WOW! I'm so sorry! I must've been crazy when I was writing the last chapter (but I've got to admit it was fun). I'm so sorry. I hope nobody gave up on this! I just have one thing to say, I CAN'T PROMISE I WON'T DO THE SAME AGAIN! So if I do it again, bear with me OK?

I'd like to thank Firebird Phoenix and Angel17, who gave me once again the strength to continue. Actually this is my fanfics with the best result. If you consider the number of chapters and review, this one wins from the others. Previously it was "To fulfil your destiny" to which I got seven reviews on the first chapter, but now it's "The three Elements" (Why am I babbling about this? Oh yes, I'm crazy! NO I'M NOT!).

AND for final news, I have to tell you that: THIS IS GOING TO BE THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!!

YEAH! I'm not planning on doing a sequel, but … I might change my mind if you ask me to do it! THIS IS GONNA BE A LONG CHAPTER! THE LONGEST!

Well enjoy and please REVIEW!!! Please!!!! I don't mind having 100 reviews from the same person! I really don't, so just do it! R-E-V-I-E-W!!!

Disclaimer - I don't own any of the original characters, but I own the ones I've created, and not much more!

WATCH OUT! GRAMMAR MISTAKES AHEAD! DON'T BLAME ME!

The 3 elements

Van and Hitomi were so caught up on the moment that they started leaning closer to each other, without even noticing.

They were so close … so close …

Chapter 9: A miracle called Enehy

SO CLOSE ………………………&he llip;……………………&helli p;………………………& hellip;……………………

A cold drop of water was slightly running down one of the stalactites, and then ..........................................

"SHIT!" - Van got up suddenly, trying to reach his back with his left hand.

"Err ...." - Hitomi grumbled.

(AHAHAHA! I ruined the moment! Well it was not as if it was their first kiss! The drop of cold icy water fell onto Van's neck! Just imagine it as cold as an iceberg, going down your spine! UH! I'm shivering already! I'M SO EVIL! AHAHAHA 8P)

"Ahahaha!" - François couldn't stop laughing at the scene before him. Meanwhile, Enehy was trying desperately not to do the same, but she failed miserably.

"Ahahaha …" - se laughed hard and good, clinging onto her stomach that hurted from all the laugh - "Lovebirds … lovebirds … Ahahaha!"

"Oh … my … God … Ahahaha … didn't have a laugh like this in ages … Ahahaha!"

Van and Hitomi started fuming with rage, shooting daggers at them mentally, but that didn't stop them.

They watched as the two rolled on the floor, clinging onto their stomach, laughing like two maniacs.

"You have some crazy friends Hitomi!" - Van said sweatdropping.

"Don't mention it!" - she sighed and than looked at her right wrist, and immediately a smile formed ion her lips. - "It's gone!" - she said in low voice.

"…" - Van.

"It's freaking gone! Yuppie!" - she started jumping around with happiness, and finished off jumping on Van, who fell hard on the ground. She kissed his whole face and than the lçips, and more … (Not what you're thinking! Hentai! [Pervert] :p)

« I though we were the crazy ones! - Enehy said after her and François had stopped laughing. They looked a Hitomi, who had been kissing Van's face for over 5 minutes (I told you I was crazy! Sorry!)

"…" - François just watched, dumbfounded, and jealous at the same time. Not because of Hitomi, but he missed a feminine company, he looked at his right and saw Enehy. He sweatdroped. «Not her! She's far more worse than you, besides women are scum!» - he though to himself.

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Hitomi finally stopped. After 10 minutes of lips-on-skin touch with Van, she was finally tired. She fell with her back hitting the rocky ground.

"And may I ask … what was that for? Not that I mind at all!" - Van said, finally having the time to blush (I just think men are so Kawaii [cute] when they blush. Maybe because they don't do it too often!)

"Look!" - she sighed, and showed him her right wrist.

"O-k! It's beautiful, you're beautiful … and so what?" - Hitomi sweatdroped.

"NOT THAT, YOU IDIOT!" - the whole cave shacked with her scream. - "The tracking device! IT'S gone … G-O-N-E! We made it!" - she gave him a big bear hug and kissed his cheek. - "You're my hero!"

"You mean the track device comes out when you try to kiss someone? That's weird!" - Enehy said confused.

All the other three sweatdroped at her stupidity.

