Sonic Series Fan Fiction ❯ The Great Chao Search ❯ Start ( Chapter 1 )
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The Great Chao Search
Disclaimer: The sonic characters belongs to SEGA and Archie.
A/N: This story is a different version to the primary Ms. Nice Guy story which will focus on
Cream Rabbit. In fact, the title was gonna be the next version of Ms. Nice Guy but I came up
with
this title instead. Enjoy!
Rating: R for Violence, brief language, some sexuality, crude humor, and nudity.
Genre: Action/Adventure, Comedy
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Fade In-
Ext. Station Square
An aerial view of Station Square is shown as birds started flying the morning sky. Skyscrapers
shown everywhere.
On the surface, kids were playing around the streets as someone on a newspaper bike was riding
in the streets. The figure was identified as Cream T. Rabbit. In her late 10s, she wore a white
T-shirt, shoes, and green pants. Her ears backwards. She started throwing newspaper over at the
houses as she waves the kids to get back on the sidewalks.
Later, Cream stopped at a building. She got off and carries a blue chao with her. She started
entering inside.
Int.
(Trance Music plays)
Inside, many decent dressed furries were walking around the building. Some were drinking and
some were dancing to the music.
Cream walks up to a bar table as a bartender came to her greetingly. The bartender happens to be
Trevor Mouse.
"So what'll it be, cream?" Trevor asked
"The usual, trevor. A regular tequila and a mint." Cream said
"Coming right up. By the way, how's the delivery coming along?" Trevor said
Cream smiles.
"Great! I was just on my way home from work but I couldn't say no to a drink. It wouldn't be
nice." Cream said
Trevor slightly nods.
"I'll get that drink for ya." Trevor said
"Thanks." Cream said
Cream then placed her chao cheese onto the table at the same time trevor came back with her
drink. Cream started looking around aimlessly before eyeing trevor and her drink.
"Oh, thanks."
"Welcome." Trevor said
Cream started sipping little after little on her drink in order to watch her liquor. This took several
minutes until she was done. She covers her mouth and belchs.
"Excuse me." Cream said, before clearing her throat
"Want more?" Trevor asked
"No. That's alright. Say, can you watch cheese for a minute while I go to the john?" Cream asked
"Sure." Trevor agreed
"Thanks." Cream said
Cream got up and walked from the table.
Int. Girls' Restroom
Cream entered the bathroom and hurriedly took her pants down and sat on the tiolet. She moans
relieved as she started urinating inside the toilet. She lowered her head and sighs.
Int.
Back in the main room, two dressed echidnas came in the building and started looking around.
One was Sojourer and the other was Enerjax.
"You sure it's here?" Sojourer asked
"Of course. Why would I make something up?"
They soon caught eyes of the blue chao on the table.
"There it is." Enerjax said, pointing at cheese.
Sojourer lowered enerjax's pointing hand.
"No shit. C'mon."
They started approaching them.
Int. Girls' Bathroom
Cream started washing her hands and face with soap. She soon got finished and turned the fossil
off. As soon as that happened, gunshots were heard outside and lots of furries were screaming
from outside as she soon heard it and got wide eyed.
"Oh, no." Cream said, worried
Cream quickly ran to the exit of the bathroom.
Int.
Every furry was scattering out the bar as cream exits the bathroom and saw that Trevor was on
the ground bleeding. She was shocked at this but was even more shocked when she didn't see her
chao anywhere.
"No."
She ran over to the bleeding Trevor who was gasping for air. Cream kneeled over to him.
"Trevor, what happened?!"
Trevor pants rapidly.
"Some...Some...Some echidnas came in here. (pants fast) They...they took your chao. Right after
the sadistic shits shot me."
"Alright, alright. Don't talk. I'll get you an ambulance."
Ext.
Later, ambulances came and drove away with the wounded trevor. Everyone was gone from the
building as cream stood there in the middle of the sidewalk. She didn't understand why someone
would take her chao or shoot her bartender but was aiming to find out.
Dissolve To:
Int.
Later, Cream was inside a house where Bunnie lives as she had both her hands on her face and
had a emotional expression on her face. Bunnie started walking pass her.
"Alright, cream. Ah'm gonna take these papers down to the station and--"
Bunnie stopped and saw cream's depressed face.
"Girl, what's wrong?" Bunnie asked
Cream pulled a long pause.
"They took my chao, bunnie. I turn around and take a piss and they took cheese right from under
me."
Bunnie stayed quiet. She knows how important cheese is to her and cream's always there for her
chao. Bunnie sighs.
"Well, what are you gonna do? Ah mean, you got ya'll job ahead of you and stuff."
Cream slowly eyes bunnie. Bunnie steadily noticed that look.
"Bunnie, can you--"
"Oh, hell no! No. Ah can't take up for you. He'll neva buy it."
"Look, he don't have to. All you have to do is tell him that I'll be out for a while and that you'll be
covering for me. No walking involved for paper deliveries. And if he ask why I'm gone, just tell
him that I'm out to help a friend out in Mystic Ruins. He'll never miss that."
Bunnie paused and sighs. She looks at cream.
"Ah know what you're trying to do."
Cream frowns knowing that she failed, then saw bunnie's smirk.
"Just be careful, okay?"
Cream smiles delightfully before hugging bunnie.
"Oh, thank you, bunnie. You will not regret this. I owe you one alot."
"Yeah, ah bet you will."
Cream went and grabbed a black jacket and shades before exiting the house.
"And don't slam mah door!" Bunnie said
Cream was too much in a rush to hear bunnie's comment as she slammed her door.
