Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Dragons Legacy ❯ chapter Three ( Chapter 3 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: The Chaotic Ones 
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Fantasy / Angst | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 06.09.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.9K | Visits: 265 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Fantasy / Angst | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 06.09.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.9K | Visits: 265 | Status: Completed
Chroni’s Notice: I was very pressed for time, and slow to check my email. To make this no slower than it should be, I am refraining from my obsessive-compulsive need to edit the author’s notes. Sorry, for anyone who enjoyed my revisions.
Jef: Thats Okay Chroni, we are still extremely gratefull for everything you've done.
Aaries: Okay, first off I'm going to explain something about the Solar Tribes. ALL of the people in the solar tribes were summoners, though each different clan specialized in summoning different types of "Monsters". For example Jou's clan is the Tagnik'Zurr clan, and that translates to the dragon clan. Otogi is from a different clan, the Riv'vel. Riv'vel is Drow for Human, so his summon partner is Humanoid. It wont come into play for quite a while, but whats a humanoid Dual monster that you would like to see as Otogi's partner?
Chaos: and now that thats out of our way... ((takes the dynamite that rainystar186 gave us and sets to work demoloshing the writers block))
Angel: thanks again to Chroni, she is the Best!! Oh and we dont own Yugioh, Drow, or even summoners, though they are a bit more origional than in final fantasy. We dont own that either, or R.A. Salvatore for that matter.
Jef: It will all make sense later, but for now, heres the next chapter, enjoy please. ((smirks))
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Jou's wrists were chafed and hurt a few hours later, and more than once Jou had felt a warm sticky fluid trickle from his wrists to his fingertips. He was fairly certain he was bleeding, but it didn’t matter. Soon he would be loose, and he would get Otogi and Honda loose, and they would get the hell out of here.
Jou was almost out, one more coil of rope to free his hand from, when the tent flap opened and several people came into the tent. They didn’t say anything, but two of them untied Jou and grabbed hold of his arms before he could retaliate. As they dragged Jou from the tent, he saw that Honda and Otogi were being manhandled out as well by four more large men. Once they were outside, in the star- and moonlight, Jou could see that the men holding him and the others were dressed as guards with the same symbol marking them that Jou's father had shown him a few days ago. They were in the same clearing in the sand that the Solar tribes had camped on peacefully only days ago. Jou struggled against his captors every step of the way.
As they approached a large gold and burgundy colored tent, Jou felt a wave of nausea upon realizing that that was exactly where his father’s tent had stood. "Den'suaren!!! Rath'arghen!!! Vithin Goln!!!!!!" Jou yelled, furious with the bastards and wanting nothing more than to beat the tar out of them, right after the nausea passed and the air cooled some. ((AN1+2))
Jou wasn’t the only one who was cursing and struggling, as he heard Otogi writhing as well, his language almost as foul as Jou's own. The three of them were forced into the large tent a bit further. "Kneel!" The command was given to all of them, but Jou struggled to remain standing even as the guards holding him pushed him down, and eventually they had to trip him and hold him there while dizziness washed over him once more.
"Den'suaren!!!!" Jou said, and then translated it for the buffoons. "Bastards!!! How dare you..!!" Jou was cut off as someone stood and approached them.
"Spirited and beautiful, what a combination." the voice from earlier in the tent said, and Jou looked up to finally see their captor in better lighting. He was tall, especially from Jou’s current perspective, and had scraggly blond hair that looked as if it had been under a battle helmet for too long. Jou noted with some satisfaction that his nose had recently been healed, as the energy of the healer lingered on the man’s face. It was a rare gift, even among the Solar tribes, to see magic energies and be able to tell what they were, but Jou had always been able to do it.
"What do ya want with us?" Jou demanded, glaring at the man defiantly.
"Quiet, slave!" One of the guards said, smacking Jou's head.
"Now, now, the boy does have a point." the man said, "I want you because you’re young enough that your powers can be harnessed to my use. Get the collars." The last part was said to an aid, who scurried to obey. The man then stepped forward again, leering first at Jou then moving beyond him to where the other two were forced to their knees. "I am going to have great fun breaking you all to my will." the man explained and Jou heard a cry of disgust from Otogi. "You are my prizes for eliminating the solar pests, and when I tame your power I shall be the most powerful man in Egypt. More powerful than that fool High prince Kage, at least and that’s what counts." Jou could hear Honda's struggles now, though they were quite a bit weaker than Otogi's.
