Teen Titans Fan Fiction ❯ Teen Titans: Birth of Ness ❯ Episode 3: Getting To Know A Raven pt 1 ( Chapter 3 )

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Music to listen to.

Opening: Trae Tha Truth ft. Mystikal, Tech N9ne and Brian Angel - All That I Know

Break: Kanye West ft. Miri Ben Ari, Fabolous and Musiq Soulchild – Fly Away

Karaoke song: Kid Ink ft. King Los – Poppin Shit[ Preformed by Ness(King Los) and ?(Kid Ink)]

Closing: King Los ft. Twista and Tank - We Are Not The Same

FADE IN:

INT. TITAN'S TOWER DAY

After a long journey Ness has made it back to the tower at 3 in the morning.

 

NESS

(Steps out of the elevator and into the living room with Zara, Cyber Rider, and Regina)

Be quiet guys I think they fell asleep, I'll get y'all situated in a few.

 

STARFIRE

(Tackles Ness and hugs him)

Friend Ness, you have returned! We were worried.

 

NESS

(Slowly losing air)

You could of called me...

 

ROBIN

We traced your communicator to here, hours ago.

 

NESS

(Realizes he forgot the communicator then face palms himself for his stupidity)

Wow first my swords, and now I find out if I would of needed y'all, there would of been no way of finding me.

 

ROBIN

(Sighs but in relief)

Please be careful next time Ness.

 

NESS

Duly noted, anyway I like to introduce you to the tech nerd Regina Anna P, water bender Zara, and cybertectic, Cyber Rider.

 

All three of them nod and smack Ness on the back of the head.

 

REGINA

(Glares at Ness)

Stop being a smartass!

 

CYBER RIDER

(Bows)

I'm a human implanted with cybernetics.

 

ZARA

(Smiles)

And I'm, an aquakinetic.

 

ROBIN

(Walks up to them, standing casually)

Welcome to Titans tower, I'm Robin, the leader of Teen Titans, that's Starfire, and of course you know our second in command in training Ness. The reason we brought you three here today is that we want you to become Titans.

 

REGINA

(Shocked beyond words)

What?!

 

NESS

Yep that's right sis, the Teen Titans want you to become a member.

 

STARFIRE

The sis is as in sister? Oh how wonderful!

 

REGINA

(Looks away while talking)

No, we just know each other from a long time ago.

 

ROBIN

No need to be nervous we're all friendly here.

 

NESS

Na, that's just how she is, she's happy to meet y-

 

Regina then punches Ness.

 

NESS

(Holds his head in pain)

Oww!

 

REGINA

I hope we become good friends.

 

ROBIN

So what do you all say?

 

ZARA

Of course, it's a heroine's job to help a whenever needed.

 

CYBER RIDER

(Smiles)

I agree with her and if that means becoming something bigger than myself then I believe it is destiny.

 

Everyone looks at Regina.

 

REGINA

(Nervous)

I...I...ok...

 

STARFIRE

(Screams in joy)

Oh joy welcome friends.

 

ROBIN

(Starfire gives the three of them "starfire hugs" while Robin smirks at Ness)

Training in 3 hours, by the way.

 

NESS

(Robin leaves to his own room)

Ight...wait what?

 

3 hours later at the Titans training room lobby...

BEASTBOY

(Smug face)

I knew he wouldn't show up.

 

ROBIN

He came in 3 hours ago.

 

STARFIRE

(Gets a little depress)

Aww, I wanted to see what friend Ness could do.

 

BEASTBOY

If he woulda came here, I would of beat him anyway, right Rae?

 

RAVEN

(Sitting in the corner while reading a book)

Who knows...

 

NESS

(Shouting)

Damn bro I said 5 more minutes!

 

CYBER RIDER

(Comes in with Ness still in his clothes from yesterday)

As our second in command, you have to be here on time, and, Regina just told me about the training session. So I had suspicions that you would be trying to sleep your training away. Robin told you to be here not us, so you should be happy that they already want you battle ready.

 

NESS

Ight, I got it, so Robin how this training gonna work?

 

ROBIN

Well Beastboy has volunteer to spar with you.

 

BEASTBOY

And Ima mop the floor with you.

 

NESS

(Shrugs off the comment)

Whatever.

 

Ness walks off to Raven...

