Original Stories Fan Fiction ❯ To Wish Upon The Sea ❯ Analysis ( Chapter 2 )
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To Wish Upon The Sea
By: Melissa Norvell
Chapter 2: Analysis
XxX
The sky was dark and partially cloudy. The mood
was fully and the sky full of stars, each twinkling like a precious
gem suspended in the air. The moonlight was cast on the sands of
the beach, illuminating it with an unearthly glow, as the sands
were moved about by two small feet, making their way slowly across
the shoreline. Manami's pale eyes looked around as if seeing the
scenery at night for the first time, and it was partially true,
since she had always gone to bed early. She took a breath of fresh
night air and looked to the calming tides of the ocean for a few
moments, before setting her sights on the naga, who had come ashore
and was now upright, propping himself on his snake-like bottom half
with his strong arms folded across his chest.
He looked regal against the moonlight. His
features were stern and cold as he spoke.
"Well, I see that you really
are reliable after all."
"I don't know what I can show you now though.
Its night time and most people sleep
then," Manami walked up to the naga and
stopped. She went to sleep at night, so she assumed that others did
as well.
"You've got to be kidding
me…" Thanatos didn't sound happy with that answer. He had
risked a lot coming to the surface only to be told disappointing
news. She could have saved him the trouble by telling him that in
the first place.
She retorted with a kind smile.
"Nope."
"How the hell can I learn anything at this
rate?" He asked. 'Damn useless kid.
What the hell was I thinking asking someone like
her?'
"I can tell you!" The girl said
happily.
"Tell me?" He arched an eyebrow in
question.
"You can learn from telling someone, can't
you?" She cocked her head.
"Some things are just hearsay." Thanatos closed
his eyes and frowned, turning his head to the side.
"Hearsay?" The girl blinked.
"Are you dumb or just sheltered? Hearsay means
that it's not all true."
"Oh…" Sullen eyes looked to the sand
below her.
Thanatos remained quiet for a few moments and
simply glared at the girl before she looked up, as if she had a
happy idea and began to talk to him once more.
"Can I still tell you? I won't lie! Promise! I
can't lie to you anyway. I really like you."
"Why?" He asked.
"Why what?"
"Why do you like me?"
"You're nice to me,"
Manami smiled.
"Surely you joke," this was not something Thanatos was used to. No one had ever
said such a thing to him. After all, he had a reputation to uphold
as the evil and sly one and he wasn't about to give it up to
someone like her.
"No," Manami's kind
words reached the naga's pointed ears. "You sound mean, but you
haven't hit me yet, so you must be nice." She smiled warmly at
him.
"Hit you?" A black eyebrow was arched in
question again.
"Yes. If people hit you, then they obviously
don't like you, right?" She asked.
"Something like that…" The black-haired
one pondered over her innocent approach to the
situation.
"Humans are all different. Some are
very mean and some are very nice,"
the girl began to explain.
"Yeah…" Was all the stubborn naga could
force from his mouth. 'Like I
believe that
garbage. You're just different…Unlike
the other, you seem like you care.'
"I'll tell you all I
can about humans," she
offered.
"Okay," Thanatos ordered, "start talking."
"Well, this is how humans are from my point of
view. I might not know a lot because I don't get out much, but this
is what I can tell you…"
Manami began to tell her all she could think of
about the human race and their habits and daily routines. She
explained behavior and what she thought to be the truth as best she
could. Their conversation was long and Thanatos did most of the
listening. Soon he found himself lying on the sands of the beach,
holding his head up with his hands. His green eyes locked into her
expression as the conversation went on.
"So that's it, huh?" He finally told her after
their discussion was over.
"Yes," she
beamed.
"Well, it's interesting and all, but do these
humans have any weaknesses?" The sly one asked, wanting to get
straight to the point.
"Weaknesses?"
"You know, like something that could cripple
them if threatened or taken from them,"
he added.
"Yes. Some have something material that they
keep close to them. Some have special people in their lives that
they would do anything for. There are other things too, like if you
stab them they can die, but I think that can happen to anyone.
Don't you?" She glanced at him, making contact with his gaze, pale
eyes shining with curiosity.
A twisted smirk climbed its way upon the naga's
features as the cog wheels of his mind turned with every passing
bit of information this girl had given him. Now he had crucial
information on humans and could better devise a way to infiltrate
them when the time of revenge came. The curious girl lowered her
face to his, noses almost touching.
"Mr. Naga?"
Manami blinked at the male, his eyes were
looking at her, but it was as if he saw right through her, and just
as she thought he was ignoring her, widened in shock as he let out
a yell of 'gack' and drew back with his hand balled in a fist and
his forearm blocking his face, as if he were being attacked. This
sudden recoil made Manami draw back and flinch, gasping.
"Did I scare you?" She looked up from her recoiled
position.
"Don't you know not to stick your face in other
people's?" The black haired man scolded. "It's rude! And don't call
me Mr. Naga! My name is Thanatos."
