Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ No Sanity Allowed ❯ Chocolate Oceans and Bunnies ( Chapter 2 )
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By: darkshadow-23 
The cast finds the chocolate ocean, Tea attempts to eat Marik, who turned into a chocolate bunny and Kaiba wets his bed!
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 08.18.2004 | Updated On: 08.18.2004 | Pages: 5 | Words: 2.3K | Visits: 351 | Status: Completed
The cast finds the chocolate ocean, Tea attempts to eat Marik, who turned into a chocolate bunny and Kaiba wets his bed!
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 08.18.2004 | Updated On: 08.18.2004 | Pages: 5 | Words: 2.3K | Visits: 351 | Status: Completed
YAY! It’s the second chapter! ISN’T EVERYONE EXCITED?!?!
Reviewers: *Chirp like crickets because they are to lazy to get crickets*
Reviewers chirp?! *Thinks of chapter idea about chirping reviewers . . .*
Reviewers: -_-; don’t even think about it . . .
Okay then . . . Sorry I didn't update right away. My sister went to the hospital because her small intestines/bowel was having problems, so I forgot all about mediaminer =P Anyways, It’s that time of the year again! REVIEW ANSWERING TIME!
Fanfiction.net Review Replies:
Female-Yami/Yugi: I’ve only been sugar high twice in my life! Once was when my nephew gave me these caramels that made me hyper . . . but I’ve never been hyper before or after even when I eat those caramels! And the second time . . . I forgot when . . . Sugar doesn’t taste that great without it being add to anything ;_; You have a Yami too? I used to too, but they abandoned me . . . I think it’s in my bio . . .
Life’s Light/anime*angel: Everything is convenient! I’m not like you! I don’t have a super intelligent mind that has plots! They just appear and I’m too lazy to explain how -_-; I’m hurting EVERYONE!! But Joey is squishy so he’s more fun to hurt! ^__^
Nimi ‘gain: IS THAT TRUE?!?!?!? Well I doubt it . . . when Yami had his body there are no cameras or showers . . . LIES! ALL LIES!!!!
Dragonlady1220 (AKA Liz16: I have all the chapters but like I’ve said before I’m revising all of them (not completely of course). I lost the original so of course it’s different! The butterfly scene was new because I do remember the original one but that time my friends were bugging the heck out of me and I can’t think straight . . . I blame them, you should too. And it was about the worm not spider! ^__^ I used to read ‘Goosebumps’. If you guys want me to do ‘Reviewers Island’ again I can do it on a separate fic if you like . . . Just make the other reviewers in this story tell me to that :P I’VE ALWAYS WANTED A BALD TRISTAN!!!! I don’t know if tapeworms scream or not . . . I DID SAVE A BACKUP COPY OF THE ORIGINAL CHAPTER IN CASE THAT HAPPENED!!! Hence forth, the floppy disk! I also had copies on my hard drive but then a virus wiped everything out and then my floppy messed up, but that was a while ago. The brightest thing is *INSERT BRIGHT THING ON DESKTOP HERE* Yes, I am on neopets, but I hate neopets because they froze my account for saying a cuss word on my guild message board! I’m on my old account that I never use . . . I used to have over 1 million nps . . . SO I HATE NEOPETS! I only go one for these 4 games I like and my guild
Thanks to these people whom I did not answer to because I’m too lazy:
Electrical Flirt
SillyJilly
Ryou Bakura Obsessor (Spell-check says that all 3 parts on your penname isn’t a word! But I added them to my dictionary! MUHAHAHAHHA!)
Paladin Dragon
Amme-star
Mediaminer.org Review Replies:
somethingthatisntalreadyinuse: Hey! Thank's for coming and reviewing ^_^
whatchamacallit: Yeah, there's not much of a setting is there? Thanks for your review!
Random Person Number 3: My Bakura story will be updated soon, don't worry! I'll be putting it up on mediaminer too soon, and re-writing the first 4 chapters ^^
jhoney: Don't worry I'll probably be updating every week =P
It's meeeeee: This is the fourth time, actually! Sad, huh?
