Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Kesshin (Determination) ❯ Lemony Scene ( Chapter 1 )
*** Author's Notes: This is just a little snippet of my latest project, Kesshin (Determination). It's my first yaoi lemon, so please, BE HARSH!! Give me the worst critiques you can think of! I'll never get better if you go soft on me. Just keep this in mind; this is part of a larger fic. It wouldn't do me any good to have a great fic with a poor lemon. ^__^ ***
~Fanfiction Start!~
"Why the hell are you still here?"
"I'm not leaving until I get what I want."
"You're not getting it. I will kill myself before I give it to you."
"Fine, then I will stay right here."
"Dammit…" came the response. "You don't ever listen." Kaiba pushed Jounouchi against the wall. "Why don't you ever listen?"
"Because if I did, I wouldn't be talking to you right now. And I would never get what I want."
"You bastard," Kaiba said as he forced his mouth onto Jounouchi's. His kiss was heated, demanding, and completely lacking in finesse. Jounouchi, however, wasn't paying attention to Kaiba's technique; he was more concerned with tilting his head upward to gain control of the kiss. Kaiba continued his attack, and the two battled with their tongues the same way they had battled with their words just seconds before.
They separated, both boys breathing deeply and glaring at each other. Jounouchi could tell that Kaiba was upset; his aggressive stance and burning eyes couldn't mean otherwise. Still, Jounouchi had something he was after, a goal of sorts, and he would not back down from Kaiba until he got it.
"Let's go," Kaiba stated plainly, snapping Jounouchi from his thoughts. Grabbing his wrist roughly, Kaiba pulled Jounouchi into the nearest bedroom.
"You brought this on yourself," Kaiba said as he shoved the blonde onto the bed.
"Did you hear me complaining?" was the reply. "I have-"
The words were cut short as Kaiba again assaulted Jounouchi's mouth. Gentleness was forgotten as Kaiba ripped off Jounouchi's shirt and tossed it aside. He began to move his mouth to Jounouchi's neck, pausing to suck lightly on his Adam's Apple. Unable to suppress a groan, Jounouchi tried to gain some domination by nibbling on Kaiba's ear. Kaiba chuckled at the feeble attempt, and trailed his tongue down to the dip of Jounouchi's throat. This caused a string of moans to escape Jounouchi's mouth, and he could no longer concentrate on his nibbling. He decided that his effort was futile; he'd let Kaiba win this fight.
Kaiba sensed Jounouchi's submission, and this excited him. Though he still wanted to tease Jounouchi, Kaiba couldn't help but to quicken his pace. His roaming hands found their way to one of Jounouchi's nipples, and he slowly ran his fingertips across the bulb. Jounouchi arched his back, and he moved his own hand to pleasure his other nipple.
"I'm running the show now," Kaiba whispered as his pinned Jounouchi's hand to the bed. "And I'm the only one who is allowed to satisfy you." He looked at Jounouchi with a possessive air, and the boy became weak under his command.
"Now I have to tease you a bit longer," Kaiba smirked as he moved his hand from Jounouchi's nipple to the blonde's growing erection.
Kaiba cupped Jounouchi's clothed penis in his hand. "What happened to all that spirit you had earlier? Don't tell me that you've given up." He squeezed lightly. "I like arguing with you."
"So you want me to struggle more, is that it?" Jounouchi pushed against Kaiba's hand, trying to get more pressure for his needy erection.
"Anxious?" Kaiba smiled devilishly. "Fine, let's get down to business." He pulled off his own shirt and started to unbutton his pants. Soon he was completely naked.
"Strip." That was all he said to Jounouchi-the boy obeyed immediately. Kaiba took one glance at Jounouchi's body; then he shivered. There was a certain beauty about the boy in front of him, a purity that begged to be destroyed. Kaiba gladly obliged.
Kaiba moved up to claim Jounouchi's lips again; but this time he felt that he should honor the innocence of the blonde, that he should be tender to Jounouchi. This kiss soft and lingering, and Kaiba let Jounouchi take control, just so he could get a taste of power before it was ripped from him.
The kiss was broken, and Kaiba went straight for Jounouchi's cock. He licked the tip, and smirked when Jounouchi tried to push the head into his mouth.
"Not yet, not yet…" Kaiba said soothingly. He trailed his fingers down Jounouchi's length, and firmly stroked his balls. All the while, Jounouchi was writhing on the bed, wanting more pressure but knowing that Kaiba would not give it to him.
"Dammit. Stop teasing me! Get on with it!" he nearly screamed with anticipation.
