Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Good Bye ❯ Good Bye Rewrite ( Chapter 2 )

Good Bye
A.n- A rather depressing Yu-Gi-Oh fic set on A.u… Now I don't know if its actually true so this is my prospect, If Yami Bakura is part of Bakura then if Bakura die so would Yami B. But that's my prospect and I need it for this fic so Don't flame me saying I'm wrong this is a A.u and is my opinion. (Though only for this fic.)

A.n 2: I decided I wanted to rewrite this so it didn't seem... rushed.

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Bakura sighed as he stared up at the dark gray clouds that covered the sky from every corner. How long had those clouds been the sky, it seemed like forever even though in reality it's only been 2 years, 2 years of complete hell for Bakura and his friends.
No one knew, there were no signs he just flipped, of course they all knew Yami Bakura was Insane to begin with but no one knew he had that power and that he was that far gone. Since it all happened 2 of his friends had been killed, and it was his entire fault, his fault because he couldn't be strong and couldn't control his Yami but instead let his Yami control him.

`No More' He thought as he propped himself up to a standing postion and stared out at the vast horizon of the Canyon he was on. He hadn't told anyone he was coming here, he knew if he did they would only try to stop him and convince him that there was anther way. `But there isn't' His mind yelled at him as he finally stood up and turned his back to that very canyon and let his mind wander as he stepped closer to the edge.
Yami and Yugi where the first one to go, It nearly broke Tea when she discovered the bloody corspes of the one she loved. Yugi arm had been twisted behind his back and it looked like his flesh had been ripped off his body.
Yami on the other hand, had burn marks all over him, You could see where the flesh had melted from his skin. His stomach and arms and legs had been slashed open also.

They were all pretty sure other stuff had been done to them but they couldn't bring themselves to think of what.

Tristan had died right before everyone very eyes, In a rage he had changed at Bakura to only get struck by bolts of lighting. He had died on impact.
That had shook Joey up to know end, but he surrived somehow, along with Tea they both had surrived.

The next, but not last to go, was Seto Kaiba, how he died nobody knew but they had a suspicion when they found a Blue Eyes White Dragon card laying down on the ground where he was last spotted.

The very last person to be killed brung tears to his eyes, It was a person who was more of a sister to him then cousin, it was Schala. In truth she wasn't really dead, but some how Bakura had banished that spirit that lived inside of her, Sky, and without Sky, Schala seemed to just disengrate, she had no more will to live she was like an empty shell.

'I won't let anyone else die' Ryou thought as he turned around to meet the face of none other then his Insane Yami. He gave Bakura a smirk that was unlike him as he backed towards the edge of the cliff. Giving a small wave at the surprised Yami, He fell.
"Good Bye… My friends" The wind seemed to whisper as a scream pieced the air all around and the cloud seems to lighten and tears of joy and sorrow were shed for all.

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So I changed around the parts with the deaths all the way to the near end (The last line stayed the same ^^;) Is it better?