Rurouni Kenshin Fan Fiction ❯ Fallen ❯ Fallen ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: SiriusFan13 
A jaunt into the mind of Battousai during Bakumatsu. I could really use some feedback! Please read and review!
Anime/Manga: Rurouni Kenshin Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst | Type: Poetry | Uploaded On: 07.03.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 348 | Visits: 467 | Status: Completed
A jaunt into the mind of Battousai during Bakumatsu. I could really use some feedback! Please read and review!
Anime/Manga: Rurouni Kenshin Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst | Type: Poetry | Uploaded On: 07.03.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 348 | Visits: 467 | Status: Completed
Disclaimer: I own nothing Ruroken. Sorry...
Author's Note: Set during Bakumatsu. A peek into the mind of Battousai. Please review!
Fallen
One quick cut.
Jump.
Two more.
And again.
My Blind eyes
Only see targets.
I leave them No time to scream.
I am a sword
Souless metal.
Wield me.
Jump.
Two more.
And again.
My Blind eyes
Only see targets.
I leave them No time to scream.
I am a sword
Souless metal.
Wield me.
I cut,
Jump,
Turn…
Turn from the crimson rain.
Can't let it touch me.
I might feel
Darkness swallows me.
I am a shadow.
Only a shadow of what I was.
See how I have
Fallen.
Jump,
Turn…
Turn from the crimson rain.
Can't let it touch me.
I might feel
Darkness swallows me.
I am a shadow.
Only a shadow of what I was.
See how I have
Fallen.
Author's Note 2: Hello! Just a quick poem that popped into my mind VERY early this morning. I'm not really one to write poetry much (okay... I almost never write it), but the idea of Battousai seeing himself as "fallen" was such a strong image. I started it as one-shot prose, but somehow it automatically became a poem... Weird...
Anyway, my first poem posted here, so please review... I'd love some honest feedback on it!