Original Stories Fan Fiction ❯ Dawn's Guardian ❯ The Prologue ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: iwantwayne15 
The prologue it is very sad and a little gory
Miscellaneous: Original Stories Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Horror / Drama | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 10.11.2008 | Updated On: 10.11.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 340 | Visits: 110 | Status: Work In Progress
The prologue it is very sad and a little gory
Miscellaneous: Original Stories Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Horror / Drama | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 10.11.2008 | Updated On: 10.11.2008 | Pages: 1 | Words: 340 | Visits: 110 | Status: Work In Progress
A tap was all she heard, not much louder than a raindrop falling on the roof of their house. Still half asleep she opened her eyes slowly, trying to rid them of sleep. Suddenly, a loud scream, and she bolted upright in her bed, eyes wide and alert, she didn’t think twice as she ran to where the plea for help sounded, her heart thumping harder and louder in her ears. Knowing immediately whose scream that belonged to, she tried reassuring herself, telling herself that her family was going to be safe and that she was just hearing things.
Swallowing the lump in her throat she slowly turned the door handle to her parents’ bedroom. But falling to her knees in the door way, she couldn't believe what she saw. The stench alone made her want to hurl. But what she saw was even worse. Blood spilled everywhere, on the walls, the carpet, her parent's mattress, everything. Tears overflowing her vision as she saw her parents in the bloody pools, lying on top of the other, barely recognizable through all the red liquid covering their bodies, finally after not being able to take anymore she let herself collapse from the sight and discovery.
Unknowingly though the murderer was still in the room, deciding against killing the girl for the moment. Jumping out of the high window where his vehicle lay in waiting he drove off. Not knowing that something, no, someone was in waiting, prowling eyes were protecting her. These were the eyes of Dawn's Guardian
Remember to review and tell me what you thought! If this is liked enough it will actually be published into a book... Yes! It’s not really fan fiction! I was creative enough to actually start writing a book. So really criticism helps too! Thank you and if you have any questions or comments that are a little to private I would be happy to give you my email! Hope you enjoy the next chapters to come.
Swallowing the lump in her throat she slowly turned the door handle to her parents’ bedroom. But falling to her knees in the door way, she couldn't believe what she saw. The stench alone made her want to hurl. But what she saw was even worse. Blood spilled everywhere, on the walls, the carpet, her parent's mattress, everything. Tears overflowing her vision as she saw her parents in the bloody pools, lying on top of the other, barely recognizable through all the red liquid covering their bodies, finally after not being able to take anymore she let herself collapse from the sight and discovery.
Unknowingly though the murderer was still in the room, deciding against killing the girl for the moment. Jumping out of the high window where his vehicle lay in waiting he drove off. Not knowing that something, no, someone was in waiting, prowling eyes were protecting her. These were the eyes of Dawn's Guardian
Remember to review and tell me what you thought! If this is liked enough it will actually be published into a book... Yes! It’s not really fan fiction! I was creative enough to actually start writing a book. So really criticism helps too! Thank you and if you have any questions or comments that are a little to private I would be happy to give you my email! Hope you enjoy the next chapters to come.