"Net'ath Drohar!!((AN3)) What did we do to deserve this!! And not just us, but our tribes?" Jou demanded, trying to escape another turn of his stomach.
"Ah Bones, your back with those collars." the man said, ignoring Jou for now and accepting a strange box from the aid who he had sent away for collars earlier. "You and your tribes have dark witch powers, unsanctioned by the gods of light, or for that matter any civilized gods at all. Your brethren had to be eliminated because they were too old to be indoctrinated to the will of the gods. You however, are just the right ages to be... re-trained successfully," the man smiled evilly, opening the box and revealing three thick, ugly, leather and metal collars.
"What the hell?" Otogi hissed as the man again approached their group, this time holding one of the ominous collars. The man paid no heed, instead opening the collar wide enough to wrap it around one of the boy's throats.
Jou hunched into himself, scowling, and surprising everyone when a throaty growl emerged from his throat, including himself. "Well, well, you seem eager," the man laughed cruelly. Jou did his best to pull away from the man as he was approached with the menacing neckwear, but between the goons holding him and his oncoming fever, it was hopeless. As the collar snapped around his neck, Jou could literally feel all the energy spread throughout his body being forced into place, unable to fulfill its task, and unable to dissipate either. Immense pain washed over him in waves, as the magic energy stayed bound to him, and after screaming in extreme anguish, Jou mercifully passed out.
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Whe n Jou came to he was still in pain, and his entire body ached as if he had been training for weeks without rest. When he finally regained the strength to move, Jou realized that his hands were tied securely behind his back and he was laying on his side on something soft. As he groggily moved to get up he heard someone chuckling behind him, though the sound was filled with malice.
(((((AN: and this is the end of what we had pre written for this fic, untill it merges timelines with Dark. It may get a little choppy from here)))))
"I see you’re the first to awaken. Surprising, you had the worst reaction," the vile creature from earlier mentioned. Jou managed to half-turn so that he saw his tormentor out of the corner of his eye.
"What the hell happened?" Jou demanded, though it came out sounding rather pathetic and weak even to his own ears.
"That’s right; I didn’t get a chance to explain before you all passed out. The collar you are now wearing is one of my special creations, one of a set of precisely three. That’s the main reason I had my men kill everyone else they found, because only three were ready and they’re a bitch to make. These collars are specifically made to suppress magical energy of mages, sorcerers, healers, and now I suppose it works for summoners as well," the man explained, with an almost gleeful gleam in his cruel eyes. "I've heard that it’s really quite painful to try to use magic with it on, since it restrains any power that builds, giving it no place to go, and, as any mage knows, it’s rather agonizing to gather up energy and hold it."
"You sick bastard," Jou insulted coldly, understanding for the first time the pain he would endure at this psycho's hands. "It’s impossible to control that energy as it gathers in my body right now."
"Yes, that’s the beauty of it. You will be in agony every time that energy flows into you, and it will be me will alone that will be able to free you from it. I can control the energy flowing in you, whether I lock it in or let it do as it will is entirely my choice. As I’m sure even a nomadic barbarian such as yourself can figure out, when you displease me, I will lock the energy into you in a loop, and when I am pleased I will grant you access to your magic so that anything that has gathered up can work itself out of your system," the man elaborated. "It’s really ingenious, even if I say so my self. By the time I’m done with you, you will be begging to please me so you don’t have to endure the pain any longer. There are many more special... attributes to these collars but those are the basics.”
"Vith!" another voice said, from somewhere to Jou's left, and the blond boy placed the curse as Otogi's.
"Ah, you’re awake as well, good. Now I won’t have to explain it again, and you can tell your friend when he awakens. Well, a little while after anyways. When he finally gets up, I think I will play for a little while. It’s been a long time since I had such untamed toys. When you cry out in pain, you may call me Master Keith," he smirked, and Jou realized again that he was in the clutches of a madman.
