Sonic Series Fan Fiction ❯ PSO Meets Danny Rose ❯ Version 1.0.1 ( Chapter 1 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
<N> It was a normal day in the Dadania Solar System, until a strange Earth-like planet and a strange spaceship appeared. Upon hearing the news, Danny Rose from Dadania was going to explore this strange planet. <N>

Danny Rose: Honey, I’m going to the strange planet that recently appeared.
Amy Rose: OK. You should take Mark with you.
Danny Rose: Safety in numbers, huh?
Amy Rose: I think you should because if your butt gets in trouble, you will have Mark there to get you out of it.
Danny Rose: OK, I’ll take the Bandit Keith wanna be with me.

(Mark enters in)

Mark: Howdy, neighbors.
Danny Rose: I have a job for us to do. You probably heard about the new planet that appeared.
Mark: It’s all over the news. I heard the Dadanian military will go to the newly appeared planet.
Danny Rose: Then we’ll have companions.
Mark: Let’s go.

((Mark and Danny Rose grabs the necessary things for exploring (backpacks, weapons, food, tents, clothing, a compass, and a scanner) and leaves))

*On the Planet Ragol.*

<N> Planet Ragol was once a peaceful planet, until Talon took it over. The Tolki-hes, Talon’s army, has 99.9 percent of Ragol. </N>

(The General Burnslide is sitting on top of a horse-like creature as General Joey enters in on horse-like back)

Gen. Joey: Sir, we cannot hold the Central Dome much longer. We keep destroying wave on wave of those bastards and there’s no end to them.
Gen. Burnslide: We must hold off the invaders and keep the Central Dome or we’ll lose Ragol.

*On the battlefield*

(The Tolki-hes surround the Central Dome)

Pioneer 2 Soldier 1: We keep killing these bastards and they keep coming.
Pioneer 2 Soldier 2: We’re almost out of ammunition.

((Danny Rose’s ship crashes into half of the Tolki-hes and Danny Rose Mark exited the ship))

Danny Rose: Tolki-hes? Talon is attacking this planet.
Mark: We must attack.

((Danny Rose and Mark draws their swords and destroys all Tolki-hes except one))

Tolki-he: I gotta tell General Fui about this.

(The only Tolki-he remaining runs away to tell General Fui about Danny and Mark’s appearance)

Danny Rose: The fight is over and the last piece of land owned by Pioneer 2’s is saved, but that’s only 0.1 percent of this planet.
Mark: What’s that?

((Danny Rose looks into the sky and discovers a Talon Space Pod crashing to Ragol.))

Danny Rose: That was a Talon ship.

((Another Talon Space Pod comes crashing to Ragol))

Mark: Another Space Pod.

((At the crash site))

(A Dadanian comes out of the Space Pod)

???: So this is Ragol. Why would Talon want this ugly place.

(Tolki-he Soldiers arrives at the

Tolki-he Soldiers: Hey, your not allowed to be here.
???: No one tells Danetta, the First President’s son, where he can or cannot go.

((Danetta flies up into the air and destroys all the Tolki-he Soldiers))

Danetta: I better get out of this hell hole before Talon brings reinforcements.

(Danetta flies out of the hole created by his Space Pod)

((On top of the Ruins))

(Danetta lands as General Fui flies in)

General Fui: Danetta, what a surprise. You decided to fight along side us to claim this planet for Talon.
Danetta: I hate Talon.
General Fui: I have no choice, but to kill you.

((General Fui flies up in the air and constantly blast Danetta, but Danetta gets behind General Fui))

Danetta: Say good-bye, Fui. You’ll be better in the Next Dimension.
General Fui: Come on, Danetta, I was just joking about killing you. We can join forces and defeat Talon.

((Danetta charges up for his Next Dimension Blast, the blast hits General Fui, and he blows up))

Danetta: I hate cowards.

(To be continues in v 1.0.2)
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