Original Stories Fan Fiction ❯ Take Two ❯ Strange Details ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: jaga 
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Miscellaneous: Original Stories Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Fantasy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 04.09.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.8K | Visits: 346 | Status: Work In Progress
To read chapter 2 and up, please go to http://www.fictionpress.com/~jaga
Miscellaneous: Original Stories Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Fantasy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 04.09.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.8K | Visits: 346 | Status: Work In Progress
I originally started this story in 2006
All characters are created by Jaga 2006! This is my very own anime story I made up! It is owned by me and no one else! Please DO NOT STEAL! Also please review to let me know what you think about my story. ^_^
Take2 © Jaga 2007
Scene One
[Girl’s Boarding School (Ages 13-15) - Dorm Room ]
On a dark and cold night a small girl shivered in the darkness in the corner of a dorm bedroom which she shared with three other girls. She felt as if something was coming for her, something she feared. She did not know what this thing was, but, she still felt the pain in her chests as her heart pounded louder and louder. She listened to the creaks of the wind as it blew the large branches of the tree into the window. And she also heard howls it made throughout the small holes of the building.
She turned to look at the other three girls who were sleeping soundly as if there was no care in the world. She turned back to look toward the window went suddenly a pair of large dark wings passed by glowing of an amber yellow. She jumped back in fear hitting her forehead against a shelf that was over her head knowing her out.
- Beginning of a dream -
“Nozomi-chan (Name meaning Hope, Dream). . . Nozomi-chan? ... Is that truly you? ... I’ve being looking for you all over. We must leave together before it’s too late. Come! Come with me now!” A figure then appeared in darkness in front of her reaching his hand toward her. It was a man wearing strange robes beautifully decorated with blue, greens and golds. He was holding a long stick with features and other decorative objects attached to it. She could not yet see his face, but he had a gentle voice and he made her feel warm inside. The pain of her chest had stopped, and we wondered who he was. She did not know of this Nozomi he spoke of. She then stood up and began to walk toward his direction still not able to see his face. Then it all went white. " Where are you? Please don't leave me alone!"
- Ending of a dream -
Scene Two
[Dorm Room]
“Kimi-chan . . . Kimi-chan is you all right?” Sia (Roommate #1) shook her friend trying to wake her up. Kimi opened one of her eyes to see her friend’s big purple eyes in shock from finding her with a bloody forehead. She had hit her head so hard on the shelf that it had made a small cut that bleed and hardened on her forehead. Sia ran to the bathroom and came back with a washcloth and wipped Kimi’s forehead then places a band-aid on it to prevent any other blood to come out. Sia was one to always be concerned about people around her. She hopped to one day be a doctor’s assistance cause she wanted to help others the best she could. She was also known to being immature went it came to rich people. Sia had worked very hard to get into private boarding school. She made her own money to pay her way in by doing various jobs in town.
“Kimi-chan what happened? I know you’re clumsy a lot, but you’ve never sleep walked and hit your head before.” Sia then giggled at her friends and took her hand pulling her toward the drawers to get their school uniform. Their uniform was a cute sailor style one that was brown, black and pale yellow/dirty white colors. Sia was in this year’s Council and was put in change of designing this year’s uniform and she was well proud of her work. “I’m fine, really! I must of sleep walked and hit my head that’s all”
Karuka (Roommate #2) looked at the uniform in disgusted. “Why do I have to wear such a bad uniform, you should have added more colors and elegance to it, Sia-san . . . ” She looked at Sia in disgust. Sia turned her head at her madly. “Well I can’t please everybody now, Karuka-san, so stop acting like a spoiled brat!” Karuka had come from a rich family that sent her off to study in the private boarding school, because they were always traveling. They would send her many lovely items from their trips and at lest a good half of the boarding room she claimed as her own. She did not like to get along with common people, and she found them boring. Karuka turned away from Sia and continued to get ready for classes.
