Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ The most Sinful Touch((Sasuke Vampire)) ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )
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By: AiNeko-chan 
Ai and her friends take a nice trip to the mall to celebrate the end of school. They day won't stay nice for long.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai / Horror / Romance | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 07.06.2008 | Updated On: 07.06.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.6K | Visits: 674 | Status: Work In Progress
Ai and her friends take a nice trip to the mall to celebrate the end of school. They day won't stay nice for long.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai / Horror / Romance | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 07.06.2008 | Updated On: 07.06.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.6K | Visits: 674 | Status: Work In Progress
Disclaimer: Unfortunatly I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters but Ai and Shi so far..maybe some later. If I did, there would alot more Yaoi action, and alot of Sakura Bashing!
A/N: Ok I'im just starting this story on this sight, but I published it on Quizilla as well, so If any of you see it on there under the Auther Lovegaa-sas-sai, ten it was mine. This won't be published anywhere else besides here so if you see it, please tell me and I'll get right on the Plageriser. Now lets get down to business, of corse I'm a new meber to this sight, though I've know about it and read stories from it for quite a while now. I need a Beta to go over and read my stories for I tend to be lazy with that kind of thing. This story got high reviews on Quizilla, so I will try my luck on here. The whole plot isn't quite thought of yet, but with Reviews, comments and critiques, I should get this baby up and running. Forgive me if I start off wierd with this, but I promise you it will get better. Enjoy!
~The most Sinful touch, always feels so good. How it captures your mind in a dazling cornacopia of pleasure and ecstasy~ 'Come on clock, just two more minutes...just two more' i sang in my head as the clock ticked audiably in the quiet classroom. Today was the last day of the school year until september. I was no longer a junior once the bell chimed and would officially be a senior, then well off to my collage years. ~Ding, Ding, Ding The bell Chimed and my best friend Shi pulled me up out of my chair and threw her hands in the air. "Finally summer!" She cried out. I chuckled and ran to the door. "Lets go get Hinata, and Tenten then we can hit the mall for summer stuff" I yelled back into the classroom. Two seconds later, Shi came trampling out and grabbed my arm "To Hot topic" She yelled as she dragged me down the hall. "Chotto matte!! (Wait a second)I cried as she ran to our locker and snatched our things out, then slammed it shut. Finally able to catch my breath I smacked her in the back of the head "Way to take my arm clean off" I scolded as she anime cried. "Gomen, but they have a sale on this Kawaii Gir jacket" She said rubbing her head. Stars grew in my eyes as I pictured myself with the shirt and jacket. "Well then lets go" I said raising my fist in the air. I heard giggling from behind me, and turned around to see Hinata and Tenten leaning against their locker laughing at us. "Are you guys ready to go or not?" She said Mushroom sighing. I nodded furiously and we walked out the door towards our cars.
We shuffled out of store after store with bags piled upto our elbows. Normally I wasn't one for shopping. But every once in a while my girly side came out. We walked on, arms hooked with each other and laughing. We walked into the food court and set our stuff down as we each ordered a ham sub from subway. "Ok what store haven't we hit yet?" Said shi looking around. "Hmmm we still have forever 21 and rave I think" Said Hinata thinking for a bit. We got up and grabbed our stuff as we continued to walk down the strip. As we were walking we passed a group of boys. One had long chocolate brown hair and strange lavenderish eyes. One had shaggy blond hair and weird but cute little lines on his face. Another one had blood red hair,thick eyeliner around his eyes, and a tattoo on his head that said love. And the last one is the one who caught my intrest the most. He had a weird but sexy Emo hair style, light eyeliner and deep and dark as coal, oynx eyes. As we passed them up, I felt a surge deep within my core and I stopped. "Wa-what was that" Hinata squeaked out gripping th fabric over her heart. I let at a shaky breath and closed my eyes. "Did you guys feel that, that spark?" I asked hopeful so i would'nt seem crazy. "Yeah.. i did, when i looked at that brown haired guy" Tenten said breathing deeply. "Same here with the red head" Said Shi as she gripped the handles on her bags tightly. "Yeah with the blond one for me too" Quivered Hinata. I shook my head and turned around to see the four boys facing us and staring. Shi, Hinata and Tenten looked at me quizzically then towards were my attention was drawn and stiffened. "Why are they looking at us" Shi asked with a scared Edge to her voice. "I dont know" Tenten whispered so they could'nt hear. "We should just turn around and walk away" Hinata said looking light a dear caught in the headlights. I nodded as well as the others and we turned around and walked away.