 

NESS

(Takes off his shirt)

Raven, you can take care of this for me, I almost got this destroyed yesterday.

 

RAVEN

(Takes the shirt)

I guess so.

 

NESS

Thanks.

 

While Ness walks into the training room with Beastboy, Raven can't help but be intrigued by Ness's tribal tattoos and scars all from the neck down.

RAVEN

(Thinks to herself)

Nice tattoos but how he get those scars...

 

STARFIRE

Wow, friend Ness has a lot of the tattoos.

 

In the white wall, gray tile floor, Ness and Beastboy take their fighting stances.

 

BEASTBOY

Rules are, you can't use your powers.

 

NESS

Cool with me.

 

BEASTBOY

As for me, Ima enjoy this.

 

Beastboy turns into a gorilla.

CUT TO:

Opening:

bryf963 Presents

Teen Titians: Birth of Ness

Starring

Ness

The DC and OC owned Teen Titans and Villains

 

BACK TO:

We are now brought back to the batt…I mean sparring match…

RAVEN

(Stand up and leans in the corning watching Ness and Beastboy)

That's not fair, yet he shows no fear.

 

STARFIRE

(Turns to Robin)

You think that's fair Robin?

 

ROBIN

Ness hasn't said anything so I guess its ok with him.

 

Beastboy hears the starting alarm and proceeds to swing arms at Ness.

 

NESS

(Dodging the barrage of attacks)

He's faster than I give him credit it for but not fast enough.

 

Beastboy swings down at Ness with his hands together but Ness spin pivots out the way and disappears out of Beastboy's line of sight.

 

BEASTBOY

(Looking around)

Where he-

 

Just then beast boy is hit by a front flip kick by Ness causing Beastboy to be sent stepping back while Ness lands on the ground and hits Beastboy with a barrage of speed increasing kicks and punches, leaving the Titans in the room surprise.

 

STARFIRE

How is Beastboy not blocking Ness's attacks?

 

ROBIN

I don't know and I trained him, he should be able to block those attacks.

 

CYBER RIDER

No it seems his movements are increasing steadily with each move he lands on Beastboy. No matter how much he tries, Beastboy can't block those moves unless he finds a way to break his speed increasing pattern.

 

RAVEN

(Thinking to herself)

Amazing.

 

REGINA

(In the room without them noticing, surprising them in the process)

I call it the Kill City bloodlust.

 

ROBIN

What?

 

REGINA

Those who usually have bloodlust have an addiction to killing. But B...Ness must be able to channel it towards his speed and strength.

 

After what seems like a million hits, Beastboy finally reverts to normal form, back to the ground defeated.

 

NESS

(Stretches and hands his hand out to Beastboy)

Good sparring.

BEASTBOY

(Smacks is hand away and leaves out)

Whatever I let you off this time.

 

STARFIRE

(Worried)

Beastboy...

 

NESS

(Comes into the lobby)

What's his deal?

 

ROBIN

He's still taking things rough.

 

NESS

By hating on me?

 

STARFIRE

Usually people getting to know us say Raven is the cold one.

 

NESS

(Shrugs)

I guess its whatever then.

With that he walks to Raven.

NESS

Impressed?

 

RAVEN

(Hands him his shirt)

No.

 

NESS

(Uses a flirty tone)

Thanks and I guess I'll have to do better.

 

The others in the room walk up to him and Raven…

 

NESS

How I do?

 

ROBIN

Beating Beastboy with no powers is pretty impressive but you can't just win with power or skill. You need brains too.

 

STARFIRE

(Smiles)

I can't wait to spar with you next friend Ness.

 

CYBER RIDER

I agree.

 

NESS

(Smirks back)

It won't be easy.

 

NESS

(Notices Raven leaving in the hallway and follows her)

Hey Raven.

 

RAVEN

(Still moving)

What?

 

NESS

Hang with me for a lil in the city, I still have shopping to do and places to see. Maybe there's somewhere you want to go.

 

RAVEN

(Leaves into the elevator)

Go with someone else

 

NESS

(Starts leaving)

I'll never understand that girl.

 

A few hours later in Titans tower. In the living room we have Beastboy playing call of duty, Raven still reading a book and Cyber Rider cooking with Regina sitting at the table.

 

ZARA

(Walks into the room)

Hey you guys seen Ness?

 

BEASTBOY

(Smirks)

Oh he went to town by himself after being rejected by Raven for a date.

