Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Wishes Upon Cherry Blossoms ❯ In Comes Kira and Mitsukake ( Chapter 1 )

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Here it is!! My Naruto fanfic. Yea!! This is a sasukexOC fanfic. If you like my story then don't be afraid to review. Good or bad reviews it doesn't matter. Now I'm new to the series so if the characters are OCC or something doesn't fit with the real story you can review and tell me. But I hate spoilers so if you do tell me something, try not to give away to much information. Here is how I write:
Italics are thoughts
Italics that are bold are flashbacks
And without further ado, here it is….
 
In Comes Kira, and Mitsukake
 
It's morning, and the cool morning breeze sweeps over Konoha and it's sleeping citizens. But one person is already awake. A beautiful young girl with brown hair that reaches her waist danced when the wind swept over her body. She was standing on a cliff, overlooking the forest in her village. She was watching the sun rise and glared at the sky as it shed its dark colors and replaced it with vibrant colors of pink, orange, and yellow. The girl has clear hazel eyes, which at the moment held the look of pain and despair. In her hand she held two cherry blossoms. When she felt a gust of wind come from behind her she tossed the blossoms into the air and watched as they floated over the cliff and out into the open sky. She watched them dance in the air until she was sure they had either floated far away or had landed in the forest when the gust died down. Then, at that moment she made a silent wish. After she made her wish she sat down on rock and stared out into the sky.
When the sun had fully risen, and the sky lost its shades of pink, orange, and yellow, the girl got up and left the cliff. Only to return another day. For this was something this girl did often, once a week to be exact. Why did she do this? Simple, to remember what was important to her.
Later that day:
The young girl and a man are standing in the woods. He's dictating the details of the day's training mission. She wasn't really paying attention, she was staring up into the sky watching the clouds go by.
“Kira are you listening to me!”
The girl's name is Kira. She is 14 years-old and is with her sensei training for the chunin exams. She wasn't placed in a 3 group team like everyone else because she graduated from the academy 1 year ago. Her sensei; also her best friend, is Mitsukake. He is an attractive 17 year-old man with sliver hair that reached his ears and he has blue eyes. He volunteered to take Kira as his pupil when no one else would, and after what happened 2 years ago:
Begin Flashback:
12 year-old Kira is sitting on the couch in her house looking out the window, and waiting for her parents to return home from their mission. They were due back 2 days ago and Kira was getting worried, since she hadn't heard from them since they left a week ago. Shewatched the rain fall down andflinched every time there was a clash of thunder or a flash of lighting.
`Ah, when are they coming home?'Kira thought
Knock knock knock
Kira got up and answered the door. In the doorway stood 2 men with the headpieces marking that they were ninja from the village hidden within the leaves.
“Can I help you?” Kira asked
“Are you Kira Mitzuki?” one of them asked
“Yes, why?”
“We have terrible news.” The other one said
“It's about your parents. The mission went horribly wrong…”
End Flashback
“Kira you won't pass the exams if you always have your head in the clouds!”
“Sorry Mitsukake. I'm listening to you.”
“Like I was saying, your mission today is to find me.”
“You?”
“Yes, I'm going to hide somewhere Konoha and you have 1 hour to find me.”
“What! Are you kidding me! Is that even possible?”
“I'm serious. And as how to find me sense my chakra.”
“How?”
“Ah, Kira. Have you learned anything? I am a deception ninja. And I'm training you the same way I was trained. And sensing chakra is something I learned. This exercise will help you sense chakra and pick out your target's chakra among other ninja's chakra.” Mitsukake explained, “Okay so close your eyes and focus on me and the flow of my chakra. Focus on the direction of the flow, its strengths, its weakness, and where it gathers most. Remember it.”
Kira closed her eyes and did exactly what Mitsukake told her to do. Soon the chakra disappeared, and Kira opened her eyes to find that Mitsukake had disappeared.
“Alright Mitsukake one hour! I'll find you!”
45 minutes later Kira still hasn't found Mitsukake.
“Damn it! This is harder than I thought.” Kira stood straight up, did a basic hand sign, and concentrated hard to try and find the flow of chakra that matched Mitsukake's. There was nothing. Then there was a small trace of it that came from the right of her, but it disappeared as soon as it appeared. She ran as fast as she could in the direction she had sensed the chakra.
At the bridge:
Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are waiting for Kakashi.
“Ah, When is he gonna get here?” Naruto whined
“He's gonna get here when he gets here!” Sakura yelled back
Suddenly Kira came running out of the forest at top speed, and stopped suddenly right in front of the trio.
“Damn it! Where are you Mitsukake!” Kira turned around and saw the trio with shocked looks on their faces. Feeling a little embarrassed Kira turned a slight shade of red.
