Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction / Gundam Wing Fan Fiction ❯ Concrete Angel ❯ Concrete Angel ( One-Shot )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
Me: Well this is going to be hard to write.

Rex: What do you mean.

Me: This coming from my heart. Except for its going to be darker. Rated for child abuse, and cutting.

rex:ouchie

Me: well enjoy and when your done please review but dont flame. Oh and I changed some of teh lyrics DONT KILL ME!
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Pale black eyes glemed with tears as she was slapped across the face. Whimpering in pain, the child tried crawling away but failed as she was grabbed by the neck(AN:ow) and pulled back. "You brat!" Her father hissed coldly. Tears streamed down her pale face as she was kicked in teh ribs.

She walks to school with the lunch she packed

The child slightly limped to school. The marks on her arms and legs werent closed yet and showing 'cause of the uniform: blue short skirt and blue shirt. Clutching onto her binder she uses to hold her personal stuff like her journal, drawings and other stuff. Relizing that she was going to be late the girl ran. Pain came out through her whole body but she continued to run.

Nobody knows what shes holding back.
Wearin the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruesis with linin and lace

The girl tripped slightly when she got to the school. Walking in she put her stuff away and walked into the class room. "Your late again, Star." Her teacher said exasperated. "S-sorry.." she wispered.

The teacher wonders
But he dosent ask.
Its hard to see the pain behind the mask.

'Why is she limping and why are there marks all over her body..?' her teacher, Rex, thought confused watching the child draw. Most of the time, he dosent do much when the child is drawing during class. 'The stutering and squirming is bad. Something must be wrong!'

Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born...

The class started to giggle a little when it started to storm, Star, however was looking down, to hide the fear. She pulled out a pocket knife and slowly brought it over her wrist. 'I want to die..' She thought..

Through the wind and the rain she stands hard as a stone
In a world that she cant rise above
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to the place where she loved
Concerete Angel

Running home, the child yelped in pain when she fell. Wincing, she stood up and walked home. After she got home, her father wasnt there so she wnet up to her room. Shutting teh door, the child started to cry. 'I hate my life..I HATE IT!!' Crying she shattered a statue of Jesus. Her hand bleeding and hurting she ignored the pain she felt.

Somebody cries in teh middle of the night
The neighbours here but they turn out the light
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning come it'll be to late

Crying in pain, her father slapped her. Taking out a knife he cut open her back praticlly stabbing her. Crying out in more pain, she knew the neighbours could hear but they werent going to do anything. She was goin to die soon. Her father kicked her in the ribs then left leaving his only child to die. Going the limp the child, sobbed softly and prayed that no one will find her but God had another plan for here..

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she cant rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to the place where shes loved
Concerete angel..

Cutting open her wrist she felt dizzy. Pain and numbness only over came her body before falling into a sleep she'll never wake up from. Later in the morning the chlid was found. The neighbours had called the cops last night. They arrested her father.

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an up-turned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Kneeling down, a boy, traced the name. The boy then stood up. "Forever you are loved.." Duo Maxwell, her older brother she never knew was there. Duo grinned and walked away. "In Gods hands may you stay.." He wispered.

Through the wind and the rain she stands hard as a stone
In a world that she cant rise above
But her dreams give her dreams
And she flies to the place where shes loved
Concrete angel...

In loving memory of Star Maxwell (I'll explain later) friend,daughter,sister, student. May you rest in peace forever...
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Rex: Deep.

Me: yeah. I added a little suprise.

Duo: YOU PUT ME IN THE STORY!!!??

Me: Yeah so?

Duo: Never mind. PLEASE REVIEW! BUT DONT FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja~Cassy