Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ mahado ❯ snatched away pt.1 ( Chapter 4 )

What's up guys I'm trying to make chapters as much as possible cause # 1 I'm bored,# 2 I'm trying to see if my writing skills are good cause I'm making a manga book right now and I want to see peoples what people think so please review ><

 

*In the market place*

Atem was spoiling mana with stuff she wanted while chira and mahado spied on them…. “Want this mana” atem offered…” sure” mana said gratefully as atem bought her this gold, red, and slightly blue necklace…

 

Chira continued to spy but mahado just looked like he wanted to go home. Then suddenly atem was moving closer to mana. Looked like there faces were about to touch but it startled mana and she fell which made atem do the same. So atem was on top of mana but the moment didn't last long cause they know over one of the tents.. and that was the tent that they were selling peaces and the peaches were ruined!

 

“YOU….. PAY FOR THIS!!!!! The person that was selling those said so loud it was like an earthquake. Which made mana and atem shake at the anger but atem was forced to pay for all the peaches he and mana destroyed. And he had just enough but now he was broke. On the other hand chira thought that her brother tried to kiss the girl!

 

“Mahado lets go!” chira said as she grabbed him and quickly went to the palace. “Daddy!” chira screamed as she entered the palace. While mahado kinda knew what was coming but didn't do anything. Aki on the other hand was in the thrown room discussing with persists about making his tome which was making him sick and made him think “I'm not dead yet”

 

Till chira came running into the room with mahado. ”what's the meaning of this!” aki said kinda startled that they ran in that quickly. Chira let go of mahado and approached the thrown and whispered everything that happended to aki. When aki heard this he told chira and mahado to get him back here right now. Which they agreed and went to atem.

 

*Meanwhile*

Atem and mana in the Nile trying to get the peach juice off them which was getting sticky because of the sun. mana was still trying to get over the shock while was thinking to himself that his an idiot.” Atem” mana said nervously. “Yes mana” atem answered thinking his gonna get now. “Why you try to kiss me” mana said still pretty nervous.

 

Atem was terrified and was thinking of a lie till he thought he should try telling the truth “I like” atem started to say till chira and mahado walked by. “Atem daddy wants to see you!” chira said in your so busted tone. While atem was so mad and yet releaved. “Ok” atem said sounding annoyed and compeletly forgetting mana was there so he walked away.

 

Which gave chira a perfect opportunity to ask questions.”are you and atem going out” chira said making mana uneasy. “No” mana said getting a bad feeling. But then chira suddenly had all the information she needed by the look on mana's face so she changed the subject and started to talk about other things which made mana happy.

 

While the girls were talking and starting to become friends mahado took out his wand and praticed spells.which made mana turn her attention to him.your a magician mana said getting excited. “Um…..yeah” mahado said getting confused. “I'm a magician too!” she said as she got her wand. “Could you teach me?” mana said really wanting to learn… “well I really don't know how” mahado said getting bad images of how he learned.

 

“Oh pretty please I'll be a good student please!” mana pleaded. “Um……ok” mahado said thinking what has he gotten himself into as she hugged and called him master which made mahado uneasy “my names mahado” he said not liking to be called master. “Master mahado” mana said still energetic. At least she said name mahado thought they started there lesson.

 

 

*at the palace*

Aki was scolding atem for what chira told him while atem was compeletly ignoring him because he didn't think he did anything wrong with drove aki nuts. “Pay attention to me” aki said not sounding to happy. If chira said all that do you have any proof atem said ready to kill chira. “Um……no” aki said sounding like an idiot… so it was settled with much confusing so they just decided to drop it. But then aki thought if chira was telling the truth so atem was grounded for the rest of the day so atem was pissed!

 

 

*Back at the Nile*

Mana and mahado were practicing magic together while chira watched in amazement of how well he can teach. But then mahado noticed something… someone was watching them…. “Mahado are you ok” chira and mana both said. “Um…yes I just need to check something” mahado said trying not to make them worry. “Well ok” mana and chira said giving him permission to go

 

 

Mahado looked around to see if anyone was there till he felt someone snatch him away he almost screamed but he mans hand was over his mouth mahado would have fought back but he knocked him out cold taking him to his house.

 

Things are really starting to heat up… tell what ya think please *gives puppy dog eyes*