"Hey!" Bunnie shouted
Disclaimer: The sonic characters belongs to SEGA and Archie.
A/N: This story is a different version to the primary Ms. Nice Guy story which will focus on
Cream Rabbit. In fact, the title was gonna be the next version of Ms. Nice Guy but I came up
with
this title instead. Enjoy!
Rating: R for Violence, brief language, some sexuality, crude humor, and nudity.
Genre: Action/Adventure, Comedy
<><><><><><><><><> <><><><><><><><><>< ;><><><><><><><><><&g t;<><><><><><><
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Fade In-
Ext. Station Square
An aerial view of Station Square is shown as birds started flying the morning sky. Skyscrapers
shown everywhere.
On the surface, kids were playing around the streets as someone on a newspaper bike was riding
in the streets. The figure was identified as Cream T. Rabbit. In her late 10s, she wore a white
T-shirt, shoes, and green pants. Her ears backwards. She started throwing newspaper over at the
houses as she waves the kids to get back on the sidewalks.
Later, Cream stopped at a building. She got off and carries a blue chao with her. She started
entering inside.
Int.
(Trance Music plays)
Inside, many decent dressed furries were walking around the building. Some were drinking and
some were dancing to the music.
Cream walks up to a bar table as a bartender came to her greetingly. The bartender happens to be
Trevor Mouse.
"So what'll it be, cream?" Trevor asked
"The usual, trevor. A regular tequila and a mint." Cream said
"Coming right up. By the way, how's the delivery coming along?" Trevor said
Cream smiles.
"Great! I was just on my way home from work but I couldn't say no to a drink. It wouldn't be
nice." Cream said
Trevor slightly nods.
"I'll get that drink for ya." Trevor said
"Thanks." Cream said
Cream then placed her chao cheese onto the table at the same time trevor came back with her
drink. Cream started looking around aimlessly before eyeing trevor and her drink.
"Oh, thanks."
"Welcome." Trevor said
Cream started sipping little after little on her drink in order to watch her liquor. This took several
minutes until she was done. She covers her mouth and belchs.
"Excuse me." Cream said, before clearing her throat
"Want more?" Trevor asked
"No. That's alright. Say, can you watch cheese for a minute while I go to the john?" Cream asked
"Sure." Trevor agreed
"Thanks." Cream said
Cream got up and walked from the table.
Int. Girls' Restroom
Cream entered the bathroom and hurriedly took her pants down and sat on the tiolet. She moans
relieved as she started urinating inside the toilet. She lowered her head and sighs.
Int.
Back in the main room, two dressed echidnas came in the building and started looking around.
One was Sojourer and the other was Enerjax.
"You sure it's here?" Sojourer asked
"Of course. Why would I make something up?"
They soon caught eyes of the blue chao on the table.
"There it is." Enerjax said, pointing at cheese.
Sojourer lowered enerjax's pointing hand.
"No shit. C'mon."
They started approaching them.
Int. Girls' Bathroom
Cream started washing her hands and face with soap. She soon got finished and turned the fossil
off. As soon as that happened, gunshots were heard outside and lots of furries were screaming
from outside as she soon heard it and got wide eyed.
"Oh, no." Cream said, worried
Cream quickly ran to the exit of the bathroom.
Int.
Every furry was scattering out the bar as cream exits the bathroom and saw that Trevor was on
the ground bleeding. She was shocked at this but was even more shocked when she didn't see her
chao anywhere.
"No."
She ran over to the bleeding Trevor who was gasping for air. Cream kneeled over to him.
"Trevor, what happened?!"
Trevor pants rapidly.
"Some...Some...Some echidnas came in here. (pants fast) They...they took your chao. Right after
the sadistic shits shot me."
"Alright, alright. Don't talk. I'll get you an ambulance."
Ext.
Later, ambulances came and drove away with the wounded trevor. Everyone was gone from the
building as cream stood there in the middle of the sidewalk. She didn't understand why someone
would take her chao or shoot her bartender but was aiming to find out.
Dissolve To:
Int.
Later, Cream was inside a house where Bunnie lives as she had both her hands on her face and
had a emotional expression on her face. Bunnie started walking pass her.
"Alright, cream. Ah'm gonna take these papers down to the station and--"
Bunnie stopped and saw cream's depressed face.
"Girl, what's wrong?" Bunnie asked
Cream pulled a long pause.
"They took my chao, bunnie. I turn around and take a piss and they took cheese right from under
me."
Bunnie stayed quiet. She knows how important cheese is to her and cream's always there for her
chao. Bunnie sighs.
"Well, what are you gonna do? Ah mean, you got ya'll job ahead of you and stuff."
Cream slowly eyes bunnie. Bunnie steadily noticed that look.
"Bunnie, can you--"
"Oh, hell no! No. Ah can't take up for you. He'll neva buy it."
"Look, he don't have to. All you have to do is tell him that I'll be out for a while and that you'll be
covering for me. No walking involved for paper deliveries. And if he ask why I'm gone, just tell
him that I'm out to help a friend out in Mystic Ruins. He'll never miss that."
Bunnie paused and sighs. She looks at cream.
"Ah know what you're trying to do."
Cream frowns knowing that she failed, then saw bunnie's smirk.
"Just be careful, okay?"
Cream smiles delightfully before hugging bunnie.
"Oh, thank you, bunnie. You will not regret this. I owe you one alot."
"Yeah, ah bet you will."
Cream went and grabbed a black jacket and shades before exiting the house.
"And don't slam mah door!" Bunnie said
Cream was too much in a rush to hear bunnie's comment as she slammed her door.
"Hey!" Bunnie shouted