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Aaries: Okay, I realize that this is painfully short, but its what we have and we cant find the inspiration for more. I think it got burried with Chaos under the avalanch she caused on Mt. WritersBlock when she was trying to demolish it. ((points to the writers block that has grown and the relatively small pile of rubble underneith it that is still taller than Angel. one of Chaos's hands can be seen sticking out from the bottom of the pile))
Jef: ah yea, Review Replies. As in Dark Legacy, this will be the last time we go through and individualy reply to everyone who reviewed, unless they ask a question. Preferably one related to the story. I know that the review replies havent gotten as long as in Dark Legacy *yet*, but we feel it would be best to treat this story with the same polocy we are now subjecting Dark too.
Aaries: Here ya are, drow translations at the bottom.
To Osiris-Lee: We're glad you still like it, and we're sorry it was soo short last chapter and this chapter. as for the H/O, well... HECK YEA!!!! the more the merrier, though they will be WAY back burner mostly, to use a cooking phrase. Yep, as you can see its bandit Keith. You wouldnt happen to know the names of the rest of the punks in his little gang from the show would you? the only one we know is Bones, and it would be helpfull to know. As for him molesting Jou... well... Jou needs a reason to hate him lots, right? Right?!?!?? Dont worry, there will be nothing graphic, just an implication here and there about what he does to the boys. The Language is Drow, and I did mention it but, whatever, your probably not the only one to miss it. Hope you enjoy, and Ideas for what happens over the next seven years would be apreciated.
To Amber Eyes23: I think we mentioned in Dark that it may be a little while before we get your fic written. sorry. Hope you enjoyed this chapter of Dragon.
To rainystar186: Thanks for the Dynamite, it did actualy help a bit, till Chaos caused an avalanch with it. ((is chagrined)) Sorry, but I need to drag these guys into Egypt somehow, and they also play a part in Dark, but if you have Ideas for what happens in the next few years while their slaves, you know escape attempts and stuff, We would be glad to listen. We're glad you liked it, and hope you like this chapter too, short as it is.
To mandapandabug: ((smiling)) whatever, you know what we meant, and it didnt sound mean, just a bit seemingly off topic. then again, since we dont realy have a topic thats OK isnt it? As for kissing Otogi, because I felt like it. If I was a guy liking guy, I would take all three of them, and also Seto, Yami, Yugi, Ryou, Bakura, Malik, Marik, Rashid, ect. ((smiles REALY brightly)) We is me. Its a little bit confusing, but the skitzo thing is probably the best description of us. Aaries, Chaos, Angel, PR, Jef, Hota, Eyeay, Efey, and the others who have yet to define themselves as they lurk in the subconsous labryiniths. A little like your Voice in head persona. we generaly like to think that we are muses who banded together and took over a physical form. Chroni is our betta reader and her own person as far as we know. ((Aaries gets swirly eyes and falls over from having to think about it to explain it)) Some of the kids from Jous group show up in Dragons Legacy, or at least Shizuka does. sorry about the realy slow update, a mountain fell on Chaos though. Ideas? Please, those would be realy helpfull, especialy ideas for a scene or two from the next seven years. just stuff from Jou though, maybee one or two things about Shizuka and how she ends up serving in the palace. Please review again, and yea, that was a realy long one. We dont mind. ((still smiling brightly))
To Misura: Yay!! We are soo glad you like Otogi in this. We like making him cool. No they arent pleasant, but they are a bit necisary for my story to progress. Uhm.. Gomen!! something realy realy bad just happened, but it does turn out okay, I promise. We are realy glad you liked it. ((smiles uber brightly)) Yep, the drow are the Dark elves, and the language we are using is adapted from the forgotten relm books, as far as we know. Dark Elves with black skin (not brown) and white hair, usualy with red eyes, the only exeption being Drizzt Do'Urden, who is property of R.A. Salvatore by the way. we highly recomend his forgoten relm books, because they are good and realy kick ass.
Aaries: Thats all the reviews.
Angel: Just five? Okay, Now on to the translations and AN's.
AN1+2: Den'sauren- bastards Rath'arghen- cowards Vithen Goln- F-ing goblins. Also, we wanted to clear up that Jou is about to go into another bout of fever, another ability awakening and all that.
AN3: Net'ath Drohar- baisicaly, Bull shit, or whatever Underdark equivalent you want.
AN4: Oh yea, by the way we translated Dalninuk as sister last time, Its not. Its actualy Brother, Dalninil is sister, If you want to know.
Jef: and I know Vith was in there at least one more time, but we already explained last chapter what it meant and all.