Thanks to others who reviewed:
DOOD
michew
SashaJanre
vaporeon13204
JoeyWheeler2004
Disclaimer Guy: I’m back! After getting deleted! I’d like to thank my annoying little sister . . .
Disclaimer Guy’s Annoying Little Sister: *Waves annoyingly like the little sister she is*
Disclaimer Guy: *Five hours later* . . . And my goldfish Bob! Now, darkshadow-23 doesn’t own Yu-Gi-Oh!
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Everyone except Yami: *Holding hands and skipping down a road* we’re off to see the chocolate! The wonderful chocolate in the ocean!
Yami: You people are so twisted *Shudders*
Marik: Cool we’re all holding hands, skipping and singing at the same time! Isn’t that cool?
Everyone except Marik: *Backs away from what seems to be a very freaky like Marik*
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: SHUT UP YOU LITTLE BRAT!
Mokuba: WAAHHHHHHHH! Seto’s being mean!
Tea: THERE’S THE CHOCOLATE OCEAN DOME THINGY!
Yugi: How would you know?
Tea: That sign said so *Points to a sign*
Sign: Welcome to the chocolate ocean dome thingy. NOT part of a government operation. Humans turn into bunnies and other stuff turns into purple ducks.
Yami: So that’s what the guy with no underpants meant!
Joey: Well . . . LET’S GO!
Everyone: *Runs into the dome thingy*
Yugi: *Dives into the ocean*
Tea: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Points at ‘Yugi’*
/)_/)
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c(")(") <-------- Yugi
Serenity: AWWWWWWWW! BUNNIE!
Tristan: Du-ude! That’s totally twisted! Yugi’s a bunny!
Kaiba: I’VE GOT TWO CANDYCANES! YOU HEAR ME GOD? TWO!
Yami: Man that bites. Yugi’s a bunny! That means . . . I’M GOING TO GET TO COOK TONIGHT! ^__^
Everyone except Yami: NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Yami: Are you saying my cooking is bad?!?!
Ryou: IT TASTES LIKE GOAT DUNG! *Hands on hips* Now that’s not a very nice thing to say! *Sniffs* Sorry Ryou!
Everyone except Ryou who is talking to himself and Bakura who is used to it: *Backs away slowly from the insane Ryou*
Yugi: *Hop, hop, hop*
Mokuba: Can we keep him Seto? Can we?
Kaiba: Dang you son of a hot dog!
Everyone except Kaiba: *Backs away from what seems to be a very strange Kaiba*
Ryou: Bond. James Bond.
Serenity: The crap?
Ryou: I can be James Bond can’t I? Yes of course, you can be anything you set your mind too. Thank you for believing in me. No problem.
Bakura: He’s gone nuts again
Ryou: I’m not getting nuts until . . .
Marik: *Jumps into the chocolate ocean* WAHLA! WAHLA!
/)_/)
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c(")(") <-------- Marik
Tea: D’oh!
Mokuba: *Points to Tea* THAT’S COPYRIGHTED INFRINGEMENT!
Tristan: Now we have two bunnies!
Isis: WHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Kaiba: Get out of my house!
Tea: This isn’t your house! It isn’t even a house! It’s a dome you bastard!
Yami: OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED KAIBA!
Kaiba: What?
Yami: Sorry I just needed to say something
Kaiba: Go to Heaven!
Bakura: Sure wouldn’t be seeing you there
Kaiba: Screw you!
Isis: Lookie! A butterfly!
Kaiba: EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *Tries to swallow butterfly to obtain super butterflying-ness*
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("')_("') ("')_("')
Ryou: Oh bloody hell . . .
Tea: Marik must die
Serenity: Marik’s a bunny now!
Tea: Great we can have some chocolate Marik . . .!
Marik: *Hop, Hop*
Everyone: *Backs away from Tea*
Tea: Now which one is Marik?
Serenity: I believe it is the one with the tattoo ‘Marik Rocks!!’ on his butt
Tristan: You’re gonna EAT him? Gross dude!
Tea: *Puts her hand on his shoulder* don’t worry you don’t have to watch
Tristan: Ew! She’s touching my ‘special part!’
Yami: Awwww man I’m getting cramps!
Everyone except Yami: *Backs away PMSing from Yami*
Yami: What? I’m just having a muscle spasm! I TAKE IT BACK!!!
