Saint Beast Fan Fiction ❯ Revision ❯ Revision ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
Originally written: Oct 12, 2003
Title: Revision
Author: babaca
Series: Saint Beast
Pairings: None really, plenty implied but it's really a Shiva x Shiva if you will.
Spoilers: Well this takes place around episodes 4 & 5 kind of.
Rating: R-ish
Warnings: Masturbation, shonen ai, angst
Disclaimer: To the powers that be that own Saint Beast (Tokyo TV and others) and this is only being used for non profit entertainment purposes, because lord knows I have no money.
Revision
by babaca
Shiva stared out the window of the abandoned house. He was not particularly happy at the moment. Keeping watch over these idiot Saint Beasts was wearing on him. He couldn't understand why Yuda wanted them still alive.
Shiva snorted to himself. 'I know why he wants to keep at least ONE of them alive.' Then he growled, "Damn Shin."
From his window he could see some of the guardian angels had come to visit the others. He found himself sneering as the turtle girl was shyly fawning over Shin. 'What the hell is this guy's appeal?' he wondered. Since it looked like the girls would be there for a while, he let up on his fierce surveillance.
He let his mind wander earlier in the day. When Yuda told him not to return to heaven. He was initially afraid that he had done something to anger the fallen angel, but any real concentration he had fled when Yuda leaned in close to tell him that he should stay on earth and nearer to him.
Shiva shivered, his cheeks blushing and he was hard just thinking about the encounter. He was excited then to, but Yuda chose to ignore that fact. He sighed to himself. He took one more glance out of the window. He concluded there would be time.
He moved away from the window to lean against the wall. He closed his eyes and let him mind create a revisionist memory of the recent encounter.
This time Yuda didn't touch his shoulder to pull him close. This time Yuda pushed him into the coarse, unforgiving wall of the cave and kissed hard. Nothing like those gentle kisses he witnessed Yuda giving Shin in the past. This was a rough kiss of passion.
Shiva moaned, his eyes still closed as he roughly tore open his shirt the frog clasps suffering greatly, but this wasn't Shiva doing this but Yuda. Shiva teased the nipples on his chest with rougher pinches, the pain exquisite as the abused nubs hardened and his breath quickened.
Shirt opened he caressed and even scratched himself with an impassioned roughness. This was Yuda making his blood boil and his heart race. He knew if they ever really got together it wouldn't be gentle so why delude oneself. The harshness was not designed to hurt or punish but to feel, and Shiva wanted nothing more from Yuda but to feel.
Yuda was on his knees in front of Shiva, quickly working open the last real obstruction. Shiva slipped out of the constricting pants and underwear in one fast tug. His throbbing cock freed from the confinement. The cool air of the room made him shiver again.
Gently he allowed one finger to lightly touch his erection. Slowly and carefully he followed the paths of the veins the were raised upon the skin by feel alone. He refused to open his eyes to only see the harsh reality of an empty bedroom.. The finger gathering the clear liquid at the tip and rubbing into the head, dipping slightly into the slit as if looking for more.
Shiva held back a cry as he arched his back to his teasing touch. He allowed himself this one kindness that he felt Yuda wouldn't give him in reality. The adjoining fingers gathered around the quivering member in a tight fist and began to move up and down the trapped hardness.
Shiva saw stars for a second before he resumed to move against his flesh with impatience. His other hand resumed to pinch and scratch his body. Sweat pour off his body like he was running a marathon. And in his mind's eye it was all Yuda. Yuda sucking on his harshly, marking his body with every pinch and scratch. Yuda forgetting that stupid Shin, forgetting the angel even existed as every suck and tug on Shiva's body would erase the Saint Beast's existence. He reached beneath his rapidly moving hand to tug and toy with his scrotum. He was close, his body now only reacting to stimulus as his hips pushed off the wall for the friction his hand was giving him. His nails dug slightly into his cock because he knew Yuda's teeth would scrape on him slightly.
That was the impetus that sent him over the edge. Shiva couldn't help himself, Yuda's name was cried out as he came hard, covering his hand and belly with his essence. Unable to stand any longer he slid down to the floor grateful the wall he was leaning on was able to help with the descent.
Shiva slowly opened his eyes, still panting. His body felt better but his heart was still heavy. 'Why can't it be this way? Why must I be second to Shin?' Shiva laughed at himself, "Second? More like Third," he said to himself thinking of Luka. His only consolation was he knew Yuda and Luka didn't think of each other that way. Luka only has eyes for Rei that birdbrained Saint Beast.
He frowned. He moved over to the box of tissues on the night stand. Wiping the cooling liquid from his body, he crawled on his knees to look out the window once again. The girls were leaving. 'I hate these guys. I know Yuda wants them unharmed but ...' He observed the turtle girl once again do the shy flirtation thing. 'If only I could just get rid of one, Yuda will see it's me he really wants and not ...' Even in his mind he couldn't say the name.
He had his orders. He was suppose to stay away from them, he knew. He couldn't obey this time. Not when his future depended on the destruction of one. He continued to watch the actions of the turtle girl. 'What was her name again?' he wondered before remembering it was Ayumi. A smile began to form on his face. 'Yes,' he thought, 'Ayumi may be the way to resolve this little problem.'