Angel: Okay, Like we said at the begining of the chapter, Ideas for Otogi's bond monster would be apreciated. For clearance, Honda doesnt have a bondcreature yet, but he is from the dragon clan.
Aaries: Please oh please Review.
------- Good stuff, sorry I couldn't fix your notes, --Chroni
Jef: Thats Okay Chroni, we are still extremely gratefull for everything you've done.
Aaries: Okay, first off I'm going to explain something about the Solar Tribes. ALL of the people in the solar tribes were summoners, though each different clan specialized in summoning different types of "Monsters". For example Jou's clan is the Tagnik'Zurr clan, and that translates to the dragon clan. Otogi is from a different clan, the Riv'vel. Riv'vel is Drow for Human, so his summon partner is Humanoid. It wont come into play for quite a while, but whats a humanoid Dual monster that you would like to see as Otogi's partner?
Chaos: and now that thats out of our way... ((takes the dynamite that rainystar186 gave us and sets to work demoloshing the writers block))
Angel: thanks again to Chroni, she is the Best!! Oh and we dont own Yugioh, Drow, or even summoners, though they are a bit more origional than in final fantasy. We dont own that either, or R.A. Salvatore for that matter.
Jef: It will all make sense later, but for now, heres the next chapter, enjoy please. ((smirks))
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Jou's wrists were chafed and hurt a few hours later, and more than once Jou had felt a warm sticky fluid trickle from his wrists to his fingertips. He was fairly certain he was bleeding, but it didn’t matter. Soon he would be loose, and he would get Otogi and Honda loose, and they would get the hell out of here.
Jou was almost out, one more coil of rope to free his hand from, when the tent flap opened and several people came into the tent. They didn’t say anything, but two of them untied Jou and grabbed hold of his arms before he could retaliate. As they dragged Jou from the tent, he saw that Honda and Otogi were being manhandled out as well by four more large men. Once they were outside, in the star- and moonlight, Jou could see that the men holding him and the others were dressed as guards with the same symbol marking them that Jou's father had shown him a few days ago. They were in the same clearing in the sand that the Solar tribes had camped on peacefully only days ago. Jou struggled against his captors every step of the way.
As they approached a large gold and burgundy colored tent, Jou felt a wave of nausea upon realizing that that was exactly where his father’s tent had stood. "Den'suaren!!! Rath'arghen!!! Vithin Goln!!!!!!" Jou yelled, furious with the bastards and wanting nothing more than to beat the tar out of them, right after the nausea passed and the air cooled some. ((AN1+2))
Jou wasn’t the only one who was cursing and struggling, as he heard Otogi writhing as well, his language almost as foul as Jou's own. The three of them were forced into the large tent a bit further. "Kneel!" The command was given to all of them, but Jou struggled to remain standing even as the guards holding him pushed him down, and eventually they had to trip him and hold him there while dizziness washed over him once more.
"Den'suaren!!!!" Jou said, and then translated it for the buffoons. "Bastards!!! How dare you..!!" Jou was cut off as someone stood and approached them.
"Spirited and beautiful, what a combination." the voice from earlier in the tent said, and Jou looked up to finally see their captor in better lighting. He was tall, especially from Jou’s current perspective, and had scraggly blond hair that looked as if it had been under a battle helmet for too long. Jou noted with some satisfaction that his nose had recently been healed, as the energy of the healer lingered on the man’s face. It was a rare gift, even among the Solar tribes, to see magic energies and be able to tell what they were, but Jou had always been able to do it.
"What do ya want with us?" Jou demanded, glaring at the man defiantly.
"Quiet, slave!" One of the guards said, smacking Jou's head.
"Now, now, the boy does have a point." the man said, "I want you because you’re young enough that your powers can be harnessed to my use. Get the collars." The last part was said to an aid, who scurried to obey. The man then stepped forward again, leering first at Jou then moving beyond him to where the other two were forced to their knees. "I am going to have great fun breaking you all to my will." the man explained and Jou heard a cry of disgust from Otogi. "You are my prizes for eliminating the solar pests, and when I tame your power I shall be the most powerful man in Egypt. More powerful than that fool High prince Kage, at least and that’s what counts." Jou could hear Honda's struggles now, though they were quite a bit weaker than Otogi's.
"Net'ath Drohar!!((AN3)) What did we do to deserve this!! And not just us, but our tribes?" Jou demanded, trying to escape another turn of his stomach.