Ryou: *Wisely* you cannot take back the spoken word . . .
Mokuba: Isn’t that a quote from some dead guy?
Ryou: I see dead people . . . and one of them told me that his master wants cookies . . . I gave him a pretzel but . . . let’s just say I have to find my master some cookies now too . . .
Everyone except Ryou: *Backs away from what seems to be a very possessed Ryou*
Kaiba: Haven’t you said that already? -_-;
Tristan: I know what you mean dude! A leprechaun once told me to burn things so I burned things and then he did a jig- I like popsicles =)
Klondike People: *Singing* what would you do for a Klondike bar?
Kaiba: SHUT UP! I’m trying to think!
Tea: That’s going to take a while
Yugi: *Rolls eyes*
Serenity: Awwwwwwww! Isn’t that cute! *hugs Yugi*
Marik: *Rolls eyes and hops up and down*
Serenity: Go to hell you bastard! *Turns into Jackie Chan and kicks Marik into the chocolate ocean* *Turns back into Serenity*
Tristan: Dude! That was sweet!
Joey: Sweet? Like chocolate?
Kaiba: OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED MARIK! COOL!
Klondike People: *Dances the Kaiba Dance* =)
Yugi: :P
Kaiba: Damn! Now how am I supposed to poke Marik with my special pointy stick? =(
Yami: I blame you Serenity!
Serenity: Say what now?
Tea: YOU BASTARD!! It was MY destiny to turn into Jackie Chan and kill Marik!
Joey: Things change
Mokuba: Jackie Chan doesn’t kill! He beats people up!
Klondike People: *Singing* what would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Tea: This! *Turns into Jet Lee and kicks ass*
Tristan: Dude that was sweet!
Mokuba: Sweet? Like Chocolate?
Kaiba: Mokuba must die
Joey: Mokuba must die
Tristan: Mokuba must die
Bakura: Mokuba must die
Ryou: Mokuba must die
Yami: Mokuba must die
Mai: Mokuba must die
Tea: Mokuba must die
Serenity: Mokuba must die
Yugi: Mokuba must die
Mokuba: Mokuba must die
*everyone looks at Mokuba*
Mokuba: Oh sorry! Marik’s stupidity must’ve rubbed off on me
Tea: Gross it RUBBED off on you? That’s just sick dude
Tristan: Hey! That’s my line!
Joey: WHALA! WHALA!
Yugi: *Tries to dance the Kaiba Dance*
Kaiba: THERE'S NO KAIBA DANCE DAMMIT!
Ryou: Yeah right and maybe later we can hold hands and skip
Kaiba: We already did that! And boy did it suck!
Tea: HEY! Let’s bottle these chocolate up and sell it on EBay! Then the whole world would be bunnies! THEN WE SHALL THAT OVER THE WORLD! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!
Ryou: Yeah right and maybe later we can hold hands and skip
Kaiba: Stop saying that!
Yami: Awwwwww man Yugi just craped on me!
Tristan: That must bite!
Joey: Awwwwww man Yugi just bit me! I blame you Tristan!
Tristan: EAT MY SHORTS BATMAN! Nananananananaaaaana!
Batman: THAT IS _SO_ MEAN!!!! *Runs away crying*
Isis: YOU MADE BATMAN CRY!!!!!
Tristan: IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Mokuba: Hehe, Tristan had an _accident_!
Tristan: What . . .? HEY! If you are implying that I peed in my pants then you are wrong!
Mokuba: Don’t worry Tristan, Seto does it all the -
*Mystical music fills the air* *Magical voice* It is time again, for a ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’
Kaiba: YOU PROMISED NOT TO TELL YOU LITTLE ASSHOLE!!! *Starts choking Mokuba*
Mokuba: *Is choking*
*Mystical music fills the air* *Magical voice* End of ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’ *End Music, end Voice*
Guy with no underpants: What are you doing here?! Why are you here in the land of The Non Government Conspiracy Chocolate Dome?!?!?!
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*Tries desperately to dance the Kaiba Dance but fails* Does that count as a cliff-hanger?
