voice finally came deep yet soft and gentle but stern and course" state your purpous" is all it said quick to the point and precice from that you could tell he was a man that wasted no time or effort he was not any ordinary ninja.. Tentens eyebrow twitched again at that voice, sounded too deep to be any of the ninja around here. Furrowing her eyebrows as she quickly looked down, she thought for a moment, and didn't answer his question. She couldn't tell him she was from Konoha, he could be from the Akatsuki, or, or some other dangerous group. Quickly, she turned around, and made a run for it, only for a few minutes, then jumping into a tree to see if he was still back there. "..." while she was looking back he was already in front of her going backwards! and he tapped her shoulder" you never awnsered my question it is polite to awnser promptly " he said in an annoyed voice as he easily kept up with her and going backwards at that As her tiny hands gripped the tree branch, her eye twitched when he tapped her shoulder, only to scare the crap outta her, which THAT caused her to fall off of the tree branch "DAMMIT!" he caught her as she tripped and then he chuckled*"today must not be your day..." he sat her up and dusted her off *' now as for the awnser to the question..." She blushed a bright red from embarassment, and hung her head down, trying best to avoid looking at him. Which didn't work. She wanted to know WHO that was. "Who are you, I asked that first, so answer me first." She squirmed, and stood up, brushing the dirt off of her face and blowing some off with a little huff. Drake simply said" im am not an enemy if thats what you want to know..." he the removes the cowl to let his long silver hair flow out letting it fall to his knees he brushed some of it back from his mask making sure it doesnt hide his eyes becuase from those tiny slits you could tell the deep red eyes that burned from within the mask an almost demoic glow seemed to come from them .Her eye twitched again as she watched his ... really long hair fall out. She opened her mouth to say something, yet nothing came out. She glanced at him, nodding some and then glancing back to his hair, shaking her head to herself. HER hair was only down to her waist, it had to be long to be kept in buns. But HIS, was long. Looking over to him, she stared at the mask, noticing his eyes for once, but still not answering his question. "..." a slight wind rustled his hair and then he kind of slouched* "now ive awnsered your now awnser mine" he crossed his arms his armour grinding together scrapping a little but still staying shiny and red as ever he starte tapping his finger as if showing he was growing inmpatient with her .She had guessed that since his answer was so simple, hers would be too. Crossing her arms also, she looked away for a few seconds, then glanced at him. "I was... taking a walk." She grinned at her little answer, and then looked back at him, glancing as his armor had a gleam to it from the sun shining off of it.
.he shrugged and continued on towards the village as if nothing hapened not even noticing her anymore seeing as she awnsered his question wether it was a simple or stupid awnser or not he could have cared less he had other important matters.Blinking a few times, she shrugged also, and rubbed the back of her neck, starting to walk the same way, but only because she needed to get home, she needed to train. How she would train at home, she had no idea, but ... she was hungry, so thats a reason. She watched as he walked ahead, and walked slow behind, so he wouldn't notice her.along the way he dropped something along the path it seemd to be a peice of paper not noticeing he kept going till he got to the end of the forest and then he vanished.She saw him drop the piece of paper, and bit her lip, wanting to know what it was, so once she watched him vanish, not really paying attention, she eargerly ran up to it. Picking it up, she blinked and stared at it for a minute, looking back up and around to see if he was still there.- "..." and on the paper it simply readd...* naruto uzumaki hidden leaf village* and nothing more it was scribbled on there so apparently it meant something to the bearer and to noone else but he made his was to the central court at the hokages tower she wouldnt be expecting him he was gonna get yelled at he knew it but he kept on inside neways*
Chapter 2: The Return
" after so many long years" he thought "too many i guess i should have returned sooner" he sighed a bit "thats what i get for being so stubborn i guess" *narrator* this is drake legendarry elite sannin rivaled to be the one that can singlehandedly destroy the kyuubi if he had to but instead he decides to test the vessel that carried it that vessel being naruto his armour looking like an ancient samurai fire red as if it was burning in the sunlight a staff on his back and a sword on his side hes stands looking down at the hidden leaf village just outside the forest his journy was to be a long one with this kid but inbetween then and now he was going to hang around and take in the village as he starts down the path leading to the village he sees a couple of anbu and waves them off and says* "no worries guys im just here to pick up someone im not starting trouble like i did last time so go on" with that they left but he noticed someone up ahead someone he didnt recognize" hmm now who could that be" he thought he could tell it was a female but who he thought he shrugged and kept towards the woman*
Tenten sighed as she walked down the dirt road, she was mumbling stuff to herself about losing once more to Neji the last time they sparred. 'Why am I so weak?' She asked herself in her mind, and kicked a rock in the dirt, sending the flying across the path. She thought she heard a voice and spun around on her the heel of her now black sandals to see who was there, but she saw no one, so of course, she continued her walk, thinking to herself. 'Why can't I be stronger... he always beats me.' She kicked at the dirt like she did with the rock, until she heard footsteps somewhere behind her, and figured someone must be there... but she only kept walking, digging a hand into her weapons holster and pulling out a kunai just incase, trying to keep her guard up so incase there was an unknown ninja around, she couldn't have anyone attack her, not now. She needed to get stronger. "Whos there..." Spinning around once more, she stared at the man behind her, raising the kunai.Drake had raised his hood to hide his face and dawned a mask that resembled a fox and he sttod there silently not saying anything"..." his stance was neither offensive nor defensive he was just standing there not really paying to much mind that he was being threatened as if he really cared anyways because there wasnt a ninja alie that could beat him or at least not in the life time so he just stood there looking at the girl stidying her movements. Staring still, Tenten moved into a fighting stance, and kept the kunai raised. "Who are you?" She didn't move any more than that, she only continued to stare at the foxy mask, blinking a few times and wondering if it was just one of her ninja friends trying to creep her out or something. Starting to smirk, she figured it had to be, but she didn't know she was wrong... - "Naruto, I know its you, take that mask off!" She giggled alittle nervously, putting the kunai back in the holster, looking back up to the man, slanting her eyes.