"Not that, stupid! When they were pushing it! Duh!" - François said mentally hitting her on the head several times. (I do that a lot!)

"Well Mister 'I'm-such-a-smart-ass'! I'm sorry if I'm that clueless! And the only stupid around here is you!" - she yelled at him.

"Oh yeah?"

"Yeah!" - they started a glaring contest.

"Did you know that Hate is very much like Love?" - Hitomi said in a teasing mood. The two turned their heads in her direction, and said in unison.

"SHUT UP!" -Van and Hitomi started laughing hysterically, saying how that made such a cute couple.

Enehy and François were fuming by now.

"Just forget them! Let's take this shit off!" - François spat out angrily, and than turned to face Enehy.

"Mind your own language!" - she said also turning on his direction. - "Let's do this fast! I want to get the hell outta here as soon as possible!"

Enehy grabbed François's clocklike-thing with her left hand, and François did the same to her.

"Ready? On the count of three! …" - She nodded. - " … Three!" - he started pushing, but Enehy wasn't ready yet so she fell forward, right on top of him. And eventually the two touched lips.

"You clumsy, stupid, son of a big mother!" - Enehy said getting up the fattest she could. - "You were supposed to count until three, not just say THREE! Asshole!"

"Yeah! Whatever!" - they, again, got in the same position before.

Van and Hitomi watched from afar, doing the best they could to prevent themselves from starting the 'laugh madness' once again.

And they pushed … pushed … pushed … pushed … pushed ………………………

"Push harder!" - François yelled.

"I'm not having a freaking baby!" - this time Hitomi and Van couldn't control themselves, they started laughed hysterically once again.

"I … don't … know … what's … so … funnyyyyyyyyyyyyy!" - he felt the clock-like-thing coming out from Enehy's wrist, until it was totally off.

But (and there's always a but!) Enehy wasn't as strong as him, so his clock-like-thing remained.

They both lost balance, and she fell on top of him once again. And this time they kissed (not the 'touched lips' thing).

They stayed in that position for a couple of minutes.

"If I didn't know better, I'd say you two are enjoying it quite a b-i-t!" - Hitomi said and than started laughing again, when she saw their pissed-off-faces.

"It's not funny Hitomi! Do you mind stopping that nonsense!" - she and Van stopped dead on their spot.

"Sorry, we're just having a hyper day! I didn't sleep much last night either!" - Van patted her back for comfort. (Muah! I'm so stupid! This makes no sense at all! I bet that by now I lost all my readers! COME BACK! PLEASE!)

"Come on Enehy! I still need to get mine off! Give me a hand!" - François called out. Enehy walked back to where they were before and they started pushing in opposite directions.

"You'll fall on top of her in the end! You know that don't you?" - Van asked teasingly.

"No, I'm … not! Just … shut … up!" - and with that his clock-like-thing came out and he fell on top of Enehy. Just like Van said he would.

That's quite an amusing sight!" - Van said, while he and Hitomi inspected the position their two friends were in.

Enehy was with her back on the ground. François had his head on the croc of her neck, his hands on the sides f her slim waist and his legs were between hers. She, on the other side, had her hands above her head.

"Amuuuuuusing … " - Hitomi mocked.

"Oh yeah! Well I bet you and Van are in the same fucking position each and every night!" - Enehy yelled enraged, as she got up from under François.

"Hey! That was not nice!" - Van said, starting to get angry with her.

"Oh yeah! But this is nicer!" - she showed them both a finger. They gasped in surprise. - "Fuck you both!"

"Hey, hey! Calm down people! All of this because of a simple thing, such as me falling on top of her? Please!" - they all understood their mistakes ad apologised to each other.

"Well, we should be going now!" - Van said as he and Hitomi started walking to the exit, hand-in-hand.

"I think we better not!" - François said as he sat on a nearby rock.

"Why not?" - Enehy asked, rubbing her right wrist that was hurting because of François strength.

"It's almost dark! We'd better stay here for the night!"

"He's right! We'll be leaving in the morning!" - Van said as he sat down, his back against a cold rock, and his hands behind his head.

Hitomi looked around, searching for a place where she wouldn't be cold., but she found none.

"Hitomi!" - she looked around and her eyes met Van's. - "Come sit here with me! At least we won't be so cold!" - she smiled and walked up to him. She sat between his legs, and her head rested on his shoulder. He, on his turn placed his arms around her waist, and his head rested on top of hers.