8 pages AGAIN!!!! And I only did in 30 minutes (non-stop) I cut off some things and added little things . . . like the ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’! I only get ideas while I’m writing something . . . sometimes I think of good ideas but then I forget them when I try to write them out! So I just improvise! I’m good at that! ^__^ I should really learn to write things down . . .
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Reviewers: *Chirp like crickets because they are to lazy to get crickets*
Reviewers chirp?! *Thinks of chapter idea about chirping reviewers . . .*
Reviewers: -_-; don’t even think about it . . .
Okay then . . . Sorry I didn't update right away. My sister went to the hospital because her small intestines/bowel was having problems, so I forgot all about mediaminer =P Anyways, It’s that time of the year again! REVIEW ANSWERING TIME!
Fanfiction.net Review Replies:
Female-Yami/Yugi: I’ve only been sugar high twice in my life! Once was when my nephew gave me these caramels that made me hyper . . . but I’ve never been hyper before or after even when I eat those caramels! And the second time . . . I forgot when . . . Sugar doesn’t taste that great without it being add to anything ;_; You have a Yami too? I used to too, but they abandoned me . . . I think it’s in my bio . . .
Life’s Light/anime*angel: Everything is convenient! I’m not like you! I don’t have a super intelligent mind that has plots! They just appear and I’m too lazy to explain how -_-; I’m hurting EVERYONE!! But Joey is squishy so he’s more fun to hurt! ^__^
Nimi ‘gain: IS THAT TRUE?!?!?!? Well I doubt it . . . when Yami had his body there are no cameras or showers . . . LIES! ALL LIES!!!!
Dragonlady1220 (AKA Liz16: I have all the chapters but like I’ve said before I’m revising all of them (not completely of course). I lost the original so of course it’s different! The butterfly scene was new because I do remember the original one but that time my friends were bugging the heck out of me and I can’t think straight . . . I blame them, you should too. And it was about the worm not spider! ^__^ I used to read ‘Goosebumps’. If you guys want me to do ‘Reviewers Island’ again I can do it on a separate fic if you like . . . Just make the other reviewers in this story tell me to that :P I’VE ALWAYS WANTED A BALD TRISTAN!!!! I don’t know if tapeworms scream or not . . . I DID SAVE A BACKUP COPY OF THE ORIGINAL CHAPTER IN CASE THAT HAPPENED!!! Hence forth, the floppy disk! I also had copies on my hard drive but then a virus wiped everything out and then my floppy messed up, but that was a while ago. The brightest thing is *INSERT BRIGHT THING ON DESKTOP HERE* Yes, I am on neopets, but I hate neopets because they froze my account for saying a cuss word on my guild message board! I’m on my old account that I never use . . . I used to have over 1 million nps . . . SO I HATE NEOPETS! I only go one for these 4 games I like and my guild
Thanks to these people whom I did not answer to because I’m too lazy:
Electrical Flirt
SillyJilly
Ryou Bakura Obsessor (Spell-check says that all 3 parts on your penname isn’t a word! But I added them to my dictionary! MUHAHAHAHHA!)
Paladin Dragon
Amme-star
Mediaminer.org Review Replies:
somethingthatisntalreadyinuse: Hey! Thank's for coming and reviewing ^_^
whatchamacallit: Yeah, there's not much of a setting is there? Thanks for your review!
Random Person Number 3: My Bakura story will be updated soon, don't worry! I'll be putting it up on mediaminer too soon, and re-writing the first 4 chapters ^^
jhoney: Don't worry I'll probably be updating every week =P
It's meeeeee: This is the fourth time, actually! Sad, huh?
Thanks to others who reviewed:
DOOD
michew
SashaJanre
vaporeon13204
JoeyWheeler2004
Disclaimer Guy: I’m back! After getting deleted! I’d like to thank my annoying little sister . . .
Disclaimer Guy’s Annoying Little Sister: *Waves annoyingly like the little sister she is*
Disclaimer Guy: *Five hours later* . . . And my goldfish Bob! Now, darkshadow-23 doesn’t own Yu-Gi-Oh!
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Everyone except Yami: *Holding hands and skipping down a road* we’re off to see the chocolate! The wonderful chocolate in the ocean!
