Witch Hunter Robin Fan Fiction ❯ In Time For Christmas ❯ Chapter 5 ( Chapter 5 )
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Review Responses:
Ayjah- dontcha mean " no leave!" not no leave...^_^ i could gotten meaner...but in this chapter, youre gonna hate me more...>:] (my sadistic face)that chibi amon is still in my head^_^
and yes, i could imagine a chibi nagira! and thanks! ^_^ i try to respond to the best of my ability who knows...there are porbably more that can knock him down...who knows...O.o i have
a big bro, and its fun! we wrestled in my mother-in-law's front yard one night...^_^ it was great! youll have to forgive me, cuz this story aint over yet, babe! ^_^ (no im not a guy...
im a chick...but i dant mean babe personally, k? ^_^') you shouldnt be put out cuz of this...it gets better...trust me! ^_^ and here is the next one!!! ^_^
tankbbg- im glad ive made you happy! ^_^ and im sorry, but i cant fulfill your request...just read and youll find out! ^_^
shippo123456- the fact that one of my favorite authors has reviewed me gives me some much pride! and the fact that it was a positive note too!!!!! ^_^ your really great!! ^_^ and i
appreciate you taking your time to review for such a worthless person such as i!^_^ (for all the reviews!)and yes...chbi amon! ^_^ wouldnt the world be better with one? ^_^ ill make one
just you wait and see! ^_^ and yes...poor, poor nagira...tis a sad, sad tale we tell of those who were murdered by their own flesh and blood...wouldnt you agree?? ^_^ i told you youd be hatin me...
yeah...amon was under pressure, wouldnt you say? ^_^ yes, i believe so...^_^
Angel452- i cant tell you what happens!!! ^_^ then what would be the point of me writing?! ill post soon, maybe...(or i may feel like torturing you...MWA!)
Ken no Kakera- yeah...he let the secret slip by accident...poor guy...trying to be so isolated and all, only to screw up...and its all his own fault...^_^ And i cant promise anything about Robin...im kinda
writing this as i go...i had it planned, but things are going a bit differently than i had planned, but oh well...its still to you guys, so i dont mind...^_^
Black Mamba (i shortened this one too...)- yes..i had to have a cliffie! its to keep you guys hooked and wanting more! ^_^ its good for me, and also good for you cuz the more reviews i get, the quicker i wanna
finish the next chapter for you...you see?! ^_^ it makes logical sense (or atleast i hope so...) yeah, it was gettin good, wasnt it? and the fact that you love my stories...makes me wanna cry, cuz i thought they sucked
but i guess thats just me...ill try to keep it up as much as possible, if only for the sake of everyone's happiness (plus my own!) you used my word, squee...id say my friend started a trend, but hed hate me...^_^and cool
ill look through my things and see if i have anything from you, k? ^_^
In True Meanings- thanks! you mean further? ^_^ lol! but i cant promise anything!! ^_^ im sure she could find places to go, and for some reason it just popped in my head: you ARE Yuna...i dont know why, but that just caught...^_^'
Megan Consoer- thanks! and i will, you betcha! ^_^
Seashah- i try not to make everything fluff...fluff is good, but not in excess, ya know? you dont have to sulk anymore! its here!!! ^_^
AAOTD- you are the ONLY person to say yay to that happening...you suprised me! ^_^ way to go...its not easy to suprise me like that!^_^ and now that youve mentioned it, i will add some Amon Angst. I wasnt planning to, but it sounds good,
so yeah...itll happen!^_^ i plan on writing one for her and all the guys at some point. even sakaki...ill have to think of that one for a while, though. I have a good micheal one planned, and a good nagira one too. i have a brother, too,
but hes 29. He turned 29 last december 23! i couldnt go to his party though. They had alcy-hol. yeah...so i had to stay behind at mom's house. My sister and her fiancee went, but i got stuck at home, watching nothing in particular.
it sucked... yes...my sister and my bro both have blackmail on me...its aweful... i think duct tape solves all problems...even annoying loud people...and people who have wandering hands (tying their wrists)...ttyl! ^_^
Cat/wolf Witch Kyobi- youve used it too!!:: squee:: ive started something! actually, my friend started something...hell get mad if he finds out i used it...he made it up for me to use...lol^_^ ::squee::^_^ its good to know im not the only
squealer...^_^ its great to squeal, isnt it? its so much fun!^_^ id do it just to make him mad sometimes, till he finally got tired of it...so i had to stop before he began to ignore me...^_^ lol! ^_^ thanks for not being a thief^_^ and here's
the next chapter, just like you asked! (actually, just like all of you asked...)