As the two fought, Kimi looked down remembering what she had seem in her dream, ignoring the fight between the two girls. Hana (Roommate #3) dropped the book she was reading to observe the distractions happening in the room. Like always, Hana was already in her uniform going over her notes for their upcoming class. She was always one to get things done first and the best and read nearly every book she could get her hands on. She scanned the room and noticed Kimi in a depressed state. She put down her book and walked over to Kimi’s side.
“Kimi-chan?. . . Kimi-chan?” Kimi was still in the middle of getting ready but was lost in her thoughts about the things she had seen. She tried to remember what she was doing before she closed her eyes and the dream came to her. She shook her head not being able to remember it all when all of a sudden a warm hand touched her right shoulder and jumped from shock. Hana stared at her with her big green eyes half covered with her long red bangs which always hid her expression. Kimi turned away from Hana. “I’m fine, sorry I must have just blanked out for a second.” She laughed and finished putting on hr uniform and grabbed Hana’s arm. “Let get going! I feel like something wonderful might happen today!” announced Kimi happily hiding her thoughts to herself. Sia quickly put on her uniforms and followed Kimi and Hana out the room with Karuka still angry following well behind them.
Scene Three
[Class]
The big school bell rung eight times declaring all students to get to their classes before eight-fifteen. Kimi took her seat that was second last near to the window while Sia’s was in back of hers in the back row, Hana was two seats to her right toward the door and Karuka’s was in the back row two desks away from the door. As they started their morning history class, Kimi’s mind began to wonder off again, she turned to see out the window watching the leaves fall off the tree. They had been getting lots of abnormal weather as of late. On their first day of classes and it was beginning to get cold. Summer was over and like usual classes begun once again. Kimi and her friends were beginning their tenth grade and this history class was to review the stuff they had learned last year.
Kimi had been living with her grandmother before she was sent off to boarding school. Her parents had died in a tragic accident leaving her father’s only known relative to take care of her, since her mother had no living relatives. Her mother had been an only child like her father, but she had also lost her parents at a young age while her husband still had his mother. Her grandmother was always busy taking care of own things to care for a child. So, she took the money that Kimi’s parents had left for Kimi to send her off to study.
Kimi then thought of her dream again when she suddenly remembered the wings that flew by her window that was glowing an amber yellow light. Kimi got chills remembering it. She was spaced out by her visions that she did not hear her name being called from up-front. “Kimi-san, please read lines at page eighty-three, line twelve . . . Kimi-san . . . Kimi-san are you listening to me?” the teacher snapped at her. Sia turned toward her and shook her to get her attention. Kimi spanned out of it and looked at Sia wondering what was going on. “Now that your back with us, could you read the next lines at page eighty-three line twelve thank you.” The teacher repeated. Kimi got up and started to read trying to forget what had happened the night before, but it was stuck in the back of her head throughout the morning.
Scene Four
[Hallway]
Kimi decided to eat her dinner outside on the rooftop today. So she grabbed an extra blanket and her bento (lunch box) and started to climb the stairs went she yelled someone running toward her yelling her name. “Kimi-chan, wait up! I got something to ask you about!” Sia ran toward her friend then stopped in front of her breathing deeply trying to catch her breath. When she did, she looked up at Kimi with her deep purple eyes and the wind brew trough the window beside them that made Sia’s long golden blond hair dance in the wind. Kimi had always admired Sia’s beauty, especially her golden hair which she tied the top half in a small ponytail leaving the rest dragging on her shoulders. “What is Sia-chan?” Kimi asked looking back at Sia’s face which looked to be concerned and worried. “I was wondering what happened back there in class, was it something to do with what happened this morning? You really seem out of it today, and its worrying me.” Kimi looked at the girl who looked like she was about to cry if she didn’t answer her question. She took a deep breath and took her friend’s hand and pulled her up the stairway. “Come with me.” She explained on there way up to the rooftop.
