Peach Girl Fan Fiction ❯ Cold Comfort ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Cold Comfort

By: Megalabisia

Ch: 1

Warning: AU and OOC. I don't want anything about the OOCness you have been told. Author's note at end.

Falling in Love

People fall in love all the time. I always wondered why they used the word falling when referring to a thing like love. When it happens much like a fall it isn't planned, it can't be helped, and we have no control what happens. We may humiliate ourselves. We may hurt ourselves. We may be left with nothing but pain. But maybe just maybe there will be someone there to catch us when we fall.

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Looking back on it now I'm still not sure how it all started. I could attribute it to loneliness. The woman I loved for so long had just rejected me. `I only see you as a brother.' she said. Just what every guy wants to hear from the one they want. `Could never think of me in that way.' she tried to justify breaking my heart.

And then the hole was created. That sick vomit us feeling you get when you feel rejected. The lonely, worthless waste of time feeling. So I wasn't good enough for her huh?

What the fuck does `I only see you as a brother' supposed to mean? Is that honestly the best way she could have thought to reject me?

My mind was fogged and plagued by thoughts of her. I would walk for hours at a time during all hours of the night trying to escape the thought of her and those horrible words. Those words that grabbed my heart and carelessly tore it to shreds.

I would change my course for my walk ever night. I couldn't be bothered with the same scenery over and over again.

I wasn't in the best part of town when I first saw her. She was beautiful, blonde, tan, and had an amazing outer appearance. But there was something else I liked about her, but I could not put a name to it.

She approached me slowly swaying her hips as she walked towards me. I found myself staring down at her heaving cleavage.

"You lost sweetheart?" She said in a melodious tone.

"No." I answered her quickly with a touch of nervousness in my voice.

She closed the distance between us wrapping an arm around me like it was the most nonchalant thing in the world.

"You look like you got something on your mind. You want to talk about it sweetie?" She cooed.

At the time all I could do was wonder why this amazing creature was giving me the time of day. Foolish me I had yet to make the connection.

I'm not sure what possessed me but I actually told her I did want to talk to someone. So she told me I should go back with her to her place. I still hadn't thought anything of it. I agreed and she said it wasn't far from there.

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We arrived at her apartment shortly after. It wasn't the worst place I had seen, but definitely wasn't the greatest. She led me down a short hall into her bedroom.

She turned on the light and motioned for me to sit on the bed. I did so and watched as she started to untie her hair and remove some of her jewelry.

"So what's your name?" She asked looking me over.

"Kiley." I responded nervously running my fingers through my dark thick hair.

"What a cute name." She said smiling. "So what would you like me to do for you?" She asked.

I looked at her a little puzzled. "For me?" I asked pointing at myself.

"Yeah what would you like?" She said leaning towards me to expose more of her cleavage.

I was distracted for a moment before I came back to myself. "I don't know what you mean." I said truthfully.

A confused looked crossed her face for a moment. "You wanted to 'talk' right?" She said.

"Yeah." I responded.

"So 'how' do you want to 'talk'? She asked.

I only blinked at her a few times.

"You aren't a cop are you?" She asked sounding a touch nervous.

"No." I said in an almost offended tone.

"Do you understand what's going on here?" She finally asked me.

"I don't think I do." I responded. I was so naïve.

"Do you want to have intimate relations with me?" She asked trying to put it delicately.

"What?" I said before finally the light went on. Realization came crashing over me. She was a prostitute, and I had picked her up. "Oh."

"Do you understand?" She asked me.

"How much?" I asked her not really sure why I was.

"What do you got?" She asked me smiling sweetly.

I thought about it. "Fifty." I said.

"Show it to me." She said.

So I pulled out my wallet and counted it out.

She thought for a moment. "That will do." She said. "What would you like me to do to you?" She asked me.

"I'm not sure." I replied.

"Alright just lay back and let me work my magic." She said to me.

"What should I call you?" I asked her not sure on the etiquette of this type of situation.

"Whatever you want sweetie." She said.

"Can I… Can I call you Misao?" I asked unsure of how this girl would react to my wanting to pretend she was someone else.

"Of course Kiley I am Misao." She said before she leaned in and kissed me.

She straddled me on the bed and began kissing and nibbling on me. My hands started to explore her feminine body, I had never had an opportunity like this before.

I heard her moaning my name as I touched her. It was strongly affecting me. And very soon I found myself moaning her name back.

"Oh Misao."

Author's note: Ok new story. I kind of have a writers block for bound heart. I will complete it but not right now. I ran out of ideas. But this one came to me and I have an outline so I know where I want this one to go. I need to know how graphic you want this to be. Because I originally was going to make it very graphic just need to know if I should stick with it or post two different versions like a cleaner R here and an NC-17 on media miner. Let me know.