Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Just Wanna Say I Love You ❯ The Surprisee ( Chapter 9 )

Chapter 9: The Surprisee

Disclaimer: I do not own YUGIOH SO STOP ANNOYING MEEE ehh lolx ^^

Dedicated to

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Thanx to all my loyal reviewerss ^^

1. Ryuujitsu - Yep I have ^^ you'll find out the surprise. but I think the surprise is lame. >,< anywayyss ^^ the M/R n M/B came from my mind when I read a M/R and M/B story ^^ lolx thanx for reviewing

2. animegurl6 - err sorry .but the lemon is gone. I just deleted it. I'm really bad at lemons. and I'm retyping it. if I ever get it up it'll be at Mediaminer.. Sorry for the trouble.. ^^ thanx for reviewing

3. Bakuraluva - Umm I'm sorry but I retyped the lemon and it'll be on medaiminer .. Or not. actually. it won't be on Mediaminer. sorry. any other lemons that I write will be on Medaiminer though ^^ thanx for reviewing

4. BishounenzAngel - it's okay I understand. school is annoying..lolx ^^ thanx for reviewing and the lemons will be posted at Mediaminer . just not the m/m one

5. Dragona 2007 - thanks for the compliment ^^ thanx for reviewing

6. Kurama no Miko2003 - Well. maybe Bakura and Ryou will end up together. depends.. Me gonna have a poll soon.. like which couples you want at the ending ^^ thanx for reviewing

7. Phoenix36 - lolx nice guess ^^ but sadly no. it's something else and youll find out in this chapter ^^. but I think the idea I made up is kinda lame...oh welll.. Tell me what you think ^^ thanx for reviewing

8. Anonymous - lolx I agree.. poor hikari and yami's . their kissing the wrong people. ^^ thanx for reviewing

9. Yami's-Girl - Sorry.. the M/m lemon isn't gonna be here any more. .. And what's a bondage?..? ^^ thanx for reviewing

10. Rowan and Sakura - lolx ^^ it's funny lolx I loved that review ^^ it was my favorite one ^^ thanx for reviewing

11. Panda X. Bear - lolx wow. I can't believe it. you musta gotten lost a dozen of times. wow.. ^^ the pushies are soooo kawaiiii thanx ^^ and thanx for reviewing and the lemon doesn't affect the plot ^^ so no need to worry ^^

12. Kahtiihma - Actually. I think I don't even know what I'm writing about.. -_-;; I think Malik is going after Bakura and Ryou is after Marik and Marik is also after Ryou then Bakura is after Malik too. then pretty soon I'll make Malik go after Ryou and Marik go after Bakura.. Does that make sense?. lolx ahh well. I'll figure it out...... someday.... lolx ^^ thanx for reviewing

13. Sabby^_~ (babybeanie90@hotmail.com) (2) - Thanx ^^ heres the next chapter. hope it's long enough and good enough for ALLLLLL my reviewers ^^ I LUV YOU ALL *hugs every one* lolx ^^ thanx for reviewing

14. GokuVegeta447 - I'm really sorry but I deleted the lemon ,.. -_-;; it wasn't really good. I was really hoping to write a R/B lemon first. cause I'm not that good with m/m .. ^^ anywayss thanx for reviewing

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Authoress: OMG OMG OMG I past 100 ^^ yayyyyy thanx so mucha ^^ *sniff* you make me feel so luvvedd ^^ *sobbing on the floor*

A Little Voice: ehh sorry the Authoress had a mental break down so I'll be writing the story hehe (and I'll be angustyy mwahhhhhaa)

Authoress: I'm okay now go AWAYYY

A little Voice: ................now on with the story.

(Igonre the reviews above they are from ff.net

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Just Wanna Say I Love You

Ryou's Point of View

Silently I walked home and entered the house. Bakura's probably upstairs with Malik. I fumed silently. Sighing slowly I took off Marik's jacket and went to the kitchen to get some chocolate (Mmm) it always calmed me down for some reason. Then I went back to the living room and sat on the sofa comfortably.

I closed my eyes and rested peacefully for a few seconds until I felt someone jump on top of me and kissed me hungrily. I opened my eyes in surprise and saw Bakura look at me with a hungry look. "Hello Hikari" he purred seductively "oh and want this back?" he asked showing me a piece of chocolate he presumably stole from my mouth.

I stared at him and nodded dumbly. He smirked and straddling my hips kissed me fiercely.