"Goodnight Van!" - and she fell asleep in his arms.

"Goodnight my angel!" - he stared at the ceiling, seeing the reflection of the water in it. It was magnificent view. (WOW! I'm talking serious! I love to see the reflection f the water on the ceiling! It's such a beautiful show of colours! Don't you agree?)

He son fell asleep with her still in his arms.

"How can they sleep already? It's so early!" - Enehy said jealous, also wanting to sleep, but not succeeding because she was freezing.

She looked to her right and saw François, curled up in a ball, with his back turned to her. She sighed, not knowing what to do.

After a couple of minutes, she gave up and got up, walking to where he was.

When she got there he was with his eyes closed, and she though he might be asleep. So she laid down next to him, facing him, but she was still pretty cold.

She closed her eyes and imagined herself in a warmy bed, with a cup of hot chocolate in her hands.

A smile crept across her face. But she soon realised she was still cold and she shivered.

François opened his eyes and met hers, closed. He saw her shiver with cold and smiled.

He hesitated a little but he finally outstretched his arms and pulled her closer to him. Thus keeping them both warm.

When Enehy felt him pulling her close she opened her eyes. She now had her face on the crock of neck and her legs were between his. She blushed crimson red, and reluctantly placed her arms around his.

He smiled at that and closed his eyes once again, to try and get some sleep.

"Thank you!" - she muttered before falling asleep.

(Oh! Wasn't that sweet!)

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Next morning, aboard "The highest dream":

A blonde woman woke up with first rays of sunlight. She outstretched her arms and sighed happily. The remembrance of last night was of pure bliss.

She looked down on the bed, and saw the figure of the man she loved.

Last night she had finally managed to make him reconsider his actions.

#Flashback#

"Have you found them already?" - a cloaked man asked when the blonde woman entered the room.

"No!" - she answered walking I his direction. As soon as she was close enough, she placed her arms around his neck. - We need to talk!" - she said in a seductive way. He smiled and in the split of a second all his rage was gone.

"I prefer the action itself … if you know what I mean!" - she smiled up at him and kissed him full on the lips. He answered hr with even more passion, and carried her all the way to 'their' bed.

He took off his cloak, not stopping the kissing for one second. When he going to start taking off her clothes, he felt her hands over his.

She drew away from the kiss and he gave her a 'why-did-you-stop' look. She smiled again.

"I said we needed to talk! We can finish this later, right?" - he sighed in frustration but got up nevertheless.

They both sat up on opposite sides of the bed, facing each other

"What do you need from me Kyia?" - he asked coldly as he buttoned some buttons of his shirt. She frowned when she heard his cold voice, and looked down while speaking.

"Why are you doing this Sem? You don't need them anymore! Let them go please!" - he looked ate her and placed his fingers under her chin, forcing her to look back at him.

"I can't Kyia! They might tell someone we're here, and those people will think we're here to harm them! We would be in constant run for life! You don't want that, do you?" - he was surprised when she started sobbing, and than crying.

He pulled her towards him and she cried out on his chest. - "Calm down! Please!" - if there was something Semmedjem did not like, that was seeing her cry, especially if he was the cause of it.

But she didn't stop, and he knew why. After al, he was after her sister to. He knew he loved Kyia more then anything, and he would do anything to see her happy.

"Ok, ok! I'll do what you want! But please don't cry!" - he said desperately.

She stopped crying and looked deep into his eyes. He smiled and she smiled back, giving him a big bear hug.

"You act like a big baby sometimes!"- She gave him a hurt look, but he just smiled. - "My big baby!" - he leaned forward and kissed her full on the lips. She answered him by parting her lips, giving his tongue full access to her open mouth.

She moaned when he pushed and forced her to lay her back on the bed, her hands busy, trying to undo his shirt.

"Sem …" - she said between kisses.

"Mhm …"

"Let me … talk … please!" - he smiled and his kisses diminished, but he did not fully stop.

"Go ahead! I'm listening!" - he said while kissing her neck.

"We can always … star living like normal …Gaean citizens!" - hearing her words, he stepped immediately.

"What?" - he asked calmly. She looked up at him and smiled once again.

"No one would suspect us if w were just normal citizens! You tae the money, release the troops, we go to a peaceful little town and start living like a normal happy family!" - she sad, while making circles in his chest with her index finger. - "What do you say?"