~Boy's POV~ We were walking in the sunset mall as practically all the girls swooned over us. To me they were just dinner, and i could care less about them. We had been walking around this god forsaken place for about an hour now and it was bugging the hell out of me. "Oi, why are we even here" i asked in a cold voice. "Because this baka Naruto over here, wanted to come here instead of a club like i sudjested" Said my friend Neji. Neji, and Gaara i could understand why i hung out with... But Naruto i had no idea. I heard a 'Hn' Come from Gaara and looked at him. "What" I asked annoyed. I looked at where his attention was focused and Saw a group of Girls. One had Chocolate brown hair up in two buns with Dark Hazel eyes, another Had Dark violet hair, and similar eyes to Neji. She looked kind of Shy and to herself. 'Naruto would love her' I thought snorting to myself. The other one had Short Ebony Hair, Glasses and a broad infectious smile. The last one is the one who made my 'heart' Beat. She had long waist length Jet black hair, and Deep Sea blue eyes. She didnt wear much make-up just a light coat of lipgloss and some masscara. 'Like she'd need make-up' I thought. She had natural beauty, as well as the rest of them. They also carried themselves with respect and didn't have all they're boobs and stuff hanging out of too-small shirts like the rest of the girls here. Once we passed them by, I took a whif and smelled the smell of Cherry blossoms and sighed contently. Suddenly i felt a pang or a surge in my stomach and screeched to a stop. "Intense" I heard Naruto mutter and i knew they felt it too. "Wow, what was that?" Gaara Asked Wide eyed. An expression you usually didn't see on a guy like him. We all turned around to see the girls stop. They looked dazed and were talking to each ohter 'Did they feel it too?' I thought to my self. The dark haired blue-eyed one turned around and looked at me with intrest. I saw her friends look at her and then look at us and instantly stiffen. 'What was that feeling?' I questioned. She gave one last look as did her friends before they turned and walked away. I smirked and licked my lips 'We'll this should be intresting'. I saw her converse with her friends for a while, then shake her head. The movement lifted her scent into my nose, and my senses went wild. The beast in me cried to get out and take her right now, but i held my breath and contained it. She waved and then started walking towards the exit. I smirked and a lustful gleem appeared in my eyes as I turned to my friends. "Im going to go, I'll see you guys tomorrow" I said never taking my eyes off the exit. They mumbled incoherent words, eyes still locked on the other girls as i walked to the Exit and followed her through the parking lot. I jumped from building to building as the sun went down and the moon peeked through the blended clouds and iluminated the night. She parked into a decent sized Two story house, and grabbed her bags out of her car and locked it. I noticed her house held a lonely aura to it, but put it in the back of my mind. She went into her house, and turned on a light as she went into a room until she came to one with a large balcony outside of it, connected by two ivory lined glass doors. I silently jumped onto the balcony and waited until the lights went off, then crept into the bedroom.
A/N: Ok I'im just starting this story on this sight, but I published it on Quizilla as well, so If any of you see it on there under the Auther Lovegaa-sas-sai, ten it was mine. This won't be published anywhere else besides here so if you see it, please tell me and I'll get right on the Plageriser. Now lets get down to business, of corse I'm a new meber to this sight, though I've know about it and read stories from it for quite a while now. I need a Beta to go over and read my stories for I tend to be lazy with that kind of thing. This story got high reviews on Quizilla, so I will try my luck on here. The whole plot isn't quite thought of yet, but with Reviews, comments and critiques, I should get this baby up and running. Forgive me if I start off wierd with this, but I promise you it will get better. Enjoy!
~The most Sinful touch, always feels so good. How it captures your mind in a dazling cornacopia of pleasure and ecstasy~ 'Come on clock, just two more minutes...just two more' i sang in my head as the clock ticked audiably in the quiet classroom. Today was the last day of the school year until september. I was no longer a junior once the bell chimed and would officially be a senior, then well off to my collage years. ~Ding, Ding, Ding The bell Chimed and my best friend Shi pulled me up out of my chair and threw her hands in the air. "Finally summer!" She cried out. I chuckled and ran to the door. "Lets go get Hinata, and Tenten then we can hit the mall for summer stuff" I yelled back into the classroom. Two seconds later, Shi came trampling out and grabbed my arm "To Hot topic" She yelled as she dragged me down the hall. "Chotto matte!! (Wait a second)I cried as she ran to our locker and snatched our things out, then slammed it shut. Finally able to catch my breath I smacked her in the back of the head "Way to take my arm clean off" I scolded as she anime cried. "Gomen, but they have a sale on this Kawaii Gir jacket" She said rubbing her head. Stars grew in my eyes as I pictured myself with the shirt and jacket. "Well then lets go" I said raising my fist in the air. I heard giggling from behind me, and turned around to see Hinata and Tenten leaning against their locker laughing at us. "Are you guys ready to go or not?" She said Mushroom sighing. I nodded furiously and we walked out the door towards our cars.
