Sailor Moon Fan Fiction ❯ Punishment ❯ Amy's betyral ( Chapter 1 )

MiSTed by Ami Yuy

Fic Title: Amy's betrayal

By: Amy Yuy

This is my first try at MiSTing. I have read a lot but since this is my first attempt at doing this I picked one of my old fics. So tell me if I am good bad or okay. The characters I use to MiST are my own so ask before using them! And if you have never read any of my fiction then descriptions will be at the end. On with the show!

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Three girls fall out of thin air and land in a mass of arms and legs.

Ami: Ow!

Juri: Where are we?

Kali: Get your foot out of my face!

Ami: O_O OH MY GOD!

Juri: What?

Kali: *gets up and looks around* Is this one of those satellites? For MiSTing?

Ami: I want to go home!

Kendra: Well you can't! *laughter*

Kendra comes up on the huge screen which is in front of the three young sisters.

Ami: Why are you doing this?

Juri: *smacks Ami* This is all your fault!

Kali: We told you not to zap snakes into the soup at dinner!

Ami: ^_^; But that look on her face was priceless!

Juri: Mother...at least give us some company!

Kendra: Fine......

Two guys and a girl fall from the ceiling.

Jess: What the hell?

Ryu: Where are we?

Kyle: I don't know...but get your rear out of my face!

The three new comers get up and look around.

Jess: Where are we Ami?

Ami: On a satellite for MiSTing.

A loud siren goes off and lights start flashing.

Kali and Ami: We got Fic Sign!

Everyone else: *unenthusiastically* yay.....

They enter the theatre and see a couch, a very large couch. The sit in the following order- Juri, Kali, Ami, Jess, Ryu, and Kyle.

~Amy's Beytral
~Chapter 1
~By: SaliorU

Juri: This is one of your old fics Ami.

Ami: Yeah, before I changed my name.

Jess: I have read this.....it doesn't really make sense!

Ami: Yeah I know...I think it was from all that caffeine I was drinking.

Ryu: Misspelled Betrayal

Kali: Have you seen her English grade?

Kyle: Talk about sad!

Ami: No the sad thing is I have a better grade in German then I do in English!

Juri: Can we move on now?

Jess: Yeah!

~Disclaimers: I don't own Sailor Moon so you can't sue
~me now that I said that!

Ami: I didn't have money then and I don't have any now!

Kali: Gravitation is coming out soon!

Ami: ;_; I need money!

Juri: All you ever buy is mangas and dvds/tapes.

~This part is going to be from Amy's point of veiw.

Ryu: Misspelled view

~The whole story may be like this, I am not sure yet.
~I am doing this story because my friend said that I should
~do an unusual couple so I have nothing against Serena and
~Darien being together.

Juri: I haven't read a sailor moon fic in forever!

Kali: An unusual couple would be Lita and Raye.

Ami: I was trying to do something that was straight!

Jess: Have you written anything that has homosexuality in it?

Ami: Yeah little hints or side things.

~I actually like them togehter BUT this
~just poped in to my head the other day so here it is.

Kyle: Lots of things pop into her head....

Ami: Stay out of my head!

Ryu: Its a place that can corrupt a saint.

Juri: Misspelled together and popped

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Ami: I try to make roses instead of vines now...they are better looking

Kali: *singing* Won't you stay on the vineyard for the summer/ Won't you stay on the vineyard for the year

~It was only one month ago that it happened.

Juri: I had sex with my cat!

Ryu: The planet exploded!

Kyle: I found out I wasn't human!

Jess: God started talking to me!

~Serena and Darien went out
~on a date like usual to the arcade. And that is when it all fell apart.

Kali: If the planet fell apart how is the story continuing?

Ami: Plot hole?

~*Flashback starts*

Juri: There was a flash of light and I saw stars!

Jess: *singing*Flashback, every single feeling I held back/Started to rush through my mind/All over again/Flashback, it felt just like a movie that/Backtracks, all of the love that I feel, reel by reel

~"I would like a chocolate mike shake please!" the waitress took Serena's
~order then turned to Darien.

Kali: Could I have a beer?

Ami: I wouldn't mind a Fuzzy Nable!

Juri: The beer should be under the couch....

Jess: *reaches under couch and pulls out a six pack*

Ryu: Where did that come from?

Ami: Chrissy probably stocked the satellite for us! (Chrissy Sky is a great author! She writes MiSTs and parodies! She is my favorite author! go search! She is on many sites! a list will be at the end of this!)

~"Nothing for me, thank you." Darien looked like he was in deep thought
~when he said that.

Kyle:*as Darien, thinking* I wish Serena would stop groping me!

Ami: I am not the only hentai!

Juri: Whatever!

Kali: well Kyle isn't as bad as you!

~"Are you feeling alright, Muffin?" Serena got all concerned. He normally
~ordered a drink or some thing.

Ryu: *Darien* Well I feel kind of sick from eating all those muffins you baked......

Jess: I would never eat her food!
Juri: eww! I think its still moving! *pokes muffin*

Ami: *takes a beer and starts drinking it* Bud ice? I prefer wine coolers but I will live!

Kali: *takes a beer too*

~"Oh its nothing" Darien continued to look out the window.

Kyle: Now you know it has to be something....*laughing*

Juri: I hate it when someone says `oh its nothing'

Kali: Then you know something is wrong!