Scene Five
[Rooftop]
Both girls sat down on the rooftop with their lunches. It seemed like nobody else had chosen to come to the rooftop today, because the cold weather. Kimi turned ward her friend pulling half of the blanket she had over her shoulder to keep them both warm from the frozen winds. Sia began to eat her bento starting with the rice then she looked up at her friend. “So . . . Are you going to tell me what’s been bothering you already or do I have to force it out of you?” she snapped and playful pouched her friend in the shoulder making Kimi giggle. Sia had been friends with Kimi for a long time. They grew up playing together since their families had been neighbors through their childhood. They were glad to be going thought junior high together.
Kimi looked down and started to tell her friend about the strange thing she saw at the window last night and about the dream she had after she had closed her eyes. She explained about how comfortable she felt around the person in her dream, how softly he spoke toward her. She spoke about the strange robes he wore and the symbol decorations on it and on his stick which was decorated as well. Sia gazed at her friend in amazement upon the strange dream. Kimi explained about how she felt she had met this person once before, but didn’t know where she had met him. “And that’s all I can remember about it. I know I heard that voice before, but I can’t remember where. I feel so confused.”
Sia smiled at her and grabbed her giving her a big hug. “Don’t worry. I’m sure you’ll figure out who it was sooner or later, don’t worry about it so much, you’ll just drive yourself mad that way. And that thing you saw in the window, you were just tired and seen things or you just dreamed it. Remember went we were kids? I told you monsters don’t exist and I proved it! There was no monster in that closet!” Kimi looked up at her friend that was holding her in her arms in a protective and caring manner. Sia had always been the one to listen to her went she was feeling down and always knew what to tell her to feel better. But the questions still remained at the back of her mind. Sia let her go and began finishing her Bento and Kimi followed.
Scene Six
[In Town]
At the end of the day Kimi went out for a walk through the small town. She walked down her favorite road which had many cute small stores with various interesting objects. As she walked there was suddenly a large amount of light that hit all the surrounding areas causing the entire scene around her to stop and the turn black and white. All the people which were around her stopped moving and even the clock stopped moving. She turned around and around trying frightened and scared not knowing what had happened. All of a sudden a dark tall man appeared in front of her with giant black bird wings. His eyes were bloodshot red and he had a terrifying look in his face.
Kimi began to move back no being able to speak she was so scared. She couldn’t even look away she felt her body freeze and she fell to the ground on her knees shaking. She began to cry and barely whispered “Please . . . Please somebody save me . . . Anybody . . . ” All of a sudden a blond haired man appeared with wings that were a deep brown. He landed in front of the scary looking man and his wings turned into a beautiful eagle which perched onto his strong arm yelling with its mighty voice. “Kokoro (Name Meaning Spirit, Heart, Mind) Perch!” he had yelled.
Kimi looked at the man who had deep violet eyes and was wearing something she was sure she had once seen. “Do not touch Nozomi-chan. You dirty dark bird.” The man said angrily looking at the scary one. He extended out his arm and it started to glow a deep ember yellow color and a decorative stick appeared in his hand. He then began to chant some secret language words “Kamar Satteru Yan Sate!” Kimi then recognized that the man’s robe looked like the one from her dream as the scary man disappeared from in front of her running away. He had been afraid of the blond haired man.
The man came forward and reached out his hand to her. “Come quickly, more will come for you, we must get you to safety Nozomi-chan.” She didn’t know what came over her, but she took the stranger’s hand and followed him to another part of the town. He then began to chant again. “Stig Mova Rampet Ha” A sudden ember colored dust flew around them as the scenery of her little town disappeared in front of her. Kimi wasn’t sure what was happening, but like in her dream she felt close to the stranger next to her. She looked up at him but his long bangs covered his eyes.
Scene Seven
[Unknown Land]
They arrived to what looked like a country land. The trees and grass were sparkling like as if it had just rained. There were mountains as tall and as far as the eyes could see. Kimi looked out in amazement trying to take the view of she was seeing. But then remembered she was in the town a few seconds ago. She turned toward the stranger who was looking at her as she was viewing the surrounding area. “Who are you, and where are we?” she asked him confused afraid for an answer.