wiccanMethuselah- thank you! ^_^ i dont think that some people realize how big a part methuselah plays in the show. shes not in my fic, but still, if it werent for her, robin wouldnt be where she is now, ya know? i made someone's day better!! ^_^
::dances:: <(^_^<) <(^_^)> (>^_^)>
thats it!
now for more angst "fun"...^_^ MWA!! ( i may decide to leave another cliffie...i dunno, depends...thought i might fore warn everyone)
GUESS WHAT I DID PEOPLE? I DREW A CHIBI AMON!!!! FINALLY! AND HES SO CUTE! AND CHIBI! ^_^ aint it amazing what i can do while watching " Whose Line Is It Anyway?" thats a great show...anyone else watch it too? i love that show!! ^_^
anyways....on with my story! (btw! is anyone keeping up with FF7: AC? I CANT F***ING WAIT FOR IT!!! OMG! I CLAIM VINNIE BOY! actually, we can all share his sexiness...yes..and the rest of the hot guys too...^_^ we'll put them in circulation
between each other...^_^)
AND IF ANYONE WANTS TO BE A BETA READER, TELL ME! i originally have 2 others, but they dont watch WHR, so they beta my inu stories.
/chapter 5/
He searched through the alleyways, looking left and right, trying to see if he could catch a small glimpse of one of the things that he held dearest. She tied right up there with his law firm. Yep.
She was pretty damn important.
But of course, not as important as Amon thought she was.
Heh. He had blackmail on Amon now. Amon had fessed up. He said he liked her...
He kept running, and kept running, trying to find anything that would reveal her location, or anywhere that she had been recently.
(scene change)
He ran towards the nearest park, hoping to make it in time. In time before someone else got a hold of his dear Robin. That was when he saw it. A bit of black. Just like her coat. He ran in the direction of the object, hoping that it was her.
It continued running towards the other end of the park, not stopping but once. But even that was only for a little while before it began running again.
He caught up to it, realizing that it was, indeed, Robin.
" ROBIN!" he called. She didn't look back. He called her again, only more passionately. She still ran.
' Why is she running? Doesn't she hear me?' He had almost caught up to her when he saw it.
( scene change-- sorta...its actually only person change...)
She ran faster. He was right behind her. She had to get away. She couldn't go back. He would only be angry at her. She wasn't watching where she was going, really. She just knew that she had to get away.
So she just continued to run in the direction she was before. She had seen him come into the park, so she began to run, trying to get away from him. She had to stop for a moment, to breathe and to also help the small child she had knocked over.
She caught her breath, helped the kid up, then started again.
( AAOTD: i cant say that your exact wish will be fulfilled, but something akin to it will be, i hope.)
All she knew was that she had to get away. She couldn't let him catch her. He would probably turn into the devil himself with anger for her. And he wouldn't be happy. So running was her only option.
She continued running, not paying any heed to her current location, until she heard a car honk it's horn. She stopped running to see what was happening, then everything went black.
( person change--Amon)
He stood at the edge of the park, in terror. His heart stopped beating. He felt tears prick his eyes. Everything good flashed before his eyes:
:memories:
" Please, Amon! I need to see the crime scene."
:Flash:
" Will you be alright now?"
:Flash:
' That beautiful, but rare smile I see from her. Stunning.'
:Flash:
" He's my brother-in-law."
:Flash:
--Holding her the night she had the nightmare.--
:Flash:
--Watching her as the well closed before the officers came for him.--
:Flash--back to present:
He felt the tears slide down his face. He ran to her side, sliding on the icy pavement, before stopping at her unmoving body. He grabbed her freezing hand, screaming out her name.
" ROBIN!"
No answer.
" RO-BIN!"
Still...nothing.
" Robin, DAMNIT! ANSWER ME!"
He finally broke down. He didn't wail, or bawl, but he did sob. His shoulders shook violently as he brought her closer to his body. His arms wrapped around her limp figure, as he cried out her name, time and
time again. He could just barely feel her breath. It was hardly even there.
" Please. Dear God, no. Not her. Take me, please." he whimpered. His eyes were shut tight as he heard a gasp, then a deep voice saying, " Oh no. Someone, CALL AN DAMN AMBULANCE! NOW!"
Nagira ran to his little brother, looking around the area. There was blood on the pavement. The car that hit her was parked right by them, the driver standing by the car, his face pale. Nagira stood back up, walking over to the man.
Nagira raised his fist, prepared to strike the man, until he heard something.
" Don't, Nagira. He didn't mean to."