~"Oh, Ok" Serena looks so sad. I then turn around in my seat, the 4 of us are
~all sitting at the next booth, wondering why Darien is so out of it.

Ryu: Who is the four of us?

Jess: You could have typed out four its only three more buttons to push!

Ami: This is cruel and unjust punishment! you know that right?

Kendra: *OV* Do you think I care?

~"Serena lets go to the park" Darien sugests.

Kyle:*Serena* What about my milkshake?

Ryu: Misspelled suggest.

~"Sure" Serena follows him out after she finishes her milkshake

Jess: When did her Milkshake arrive?

Juri: Plot hole!

Kali: Get use to it! There are a lot of them!

Ami: *reading Gravitation 6*

~ In the park

Kyle: Thanks for repeating the location! *rolls eyes*

~We of course, followed them to the park but we tryed to be descret

Ryu: Tried and discrete is spelled wrong!

Juri: Have you seen her English grade?

Kali: She got a C!

~They then sat on a bench in the rose garden and began to talk.

Jess: The rose garden? Is this symbolism?

Ami: No...I just needed a place for them to talk......

Kyle: What's that book your reading?

Ami: Gravitation book 6! Its a Yoai manga! Its sooooooo good! I love it!

~ We had to move closer in order to hear them.
~"Serena we need to talk" Darien takes Serena's hand in his.

Jess: *as Serena* Why?

Ryu: *Darien* Because the script says so!

~"About what?" Serena asks inoccently.
~"About our relationship" He replys very seriously.

Kyle: Misspelled innocently and replies!

Kali: *Serena* What's wrong with our relationship?
Juri: *Darien* I want you to marry me!

Kali: Not in this life time! I am not into incest!

Juri: Good cuz neither am I!

~Serena looks at Darien worried about his tone of vioce. "Serena," looks at the roses, "I ~think we should break up."

Ryu: Voice is misspelled!

Ami: I tried to get an editor to help me but no one wanted to be my editor! And I never proof read back then! Now I do but you probably already noticed that!

Jess: Touche?

~"But...but why?" tears are forming in Serena's eyes.
~"I have found someone else" Darien is trying to avoid Serena's gaze. We all gasp
~at that last stament.

Everyone but Ami: *Gasp*

Ami: I misspelled statement!
Kali: Now the title begins to make sense!

Kendra:*OV* This is taking forever your not gonna do chapter 2 today...maybe later!

~Serena's eyes are shadowed "Who? Anyone I know?"

~"Actually, yes." Darien gets up and walks away.

Jess: The drama!

Ami: *still reading her manga*

~*Flashback ends*

Juri:*singing* Flashback, it felt just like a movie that/Backtracks, all of the love that I feel, reel by reel

~A week later Darien was always popping up when Serena wasn't around. He actually
~walked me home for a whole week. And yesterday he asked me if I was seeing anyone.
~I think he wants to go out with me.

Kali: Crush alert!

Juri: I think Amy is dense!

Ami: I AM NOT DENSE!

Juri: I said Amy not Ami!

~"Amy dinner is ready!" mom calls from the kitchen

Ami, Kali, Jess, and Ryu: FOOD?!

~"Coming!" I yells back while closing my diary.

Kyle: I hope she's not coming.....

Juri: `I yells' nice one Ami!

~I sit down at the table to eat when the door bell rings. I go to answer the door and there ~is Darien.

Jess: Is the door in the table ?

Kyle: Plot hole!

Kali: Don't fall in!

~"Hi Amy!" Darien says looking in to my eyes with an emotion that I can't identify.

Juri: Its called LUST!

Ryu: It rhymes with dust!

~"Oh hi! What are you doing here?" I said all flustered.

Kali: *Darien* I am here to rape you on the dinning room table in front of your mother!

Juri: Lovely!

~ My mother comes to the door at that exact moment

Ryu: I hope she doesn't come at the door......that could be messy!

~"You must be Darien, Would you like to join us for dinner?"

Kali: I invite strangers to have dinner too!

Juri: What were you on when you did this?

Ami: Mt. Dew!

~"I don't want to be a bother." Darien was being really polite.
~"No trouble at all." My mother replys politly.
~"Come on in" I open the door the rest of the way.

Ryu: You don't need to tell him to come!

Kyle: Replies and politely
Jess: I see the end!

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Juri: *singing* Won't you stay on the vineyard for the summer/Won't you stay on the vineyard for the year

~Well thats the first chapter! Tell me what you think! Any ideas on what should happen ~next would be very helpful! I hope you liked it! Review!

Ami: Its over!

Kali: That's

Kyle: Can we leave now?

Jess: Hey the door is opening!

Juri: Food!

Ryu: Sun light!

Ami: We are on a satellite you idiot! There is no sunlight!

Kendra appears on a screen once everyone has exited the theatre.

Kendra: Jess, Ryu, and Kyle may leave...but You three must stay for a week!

Ami: WHAT?!

Juri: WHY?!

Kali: Where are we going to sleep?

Kendra: There are bed rooms and a kitchen and a bathroom you will live!

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That's it for now! Chrissy sky is on Fanfiction.net, she has many links to various sites that she is a member of so go check her out! Go forth and read Gravitation! The 2 songs I used were:

1. Vineyard by: Jack Pierce

2. Flashback by: Moris Albert

Well I am going to work on Friday and I will not have a computer so I most likely will not update till August, so if you liked it just keep emailing me or reviewing or what ever!

See all you peoples later!