 

RAVEN

He didn't ask me out on a date.

 

ZARA

Wow Raven, to reject a guy like Ness flat out like that must of fucked up his confidence.

 

Meanwhile at the Jump Jump City district, basically imagine the hood and strip clubs mixed, like fucked up houses here, a strip club, one or two decent looking houses and some stores here and there. Now, change into A red shirt, black jeans, his usual sneakers and a red fitted cap with a black brim, Ness is at Toji's strip club, a white building with a multitude of different color lights.

NESS

(Walks up to a to a black twin tailed haired Asian woman wearing short shorts and a tight mid drift shirt)

Sup Li Lang?

 

LI LANG

(Mad)

Leave me alone Ness, we know about you now. Me and Toji are proud and mad at you.

 

NESS

Why?

 

LI LANG

You ain't visit us as soon as you got here.

 

NESS

That ain't even my fault, I had to round up Titans.

 

LI LANG

Whatever, tell it to Toji.

 

NESS

(Starts going inside the strip club)

You know it's all love girl.

 

LI LANG

(Hugs him from behind)

Let me know what's up with you later, since you been...growing so much, maybe I need to see some of that love.

 

NESS

Can't kinda.

 

LI LANG

(Lets go and pouts)

Aww a girl is peeking your interest already, i see. But you better do the right thing, Ness, girls don't like disloyalty.

 

NESS

(Walks in)

Ight.

 

After making it upstairs past the strippers...

 

SECURITY GUARD

(Ness walks up to the body guard)

Name.

 

NESS

Ness, here to see Toji.

 

TOJI

(Asian teenager in blue suit with short spikey hair is sitting on a big couch with a who bunch of high school girls in catholic school girl uniform rubbing on him)

Yo Ness!

 

NESS

(Sits on the couch right across from them)

What's good bro?

 

TOJI

Not much, not much, I heard a lot about you though. I hear you part of the Teen Titans now, you bastard.

 

NESS

(Sees Toji making a roll sign)

Yeah its already annoying...Oh yeah you good bro.

 

TOJI

(Cuts open a dutch and puts weed in it)

I see you ain't completely change.

 

NESS

(Toji rolls the weed into the dutch, lights it up and starts smoking it)

I guess you can say that, just stay under the radar and villains and you'll be straight here.

 

TOJI

No problem, now you gonna take a hit or what?

 

Ness looks at you then shrugs.

 

Later that night in Jump City the Titan girls are out on a girls night…

ZARA

Wow Star, how you manage to get the girls out?

 

STARFIRE

Well, friend Regina wasn't hard but friend Raven took more convincing.

 

RAVEN

She took my book. And hid it.

 

ZARA

(Points at a fancy restaurant)

That looks like a nice place to eat, it looks so fancy, let's eat here.

 

REGINA

(Looks away)

It must be expensive.

 

LI LANG

(Comes out of the fancy restaurant trying to drag Ness)

Ness come on.

 

NESS

Damn beautiful no need to drag...oh hey ladies, how y'all doing?

 

TOJI

(Joins them with the high school girls on him. Clearly under the influence)

Yo Ness...hello ladies.

 

ZARA

(Looks at Ness in disgust)

I see you take rejection well, Raven was right not to date you.

 

NESS

(Shrugs off the comment)

Um...ok.

 

LI LANG

(Clearly drunk)

Oh so she's the reason I can't make you mine, you was trying to date her.

 

RAVEN

(Annoyed)

He didn't ask me on a date and I wouldn't date him anyway.

 

NESS

Now that's settled, why don't you ladies chill with us and Toji open up the karaoke bar?

 

TOJI

Im down for it, wanna see if you still can hang with me on the mic.

 

CUT TO:

Break:

Sup guys, Fost Da Writer in this bitch, so far I been making great strides getting used to some of the characters and would like to thank you for your support. And just giving you a heads up that OCs (Original characters) submitted by y'all are still open since I could always use more Titans and villains. Leave a review, comment pm, or suggestion whenever. Peace.

 

BACK TO:

Back at the restaurant in the karaoke room. A nice blue room from the walls to the tile floor we see the girls sitting at a big black table covered with a blue table cloth.

TOJI

(Walking up the stage)

You think you're freestyling is all that? This a tough beat Zero made.