Wow! The one with the black hair sure is cute! I wonder how old he is. Kira thought to herself
“Ah, Hi. I'm Kira Mitzuki.”
“Hey, I'm Naruto.”
“And I'm Sakura, this is Sasuke. May I ask what you're doing?”
“Oh, well I'm training with my sensei. What are you guys doing?” Kira walked over to the bridge's railing and sat on it
“We're waiting for our sensei.” Naruto answered
“Really! Who's you're sensei?”
“Kakashi.” Sakura answered
“Wow! You're Kakashi's students?”
“Ya, why?” Sakura asked
“Then you guys must have passed his test. And I couldn't even do that.”
“You took Kakashi-sensei's test?” Naruto questioned
“Yup, two years ago.”
“Two years ago?” Sasuke finally said something
“Oh you talk? I thought you couldn't, and I didn't want to be rude and ask. Hehe. Anyways, ya I took his test two years ago and my team failed so we had to repeat the academy. And then when I was finally able to take the Chunin exams, I failed. That means I'm still a Genin.”
“And how old are you?” Sasuke asked
“14.”
“Really! You're 14 and you're still a genin! And you failed the exams! You must be worse than Sasuke!”
“Naruto! Don't talk about Sasuke like that!” Sakura yelled as she elbowed him in the ribs
“Ow! What was that for!”
“Naruto you bastard! Don't you mean worse than you?” Sasuke quarreled
“Shut up Sasuke!”
“Hahaha. Don't be fooled, those exams are harder than you think.”
“Do you know what's on them.” Sasuke asked now interested in what this girl had to say
“Nope.”
Well she is totally useless. Sasuke thought to himself
“So Kira, you mentioned you're training now? Where is you sensei?” Naruto questioned
“That's my mission. I have to find him. He's hidden somewhere in Konoha, and I have about 5 minuets left to find him.”
“What that's all!” Sakura yelled
“Yup.” Kira jumped down from the raining, “You can come out now Mitsukake! I know you're under the bridge!”
Mitsukake Jump up onto the brigde and looked at Kira.
“How did you know I was there?”
Oh my! He's even more attractive than Sasuke! Sakura thought to herself
“Easy I sensed you. Just like you told me to. I waited till now to tell you that I found you cause I wanted to build up a dramatic effect.”
How did she know he was there? I couldn't even sense him. Sasuke thought to himself
“Good job Kira you pass.”
“Yea!” Kira yelled as she jumped up and down
Poof, Kakashi appeared in front of them.
“YOU'RE LATE!!” Sakura and Naruto yelled simultaneously
“Hey Kakashi.” Mitsukake said
“Mitsukake, it's been awhile. Ah, Kira it's good to see you again.”
“I wish I could say the same.”
“Wait you guys know each other?” Sasuke asked
“Yes we do. I know Kira from when she had to take my test and I know Mitsukake because we're both Jounin.”
“You're a jounin?” Sakura asked with interest
“Yup, and he's only 17.” Kira answered
“That's it?” Sakura asked in amazement
“You know what Kakashi. I think it would be a good idea if your best student battled Kira.”
“I think you're right. I would be a good training exercise. What do you think Sasuke? As my best student you would have to fight Kira.”
“What!” Naruto yelled, “Why Sasuke! I'm 20x better than him!”
“Naruto, we've been through this. You graduated last in the academy, and Sasuke has shown the most skill in our training missions. So naturally he would fight Kira.”
“Mitsukake are you sure this is a good idea. I mean, me go up against Kakashi's best student?”
“I think she should fight Naruto. It would be a waste of my time to fight someone who is as weak as her.” Sasuke stated
“Ya! Sasuke's right! He's no match for Kira! I'm clearly the only one who can beat her!”
“That wasn't what I was saying!”
“Well how about it Sasuke? Even though it's gonna be an easy battle, do you still wanna fight?”
“Fine. Only if it will shut Naruto up.”
Sasuke and Kira walked off the bridge and stood in a clearing.
“Alright Kira, Sasuke. You'll be battling in false death style.” Mitsukake announced
“False death, what's that” Naruto asked
“Kira if you will.”
“False death. When you're fighting an ally, and don't wish to harm them but still be able to use kunais you can use the false death style. When you are about to cause a serious injury to your opponent, you stop your attack and declare your self the winner. You can also use jutsus, as long as they're not fatal.”
“Fine, whatever. Let's just finish this.”
Kira and Sasuke stood ready, bracing themselves for when the other one decided to attack. Kira took out a kunai, and gathered her chakra to her feet.
Since he's obviously not going to make the fist move I will!
Kira jumped up in the air and threw her kunai at Sasuke which he easily dodged. Then while still in the air Kira did a jutsu that Mitsukake taught her. When she landed on the ground she ran so fast that Sasuke couldn't track her movements. As Kira was running she was chucking kunais at Sasuke. Sasuke had no choice but to take the defensive and dodge the kunais.
