Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Tears of Betrayal ❯ The Chosen Ones ( Chapter 1 )
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By: Yami-Jen 
This is just the beginning....
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 01.14.2003 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.4K | Visits: 1.7K | Status: Completed
This is just the beginning....
Anime/Manga: Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 01.14.2003 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.4K | Visits: 1.7K | Status: Completed
Tears of Betrayal
By: Yami-Jen
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A/N: You probably recognize this story....I was deleted from ff.net the day I posted the last chappie, and someone got into my account and deleted this on mm.org....so I'm starting anew! I have changed many things (cause I think my writing style has improved since I first wrote this) and fixed a lot of the previous typos...-_-; So please R&R!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Yugioh. Trust me, if I did there would be no Anzu, better storylines and TONS of yaoi lemony freshness! ^_^
Warnings: Yaoi (guy on guy action), incestuous elements, rape-ish elements, m/m/f, possible lemons, and tons of OOC so if you don't like that, leave now! Flames will just give me a good laugh!
STORY NOTES! PLEASE READ:
This takes place in ancient Egypt and I changed some things around: Bakura (Yami Bakura but here he'll be known as just Bakura) isn't a tomb robber, he's chief advisor to the Pharaoh, Seto is the high priest, Yami is still the pharaoh, and all other important characters (Ryou, Yugi, Jou, etc.) from the show are peasants.
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Chapter One ~ The Chosen Ones ~
5,000 years ago in ancient Egypt, in the great temple of the highest of all gods, Ra, the sun god, hundreds of children as young as 6 or 7 to about 17 are lined up. All of them were fearful, huddling down and away from the royal guards walking back and forth in an attempt to keep them in control. Meanwhile, two regal figures were standing apart from all of this. One was tall and dark-haired, with piercing ice-blue eyes, and in his hand was a golden rod with a strange carving of eye. He was Seto, the high priest who resides in this very temple. The other was a bit shorter, with a shock of longish untamed white locks, very strange for this area, and dark, deep brown eyes, with a golden ring hanging from his neck with the same strange markings upon it. He was Bakura, the Pharaoh's chief advisor and trusted friend. Other lesser servants were bustling about, highly agitated, and no wonder for that very day was the 18th birthday of the pharaoh Yami, and as tradition requires, he was to be presented with two pleasure slaves, one male and one female, both of which must be innocent and worthy of the great pharaoh's bed. It was a very daunting task, one that had been worked on for weeks, and still there had been not one worthy one found until now...
Bakura walked up to Seto, excitement evident in his manner, "I have found them! My ring has finally shown me!"
Relief could be heard in his voice as well as seen in the face of Seto, for disappointing their pharaoh could be a very painful experience. "Let me see these two then, and we'll see what I think."
Bakura led the taller boy to two beautiful creatures, who as he neared, the spikes of his ring began to point at. Seto gasped as he beheld the children, for gorgeous is the only word that he could think of to describe them, even in their disheveled state. The boy and girl, obviously brother and sister, seeing their similar features, were both sun-darkened with hair that was naturally dark, but the boy's was bleached blond by the hot Egyptian sun. His eyes were an unusual shade of lavender and he had markings under them. He appeared to be in his mid to late teens and very unhappy with the current situation as he glared threateningly at the two high officials and pulled his sister closer to himself protectively. She was equally exotic with her long dark hair messily thrown over her face and eyes, as icy blue as Seto's. She appeared to be about the same age as her brother and shaped exquisitely with beautiful curves barely covered by her worn clothes. They were both perfect, and even more perfect together, incredibly sensual and intoxicating to look upon. Seto could feel himself hardening already. He broke away from the vision for a moment to nod his approval at Bakura, who then went to instruct the guards to remove the remaining children. Seto knelt in front of the chosen two as thoughts of disregarding his pharaoh and taking these two for himself crossed his mind, 'No not yet at least'
He chuckled at the thought. Coming back to reality, he brought his attention back to the boy and girl and spoke to them, softy, "You have been chosen by the gods to be the personal pleasure servants to the great pharaoh Yami."
The girl quivered only more and the boy scowled at Seto, "My sister and I shall be no Ra-damned whores to the idiot pharaoh!"
Seto chuckled inwardly at the boy's words, but he couldn't allow such insolence. He struck the boy, leaving a red mark on his previously unmarred face and causing his sister to cry out. "Do not speak that way of the pharaoh to his high priest! Besides, you have no say in the matter. If you don't comply, you and your sister shall die."
Seto could see the fear in both the children's eyes and he grinned evilly. "You're very lucky though. If you were but a normal slave, I'd take you to my chambers and punish you myself."