 

NESS

(Following Toji)

Yeah, all we needed was the hook a 16 is easy.

 

The boys get on the stage and the beat starts playing and the boys grab their mics...

Karaoke song:

TOJI

Okay

Urgh

 

Hook:

 

TOJI

I pop shit believe that…believe that, everywhere I be at

You can see that,

Drinks by the liter,

You can see that, everywhere I be at

 

NESS

I'm poppin shit, bottles too she pop it for a g

That's what you gotta do, that's what you gotta do

We poppin shit, we poppin shit, we poppin shit

 

Verse 1:

 

NESS

I got a couple new Roleys with a couple frozen bands

My niggas squeeze arms like a couple holding hands

Nigga VRROOM! Tryna flip that Maserati over

Smelling like izzy miyaki and my fly Versace loafers, nigga wait

Drop them hunndits, and Tony pop that perfect

I Jump in the drop murk it while bumping the locs, Porsche Nigga wait,

My shades probably cost a thousand

Fly to death, private jets flying across an island

I said, just let me explain, I was just in K City, pump this in your brain

Nigga I'mma get this change,

Robin told me slow down

I said woah now that's a no now, nigga it's about to go down

I'm a turn Titans to Justice League, nigga unh, Toji?

What the fuck they think?

We don't smoke it, it don't stink

This how fly niggas lean, she love my Versace that's a fly nigga thing

I was born a broke nigga I'm a die as a king

God Ness,

 

[Hook]

 

Verse 2:

 

TOJI

Pock' full of hund's in the Levi's

Wait got yo' hunny out the beehive,

OG got me high than a tree house, 2 fingers up like a eat out.. wait,

Take you for a ride get the seat out

We be in this bitch going crazy..senile,

Back then niggas ain't believe what they see now

Grip in my hand ball hard off the rebound

Boom, shocka, locka

Picture me rollin, loud like an opera

Pull up in that big boy truck it's a Tonka

Ready for the show, baby you gonna want an encore

Tell em that. We ain't on no bullshit

No ac just cool kids

And a bad bitch on full shift, I'm gone off the four fith

I don't think they ready for it bout to make em forfeit

We've been going hammer time right about the tool kit alumni!

 

[Hook]

 

Verse 3:

 

NESS

Ayo I tell her bring her friend cus we multiplying the action

I let Ji divide her legs and we never provide a fraction, Wait-

 

TOJI

Two fly young niggas on a private jet

Running out of ink tryna write me a check

Don't start no shit won't be no shit!

I said fuck the world but we don't care-

 

NESS

Man we threw molly to the models

Then suicides on that rarri'

Like suey on the body

Then body shit for a hobby like

 

After the last hook ends, song the song is over and the boys walk over to the girls.

 

ZARA

(Clapping)

Wooooo!

 

STARFIRE

Amazing and you guys just made up the words just now?

 

NESS

Yep.

 

ZARA

(Smirks)

That's impressive, right Raven?

 

RAVEN

It's not bad.

 

NESS

(Looks to Raven)

Thanks beautiful.

 

RAVEN

(Gets flustered by everyone hearing on the conversation)

Not...never mind.

 

NESS

(Smirks at Li Lang and Toji's girls passed out on the table)

Toji, you gotta tell these girls to chill man.

 

TOJI

You one to talk you ain't even go hard with us.

 

NESS

Cause I'm a hero nigga.

 

TOJI

(Smirks)

Oh, so you gonna put on the tights?

 

NESS

(Gets serious)

Fuck no!

 

Toji and Ness share a laugh. Afterwards Ness helps Toji get the girls back to the club.

TOJI

Good looks bro, we gotta hang again.

 

NESS

(Ness does a secret handshake with Toji)

You already.

 

TOJI

(Walking into the club)

Peace.

 

NESS

(Starts walking to his car)

Peace.

 

While walking to the car…

 

?

So you the one trying to steal Adonis's girl. Raven will never belong to a weakling like you. I have a machine that will render her useless.

 

Fost Da Writer: Hold up, Ima do a decent description because even I forgot about this bitch ass nigga. Check it remember when Beastboy turned into the werewolf thing? Well this bitch was the reason because his original big red wanna be hulk space suit with a tron helmet was powered by some chemical that when absorbed, turn him and Beastboy into werewolves. But I digress, the suit he's wearing now is about the same but a shorter version for more speed.