"I didn't mean to. You looked like you
were thinking and I was curious,"
she replied.
"But out. Will you?" He glared, putting his arm
down to his side.
"Okay Thanatos…er…What honorific do
I give you?" She asked.
"Call me, Thanatos-sama," the naga instructed. Gathered from his study of the Japanese
culture, that honorific was used for the royalty and hierarchy of
the country. She should respect him to the utmost, so -sama was a
must.
"Okay, Thanatos-sama," she smiled
sweetly.
"Heh…"
"Anything else you want to know?" The black
haired girl asked.
"How do humans feel about Naga?" He
knew the answer deep
within him, but wondering at the same time how the girl would
respond.
"Naga?" She put a finger to her lips
momentarily as she looked up with a thoughtful expression. "Well,
let's see…I've only seen one and that's you. I've read in
books that they are really magical."
'Humans do have books about us…I
thought so…'
"And father says there are people down by the
bay that hunts them."
"Hunts them?"
"Yes," Manami agreed
sadly, her features looked as if she were about to cry. "Father
says that they are worth a lot of money and wizards buy scales and
stuff to use in their magic spells. But…I don't see how they
can kill the naga. They're so pretty and they almost look like us.
They have a human top half and they have feelings just like us."
She defended.
"Don't compare me to a human,"
the naga scoffed.
"I probably shouldn't huh?" The girl
agreed.
"What?" Thanatos was surprised at the girl's
compromise.
"You're better then a human,"
she told him kindly.
"You're a human. Why
would you
think that?" He asked accusingly.
"Because you're magical and humans want your powers," she told him. "So you've got to be better, right? Because if
we were better don't you think you wouldn't be hunted. Humans need
spells but you have your own special magic."
'What did she just say to me?'
Thanatos was dumbfounded by this statement. It
made him feel awkward inside. He felt a strange sense of warmth
that he just couldn't manage to kill off, no matter how hard he
tried.
"Besides, it's sad when humans hunt things they
don't understand to benefit themselves. I know I wouldn't ever want
you to be hurt, Thanatos-sama. You don't need to be hunted because
of who you are or what you are. It's wrong what humans do…and
because of the hunters…you have to spend a lot of time in the
water. Over time, you even grew fins. You had to change for the
humans. It's sad…" She hung her head in sadness once
again.
"It's the human's fault,” Thanatos replied in a
huff.
"I know."
"You're a
human," He pressed.
"I know," she told him, "but I would never hurt you."
"Yeah…Sure kid," the naga shrugged her off coldly. "Do you know where the
hunters stay?"
"Um…Out by the docks, I think. There are
also hunters who come by the stores, but I don't think they are
allowed to go by the beach."
"So, I'm pretty much safe here?" He
asked.
"Should be," the
girl looked to the sky, which was a light purple in color. The sun
had begun to rise and daylight was making its way in through the
darkened skies. "Oh!" She exclaimed upon noticing this. She didn't
expect to be out this long…and if her father found
out…Who knows what would happen.
"It's almost
light," Manami said quickly, fear and
shock shooting through her system as she took off running. "I'll
see you tomorrow!"
"Wait!" Thanatos outstretched an arm to try and
catch the fleeing girl, but couldn't grasp her in time. Green eyes
looked to the sky.
"Damn…" He muttered. "I didn't know it
was so light outside…The kid's right…I'd better retire
for the night. I just hope I don't get caught."
XxXxXx
The sly naga slithered silently through his
quarters, trying to make as little noise as possible. He didn't
want to wake anyone in his house, or there would be hell to pay.
Everyone was asleep and the slightest noise. He had managed to get
past several rooms stealthily, but the worst was yet to come. He
only had to get past the kitchen and into his room and he was home
safe.
"They're all asleep…" He chuckled quietly
to himself. "They didn't even realize I was gone." Thanatos smirked
to himself. "Another dirty deed left unnoticed."
He turned the corner to enter the kitchen and
nearly ran into another naga. She had a red bottom half like he
did, except she didn't have any fins. Her form was slender and she
had large eyes, half hidden by long bangs and hair that was
slightly wavy and a dark royal blue. This female naga's eyes were
the same color green as his. Her skin was of normal color, but that
fact was distorted by the moonlight, making her seem
haunting.
"Huh?" He replied in surprise upon noticing
her.
Then he screamed.
This caused her to scream in turn.
"Io!" Another feminine voice called out in
worry as the lights came on.
"Oh…" The naga known as Io
spoke.
"It's you…" The male
deadpanned.
That was it…He knew he was caught for
sure now. Green eyes looked to the side to see his mother, Lazuli
and father Xenosidon, erected side-by-side and dressed in night
ware.
"What happened? What's the commotion about?"
Lazuli spoke, concern crossing her face.
"What's going on here?" His father's voice
boomed.
"It's okay. Thanatos
just scared me," Io smiled at
them.
