Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ DOOM Group goes to Highschool! ❯ Attack of the Mary-sue! ( Chapter 13 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: Anime_fan_supreme
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 02.26.2005 | Pages: 10 | Words: 6.8K | Visits: 396 | Status: Completed

^^; Okay, I really wanted to write another chapter today, Y'know? I have this urge to continue this wacky, yet gripping story that is `DOOM Group goes to Highschool'! It's weird, there are only about 12 chapters (this one makes 13) and yet the story is so big. I checked the word count, none of these chapters are ever less then 4800 words. x_O Anyway, words to my reviewer:
 
Lily Fairy: I guess Rebecca is kinda okay, you are absolutely right! She's good when she helps everyone. Other then that, you just want to strangle her with the metal to Yugi's millenium puzzle.
 
Disclaimer: Yu-Gi-Oh does not belong to me, neither does Sherlock Holmes. However, all my drawings and the Mary-sue do belong to me.
 
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Bandit Keith: Wow! I'm the first person to say something in this story! That's a first!
 
Raphael: -_-;; Yes, but what you say isn't very important, now is it? And why did you make Dartz an origami model of Atlantis yesterday for his birthday?
 
Bandit Keith: Because I thought he would like it, and he does.
 
Raphael: Yeah, he likes it so much he won't leave his room! He is now staying in there walking around the model like he owns the place!
 
Bandit Keith: So?
 
Allister: -walks into the room- What's going on?
 
Raphael: Nothing. We're just talking about adult things.
 
Valon: -walks into the room after Allister- OOOOH! ADULT THINGS!
 
Everyone: NOT LIKE THAT!
 
Valon: T.T Aww..
 
Dartz: -walks into the room- Hello gentlemen!
 
Raphael: Master Dartz, good morning!
 
Bandit Keith: Master Dartz? When are you such a suck-up?
 
Raphael: Shut it, Keith!
 
Bandit Keith: Make me!
 
Valon: I know something you can do to shut him up, Raphael!
 
Raphael: >.< NO!
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Yugi: Hey, didja guys hear? A new girl is coming to school. But the principal said we had to beware, her occupation was weird...
 
Joey: Occupation?
 
Tristan: Tell, tell.
 
Duke: Yeah Yugi, if you got news, spill it!
 
Seto: What's going on?
 
Yugi: New girl at school. Let's see... Her occupation... OH! They said a Mary Sue. Sounds like the name of someone though.
 
Just then, bells sounded off, and a girl walked in, glitter surrounding her. She flipped her hair, and lots of guys fainted.
 
Girl: Hello everyone! I am Trelana Moto! I am suddenly Yugi's long lost sister! I also own a millenium item! The millenium telescope! I can see what no one else can! I am also the most beautiful person in the land! I have a boyfriend back home, but who cares? He won't know if I have an extra boyfriend, or two, or three.
 
Joey: Too late.. to.. save.. ourselves. -swoons-
 
Duke: Isn't our project due today? AH! Must escape mary-sue powers.. NOO! -swoons-
 
Tristan: -drools-
 
Yugi: I don't have a sister!! >.<
 
Trelana: -walks up to Seto- You know that eventually you will fall in love with me! -bats her eyelashes-
 
Seto: ... I'm going to stay out of this chapter, call me if you need me. -walks out of school-
 
Allister: T_T
 
Seto: -looks back at Allister- ... Come on.
 
Allister: Okay! -walks with Seto-
 
Valon: o.0 Who is this chick? Why isn't she in the school uniform?
 
Trelana: Because I am so great, I don't need one. -flips her hair again, making more boys swoon-
 
Valon: Must... Resist..
 
Yugi: NO! Valon, fight it!
 
Valon: I can't... -drooling-
 
Yugi: -drops to his knees- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
 
Me: -_- Okay Yugi, dramatic scene over..
 
Yugi: Okay! Was I alright? I was really trying to get the emotion of viewers.
 
Me: You were great. -goes back to writing the chapter-
 
Dartz: -walks into the school- Oh dear, what is this? -sees Trelana- OH NO! Not one of THEM! NOO! -swoons over Trelana-
 
Trelana: Oh dear, I'm not that beautiful, am I?
 
Yugi: T.T Poor people.. Poor, poor people!
 
Trelana: As for you, your not falling in love with me! Therefore I shall kill you later, for now, I'll just tie you up and stuff you in the janitor's closet.
 
Valon: Ooooh! Then Yami will pop out and-
 
Yugi: VALON! -glomps Valon- Your back to your old self!
 
Trelana: No! This can't be! -bats her eyelashes at Valon-
 
Valon: -swoon-
 
Trelana: Muahahaha! -ties Yugi up and throws him in a closet-
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Bandit Keith: Raphael, everyone in the school looks kinda droned..
 
Raphael: I have noticed.. And Yugi suddenly disappeared too. -in his regular sleeveless shirt, his cool boots, his jeans, and his long-coat-
 
Bandit Keith: It all happened when that Trelana chick came to the school. Why are we not affected by this though?
 
Trelana: -walks into the room they are in- That is because you both are ugly losers who no one cares for, therefore as a mary-sue, I have no care for you. -walks out-
 
Bandit Keith: We're not ugly!
 
Raphael: Hmm... My angel senses are tingling!
 
Bandit Keith: Ooh! Angel senses!
 
(That's right, I decided since he had those wings.. Well, you probably get it.)
 
Raphael: We gotta find Yugi first.
 
Bandit Keith: What about Trelana though?
 
Raphael: We find Yugi, then we kill that bi- uh...
 
Bandit Keith: -_- Too scared to curse, Raphael?
 
Raphael: Kids might be reading this fic!
 
Bandit Keith: Whatever.. Do you have any weapons?
 
Raphael: Weapons?
 
Bandit Keith: Yeah, sword, staff, slingshot, gun...
 
Raphael: No..
 
Bandit Keith: -hands Raphael a gun-
 
Raphael: Wow, you have alot of those.
 
Bandit Keith: Well, you never know when you might need to use one. ^.~
 
Raphael: .... Okay. Remember, we gotta find Yugi before we find the Mary-Sue.
 
Bandit Keith: Why?
 
Raphael: That way Yugi can have his fair-share of hurting Trelana!
 
Bandit Keith: Okay. Let's split up! We will find Yugi quicker if we do that.
 
Raphael: But Keith, what if something happens to one of us?
 
Bandit Keith: Then the other just keeps going.
 
Raphael: Right. -walks out of room-
 
Bandit Keith: -does the same- Well, see you later Raphael! -walks off in one direction-
 
Raphael: Bye. -puts on his sunglasses and walks off in the other directions, his wings appear from his back-
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