- "N-Naruto I know its you, take off the mask..." Drake only shook his head no saying that it wasnt him but still nothing more just staring at her blankly from behind the mask but amazingly he stood firm as if death could not make him budge watching wating for her decision wether to move or attack either way she would move so he waited for he awnser to his unasked question. Blinking a few times, Tenten stepped forward some, and flicked the nose of the mask, tilting her head to the side. "Are you dead or something?" She grabbed him by the shoulders, and started to shake him, abit wildly. "NARUTOOO!" She called out, even though she THOUGHT she was right infront of him. "Stop trying to scare me, I KNOW its you." Obviously, she didn't. "Take off that mask, come on, I'm not scared!" She poked the mask in the forehead and kept staring, starting to wonder if it was actually him. now Drake raised an hand put it on her shoulder and trickled chackra from it just enough to tell her that was enough it was like shock treatment to her sending an elictrical charge throught he but only enough to maybe make her hair stand but enough to let her know it wasnt naruto Tenten watched as he placed his hand on her shoulder, and she jumped some as he as he sent that shock through her. Moving back some, she stared at him, then her eyebrow twitched in annoyance... that wasn't Naruto. "W-who are you?" She tried not to sound a little creeped out, but she was, she had no idea who that was, and thanks to him, little frizzies popped out of her bun, making her hair look messy... not like she noticed. from behind the mask a voice finally came deep yet soft and gentle but stern and course" state your purpous" is all it said quick to the point and precice from that you could tell he was a man that wasted no time or effort he was not any ordinary ninja.. Tentens eyebrow twitched again at that voice, sounded too deep to be any of the ninja around here. Furrowing her eyebrows as she quickly looked down, she thought for a moment, and didn't answer his question. She couldn't tell him she was from Konoha, he could be from the Akatsuki, or, or some other dangerous group. Quickly, she turned around, and made a run for it, only for a few minutes, then jumping into a tree to see if he was still back there. "..." while she was looking back he was already in front of her going backwards! and he tapped her shoulder" you never awnsered my question it is polite to awnser promptly " he said in an annoyed voice as he easily kept up with her and going backwards at that As her tiny hands gripped the tree branch, her eye twitched when he tapped her shoulder, only to scare the crap outta her, which THAT caused her to fall off of the tree branch "DAMMIT!" he caught her as she tripped and then he chuckled*"today must not be your day..." he sat her up and dusted her off *' now as for the awnser to the question..." She blushed a bright red from embarassment, and hung her head down, trying best to avoid looking at him. Which didn't work. She wanted to know WHO that was. "Who are you, I asked that first, so answer me first." She squirmed, and stood up, brushing the dirt off of her face and blowing some off with a little huff. Drake simply said" im am not an enemy if thats what you want to know..." he the removes the cowl to let his long silver hair flow out letting it fall to his knees he brushed some of it back from his mask making sure it doesnt hide his eyes becuase from those tiny slits you could tell the deep red eyes that burned from within the mask an almost demoic glow seemed to come from them .Her eye twitched again as she watched his ... really long hair fall out. She opened her mouth to say something, yet nothing came out. She glanced at him, nodding some and then glancing back to his hair, shaking her head to herself. HER hair was only down to her waist, it had to be long to be kept in buns. But HIS, was long. Looking over to him, she stared at the mask, noticing his eyes for once, but still not answering his question. "..." a slight wind rustled his hair and then he kind of slouched* "now ive awnsered your now awnser mine" he crossed his arms his armour grinding together scrapping a little but still staying shiny and red as ever he starte tapping his finger as if showing he was growing inmpatient with her .She had guessed that since his answer was so simple, hers would be too. Crossing her arms also, she looked away for a few seconds, then glanced at him. "I was... taking a walk." She grinned at her little answer, and then looked back at him, glancing as his armor had a gleam to it from the sun shining off of it.
.he shrugged and continued on towards the village as if nothing hapened not even noticing her anymore seeing as she awnsered his question wether it was a simple or stupid awnser or not he could have cared less he had other important matters.Blinking a few times, she shrugged also, and rubbed the back of her neck, starting to walk the same way, but only because she needed to get home, she needed to train. How she would train at home, she had no idea, but ... she was hungry, so thats a reason. She watched as he walked ahead, and walked slow behind, so he wouldn't notice her.along the way he dropped something along the path it seemd to be a peice of paper not noticeing he kept going till he got to the end of the forest and then he vanished.She saw him drop the piece of paper, and bit her lip, wanting to know what it was, so once she watched him vanish, not really paying attention, she eargerly ran up to it. Picking it up, she blinked and stared at it for a minute, looking back up and around to see if he was still there.- "..." and on the paper it simply readd...* naruto uzumaki hidden leaf village* and nothing more it was scribbled on there so apparently it meant something to the bearer and to noone else but he made his was to the central court at the hokages tower she wouldnt be expecting him he was gonna get yelled at he knew it but he kept on inside neways*