With that, Seto rose and left, after ordering a guard to bring the two to the palace to be cleaned up and prepared for the pharaoh. They were brutally seized and taken to the palace. A maidservant was brought to ready them, but the boy put up such a fight, thrashing about, refusing to undress, and screaming obscenities about the pharaoh, the guards took him to the dungeons to teach him some obedience, and eventually be brought to the pharaoh, or if he refused he'd be executed.
Either way, the girl was alone for now. Her tattered peasant clothes were removed and she was led to a hot fragrant bath. Gratefully, she sunk down slowly and allowed herself to be cleansed, her hair untangled. When she stepped out a while later, her skin positively glowed. She was dressed in a rather tight-fitting gauze robe, which revealed all of her beautiful body and her hair was brushed out. Her upper arms, neck, ankles, and wrists were adorned with gold and her face was painted, leaving her looking like a sensual vision, well a very frightened vision. She was visibly shaking and the loss of her brother left her even more anxious than before. The maid was a kindly woman, who actually felt sorry for her, and she'd tried to help by telling her what to do, how to behave, but the girl wasn't listening to a word that was said, for she was terrified of the Pharaoh Yami, known throughout his kingdom as being evil and cruel. Even his name had come to mean darkness to his people. She believed, like any other in her place would have, that he was going to violently steal her virginity and use her daily, leaving her his broken whore. And what of her brother? If he wasn't killed the same would happen to him, only worse. He'd be left bloody and in horrible pain. A tear slipped from her eye. What could she do?
No sooner had she thought that, a pair of guards arrived and roughly grabbed her by her arms, dragging her down the halls at their quick pace. When they reached the pharaoh's chambers she was thrown inside and instructed to kneel submissively on the bed and wait. They left, locking the doors and leaving the girl alone for the first time. She stood and made her way to the bed and bowed her head. She'd rather die than face this man.
Meanwhile, in the dungeons, her brother fared no better. His arms were chained to a wall, only after being told that if he behaved himself, he'd join his sister, but if not they'd be forced to use painful methods to get him to submit. He bowed his head. He didn't want to give in but at the same time he couldn't bear the thought of leaving his sister all alone with the cruel pharaoh. 'Oh Ra, why does this have to happen to me?'
He saw flashes of his family and friends, 'Ryou...'
He would never see any of them again just because he was beautiful. Lavender eyes closed. 'I will save us both my sister...' They reopened with determination.
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A/N: Yeah....Please review and I'll continue posting this! Thanks! ^_^
By: Yami-Jen
*************************************
A/N: You probably recognize this story....I was deleted from ff.net the day I posted the last chappie, and someone got into my account and deleted this on mm.org....so I'm starting anew! I have changed many things (cause I think my writing style has improved since I first wrote this) and fixed a lot of the previous typos...-_-; So please R&R!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Yugioh. Trust me, if I did there would be no Anzu, better storylines and TONS of yaoi lemony freshness! ^_^
Warnings: Yaoi (guy on guy action), incestuous elements, rape-ish elements, m/m/f, possible lemons, and tons of OOC so if you don't like that, leave now! Flames will just give me a good laugh!
STORY NOTES! PLEASE READ:
This takes place in ancient Egypt and I changed some things around: Bakura (Yami Bakura but here he'll be known as just Bakura) isn't a tomb robber, he's chief advisor to the Pharaoh, Seto is the high priest, Yami is still the pharaoh, and all other important characters (Ryou, Yugi, Jou, etc.) from the show are peasants.
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Chapter One ~ The Chosen Ones ~
5,000 years ago in ancient Egypt, in the great temple of the highest of all gods, Ra, the sun god, hundreds of children as young as 6 or 7 to about 17 are lined up. All of them were fearful, huddling down and away from the royal guards walking back and forth in an attempt to keep them in control. Meanwhile, two regal figures were standing apart from all of this. One was tall and dark-haired, with piercing ice-blue eyes, and in his hand was a golden rod with a strange carving of eye. He was Seto, the high priest who resides in this very temple. The other was a bit shorter, with a shock of longish untamed white locks, very strange for this area, and dark, deep brown eyes, with a golden ring hanging from his neck with the same strange markings upon it. He was Bakura, the Pharaoh's chief advisor and trusted friend. Other lesser servants were bustling about, highly agitated, and no wonder for that very day was the 18th birthday of the pharaoh Yami, and as tradition requires, he was to be presented with two pleasure slaves, one male and one female, both of which must be innocent and worthy of the great pharaoh's bed. It was a very daunting task, one that had been worked on for weeks, and still there had been not one worthy one found until now...