He was silent for a couple of minutes, only looking deep into her eyes, than a smile crept across his lips.

"You're such a pretty little, smart girl!" - he said starting to kiss her again. - "And that's why I love you so much!" - Kyia's eyes widened in surprise. When Semmedjem realised what he just said he blushed for the firs time in is life. - " …"

"You … you …" - Enehy wanted to talk but she couldn't form the words. Happy tears began t form in her eyes and she couldn't control herself. She began to sob and cry in his chest.

"Oh common baby! Don't cry! What did I do wrong this time?" - he asked her as he tried to calm her down.

She just held on to his shirt even stronger. After a couple of minutes she stopped, but kept her ace hidden in is chest.

"Kyia?" - nothing - "Say something!"

"You jackass!" - she muttered against his chest.

"?" - Her head jerked up. Her teary eyes crushing his heart and soul.

"Have you any freaking idea of how long I've waited to hear those words from you?" - she yelled, and before he knew it, she spun him around and started tickling him.

Never since they had started living together had they spent sometime just talking or enjoying each others company, less yet play with each other. And Semmedjem was more than thrilled about all this.

He knew he had made her feel unhappy a couple of times. But she had always told him that her happiness was to be by his side … all the time.

He now understood that she was all that and much more for him too. How could he be so blind? Not seeing the Godess he had with him?

Nevertheless, he was happy for finally realising that without her, his life had no meaning.

"I'll teach you a lesson, missy!" - he spun her around, and it was his turn to tickle her.

They spent the rest of the night just plying and talking. Something they had neglected for al this years.

#End of Flashback#

A couple of hours later:

"Are you sure about this?" - Inarus asked looking up at the great fortress in front of them.

"Yeah, I'm sure! Just get your butt to the next village make a couple of friends, marry and have kids!" - Semmedjem said smiling, he too looking at the fortress.

Kyia had hr left hand in his and was holding her horse with her free hand.

"But …" - he sorcerer started.

"Just go man! Look …" - Semmedjem scratched the back of his head and looked down at the floor. Kyia had never seen him so … embarrassed. - "I now I did a couple of stupid things to you, and … I apologise, ok? Now go!"

Inarus smiled widely and bowed one last time to is master, before he jumped on his horse.

"I wish you two a happy and long life! Together!" - he waved his hand as he rode his horse to the nearest village.

Kyia and Semmedjem waved back, as they watched his fading figure.

"Well! Let's get going!" - Semmedjem helped Kyia up, and he than went to climb his horse.

"Where are we going?" - Kyia asked with a big smile.

"Asturia! I heard it's a great country, and it's not far from here!"

"How much time do we have?" - Kyia asked, looking back, seeing yet a great part of the high fortress.

"About ten minutes! So let's go! I don't want to stay here and watch the firework!" - he said grinning, and pushing his horse to ride faster.

"Hey!" - Enehy did the same, and the two made a race, to see who would get to Place Asturia's capital) first.

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Ten minutes later:

The earth started shaking, and the birds flew as fast as hey could, in all directions. As a big explosion was felt in he forest that separated Fanelia from Asturia.

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After the smoke disappeared, the rays of sunlight showed what the cause of all the commotion was.

Were once had been a great fortress, was now a deep crater.

(Explanation: Semmedjem blew off the fortress so that none of what might make them dangerous prevailed!)

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It had been a week since Hitomi, Van, François and Enehy arrived to Fanelia. Semmedjem had never appeared or shown any signs of going to do it again.

Hitomi looked out at the city bellow. It was half past two n the morning, and yet she could not seep.

A soft breeze blew her still short air, and her silky nightgown.

She sighed and walked back inside the room.

Tomorrow she would have to say goodbye. She and Enehy were going back to Earth. Not that Hitomi wanted it but she new her family would worry, and she did not want to see her family sad.

Enehy had said that she would go too, but on the other hand, François had decided to stay.

Hitomi sat on the edge of the bed and looked down at the sleeping form of the man she loved. She smiled. They had spent the night together. It was her wish and she did not regret a second of it. It had been the most amazing experience of her life.

She promised him she would try to come back, but truth was that she had no clue on how to do that.

He had included asked her in marriage, trying to avoid her departure, but she couldn't, and she made him promise her that if she wasn't back in one years time, he would move on and live happy without her.