End of Part 1
All characters are created by Jaga 2006! This is my very own anime story I made up! It is owned by me and no one else! Please DO NOT STEAL! Also please review to let me know what you think about my story. ^_^
Take2 © Jaga 2007
Scene One
[Girl’s Boarding School (Ages 13-15) - Dorm Room ]
On a dark and cold night a small girl shivered in the darkness in the corner of a dorm bedroom which she shared with three other girls. She felt as if something was coming for her, something she feared. She did not know what this thing was, but, she still felt the pain in her chests as her heart pounded louder and louder. She listened to the creaks of the wind as it blew the large branches of the tree into the window. And she also heard howls it made throughout the small holes of the building.
She turned to look at the other three girls who were sleeping soundly as if there was no care in the world. She turned back to look toward the window went suddenly a pair of large dark wings passed by glowing of an amber yellow. She jumped back in fear hitting her forehead against a shelf that was over her head knowing her out.
- Beginning of a dream -
“Nozomi-chan (Name meaning Hope, Dream). . . Nozomi-chan? ... Is that truly you? ... I’ve being looking for you all over. We must leave together before it’s too late. Come! Come with me now!” A figure then appeared in darkness in front of her reaching his hand toward her. It was a man wearing strange robes beautifully decorated with blue, greens and golds. He was holding a long stick with features and other decorative objects attached to it. She could not yet see his face, but he had a gentle voice and he made her feel warm inside. The pain of her chest had stopped, and we wondered who he was. She did not know of this Nozomi he spoke of. She then stood up and began to walk toward his direction still not able to see his face. Then it all went white. " Where are you? Please don't leave me alone!"
- Ending of a dream -
Scene Two
[Dorm Room]
“Kimi-chan . . . Kimi-chan is you all right?” Sia (Roommate #1) shook her friend trying to wake her up. Kimi opened one of her eyes to see her friend’s big purple eyes in shock from finding her with a bloody forehead. She had hit her head so hard on the shelf that it had made a small cut that bleed and hardened on her forehead. Sia ran to the bathroom and came back with a washcloth and wipped Kimi’s forehead then places a band-aid on it to prevent any other blood to come out. Sia was one to always be concerned about people around her. She hopped to one day be a doctor’s assistance cause she wanted to help others the best she could. She was also known to being immature went it came to rich people. Sia had worked very hard to get into private boarding school. She made her own money to pay her way in by doing various jobs in town.
“Kimi-chan what happened? I know you’re clumsy a lot, but you’ve never sleep walked and hit your head before.” Sia then giggled at her friends and took her hand pulling her toward the drawers to get their school uniform. Their uniform was a cute sailor style one that was brown, black and pale yellow/dirty white colors. Sia was in this year’s Council and was put in change of designing this year’s uniform and she was well proud of her work. “I’m fine, really! I must of sleep walked and hit my head that’s all”
Karuka (Roommate #2) looked at the uniform in disgusted. “Why do I have to wear such a bad uniform, you should have added more colors and elegance to it, Sia-san . . . ” She looked at Sia in disgust. Sia turned her head at her madly. “Well I can’t please everybody now, Karuka-san, so stop acting like a spoiled brat!” Karuka had come from a rich family that sent her off to study in the private boarding school, because they were always traveling. They would send her many lovely items from their trips and at lest a good half of the boarding room she claimed as her own. She did not like to get along with common people, and she found them boring. Karuka turned away from Sia and continued to get ready for classes.
As the two fought, Kimi looked down remembering what she had seem in her dream, ignoring the fight between the two girls. Hana (Roommate #3) dropped the book she was reading to observe the distractions happening in the room. Like always, Hana was already in her uniform going over her notes for their upcoming class. She was always one to get things done first and the best and read nearly every book she could get her hands on. She scanned the room and noticed Kimi in a depressed state. She put down her book and walked over to Kimi’s side.