It sounded like Robin, but when he looked back, she was still unconcious. He looked to the man again, then sneered.
" You better feel pretty damn shitty right now, cuz if you don't, and she don't make it, it'll be your ass."
Nagira then walked back to Amon, kneeling by his brother, running his hand through his hair. He felt tears fall. He placed a hand on Amon's back, rubbing gently.
He could hear the ambulance coming in the distance.
He helped the people load her in the vehicle, and when they tried to prevent Amon from coming, Nagira looked to them and shook his head, indicating that they had better just give up.
He walked past the driver, and faked an attack to him. The man shuddered away.
( A week later)
His eyes were red from loss of sleep. His stomach growled from the fact that he hadn't eaten in about three days. It didn't matter. As long as he could still hear the machine's bleeping with her heart, and he could hold her hand, he didn't care
what ailments he gained. As long as she lived.
He would occasionally talk to her, trying to get some sort of reaction out of her. He never did.
He looked over to her pale, immoblie hand that was being held in his large, warm one. He squeezed it, rubbing the back of her hand with his thumb. He had yet to move from this chair, excpet for the occasional bathroom break. At those moments, Nagira
stayed in his stead.
Back to her, though.
She had suffered a couple broken ribs. Cuts and bruises covered the rest of her body. She had a concussion. That was why she had yet to wake up, or so says the doctors. He didn't like them. They looked at his Robin as though she were some piece
of meat or something. On multiple occasions, he had told the doctor that had the current shift, that she was his and his alone. And if any of " you damned nutheads" dared to think otherwise, they would have to answer to he and Nagria both.
Nagira had already left an impression on them.
:Flashback:
" If I hear of any one of you f***ers messin' with her, I'll have your head on a stick. Both of them."
That was when the hospital staff learned not to mess with the two men who stayed with their new patient.
:end flashback:
Amon looked over to the peaceful Robin. She was beautiful. Just as usual. He sighed. He supposed he had learned something from all of this. Never let the one's you love out of your sight, because you never know what will happen next.
( End of chapter 5)
I now accept anonymous reviews...i didnt even know that i had it off...whoops...^_^' yeah anyways...are you guys mad?^_^'
last time i posted this, i forgot to add the "chapter 5" part to the end...im soooo srry!!! >.<
FORGIVE ME!!!
And thank you to AAOTD and Ayjah for answering to my plea for a beta!! ^_^ you guys rock! ^_^
Ayjah- dontcha mean " no leave!" not no leave...^_^ i could gotten meaner...but in this chapter, youre gonna hate me more...>:] (my sadistic face)that chibi amon is still in my head^_^
and yes, i could imagine a chibi nagira! and thanks! ^_^ i try to respond to the best of my ability who knows...there are porbably more that can knock him down...who knows...O.o i have
a big bro, and its fun! we wrestled in my mother-in-law's front yard one night...^_^ it was great! youll have to forgive me, cuz this story aint over yet, babe! ^_^ (no im not a guy...
im a chick...but i dant mean babe personally, k? ^_^') you shouldnt be put out cuz of this...it gets better...trust me! ^_^ and here is the next one!!! ^_^
tankbbg- im glad ive made you happy! ^_^ and im sorry, but i cant fulfill your request...just read and youll find out! ^_^
shippo123456- the fact that one of my favorite authors has reviewed me gives me some much pride! and the fact that it was a positive note too!!!!! ^_^ your really great!! ^_^ and i
appreciate you taking your time to review for such a worthless person such as i!^_^ (for all the reviews!)and yes...chbi amon! ^_^ wouldnt the world be better with one? ^_^ ill make one
just you wait and see! ^_^ and yes...poor, poor nagira...tis a sad, sad tale we tell of those who were murdered by their own flesh and blood...wouldnt you agree?? ^_^ i told you youd be hatin me...
yeah...amon was under pressure, wouldnt you say? ^_^ yes, i believe so...^_^
Angel452- i cant tell you what happens!!! ^_^ then what would be the point of me writing?! ill post soon, maybe...(or i may feel like torturing you...MWA!)