Bakura walked up to Seto, excitement evident in his manner, "I have found them! My ring has finally shown me!"
Relief could be heard in his voice as well as seen in the face of Seto, for disappointing their pharaoh could be a very painful experience. "Let me see these two then, and we'll see what I think."
Bakura led the taller boy to two beautiful creatures, who as he neared, the spikes of his ring began to point at. Seto gasped as he beheld the children, for gorgeous is the only word that he could think of to describe them, even in their disheveled state. The boy and girl, obviously brother and sister, seeing their similar features, were both sun-darkened with hair that was naturally dark, but the boy's was bleached blond by the hot Egyptian sun. His eyes were an unusual shade of lavender and he had markings under them. He appeared to be in his mid to late teens and very unhappy with the current situation as he glared threateningly at the two high officials and pulled his sister closer to himself protectively. She was equally exotic with her long dark hair messily thrown over her face and eyes, as icy blue as Seto's. She appeared to be about the same age as her brother and shaped exquisitely with beautiful curves barely covered by her worn clothes. They were both perfect, and even more perfect together, incredibly sensual and intoxicating to look upon. Seto could feel himself hardening already. He broke away from the vision for a moment to nod his approval at Bakura, who then went to instruct the guards to remove the remaining children. Seto knelt in front of the chosen two as thoughts of disregarding his pharaoh and taking these two for himself crossed his mind, 'No not yet at least'
He chuckled at the thought. Coming back to reality, he brought his attention back to the boy and girl and spoke to them, softy, "You have been chosen by the gods to be the personal pleasure servants to the great pharaoh Yami."
The girl quivered only more and the boy scowled at Seto, "My sister and I shall be no Ra-damned whores to the idiot pharaoh!"
Seto chuckled inwardly at the boy's words, but he couldn't allow such insolence. He struck the boy, leaving a red mark on his previously unmarred face and causing his sister to cry out. "Do not speak that way of the pharaoh to his high priest! Besides, you have no say in the matter. If you don't comply, you and your sister shall die."
Seto could see the fear in both the children's eyes and he grinned evilly. "You're very lucky though. If you were but a normal slave, I'd take you to my chambers and punish you myself."
With that, Seto rose and left, after ordering a guard to bring the two to the palace to be cleaned up and prepared for the pharaoh. They were brutally seized and taken to the palace. A maidservant was brought to ready them, but the boy put up such a fight, thrashing about, refusing to undress, and screaming obscenities about the pharaoh, the guards took him to the dungeons to teach him some obedience, and eventually be brought to the pharaoh, or if he refused he'd be executed.
Either way, the girl was alone for now. Her tattered peasant clothes were removed and she was led to a hot fragrant bath. Gratefully, she sunk down slowly and allowed herself to be cleansed, her hair untangled. When she stepped out a while later, her skin positively glowed. She was dressed in a rather tight-fitting gauze robe, which revealed all of her beautiful body and her hair was brushed out. Her upper arms, neck, ankles, and wrists were adorned with gold and her face was painted, leaving her looking like a sensual vision, well a very frightened vision. She was visibly shaking and the loss of her brother left her even more anxious than before. The maid was a kindly woman, who actually felt sorry for her, and she'd tried to help by telling her what to do, how to behave, but the girl wasn't listening to a word that was said, for she was terrified of the Pharaoh Yami, known throughout his kingdom as being evil and cruel. Even his name had come to mean darkness to his people. She believed, like any other in her place would have, that he was going to violently steal her virginity and use her daily, leaving her his broken whore. And what of her brother? If he wasn't killed the same would happen to him, only worse. He'd be left bloody and in horrible pain. A tear slipped from her eye. What could she do?
No sooner had she thought that, a pair of guards arrived and roughly grabbed her by her arms, dragging her down the halls at their quick pace. When they reached the pharaoh's chambers she was thrown inside and instructed to kneel submissively on the bed and wait. They left, locking the doors and leaving the girl alone for the first time. She stood and made her way to the bed and bowed her head. She'd rather die than face this man.
Meanwhile, in the dungeons, her brother fared no better. His arms were chained to a wall, only after being told that if he behaved himself, he'd join his sister, but if not they'd be forced to use painful methods to get him to submit. He bowed his head. He didn't want to give in but at the same time he couldn't bear the thought of leaving his sister all alone with the cruel pharaoh. 'Oh Ra, why does this have to happen to me?'
He saw flashes of his family and friends, 'Ryou...'
He would never see any of them again just because he was beautiful. Lavender eyes closed. 'I will save us both my sister...' They reopened with determination.
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A/N: Yeah....Please review and I'll continue posting this! Thanks! ^_^