Owari
Title: Revision
Author: babaca
Series: Saint Beast
Pairings: None really, plenty implied but it's really a Shiva x Shiva if you will.
Spoilers: Well this takes place around episodes 4 & 5 kind of.
Rating: R-ish
Warnings: Masturbation, shonen ai, angst
Disclaimer: To the powers that be that own Saint Beast (Tokyo TV and others) and this is only being used for non profit entertainment purposes, because lord knows I have no money.
Revision
by babaca
Shiva stared out the window of the abandoned house. He was not particularly happy at the moment. Keeping watch over these idiot Saint Beasts was wearing on him. He couldn't understand why Yuda wanted them still alive.
Shiva snorted to himself. 'I know why he wants to keep at least ONE of them alive.' Then he growled, "Damn Shin."
From his window he could see some of the guardian angels had come to visit the others. He found himself sneering as the turtle girl was shyly fawning over Shin. 'What the hell is this guy's appeal?' he wondered. Since it looked like the girls would be there for a while, he let up on his fierce surveillance.
He let his mind wander earlier in the day. When Yuda told him not to return to heaven. He was initially afraid that he had done something to anger the fallen angel, but any real concentration he had fled when Yuda leaned in close to tell him that he should stay on earth and nearer to him.
Shiva shivered, his cheeks blushing and he was hard just thinking about the encounter. He was excited then to, but Yuda chose to ignore that fact. He sighed to himself. He took one more glance out of the window. He concluded there would be time.
He moved away from the window to lean against the wall. He closed his eyes and let him mind create a revisionist memory of the recent encounter.
This time Yuda didn't touch his shoulder to pull him close. This time Yuda pushed him into the coarse, unforgiving wall of the cave and kissed hard. Nothing like those gentle kisses he witnessed Yuda giving Shin in the past. This was a rough kiss of passion.
Shiva moaned, his eyes still closed as he roughly tore open his shirt the frog clasps suffering greatly, but this wasn't Shiva doing this but Yuda. Shiva teased the nipples on his chest with rougher pinches, the pain exquisite as the abused nubs hardened and his breath quickened.
Shirt opened he caressed and even scratched himself with an impassioned roughness. This was Yuda making his blood boil and his heart race. He knew if they ever really got together it wouldn't be gentle so why delude oneself. The harshness was not designed to hurt or punish but to feel, and Shiva wanted nothing more from Yuda but to feel.
Yuda was on his knees in front of Shiva, quickly working open the last real obstruction. Shiva slipped out of the constricting pants and underwear in one fast tug. His throbbing cock freed from the confinement. The cool air of the room made him shiver again.
Gently he allowed one finger to lightly touch his erection. Slowly and carefully he followed the paths of the veins the were raised upon the skin by feel alone. He refused to open his eyes to only see the harsh reality of an empty bedroom.. The finger gathering the clear liquid at the tip and rubbing into the head, dipping slightly into the slit as if looking for more.
Shiva held back a cry as he arched his back to his teasing touch. He allowed himself this one kindness that he felt Yuda wouldn't give him in reality. The adjoining fingers gathered around the quivering member in a tight fist and began to move up and down the trapped hardness.
Shiva saw stars for a second before he resumed to move against his flesh with impatience. His other hand resumed to pinch and scratch his body. Sweat pour off his body like he was running a marathon. And in his mind's eye it was all Yuda. Yuda sucking on his harshly, marking his body with every pinch and scratch. Yuda forgetting that stupid Shin, forgetting the angel even existed as every suck and tug on Shiva's body would erase the Saint Beast's existence. He reached beneath his rapidly moving hand to tug and toy with his scrotum. He was close, his body now only reacting to stimulus as his hips pushed off the wall for the friction his hand was giving him. His nails dug slightly into his cock because he knew Yuda's teeth would scrape on him slightly.
That was the impetus that sent him over the edge. Shiva couldn't help himself, Yuda's name was cried out as he came hard, covering his hand and belly with his essence. Unable to stand any longer he slid down to the floor grateful the wall he was leaning on was able to help with the descent.
Shiva slowly opened his eyes, still panting. His body felt better but his heart was still heavy. 'Why can't it be this way? Why must I be second to Shin?' Shiva laughed at himself, "Second? More like Third," he said to himself thinking of Luka. His only consolation was he knew Yuda and Luka didn't think of each other that way. Luka only has eyes for Rei that birdbrained Saint Beast.
He frowned. He moved over to the box of tissues on the night stand. Wiping the cooling liquid from his body, he crawled on his knees to look out the window once again. The girls were leaving. 'I hate these guys. I know Yuda wants them unharmed but ...' He observed the turtle girl once again do the shy flirtation thing. 'If only I could just get rid of one, Yuda will see it's me he really wants and not ...' Even in his mind he couldn't say the name.
He had his orders. He was suppose to stay away from them, he knew. He couldn't obey this time. Not when his future depended on the destruction of one. He continued to watch the actions of the turtle girl. 'What was her name again?' he wondered before remembering it was Ayumi. A smile began to form on his face. 'Yes,' he thought, 'Ayumi may be the way to resolve this little problem.'
Owari