Ken no Kakera- yeah...he let the secret slip by accident...poor guy...trying to be so isolated and all, only to screw up...and its all his own fault...^_^ And i cant promise anything about Robin...im kinda
writing this as i go...i had it planned, but things are going a bit differently than i had planned, but oh well...its still to you guys, so i dont mind...^_^
Black Mamba (i shortened this one too...)- yes..i had to have a cliffie! its to keep you guys hooked and wanting more! ^_^ its good for me, and also good for you cuz the more reviews i get, the quicker i wanna
finish the next chapter for you...you see?! ^_^ it makes logical sense (or atleast i hope so...) yeah, it was gettin good, wasnt it? and the fact that you love my stories...makes me wanna cry, cuz i thought they sucked
but i guess thats just me...ill try to keep it up as much as possible, if only for the sake of everyone's happiness (plus my own!) you used my word, squee...id say my friend started a trend, but hed hate me...^_^and cool
ill look through my things and see if i have anything from you, k? ^_^
In True Meanings- thanks! you mean further? ^_^ lol! but i cant promise anything!! ^_^ im sure she could find places to go, and for some reason it just popped in my head: you ARE Yuna...i dont know why, but that just caught...^_^'
Megan Consoer- thanks! and i will, you betcha! ^_^
Seashah- i try not to make everything fluff...fluff is good, but not in excess, ya know? you dont have to sulk anymore! its here!!! ^_^
AAOTD- you are the ONLY person to say yay to that happening...you suprised me! ^_^ way to go...its not easy to suprise me like that!^_^ and now that youve mentioned it, i will add some Amon Angst. I wasnt planning to, but it sounds good,
so yeah...itll happen!^_^ i plan on writing one for her and all the guys at some point. even sakaki...ill have to think of that one for a while, though. I have a good micheal one planned, and a good nagira one too. i have a brother, too,
but hes 29. He turned 29 last december 23! i couldnt go to his party though. They had alcy-hol. yeah...so i had to stay behind at mom's house. My sister and her fiancee went, but i got stuck at home, watching nothing in particular.
it sucked... yes...my sister and my bro both have blackmail on me...its aweful... i think duct tape solves all problems...even annoying loud people...and people who have wandering hands (tying their wrists)...ttyl! ^_^
Cat/wolf Witch Kyobi- youve used it too!!:: squee:: ive started something! actually, my friend started something...hell get mad if he finds out i used it...he made it up for me to use...lol^_^ ::squee::^_^ its good to know im not the only
squealer...^_^ its great to squeal, isnt it? its so much fun!^_^ id do it just to make him mad sometimes, till he finally got tired of it...so i had to stop before he began to ignore me...^_^ lol! ^_^ thanks for not being a thief^_^ and here's
the next chapter, just like you asked! (actually, just like all of you asked...)
wiccanMethuselah- thank you! ^_^ i dont think that some people realize how big a part methuselah plays in the show. shes not in my fic, but still, if it werent for her, robin wouldnt be where she is now, ya know? i made someone's day better!! ^_^
::dances:: <(^_^<) <(^_^)> (>^_^)>
thats it!
now for more angst "fun"...^_^ MWA!! ( i may decide to leave another cliffie...i dunno, depends...thought i might fore warn everyone)
GUESS WHAT I DID PEOPLE? I DREW A CHIBI AMON!!!! FINALLY! AND HES SO CUTE! AND CHIBI! ^_^ aint it amazing what i can do while watching " Whose Line Is It Anyway?" thats a great show...anyone else watch it too? i love that show!! ^_^
anyways....on with my story! (btw! is anyone keeping up with FF7: AC? I CANT F***ING WAIT FOR IT!!! OMG! I CLAIM VINNIE BOY! actually, we can all share his sexiness...yes..and the rest of the hot guys too...^_^ we'll put them in circulation
between each other...^_^)
AND IF ANYONE WANTS TO BE A BETA READER, TELL ME! i originally have 2 others, but they dont watch WHR, so they beta my inu stories.
/chapter 5/
He searched through the alleyways, looking left and right, trying to see if he could catch a small glimpse of one of the things that he held dearest. She tied right up there with his law firm. Yep.
She was pretty damn important.
But of course, not as important as Amon thought she was.
Heh. He had blackmail on Amon now. Amon had fessed up. He said he liked her...
He kept running, and kept running, trying to find anything that would reveal her location, or anywhere that she had been recently.
(scene change)
He ran towards the nearest park, hoping to make it in time. In time before someone else got a hold of his dear Robin. That was when he saw it. A bit of black. Just like her coat. He ran in the direction of the object, hoping that it was her.
It continued running towards the other end of the park, not stopping but once. But even that was only for a little while before it began running again.
He caught up to it, realizing that it was, indeed, Robin.
" ROBIN!" he called. She didn't look back. He called her again, only more passionately. She still ran.
' Why is she running? Doesn't she hear me?' He had almost caught up to her when he saw it.
( scene change-- sorta...its actually only person change...)
She ran faster. He was right behind her. She had to get away. She couldn't go back. He would only be angry at her. She wasn't watching where she was going, really. She just knew that she had to get away.