He was reluctant at first, but he finally agreed and made her wear the engagement ring. Saying that it belonged to her and her only.

She sighed with happiness and laid down back on the bed.

Van stirred a little in his sleep, but as soon as Hitomi placed her arms around him he stopped and smiled. Hitomi though that he was the cutest thing on Earth and Gaea), and it broke her heart to know that this was the last time she would be in his arms.

She soon dripped off to dreamland, dreaming of a miracle that would happen and bring her back before a year is gone. (A miracle called Enehy! *hint* Hehehe!)

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Next morning, Fanelia's private gardens:

"Well, this is it!" - Enehy said, faking a smile. She went to hug Van, who hugged her back. Then Merle who was already crying. And finally François.

"Are you sure you're not coming?" - he nodded and hugged her

"Be safe!" - he whispered in her hear, and then stepped back. She smiled and walked back a little.

Hitomi was hugging Merle who wouldn't let go. Eventually Hitomi started crying too.

"Merle let g of her! They have to get going!" - Van said, but everyone could tell that he was also close to tears.

Eventually Mere let go of Hitomi. Hitomi wiped away her tears and walked to where Van was.

He gave her his best smile, trying to make her feel better, but she started crying again and hen jumped on his arms.

Van patted her back and caressed her hair. While waiting for her to stop sobbing and crying. When she finally did, she placed her hands on his cheeks and looked deep into his brown eyes, smiling.

"I promise I'll be back!" - he just smiled back at her and kissed her full on the lips." Now! Have a nice trip!" - she walked back to where Enehy was, and they both held hands.

Van lifted the heart of Escaflowne in the air and son a bright blue light came down on both girls.

As they started to ascend towards the sky, they started waving back at their friends.

François was surprised when he saw Enehy cry, while waving down at him. he waved back and muttered a silent "We'll see each other again, soon!" she understood and smiled.

Soon enough, the pillar of light was gone, taking away the two girls from the Mystic Moon.

After a while, François and Merle got back inside the Palace. Van remained, watching the sky.

The End

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Hahaha! You though that was the end!

Oh please! I'm not that evil!

Here's the rest!

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Go on

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GO ON

Six months had passed since Enehy and Hitomi returned to Earth:

Enehy woke up with the sound of her annoying alarm clock, which was something like this: "wake up! *hiccup* wake up *hiccup* WAKE UP … Up … Up …………………" (and so on).

She got up sleepily and walked to her bathroom. She walked to the window and opened it, letting the morning rays of sun enlighten her bathroom. She brushed her teeth and washed her face, but she was still sleepy. She yawned loudly and went back in her room to get dressed.

When her cell phone started ringing. She picked it up and pressed the green button.

"Hello, Enehy Luther speaking!"

"Hi! Are you Hitomi's friend? The one who came with her from Ga-ea?" - a middle aged woman asked.

"Yes! How may I help you? And who am I speaking to please?" - she asked, rubbing her sleepy eyes.

"I'm sorry! I'm Hitomi's mother!" - Enehy's eyes widened up in surprise.

"Is something wrong with her?" - she almost yelled in the mobile.

"Yes … and No!" - Enehy was more puzzled by the second. - "You see! She has been very sad, I think she wants to go back!"

"Well, that's quite normal, if you have in mind that the man she loves is there!"

"Yes I know that, and that is why I'm calling you! D you know any way she could go back? Anything? I just want to see her happy, even if she has to go live in a whole different planet! Please!" - Enehy though for a second and then answered.

"I'll try!"

"Thank you so very much!" - Hitomi's mother answered, close to tears.

"Don't tell Hitomi you called me, o? I want to make her a surprise!" - Enehy said happily.

"Ok! And thank you once again!" - with that the lady hanged off the phone.

Enehy sighed heavily. Se took a seat by her desk and started writing a letter

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One week later, in Japan:

Hitomi sat on her bed, looking up at the ceiling, sighing heavily. She heard the doorbell, but she didn't move and inch. Her mother would answer the door.

"Hitomi!" - her mother called from downstairs. She got up and went down the stairs, to the kitchen, where she saw her mother with and apron.

"Yes mother?" - she asked sadly. Her mother sighed. Her daughter had been like this for months.

"There's a package for you! It's in the living room!" - she said, turning to her cooking once again.

"A package? For me?" - Hitomi asked to no one in particular.