"Ah Bones, your back with those collars." the man said, ignoring Jou for now and accepting a strange box from the aid who he had sent away for collars earlier. "You and your tribes have dark witch powers, unsanctioned by the gods of light, or for that matter any civilized gods at all. Your brethren had to be eliminated because they were too old to be indoctrinated to the will of the gods. You however, are just the right ages to be... re-trained successfully," the man smiled evilly, opening the box and revealing three thick, ugly, leather and metal collars.
"What the hell?" Otogi hissed as the man again approached their group, this time holding one of the ominous collars. The man paid no heed, instead opening the collar wide enough to wrap it around one of the boy's throats.
Jou hunched into himself, scowling, and surprising everyone when a throaty growl emerged from his throat, including himself. "Well, well, you seem eager," the man laughed cruelly. Jou did his best to pull away from the man as he was approached with the menacing neckwear, but between the goons holding him and his oncoming fever, it was hopeless. As the collar snapped around his neck, Jou could literally feel all the energy spread throughout his body being forced into place, unable to fulfill its task, and unable to dissipate either. Immense pain washed over him in waves, as the magic energy stayed bound to him, and after screaming in extreme anguish, Jou mercifully passed out.
XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
Whe n Jou came to he was still in pain, and his entire body ached as if he had been training for weeks without rest. When he finally regained the strength to move, Jou realized that his hands were tied securely behind his back and he was laying on his side on something soft. As he groggily moved to get up he heard someone chuckling behind him, though the sound was filled with malice.
(((((AN: and this is the end of what we had pre written for this fic, untill it merges timelines with Dark. It may get a little choppy from here)))))
"I see you’re the first to awaken. Surprising, you had the worst reaction," the vile creature from earlier mentioned. Jou managed to half-turn so that he saw his tormentor out of the corner of his eye.
"What the hell happened?" Jou demanded, though it came out sounding rather pathetic and weak even to his own ears.
"That’s right; I didn’t get a chance to explain before you all passed out. The collar you are now wearing is one of my special creations, one of a set of precisely three. That’s the main reason I had my men kill everyone else they found, because only three were ready and they’re a bitch to make. These collars are specifically made to suppress magical energy of mages, sorcerers, healers, and now I suppose it works for summoners as well," the man explained, with an almost gleeful gleam in his cruel eyes. "I've heard that it’s really quite painful to try to use magic with it on, since it restrains any power that builds, giving it no place to go, and, as any mage knows, it’s rather agonizing to gather up energy and hold it."
"You sick bastard," Jou insulted coldly, understanding for the first time the pain he would endure at this psycho's hands. "It’s impossible to control that energy as it gathers in my body right now."
"Yes, that’s the beauty of it. You will be in agony every time that energy flows into you, and it will be me will alone that will be able to free you from it. I can control the energy flowing in you, whether I lock it in or let it do as it will is entirely my choice. As I’m sure even a nomadic barbarian such as yourself can figure out, when you displease me, I will lock the energy into you in a loop, and when I am pleased I will grant you access to your magic so that anything that has gathered up can work itself out of your system," the man elaborated. "It’s really ingenious, even if I say so my self. By the time I’m done with you, you will be begging to please me so you don’t have to endure the pain any longer. There are many more special... attributes to these collars but those are the basics.”
"Vith!" another voice said, from somewhere to Jou's left, and the blond boy placed the curse as Otogi's.
"Ah, you’re awake as well, good. Now I won’t have to explain it again, and you can tell your friend when he awakens. Well, a little while after anyways. When he finally gets up, I think I will play for a little while. It’s been a long time since I had such untamed toys. When you cry out in pain, you may call me Master Keith," he smirked, and Jou realized again that he was in the clutches of a madman.
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Aaries: Okay, I realize that this is painfully short, but its what we have and we cant find the inspiration for more. I think it got burried with Chaos under the avalanch she caused on Mt. WritersBlock when she was trying to demolish it. ((points to the writers block that has grown and the relatively small pile of rubble underneith it that is still taller than Angel. one of Chaos's hands can be seen sticking out from the bottom of the pile))
Jef: ah yea, Review Replies. As in Dark Legacy, this will be the last time we go through and individualy reply to everyone who reviewed, unless they ask a question. Preferably one related to the story. I know that the review replies havent gotten as long as in Dark Legacy *yet*, but we feel it would be best to treat this story with the same polocy we are now subjecting Dark too.