"Do you mind?" The stubborn man crossed his
arms and spat. He then got close to Io's face and whispered. "You
almost got me in trouble."
"Sorry..." She apologized.
"What are you two doing up so late?" His mother
asked.
"Oh, I've been up for the past hour. I
haven't been able to get any
sleep," Io told her calmly and
kindly.
"I was getting a snack," Thanatos lied.
"No you weren't," a young voice chimed from beside of Xenosidon and Lazuli, who
looked to find their son, Thelios beside of them. His eyes were
half opened, sleep still slung to his figure. "You snuck in
because you weren't in your room
thirty minutes ago."
"And how would you know
that?" An irritated look crossed the older naga's face as he glared
down his younger brother.
"Because I went by
your door and it was opened,"
Thelios knew that the elder naga never left his door open when he was
actually in his room.
"How did you know I wasn't up already?" His
brother argued.
"Because I looked for you and couldn't find
you."
His mother's golden gaze looked towards her son
in question. "Is this true, Thanatos?"
'That little brat narked on me! I'll kill
him!' The dark haired man thought in
anger. "Yes…" He strained through gritted teeth.
"You know it's very dangerous to go sneaking out like this," she warned in a calm and sympathetic tone.
"I already know. I'm
nineteen," he replied sarcastically, "I
think it's old enough to have common sense."
"Whatever he left for, I'm sure he had a good reason," Io covered for him. "Besides," She smiled. "No harm was
done and he came back safely. That's all that matters in the end,
right?"
"Well…" Lazuli mused, looking to
Xenosidon for a hint of judgment.
"I suppose your sister is right. Just don't
complain when you don't get enough sleep
tomorrow," he replied as the two
slithered away. "Come Lazuli dear. Let's get some
sleep."
"Yes," she agreed as
they disappeared from sight.
Thelios was about to do the same, until his
brother attempted to start a fight.
"You little brat,"
Thanatos seethed.
"Well, you shouldn't have gone to the surface.
Hunters stalk around at night. You might get caught and
no one would know you were
gone," Thelios said sleepily.
"To the surface?" Io questioned, intrigue
crossing her face.
"Yeah," her brother
told her. "I saw him jump into the water and swim up."
"I'm surprised that they haven't discovered
us." Io told him. "Our kingdom is just a huge underground
cave."
"You saw me go there!?!"
Thanatos outraged. He had thought he'd gotten away with being
unnoticed. He was sure that he had checked everything to make sure
that no one saw him…and yet…He foiled again.
"Yes, and be happy I didn't tell." The young
one pouted.
"What? Is that your way of
being nice to me? You little
creep," Thanatos growled.
"I'm going to bed. I'm too tired to argue with you," Thelios left the conversation at that as he slithered
back to his room.
Io and Thanatos were still in the kitchen. The
female looked to her brother and the two shared a moment of silence
before it was broken.
"What's it like?"
"What's what like?" The male asked. "If you're
talking about Thelios, it's like being attacked by an
Orca."
"No…the Upper World," Io confirmed.
"Why do you care?"
"Because, I haven't been up there since we were little," she told him.
"It's just a beach.
Nothing special," he shrugged her
curiosity off with an uncaring retort.
"Did you see any humans?"
"Would I have honestly stayed up there that
long if there were?" He shot off sarcastically, lying to avoid any
further questioning.
"Maybe," she smiled
kindly. "Some humans are nice. It's just wizards and Naga Hunters
that you have to look out for."
"What are you?
Retarded? All humans are bad," He said
defensively.
"There are good ones," Io defended calmly. "I know so. Just because one does
something to you doesn't mean that they're all responsible. And
maybe one day…You'll see that too." She slithered off to her
room after looking over her shoulder with a kind and caring look.
Io had always been too soft.
"Good night…Io…" He muttered under
his breath.
XxXxXx
Instead of going to his room, the grumpy naga
decided to go and lay on a flat rock, near the water's edge. Lying
on his stomach, he crossed his arms and sat his chin in them,
closing his eyes and drifting into thought.
Just because one does something to you
doesn't mean that they're all responsible. And maybe one
day…You'll see that too
Io's last words bounced around in his head like
pin balls.
I don't want to hurt you.
He could still hear the kindness from Manami's
voice as well.
'Could Io be right?' He wondered as he was plagued with a flashback. The setting
was darkened and a small naga was entangled in a fishnet. It was
just a baby. Fear and anguish passed through the child's eyes as
the net was savagely ripped from it, causing it to let out an
ear-piercing scream that shot through his senses like a harpoon.
Then a look of disappointment and rage passed through his
features.
"Why the hell am I feeling sorry for humans?
Manami was right. They forced us from being able to live on land.
You can't even come up for a breath without dodging a harpoon.
Their demise will be their own doing."
He paused as a malicious grin crossed his
features.
"Soon…I'll get my revenge…And prove
Io wrong…"
TBC