She walked inside the living room, and she saw a package on the table. She picked it up and walked to her bedroom again.

She sat down on her desk and took the letter that was on the outside of the package. The envelope said in big black letters: "Open the package and take off the first box, before opening this envelope."

"Weird!"

Hitomi opened the package and saw a small blue box inside, she opened it and found Enehy's pendent in there.

"What the …" - she quickly opened the envelope and started reading.

London, 21st July 2002

"Dear Hitomi,

I hope to find you well. At least I hope you're not sick!

Your mother called me today! She was really worried about you. She asked me if I knew of some way to send you back to Gaea, so I send you my pendent. I think you know how to use it, but I send you manual with instructions (Hehehe!).

Go back to Gaea and be happy with Van! I know you two spent the last night together. How come you're not pregnant? Everyone gets pregnant in the fanfictions!

*Cough* writer's mistake! Hehehe Sorry, Go on!

You can't say no because your mother wants you to. You are one lucky girl to have a mother who wants only your happiness, and so, I send you a bonus! On the 'book of instructions' there's an easy way for you to travel between worlds whenever you want too. So you can come visit them and maybe take them to your wedding in Gaea (don't forget to invite me Hitomi! Don't you dare!).

If you're thinking why I'm not going with you, he answer is simple: 'My parents lost a daughter already, I don't want them to loose another one!'

Give a hug to merle and Van.

By the way, you have two more letters in there. The pink one is for my sister. Please find her and deliver that to her. The second one, the green, is too François. Although I never told him, he was a great friend. Well, I have to go now! Have a nice trip, and visit me once and a while, ok?

Bye!

Enehy Luther"

When Hitomi finished reading the letter, she had tears coming down her eyes. She couldn't believe Enehy was giving her the thing she most valued. Her first discovery as an Archaeologist.

She ran downstairs and jumped into her mother's arms. She told everything to her mother, and she started crying with happiness too.

Later, that night:

"Goodbye sis!" - Hitomi's brother said, hugging her.

"Goodbye everyone! I promise I'll be back as soon as possible! And then I'll take for a vacation in Gaea!" - her mother, father brother, Amano and Yukari, said goodbye to her.

Hitomi held the pendent between her hands and whispered words of an unknown language. Soon enough, a bright column of blue light surrounded her and took her and her bags up in the sky.

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Fanelia:

Van walked around his gardens, in the deep darkness of the night. He felt lonely and empty inside. And he knew exactly what was missing.

His trail of thoughts was interrupted when a column of blue light came down on him, blinding him.

The next thing he knows, something fell on his back and he ht his head o he ground.

When the blinding light finally disappeared he tried to get up, but he couldn't because something was on his back.

"Gomen ne!" - he heard a voice say. «Wait a minute! I know that voice!» - when he felt the person move from above him, he quickly got up and turned around to see who had fell on him.

"Hitomi?" - the girl who was currently trying to clean the dust out of her clothes looked up when she heard her name. Immediately tears came flooding to her eyes, and she jumped on the king's arms.

E spun her around in the air and he too let his tears run freely.

"Oh, God! I though you'd never come back, my love!" - he said as he kissed her tears.

"Me too, me too!" - she hugged him again and they kissed. - "I missed you so much!"

"I know! It hurted to wake up every day and to know that I wouldn't see your beautiful smile every five minutes!" - they both laughed and than stopped. - "How did you come back?"

"Enehy gave me her pendent, and taught me how to use it!" - she said sadly.

"Where is she?" - Van said looking around.

"She didn't come! She wanted to stay with her parents!" - Hitomi said hugging him closer.

"Well, I just have one thing to say: Thank you Enehy!"

The End

Hohoho! I'm evil! I left poor Enehy on Earth!

Ah! NINE PAGES! My own personal record! See, I told it was long! Well I hope you liked it! I know that in the beginning it sucked, but I got emotional on the end.

As I had said before, I do not pretend on doing a sequel, but if many people ask me to do it, I'll consider that option. So REVIEW!

Review more than you have ever. Please! I need moral support! Not for the sequel, but because I think I'm a middle writer and I deserve a good amount of reviews.

I don't know what you think, but I've read a lot of shit that has ten times more reviews than me! That is not fair. I know I'm not such a god writer, but I'm not that bad either, am I?

So please, pretty please! Let a review! Just this once! To say goodbye! Muah!

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[Ana Nunes]