Yami: You people are so twisted *Shudders*
Marik: Cool we’re all holding hands, skipping and singing at the same time! Isn’t that cool?
Everyone except Marik: *Backs away from what seems to be a very freaky like Marik*
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: No.
Mokuba: Are we there yet?
Kaiba: SHUT UP YOU LITTLE BRAT!
Mokuba: WAAHHHHHHHH! Seto’s being mean!
Tea: THERE’S THE CHOCOLATE OCEAN DOME THINGY!
Yugi: How would you know?
Tea: That sign said so *Points to a sign*
Sign: Welcome to the chocolate ocean dome thingy. NOT part of a government operation. Humans turn into bunnies and other stuff turns into purple ducks.
Yami: So that’s what the guy with no underpants meant!
Joey: Well . . . LET’S GO!
Everyone: *Runs into the dome thingy*
Yugi: *Dives into the ocean*
Tea: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Points at ‘Yugi’*
/)_/)
( ._. )
c(")(") <-------- Yugi
Serenity: AWWWWWWWW! BUNNIE!
Tristan: Du-ude! That’s totally twisted! Yugi’s a bunny!
Kaiba: I’VE GOT TWO CANDYCANES! YOU HEAR ME GOD? TWO!
Yami: Man that bites. Yugi’s a bunny! That means . . . I’M GOING TO GET TO COOK TONIGHT! ^__^
Everyone except Yami: NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Yami: Are you saying my cooking is bad?!?!
Ryou: IT TASTES LIKE GOAT DUNG! *Hands on hips* Now that’s not a very nice thing to say! *Sniffs* Sorry Ryou!
Everyone except Ryou who is talking to himself and Bakura who is used to it: *Backs away slowly from the insane Ryou*
Yugi: *Hop, hop, hop*
Mokuba: Can we keep him Seto? Can we?
Kaiba: Dang you son of a hot dog!
Everyone except Kaiba: *Backs away from what seems to be a very strange Kaiba*
Ryou: Bond. James Bond.
Serenity: The crap?
Ryou: I can be James Bond can’t I? Yes of course, you can be anything you set your mind too. Thank you for believing in me. No problem.
Bakura: He’s gone nuts again
Ryou: I’m not getting nuts until . . .
Marik: *Jumps into the chocolate ocean* WAHLA! WAHLA!
/)_/)
( ._. )
c(")(") <-------- Marik
Tea: D’oh!
Mokuba: *Points to Tea* THAT’S COPYRIGHTED INFRINGEMENT!
Tristan: Now we have two bunnies!
Isis: WHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Kaiba: Get out of my house!
Tea: This isn’t your house! It isn’t even a house! It’s a dome you bastard!
Yami: OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED KAIBA!
Kaiba: What?
Yami: Sorry I just needed to say something
Kaiba: Go to Heaven!
Bakura: Sure wouldn’t be seeing you there
Kaiba: Screw you!
Isis: Lookie! A butterfly!
Kaiba: EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *Tries to swallow butterfly to obtain super butterflying-ness*
(\,,,/) ? (\ , /)
( º_º) (º_º )
("')_("') ("')_("')
Ryou: Oh bloody hell . . .
Tea: Marik must die
Serenity: Marik’s a bunny now!
Tea: Great we can have some chocolate Marik . . .!
Marik: *Hop, Hop*
Everyone: *Backs away from Tea*
Tea: Now which one is Marik?
Serenity: I believe it is the one with the tattoo ‘Marik Rocks!!’ on his butt
Tristan: You’re gonna EAT him? Gross dude!
Tea: *Puts her hand on his shoulder* don’t worry you don’t have to watch
Tristan: Ew! She’s touching my ‘special part!’
Yami: Awwww man I’m getting cramps!
Everyone except Yami: *Backs away PMSing from Yami*
Yami: What? I’m just having a muscle spasm! I TAKE IT BACK!!!
Ryou: *Wisely* you cannot take back the spoken word . . .
Mokuba: Isn’t that a quote from some dead guy?
Ryou: I see dead people . . . and one of them told me that his master wants cookies . . . I gave him a pretzel but . . . let’s just say I have to find my master some cookies now too . . .