So she just continued to run in the direction she was before. She had seen him come into the park, so she began to run, trying to get away from him. She had to stop for a moment, to breathe and to also help the small child she had knocked over.
She caught her breath, helped the kid up, then started again.
( AAOTD: i cant say that your exact wish will be fulfilled, but something akin to it will be, i hope.)
All she knew was that she had to get away. She couldn't let him catch her. He would probably turn into the devil himself with anger for her. And he wouldn't be happy. So running was her only option.
She continued running, not paying any heed to her current location, until she heard a car honk it's horn. She stopped running to see what was happening, then everything went black.
( person change--Amon)
He stood at the edge of the park, in terror. His heart stopped beating. He felt tears prick his eyes. Everything good flashed before his eyes:
:memories:
" Please, Amon! I need to see the crime scene."
:Flash:
" Will you be alright now?"
:Flash:
' That beautiful, but rare smile I see from her. Stunning.'
:Flash:
" He's my brother-in-law."
:Flash:
--Holding her the night she had the nightmare.--
:Flash:
--Watching her as the well closed before the officers came for him.--
:Flash--back to present:
He felt the tears slide down his face. He ran to her side, sliding on the icy pavement, before stopping at her unmoving body. He grabbed her freezing hand, screaming out her name.
" ROBIN!"
No answer.
" RO-BIN!"
Still...nothing.
" Robin, DAMNIT! ANSWER ME!"
He finally broke down. He didn't wail, or bawl, but he did sob. His shoulders shook violently as he brought her closer to his body. His arms wrapped around her limp figure, as he cried out her name, time and
time again. He could just barely feel her breath. It was hardly even there.
" Please. Dear God, no. Not her. Take me, please." he whimpered. His eyes were shut tight as he heard a gasp, then a deep voice saying, " Oh no. Someone, CALL AN DAMN AMBULANCE! NOW!"
Nagira ran to his little brother, looking around the area. There was blood on the pavement. The car that hit her was parked right by them, the driver standing by the car, his face pale. Nagira stood back up, walking over to the man.
Nagira raised his fist, prepared to strike the man, until he heard something.
" Don't, Nagira. He didn't mean to."
It sounded like Robin, but when he looked back, she was still unconcious. He looked to the man again, then sneered.
" You better feel pretty damn shitty right now, cuz if you don't, and she don't make it, it'll be your ass."
Nagira then walked back to Amon, kneeling by his brother, running his hand through his hair. He felt tears fall. He placed a hand on Amon's back, rubbing gently.
He could hear the ambulance coming in the distance.
He helped the people load her in the vehicle, and when they tried to prevent Amon from coming, Nagira looked to them and shook his head, indicating that they had better just give up.
He walked past the driver, and faked an attack to him. The man shuddered away.
( A week later)
His eyes were red from loss of sleep. His stomach growled from the fact that he hadn't eaten in about three days. It didn't matter. As long as he could still hear the machine's bleeping with her heart, and he could hold her hand, he didn't care
what ailments he gained. As long as she lived.
He would occasionally talk to her, trying to get some sort of reaction out of her. He never did.
He looked over to her pale, immoblie hand that was being held in his large, warm one. He squeezed it, rubbing the back of her hand with his thumb. He had yet to move from this chair, excpet for the occasional bathroom break. At those moments, Nagira
stayed in his stead.
Back to her, though.
She had suffered a couple broken ribs. Cuts and bruises covered the rest of her body. She had a concussion. That was why she had yet to wake up, or so says the doctors. He didn't like them. They looked at his Robin as though she were some piece
of meat or something. On multiple occasions, he had told the doctor that had the current shift, that she was his and his alone. And if any of " you damned nutheads" dared to think otherwise, they would have to answer to he and Nagria both.
Nagira had already left an impression on them.
:Flashback:
" If I hear of any one of you f***ers messin' with her, I'll have your head on a stick. Both of them."
That was when the hospital staff learned not to mess with the two men who stayed with their new patient.
:end flashback:
Amon looked over to the peaceful Robin. She was beautiful. Just as usual. He sighed. He supposed he had learned something from all of this. Never let the one's you love out of your sight, because you never know what will happen next.
( End of chapter 5)
I now accept anonymous reviews...i didnt even know that i had it off...whoops...^_^' yeah anyways...are you guys mad?^_^'
last time i posted this, i forgot to add the "chapter 5" part to the end...im soooo srry!!! >.<
FORGIVE ME!!!
And thank you to AAOTD and Ayjah for answering to my plea for a beta!! ^_^ you guys rock! ^_^