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"Don't take the girl" by Tim McGraw

Rewritten by Kitta and Inya

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Master Genkia was taking them fishing

when they where eight years old

Two little girls came through the front gate

holding some fishing poles.

Genkia looked up and smile and said

boys we can't leave them behind

Hiei I know you don't want them to go

but some day you'll change your mind

And Hiei said

Take Yusuke, take Kuwabara, take my best friend Yoko,

Take any body that you want to

as long as they don't go

Take any boy in the world.

Genkia please don't take the girls.

Same old boys, same sweet girls ten years down the road.

They held them tight and kissed their lips in front of the picture show.

Naraku came and pulled a gun

graded her by the arm and said if you do what I tell you to

there want be any harm.

And they said

Take my money,

take my wallet,

take my credit card,

here's some jewel shards that Kagome gave me,

here's the Keys to spirit world,

But Naraku please don't take the girls.

Same old boys, same sweet girls five years down the rode.

There's going to be some little ones,

and they say its time to go.

Doctor says they babies are fine,

but you'll have to leave cause their moms are fading fast,

and they hit their knees, and there they prayed.

Take the very breath you gave me.

take my heart from my chest

I'll gladly take her place if you'll let me

Make this my last request, take me out of this world.

God please don't take the girls.

Master Genkia was taking them fishing,

when they where eight years old.

So what do you think? My friend and me heard this song on the radio and she started adding the words and I wrote them down adding my own to. I hope you laughed at it.

And so you will know the story is taking about Hiei and Kurama.

R&R! Please and Thank You! ^_^

And if I messed anything up tell me. Knowing me I did. ~_~

4/13/04

Okay people have told me what I have messed up. Now I know the original IS different. I tried to stay along the same rhythem, and also I know that the original was about old ONE couple, but well I changed it to two. And for all who might be wondering, yes, I listen to country, I also listen to the pop, rock, a mix between them , old music, and almost any other music out there except for old country, and classic. I don't like to listen to them. And living arounf my family you have to get us to a lot of different kind of music.

Well I hope that cleared some things up so review. PLEASE!!!

And thank you to all the people that did review! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!