“Kimi-chan?. . . Kimi-chan?” Kimi was still in the middle of getting ready but was lost in her thoughts about the things she had seen. She tried to remember what she was doing before she closed her eyes and the dream came to her. She shook her head not being able to remember it all when all of a sudden a warm hand touched her right shoulder and jumped from shock. Hana stared at her with her big green eyes half covered with her long red bangs which always hid her expression. Kimi turned away from Hana. “I’m fine, sorry I must have just blanked out for a second.” She laughed and finished putting on hr uniform and grabbed Hana’s arm. “Let get going! I feel like something wonderful might happen today!” announced Kimi happily hiding her thoughts to herself. Sia quickly put on her uniforms and followed Kimi and Hana out the room with Karuka still angry following well behind them.
Scene Three
[Class]
The big school bell rung eight times declaring all students to get to their classes before eight-fifteen. Kimi took her seat that was second last near to the window while Sia’s was in back of hers in the back row, Hana was two seats to her right toward the door and Karuka’s was in the back row two desks away from the door. As they started their morning history class, Kimi’s mind began to wonder off again, she turned to see out the window watching the leaves fall off the tree. They had been getting lots of abnormal weather as of late. On their first day of classes and it was beginning to get cold. Summer was over and like usual classes begun once again. Kimi and her friends were beginning their tenth grade and this history class was to review the stuff they had learned last year.
Kimi had been living with her grandmother before she was sent off to boarding school. Her parents had died in a tragic accident leaving her father’s only known relative to take care of her, since her mother had no living relatives. Her mother had been an only child like her father, but she had also lost her parents at a young age while her husband still had his mother. Her grandmother was always busy taking care of own things to care for a child. So, she took the money that Kimi’s parents had left for Kimi to send her off to study.
Kimi then thought of her dream again when she suddenly remembered the wings that flew by her window that was glowing an amber yellow light. Kimi got chills remembering it. She was spaced out by her visions that she did not hear her name being called from up-front. “Kimi-san, please read lines at page eighty-three, line twelve . . . Kimi-san . . . Kimi-san are you listening to me?” the teacher snapped at her. Sia turned toward her and shook her to get her attention. Kimi spanned out of it and looked at Sia wondering what was going on. “Now that your back with us, could you read the next lines at page eighty-three line twelve thank you.” The teacher repeated. Kimi got up and started to read trying to forget what had happened the night before, but it was stuck in the back of her head throughout the morning.
Scene Four
[Hallway]
Kimi decided to eat her dinner outside on the rooftop today. So she grabbed an extra blanket and her bento (lunch box) and started to climb the stairs went she yelled someone running toward her yelling her name. “Kimi-chan, wait up! I got something to ask you about!” Sia ran toward her friend then stopped in front of her breathing deeply trying to catch her breath. When she did, she looked up at Kimi with her deep purple eyes and the wind brew trough the window beside them that made Sia’s long golden blond hair dance in the wind. Kimi had always admired Sia’s beauty, especially her golden hair which she tied the top half in a small ponytail leaving the rest dragging on her shoulders. “What is Sia-chan?” Kimi asked looking back at Sia’s face which looked to be concerned and worried. “I was wondering what happened back there in class, was it something to do with what happened this morning? You really seem out of it today, and its worrying me.” Kimi looked at the girl who looked like she was about to cry if she didn’t answer her question. She took a deep breath and took her friend’s hand and pulled her up the stairway. “Come with me.” She explained on there way up to the rooftop.