 

NESS

(Talks to himself)

What's up with everybody with me and Raven. She beautiful yeah, but I barely even talk to her.

 

ADONIS

Now prepare-

 

NESS

I'm too fucked up for this shit man, first a mask man, then a scientist, oh lets not forget Steve. And now I gotta deal with wanna be Voltron-

 

ADONIS

(Points at Ness in anger)

Enough, it's time to kill you.

 

With that Adonis rushes at Ness, but even in his mind state, our hero dodges the Adonis incoming punches.

 

NESS

You wi-

 

Just then Ness trips, and falls to the ground...

 

ADONIS

(Jumps into air)

Time to finish this, Adonis Stomp!

 

NESS

(The move connects,causing Ness to spasm in pain.)

Aaaah!

 

At the same time on the way the tower...

 

RAVEN

(Senses someone's pain)

Somethings wrong. But all the Titans...Ness...

 

With that Raven hurries to the location only to find Ness on one knee...

 

RAVEN

(Worried)

Ness...

 

ADONIS

(Smirks)

Ah, my lovely Raven has come to be caged. I was going to hunt you but this will be easier now.

 

RAVEN

You won't be capturing anyone Adonis. Az-

 

But before she can complete the sentence, a cage materializes around her.

 

NESS

(Barely stands)

Raven!

 

RAVEN

(Tries to speak but realizes it's futile and thinks to herself)

Oh no, I can't speak in this cage.

 

NESS

(Gives Raven a reassuring smile)

Don't worry I'll save you.

 

RAVEN

(Thinking to herself)

He can barely stand, I gotta call-

 

ADONIS

Nope this marks your grave, your team can't find you thanks to this jammer in my suit and now Ima kill you.

 

With that Raven's fears are intensified as this seen slowly gives her a feeling of hopelessness…

 

NESS

(Sees Adonis rushing at him)

Ok here it goes.

 

Ness barely dodges then moves back to get space.

 

ADONIS

Gotcha.

 

Right when Ness tries to move, Adonis stomps on the ground causing Ness to fall to the ground.

 

RAVEN

(Worried)

Ness!

 

ADONIS

(Jumps into air)

Die!...Adonis stomp!

 

With that the stomp connects, leaving Ness lifeless.

 

RAVEN

(Falls on her knees, feeling completely hopeless)

No, no, nonono, not again. He can't, be NOT LIKE HIM!

 

ADONIS

(Foot still on Ness, Adonis looks at Raven with a victory smirk)

Don't worry little bird it will be over-

 

Just then Adonis is shocked by Ness's lifeless body as it turns into electricity, attaches to his body and knocks him out.

 

RAVEN

What?

 

Out of nowhere the cage breaks as Raven feels someone pick her up into their arms.

 

RAVEN

(Looks up to the person, realizing she can talk)

Ness?

 

NESS

(Smirks)

Your knight has arrive.

 

RAVEN

(Punches his shoulder and smiles)

Whatever, just put me down.

 

NESS

(Puts her down)

I see a smile on that beautiful face

 

RAVEN

(Tears up)

You idiot I thought he killed you. We already lost-

 

NESS

(Smiles and hugs her)

Chill beautiful, I couldn't give you a hint to my plan to use a clone to shock him out cold because he would of seen me do it right when I hit the ground, plus you guys ain't gonna get rid of me that easy.

 

RAVEN

(Speaks very quietly)

Promise me.

 

NESS

Huh?

 

RAVEN

(Gets serious while on the verge of falling tears)

Promise me you won't die!

 

NESS

(Gets serious as well)

Raven don't...I can't make that promise, I'm fro-

 

RAVEN

(Breaks away from his hug)

You're not in Kill City no more! But if you don't care about m...us to make that promise then die for all care.

 

NESS

(Watches as she leaves)

Raven...

 

Closing:

Credits

Teen Titans

Ness…FO$T Da Writer

Zara…XxTributomxX

Cyber Rider…MediaMan18

Regina…Rosemarie Benson

Other Characters…Me

Teen Titans- DC owned

Adonis - DC owned

 

 

Ness done fucked up with that one and looks like Raven was affected by Cyborg's death than we thought. Can Ness and Raven fix their "relationship" as everyone put it or is too late to fix it, find out on the next episode of dragonb...sorry to much Toonami and anime with me lol.