//You'll have to beat me in this dominance game before you can get it back// Bakura purred through the link

I tried to obtain dominance over Bakura but he was stronger and easily overpowered me. "Bakura." I moaned as he explored every single crevice in my mouth. He finally allowed me a little taste of the chocolate. I pulled away and closed my eyes. The chocolate tasted sweet and moist with a hint of Vanilla (my flavor) and Cinnamon (Bakura's flavor) to it. Quickly devouring the chocolate hungrily I smashed my mouth unexpectedly into Bakura's giving me the advantage to explore his mouth for a change.

"Mmm" I moaned. My dominance over him only lasted for a few seconds when he effortlessly he quickly regained it. I allowed him to keep his part in the lip lock as I savored the lingering taste of Bakura in my mouth. After a few minutes of the electrifying kiss we were interrupted when someone walked through the door....

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~ Marik's Point of View (Before when Marik told Ryou in the park he needed to go shopping) ~

Malik's birthday is coming up today. what am I gonna get him? I thought browsing around the shops. (yes Malik's b-day is in December ^^ I checked it on a site) At last an item caught my eyes. It was a pair Egyptian bracelets. "That would look really good on Malik..." I thought "Now should I steal it or pay?.." "I'll pay. after all I have Seto's credit card with me anyways" I thought to myself walking into the shop and coming out with a bag.

I walked to Ryou's House and examined the bracelet's I bought. They were beautifully crafted and had exquisite designs on them but then I noticed something in hieroglyphics that I just could quite make out. "Maybe Bakura knows something about it.." I muttered to myself.

I entered the house to find Bakura and Ryou in a fierce lip lock. "Excuse me." I interrupted. Bakura glared at me and Ryou just looked up and jumped on me hugging me fiercely. "What's gotten into him?" Bakura asked me slightly annoyed. I ignored his question and carrying Ryou sat on the couch with Bakura petting Ryou's soft hair.

I could feel Bakura scowl at me but instead I said "Bakura . today's Malik's birthday." I felt Ryou smile and say "I already knew and got him a gift. "Yea I knew to..." Bakura said annoyed "the gift's with Ryou's". I nodded and said "I need help decorating the house. "Can you help?" I asked pleadingly.

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~ Bakura's Point of View ~

"Of course let's go now Malik's asleep in our room now" I pointed out. Ryou nodded in agreement and wrote a note incase Malik woke up. "I suppose by the way you guys were kiss you forgive him right?" I heard Marik mutter to Ryou. There was some silence then Ryou said "Yes." but something in my mind told me other wise.. The way Ryou said it was in a hesitant kind of way like he quite didn't trust me.

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~ Ryou's Point of View ~

I still didn't trust Bakura but . *sigh* might as well keep it to myself. "Yes.." I answered Marik. I could feel Bakura staring at me. "Well let's get going then shall we?" I said faking cheerfulness. Marik noticed but didn't say anything. I grabbed my gift and Bakura's for Malik. Then placed the note on the table. Bakura and Marik were waiting by the door for me.

"Opps. my jacket's in my room.?" I muttered. "It's okay I'm sure you'll be warm like this" Marik said smiling as he unzipped his jacket and holding me to his chest then zipping up his jacket again. I heard Bakura snarl and scowl but ignored him . Marik was really warm.

Marik laughed a little bit and proceeded to his house. I yawned slightly and wrapped my legs around Marik's waist squeezing it tightly. I heard Marik try to stifle a faint moan but was unsuccessful.

//RYOU stop it// Bakura hissed

/Huh? Why?/ I asked curiously

//Because you-your m-// Bakura trailed off then blocked his link..

I looked at Bakura who was looking at Marik like he was gonna kill him. Of Course Marik ignored him and kept on walking. I shook my head slightly and fell asleep in Marik's arms unconsciously nuzzling his neck. Before falling asleep I thought I heard Bakura say this but. I must have been dreaming..

//Because.. You're .. Mine.//

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Authoress: So.. How was it..? *sigh* sorry for the really really long wait.. School's fault. lolx ^^ well please R/R also if I have ANY lemons they will be posted on www.Mediaminer.com okay?? Me gonna tell you. ^^ also it's the same thing for all my other stories too you know change of Heart and Hidden Love Revealed

Thanks for reviewing ^^ also the next chapter will be harder to type put sorry. but you might have to wait. Also Change of Heart will be up soon ^^