Aaries: Here ya are, drow translations at the bottom.
To Osiris-Lee: We're glad you still like it, and we're sorry it was soo short last chapter and this chapter. as for the H/O, well... HECK YEA!!!! the more the merrier, though they will be WAY back burner mostly, to use a cooking phrase. Yep, as you can see its bandit Keith. You wouldnt happen to know the names of the rest of the punks in his little gang from the show would you? the only one we know is Bones, and it would be helpfull to know. As for him molesting Jou... well... Jou needs a reason to hate him lots, right? Right?!?!?? Dont worry, there will be nothing graphic, just an implication here and there about what he does to the boys. The Language is Drow, and I did mention it but, whatever, your probably not the only one to miss it. Hope you enjoy, and Ideas for what happens over the next seven years would be apreciated.
To Amber Eyes23: I think we mentioned in Dark that it may be a little while before we get your fic written. sorry. Hope you enjoyed this chapter of Dragon.
To rainystar186: Thanks for the Dynamite, it did actualy help a bit, till Chaos caused an avalanch with it. ((is chagrined)) Sorry, but I need to drag these guys into Egypt somehow, and they also play a part in Dark, but if you have Ideas for what happens in the next few years while their slaves, you know escape attempts and stuff, We would be glad to listen. We're glad you liked it, and hope you like this chapter too, short as it is.
To mandapandabug: ((smiling)) whatever, you know what we meant, and it didnt sound mean, just a bit seemingly off topic. then again, since we dont realy have a topic thats OK isnt it? As for kissing Otogi, because I felt like it. If I was a guy liking guy, I would take all three of them, and also Seto, Yami, Yugi, Ryou, Bakura, Malik, Marik, Rashid, ect. ((smiles REALY brightly)) We is me. Its a little bit confusing, but the skitzo thing is probably the best description of us. Aaries, Chaos, Angel, PR, Jef, Hota, Eyeay, Efey, and the others who have yet to define themselves as they lurk in the subconsous labryiniths. A little like your Voice in head persona. we generaly like to think that we are muses who banded together and took over a physical form. Chroni is our betta reader and her own person as far as we know. ((Aaries gets swirly eyes and falls over from having to think about it to explain it)) Some of the kids from Jous group show up in Dragons Legacy, or at least Shizuka does. sorry about the realy slow update, a mountain fell on Chaos though. Ideas? Please, those would be realy helpfull, especialy ideas for a scene or two from the next seven years. just stuff from Jou though, maybee one or two things about Shizuka and how she ends up serving in the palace. Please review again, and yea, that was a realy long one. We dont mind. ((still smiling brightly))
To Misura: Yay!! We are soo glad you like Otogi in this. We like making him cool. No they arent pleasant, but they are a bit necisary for my story to progress. Uhm.. Gomen!! something realy realy bad just happened, but it does turn out okay, I promise. We are realy glad you liked it. ((smiles uber brightly)) Yep, the drow are the Dark elves, and the language we are using is adapted from the forgotten relm books, as far as we know. Dark Elves with black skin (not brown) and white hair, usualy with red eyes, the only exeption being Drizzt Do'Urden, who is property of R.A. Salvatore by the way. we highly recomend his forgoten relm books, because they are good and realy kick ass.
Aaries: Thats all the reviews.
Angel: Just five? Okay, Now on to the translations and AN's.
AN1+2: Den'sauren- bastards Rath'arghen- cowards Vithen Goln- F-ing goblins. Also, we wanted to clear up that Jou is about to go into another bout of fever, another ability awakening and all that.
AN3: Net'ath Drohar- baisicaly, Bull shit, or whatever Underdark equivalent you want.
AN4: Oh yea, by the way we translated Dalninuk as sister last time, Its not. Its actualy Brother, Dalninil is sister, If you want to know.
Jef: and I know Vith was in there at least one more time, but we already explained last chapter what it meant and all.
Angel: Okay, Like we said at the begining of the chapter, Ideas for Otogi's bond monster would be apreciated. For clearance, Honda doesnt have a bondcreature yet, but he is from the dragon clan.
Aaries: Please oh please Review.
------- Good stuff, sorry I couldn't fix your notes, --Chroni