We shuffled out of store after store with bags piled upto our elbows. Normally I wasn't one for shopping. But every once in a while my girly side came out. We walked on, arms hooked with each other and laughing. We walked into the food court and set our stuff down as we each ordered a ham sub from subway. "Ok what store haven't we hit yet?" Said shi looking around. "Hmmm we still have forever 21 and rave I think" Said Hinata thinking for a bit. We got up and grabbed our stuff as we continued to walk down the strip. As we were walking we passed a group of boys. One had long chocolate brown hair and strange lavenderish eyes. One had shaggy blond hair and weird but cute little lines on his face. Another one had blood red hair,thick eyeliner around his eyes, and a tattoo on his head that said love. And the last one is the one who caught my intrest the most. He had a weird but sexy Emo hair style, light eyeliner and deep and dark as coal, oynx eyes. As we passed them up, I felt a surge deep within my core and I stopped. "Wa-what was that" Hinata squeaked out gripping th fabric over her heart. I let at a shaky breath and closed my eyes. "Did you guys feel that, that spark?" I asked hopeful so i would'nt seem crazy. "Yeah.. i did, when i looked at that brown haired guy" Tenten said breathing deeply. "Same here with the red head" Said Shi as she gripped the handles on her bags tightly. "Yeah with the blond one for me too" Quivered Hinata. I shook my head and turned around to see the four boys facing us and staring. Shi, Hinata and Tenten looked at me quizzically then towards were my attention was drawn and stiffened. "Why are they looking at us" Shi asked with a scared Edge to her voice. "I dont know" Tenten whispered so they could'nt hear. "We should just turn around and walk away" Hinata said looking light a dear caught in the headlights. I nodded as well as the others and we turned around and walked away.
~Boy's POV~ We were walking in the sunset mall as practically all the girls swooned over us. To me they were just dinner, and i could care less about them. We had been walking around this god forsaken place for about an hour now and it was bugging the hell out of me. "Oi, why are we even here" i asked in a cold voice. "Because this baka Naruto over here, wanted to come here instead of a club like i sudjested" Said my friend Neji. Neji, and Gaara i could understand why i hung out with... But Naruto i had no idea. I heard a 'Hn' Come from Gaara and looked at him. "What" I asked annoyed. I looked at where his attention was focused and Saw a group of Girls. One had Chocolate brown hair up in two buns with Dark Hazel eyes, another Had Dark violet hair, and similar eyes to Neji. She looked kind of Shy and to herself. 'Naruto would love her' I thought snorting to myself. The other one had Short Ebony Hair, Glasses and a broad infectious smile. The last one is the one who made my 'heart' Beat. She had long waist length Jet black hair, and Deep Sea blue eyes. She didnt wear much make-up just a light coat of lipgloss and some masscara. 'Like she'd need make-up' I thought. She had natural beauty, as well as the rest of them. They also carried themselves with respect and didn't have all they're boobs and stuff hanging out of too-small shirts like the rest of the girls here. Once we passed them by, I took a whif and smelled the smell of Cherry blossoms and sighed contently. Suddenly i felt a pang or a surge in my stomach and screeched to a stop. "Intense" I heard Naruto mutter and i knew they felt it too. "Wow, what was that?" Gaara Asked Wide eyed. An expression you usually didn't see on a guy like him. We all turned around to see the girls stop. They looked dazed and were talking to each ohter 'Did they feel it too?' I thought to my self. The dark haired blue-eyed one turned around and looked at me with intrest. I saw her friends look at her and then look at us and instantly stiffen. 'What was that feeling?' I questioned. She gave one last look as did her friends before they turned and walked away. I smirked and licked my lips 'We'll this should be intresting'. I saw her converse with her friends for a while, then shake her head. The movement lifted her scent into my nose, and my senses went wild. The beast in me cried to get out and take her right now, but i held my breath and contained it. She waved and then started walking towards the exit. I smirked and a lustful gleem appeared in my eyes as I turned to my friends. "Im going to go, I'll see you guys tomorrow" I said never taking my eyes off the exit. They mumbled incoherent words, eyes still locked on the other girls as i walked to the Exit and followed her through the parking lot. I jumped from building to building as the sun went down and the moon peeked through the blended clouds and iluminated the night. She parked into a decent sized Two story house, and grabbed her bags out of her car and locked it. I noticed her house held a lonely aura to it, but put it in the back of my mind. She went into her house, and turned on a light as she went into a room until she came to one with a large balcony outside of it, connected by two ivory lined glass doors. I silently jumped onto the balcony and waited until the lights went off, then crept into the bedroom.