"What, you want me to fuck you dry?" Kaiba responded sarcastically, already knowing the answer. He put the tip of Jounouchi's cock into his mouth, and licked the drops of liquid dripped out. However, he wouldn't take Jounouchi whole; he chose instead to tickle his length with his fingers and tease him by squeezing his balls lightly.
Jounouchi was in absolute agony. Kaiba kept licking the slit of his cock, but he wouldn't go any further, no matter how hard Jounouchi pushed. Kaiba had all the control, and Jounouchi had submitted; he could only grab at the sheets to take out some of his frustration.
The teasing was fun, but Kaiba had to keep shifting his position in order to play with Jounouchi. The rough fabric of the sheets was rubbing against his penis, and Kaiba could not ignore his body any longer. He gave one long lick down Jounouchi's length, one firm squeeze to his balls, and then he moved to find the bottle of lotion he kept on the nightstand.
"Now I'll be serious," he said as he rubbed himself with the lotion. He also made sure his fingers were fully covered.
This time Kaiba took half of Jounouchi's length into his mouth, and he pressed one solitary finger to Jounouchi's entrance. The finger slid in carefully. Jounouchi closed his eyes and arched at the sensation of having his penis sucked on, as well as having something moving inside him. He wiggled more of his cock into the wet fire that was threatening to send him over the edge.
Kaiba was gauging Jounouchi's reactions. He didn't want to cause the boy too much pain, but at the same time, his own erection was hurting him. He hastily inserted another finger and stretched the opening. Jounouchi tensed at this, so Kaiba took more of Jounouchi into his mouth and moved his free hand to once more stroke the blonde's balls.
The third finger went in, yet Jounouchi barely noticed. Kaiba was playing with his cock, licking and twirling and sucking so well that Jounouchi felt he would explode. Then, the heat was gone. He glanced down to see what Kaiba was doing; the brunette was positioning himself, ready to enter.
With a quick thrust, Kaiba was inside Jounouchi. He paused, trying not to climax at the sheer tightness of Jounouchi's hole. Glad for the hesitation, Jounouchi attempted to relax, even though he was burning within. He knew that it would soon feel good, but he wished that he didn't have to go through the pain to get to the pleasure.
Unable to hold back any longer, Kaiba pushed himself further into Jounouchi. He couldn't think; the only thought on his mind was to go deeper, to go faster. He pulled out and went in again, moaning and shaking as he unsuccessfully struggled to calm himself. Jounouchi was just too tight, too hot for him to do anything but continue thrusting.
The overall feel of incoherence affected Jounouchi as well. He wanted Kaiba to hit his sensitive spot; ignoring the pain, he pulled Kaiba closer, taking him deeper into his body. Every thrust took Kaiba closer, until he finally touched it-that one place that would make Jounouchi go crazy.
A clipped scream came from Jounouchi's mouth, and he clutched Kaiba as he was repeatedly sent into spasms of ecstasy. He moved his hand to stroke his length, but once again Kaiba pinned it to the bed.
"Didn't I tell you that I'm the only one who can satisfy you?" Kaiba huffed, thrusting with a quickened pace. "All you had to do was ask." Somehow, he was still able to give that arrogant smirk.
"Then please, satisfy me!" Jounouchi cried, his resistance almost dead.
Kaiba grabbed Jounouchi's cock and stroked it, his pace becoming irregular as he got closer to his own climax. Jounouchi could not hold back; he released his sperm all over Kaiba's hand. Feeling the Jounouchi's walls tighten around him, Kaiba pumped a few more times before he allowed himself to fill Jounouchi with his liquid. Content, Kaiba slowly pulled out of Jounouchi and collapsed onto the bed.
"So," Kaiba panted, tired from what he had just done, "did you get what you wanted?"
"Yes." The soft reply had a hint of hesitation, as if Jounouchi expected something inevitable to happen.
Kaiba smiled and pulled Jounouchi to him. "Don't worry, I don't want you to leave anymore.
Jounouchi felt a burst of happiness inside him. Perhaps, perhaps…
"I want to do this again in the morning," Kaiba added, almost as an afterthought.
Jounouchi's joy faltered. Still, it did not disappear. He felt, no matter how slim, that he had a chance. Besides, he wanted to be on top next time. Payback is a bitch.
*** That's all. Reviews are greatly appreciated. Remember the Golden Rule of Fanfiction writing; you read and review my fic, I do the same for you! (Okay, the actual Golden Rule is "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you," but you get the point. ^__^) ***