Scene Five
[Rooftop]
Both girls sat down on the rooftop with their lunches. It seemed like nobody else had chosen to come to the rooftop today, because the cold weather. Kimi turned ward her friend pulling half of the blanket she had over her shoulder to keep them both warm from the frozen winds. Sia began to eat her bento starting with the rice then she looked up at her friend. “So . . . Are you going to tell me what’s been bothering you already or do I have to force it out of you?” she snapped and playful pouched her friend in the shoulder making Kimi giggle. Sia had been friends with Kimi for a long time. They grew up playing together since their families had been neighbors through their childhood. They were glad to be going thought junior high together.
Kimi looked down and started to tell her friend about the strange thing she saw at the window last night and about the dream she had after she had closed her eyes. She explained about how comfortable she felt around the person in her dream, how softly he spoke toward her. She spoke about the strange robes he wore and the symbol decorations on it and on his stick which was decorated as well. Sia gazed at her friend in amazement upon the strange dream. Kimi explained about how she felt she had met this person once before, but didn’t know where she had met him. “And that’s all I can remember about it. I know I heard that voice before, but I can’t remember where. I feel so confused.”
Sia smiled at her and grabbed her giving her a big hug. “Don’t worry. I’m sure you’ll figure out who it was sooner or later, don’t worry about it so much, you’ll just drive yourself mad that way. And that thing you saw in the window, you were just tired and seen things or you just dreamed it. Remember went we were kids? I told you monsters don’t exist and I proved it! There was no monster in that closet!” Kimi looked up at her friend that was holding her in her arms in a protective and caring manner. Sia had always been the one to listen to her went she was feeling down and always knew what to tell her to feel better. But the questions still remained at the back of her mind. Sia let her go and began finishing her Bento and Kimi followed.
Scene Six
[In Town]
At the end of the day Kimi went out for a walk through the small town. She walked down her favorite road which had many cute small stores with various interesting objects. As she walked there was suddenly a large amount of light that hit all the surrounding areas causing the entire scene around her to stop and the turn black and white. All the people which were around her stopped moving and even the clock stopped moving. She turned around and around trying frightened and scared not knowing what had happened. All of a sudden a dark tall man appeared in front of her with giant black bird wings. His eyes were bloodshot red and he had a terrifying look in his face.
Kimi began to move back no being able to speak she was so scared. She couldn’t even look away she felt her body freeze and she fell to the ground on her knees shaking. She began to cry and barely whispered “Please . . . Please somebody save me . . . Anybody . . . ” All of a sudden a blond haired man appeared with wings that were a deep brown. He landed in front of the scary looking man and his wings turned into a beautiful eagle which perched onto his strong arm yelling with its mighty voice. “Kokoro (Name Meaning Spirit, Heart, Mind) Perch!” he had yelled.
Kimi looked at the man who had deep violet eyes and was wearing something she was sure she had once seen. “Do not touch Nozomi-chan. You dirty dark bird.” The man said angrily looking at the scary one. He extended out his arm and it started to glow a deep ember yellow color and a decorative stick appeared in his hand. He then began to chant some secret language words “Kamar Satteru Yan Sate!” Kimi then recognized that the man’s robe looked like the one from her dream as the scary man disappeared from in front of her running away. He had been afraid of the blond haired man.
The man came forward and reached out his hand to her. “Come quickly, more will come for you, we must get you to safety Nozomi-chan.” She didn’t know what came over her, but she took the stranger’s hand and followed him to another part of the town. He then began to chant again. “Stig Mova Rampet Ha” A sudden ember colored dust flew around them as the scenery of her little town disappeared in front of her. Kimi wasn’t sure what was happening, but like in her dream she felt close to the stranger next to her. She looked up at him but his long bangs covered his eyes.
Scene Seven
[Unknown Land]
They arrived to what looked like a country land. The trees and grass were sparkling like as if it had just rained. There were mountains as tall and as far as the eyes could see. Kimi looked out in amazement trying to take the view of she was seeing. But then remembered she was in the town a few seconds ago. She turned toward the stranger who was looking at her as she was viewing the surrounding area. “Who are you, and where are we?” she asked him confused afraid for an answer.
End of Part 1