Everyone except Ryou: *Backs away from what seems to be a very possessed Ryou*
Kaiba: Haven’t you said that already? -_-;
Tristan: I know what you mean dude! A leprechaun once told me to burn things so I burned things and then he did a jig- I like popsicles =)
Klondike People: *Singing* what would you do for a Klondike bar?
Kaiba: SHUT UP! I’m trying to think!
Tea: That’s going to take a while
Yugi: *Rolls eyes*
Serenity: Awwwwwwww! Isn’t that cute! *hugs Yugi*
Marik: *Rolls eyes and hops up and down*
Serenity: Go to hell you bastard! *Turns into Jackie Chan and kicks Marik into the chocolate ocean* *Turns back into Serenity*
Tristan: Dude! That was sweet!
Joey: Sweet? Like chocolate?
Kaiba: OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED MARIK! COOL!
Klondike People: *Dances the Kaiba Dance* =)
Yugi: :P
Kaiba: Damn! Now how am I supposed to poke Marik with my special pointy stick? =(
Yami: I blame you Serenity!
Serenity: Say what now?
Tea: YOU BASTARD!! It was MY destiny to turn into Jackie Chan and kill Marik!
Joey: Things change
Mokuba: Jackie Chan doesn’t kill! He beats people up!
Klondike People: *Singing* what would you do for a Klondike Bar?
Tea: This! *Turns into Jet Lee and kicks ass*
Tristan: Dude that was sweet!
Mokuba: Sweet? Like Chocolate?
Kaiba: Mokuba must die
Joey: Mokuba must die
Tristan: Mokuba must die
Bakura: Mokuba must die
Ryou: Mokuba must die
Yami: Mokuba must die
Mai: Mokuba must die
Tea: Mokuba must die
Serenity: Mokuba must die
Yugi: Mokuba must die
Mokuba: Mokuba must die
*everyone looks at Mokuba*
Mokuba: Oh sorry! Marik’s stupidity must’ve rubbed off on me
Tea: Gross it RUBBED off on you? That’s just sick dude
Tristan: Hey! That’s my line!
Joey: WHALA! WHALA!
Yugi: *Tries to dance the Kaiba Dance*
Kaiba: THERE'S NO KAIBA DANCE DAMMIT!
Ryou: Yeah right and maybe later we can hold hands and skip
Kaiba: We already did that! And boy did it suck!
Tea: HEY! Let’s bottle these chocolate up and sell it on EBay! Then the whole world would be bunnies! THEN WE SHALL THAT OVER THE WORLD! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!
Ryou: Yeah right and maybe later we can hold hands and skip
Kaiba: Stop saying that!
Yami: Awwwwww man Yugi just craped on me!
Tristan: That must bite!
Joey: Awwwwww man Yugi just bit me! I blame you Tristan!
Tristan: EAT MY SHORTS BATMAN! Nananananananaaaaana!
Batman: THAT IS _SO_ MEAN!!!! *Runs away crying*
Isis: YOU MADE BATMAN CRY!!!!!
Tristan: IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!
Mokuba: Hehe, Tristan had an _accident_!
Tristan: What . . .? HEY! If you are implying that I peed in my pants then you are wrong!
Mokuba: Don’t worry Tristan, Seto does it all the -
*Mystical music fills the air* *Magical voice* It is time again, for a ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’
Kaiba: YOU PROMISED NOT TO TELL YOU LITTLE ASSHOLE!!! *Starts choking Mokuba*
Mokuba: *Is choking*
*Mystical music fills the air* *Magical voice* End of ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’ *End Music, end Voice*
Guy with no underpants: What are you doing here?! Why are you here in the land of The Non Government Conspiracy Chocolate Dome?!?!?!
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*Tries desperately to dance the Kaiba Dance but fails* Does that count as a cliff-hanger?
8 pages AGAIN!!!! And I only did in 30 minutes (non-stop) I cut off some things and added little things . . . like the ‘Kaiba Brothers’ Moment’! I only get ideas while I’m writing something . . . sometimes I think of good ideas but then I forget them when I try to write them out! So I just improvise! I’m good at that! ^__^ I should really learn to write things down . . .
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