Damn! She's moving so fast! I can't even track her! I'm gonna have to use my sharingan!
Sasuke activated his sharingan and then the next kunai that was thrown at him he caught and threw it at Kira which she dodged.
Damn it! He can now track my moves thanks to that stupid sharingan! Then my speed jutsu is useless and is just using up my chakra!
Kira stopped using her speed jutsu and, pulled out a small sword that was strapped to her thigh (it was hidden cause her skirt covered it).
Where the hell did that come from! I didn't see her have that before! Was she concealing it?
“Chakra sword!” With that command chakra from Kira's body began pouring into the sword, surrounding the blade in a light shade of green.
What the hell!
“Shadow clone jutsu!” suddenly 3 clones of Kira appeared each with same amount of chakra as the real one. The 4 of them ran around each other quickly to try and confuse Sasuke on where the real one was. But with his sharingan he was able to track the real Kira's movements.
“I've got you now!” Sasuke yelled as he ran to who he thought was the real Kira-kunai in hand. When out of nowhere the REAL Kira came out of the woods that were behind Sasuke. She swiftly ran up behind him, and before Sasuke could react, Kira had her sword across Sasuke's neck and was holding him to her chest tightly with her other arm.
“I win.”
Kira let go of Sasuke and put her blade away.
“Very good Kira!” Mitsukake praised
“Did you see that? I beat an Uchiha!” Kira yelled as ran back across the bridge to see everyone.
Sasuke stood still, shocked at what had just happened.
How did she beat me? She led me on to think she was weaker than Naruto, when clearly her skills are real.
“Wow Kira, that was amazing!” Sakura praised
“Thanks!”
“How? How did you manage doing all those jutsus? When you said you're no match for Kakashi's best student.” Sasuke asked. He was now over the shock and walking back to the bridge.
“Rule number one of being a ninja. Never tell your opponents your strengths.”
“You see Sasuke, I'm a ninja mastered in the art of deception.” Mitsukake explained, “And that not only includes physical strength, like what Kakashi is teaching you but also being able to conceal your self to your enemies. Plus it enables you to located your enemies and track them no problem. And that is how I'm training Kira. Not only in physical strength, but the strength chakra can have in battle.”
“That's so cool!” Naruto yelled
“Well Kira, it looks like you've gotten a lot stronger since I last saw you.”
“You got that right Kakashi!”
“Well Kira that was your last lesson for a while.”
“What! Why!”
“Because I'm going away on a week long mission.”
“Again!”
“Kira I told you when I first became your sensei, that I'm still a ninja working for the village. And since deception ninjas are in short supply, I'll be going away on many missions.”
“But the chunin exams!”
“I'm sorry Kira.”
“Fine!”
“Hey Mitsukake-sensei can Kira train with us for the week you are away?” Naruto asked
“I don't see why not. Would you mind Kakashi?”
“Not at all.”
“Yes! Thanks so much Kakashi-sensei!” said Kira
“Well I'll see you in a week Kira.” Mitsukake walked off the bridge and into the woods. When he was fully in the woods Kira ran after him.
“Wait…” Kira called out and just like a little girl grabbed onto Mitsukake's shirt and looked up at him with big round eyes, “Promise me you'll come back safe.”
“Kira…”
“Promise me!”
“Fine, I promise.”
Mitsukake embraced Kira in a hug. I would never think about leaving you Kira. Don't you ever think it. Especially after what happened to your parents.
Kira and Mitsukake had known each other since the academy. They became very good friends when they were in school. Even though Kira had to repeat the academy and Mitsukake went on to become a chunin, they still stayed good friends. And it was Mitsukake who helped Kira when she heard about what happened to her parents. Truth be told it was much easier to handle what happened to her father, than what happened to her mother. For the longest time she felt lost, and it was Mitsukake who found her and brought her back. In Kira's eyes he become like an older brother to her. But to Mitsukake she was something more than a sister. He loved her. He couldn't go on a mission and never return to her. And even though she didn't show it now he hoped that one day she would return his feelings. Mitsukake let go of Kira.
“Now go back to Kakashi and the others. You have training to do.”
“Alright Mitsukake. Be safe! Bye!”
“Bye!”
Kira turned around and ran in the direction where the others where waiting for her. Mitsukake watched her until she was gone.
I promise Kira I won't leave. Even if I do die on a mission, I would find some way to come back to you.
 
There it was! Chapter one! And I know what you are thinking, is the pairing in this fic gonna be KiraxMitsukake? The answer is no. This is a SasukexOC fic, and I can tell you the pairing WILL NOT be SasukexMitsukake. I'll leave you think who the OC Sasuke ends up with is. Lol. Till next time!
~Daieki Sohma
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