Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ A Souls Seduction ❯ Chapter 18. A Return to Normality! ( Chapter 18 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
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A/N I am so sorry for taking so long to update, I have various reasons, excuses and lies for why. Here's three of the best that I chose.
1. It was my computers fault really, I got this new security system put in and it wouldn't let me login on any of the websites. I tried everything from changing my cookie levels, etc, etc. Nothing worked.
2. My muse left me and nothing I did would make it come back, I bribed it with lots of chocolate and finally it caved in and returned to me.
3. I developed a horrible addiction to reading Harry Potter fan-fiction especially Hermione pairings.
But now I'm back………………….. And this chapter is dedicated to Madmiko as her reviews always encourage me greatly.
*`Youko's speech'*,
#`Kurama's speech'#
**`Hiei's speech'**
`Normal thoughts '
Chapter 18. A Return to Normality!
`Run bunny, run bunny, run, run, run. Run as fast as you can.'
Kagome now knew for certain the next time she went shopping not to bring all three of her mates. She promised herself that if she managed to survive with her sanity intact from this outing.
Kagome blamed herself really; it was her own fault she supposed. Kagome just thought it would be nice if she and her newly bonded mates would go out for a while, do some normal every day things, especially as it was such a beautiful day. A bit of shopping or maybe a walk through the park even maybe something to eat at a local café.
`It's too nice of a day to be stuck inside.' , she had thought, at the same time disregarding the other guilty damning thought to the back of the furthest part of her mind. The reason why she really wanted to leave the flat and go outside - i.e. escape the increasing sexual tension which was making her new found lustful hormones go rampant.
She had managed to escape from her three mates as soon as she had recovered from the bonding circle earlier but Kagome knew this was only a temporary reprieve.
From the looks she was getting and feelings through the new bond which she was still adapting too, especially from Hiei who looked like he was on the borderline of pouncing and ravaging her with serious intent.
That was why she had suggested going out for a while. Well actually she had said she was going out by herself, an idea that was immediately vetoed from the others to Kagome's annoyance. As Kurama had said, it still wasn't safe for her yet to be alone, not with the diabolical Takehiko still hiding around and plotting.
So now under the gaze of her three possessive, arrogant, chauvinistic, smug but sexy bastards of mates, Kagome was now checking out some clothes in a store in the local shopping mall.
She was feeling chuffed just to get this far. Everything had been fine as they left to go by foot after parking Yusuke's car nearby. With Kurama flirting with her with a seductive ease only he could pull off, Yusuke occasionally adding his own teasing comments whilst Hiei kept his usual cold self while still been alert to everything else, only now and then adding a “Hnn.”. Which drove her mad sometimes but now was the norm for their small group.
However something had increased dramatically. Before the three of them had been protective but now it had risen to ridiculous heights.
The first incident which alerted Kagome to her mates increased possessiveness was when she had decided to buy some apples of a fruit stall.
It was almost laughable really but she had been more annoyed and embarrassed. For kami's sake the man who served her was as old as her grandfather. But the way the three had acted you would think he was a 20 year old gigolo.
Hiei had even frowned when she had smiled at the old man when she had received her change.
The next incident was when they were within 5 minutes walking distance of the shopping mall. A group of young men walking their direction had called out what they obviously thought was complimentary things to her, which of course had made her blush with embarrassment. Hiei along with Yusuke took an exception to their comments and in a fast blur followed them to exact their punishment on them.
The next thing she heard was several groans, screams mixed along with thuds and punches. When she was allowed to turn around after Kurama loosened his tight grip on her she found not even he had kept out of it as the young and heavily bruised and unconscious men were now dangling in the air from several trees with several vines tightly wrapped around them.
All three of her mates after that incident all had a smug and satisfied attitude coming from them. It was enough to make Kagome tear her hair out in frustration.
As Kagome checked out some skirts, Hiei standing by watched with a frown, not because he felt she was mindlessly shopping for clothing but the type she was currently checking out.
`No way is she wearing that in public.' he thought staring with an increased glare as she looked at a skirt which would barely pass her hips, it even had slits on the side.
Yusuke thoughts were in his typical perverted style as his eyes glazed over in lust as he stared watching Kagome try it against herself while looking in a mirror.
Yusuke's 1 minute day-dream daze theatre
Yusuke walked into the living room to find his delightful mate bending over the black leather couch whilst wearing a silver blue silk skirt which skimmed over her backside barely, along with the delightful skimpy apparel she also had on a matching blue thong, making her firm buttocks even more visible to his eye. With a wide grin Yusuke bounded over before grabbing hold of those succulent hips keeping his delightful miko in her respectful place. Then quickly he unzipped his pants so he could release his monster of a hard-on to pound into his pretty bitch…………
“Yusuke do you like this…”
Yusuke was ripped out of his dream-ville by Kagome's voice as she showed him that same skirt which featured in his dream. He nodded with great enthusiasm making Hiei snort with disgust as the detective's arousal reached his nose. He had also caught the tale end of Yusuke's brief dream as well. Privately he must admit she had looked perfect bent over that couch.
Half an hour later along with several skirts vetoed by Hiei, Kagome had finally found something acceptable to wear.
The group were now seated outside a small café having a break.
*`I can't wait till our mate tries on that pretty jade green two piece bathing suit.'* Youko's lust filled voice filled Kurama's mind at he sipped on his tea.
#`Hmm`#, the one word answer seemed to suit that moment in answer to Youko's fantasy.
Kurama suddenly sharpened his gaze; Kagome's cheeks were going pink and not only that a small wave of her jasmine and vanilla scent mixed with arousal hit his sensitive nose. He followed Kagome's gaze and than smirked with humour as he guessed just what their little miko was thinking of than.
Kagome's mind was going crazy, `The bastard …that is so not fair.' Poor Kagome she was suffering, all because of the innocent actions of one hybrid demon that was eating his favourite food.
`Kami I wonder if he does that as seriously else where.' , with several slow licks Hiei was eating a chocolate ice-cream and making Kagome shudder and squirm on her chair as a pit of warmth tingled her insides. `Thank god he hasn't realised what he's doing to me' thought Kagome.
Unfortunately the gods weren't on her side today as Hiei was aware totally of what he was doing his mate, inside his devil of a conscience was doing an evil grin and a happy dance. Even though her obvious arousal was making him want to grab the girl and take her home and maybe model some of those clothes she had just bought so he could rip them of her and then ravish her till she was screaming herself hoarse with his name.
**'Evil sadistic bastard'**, came from Youko with a pout. **`Why didn't we think of doing that?'**
***
Kagome shuddered as she looked at the bottom step which led to her family's shrine. It wasn't the long walk that was scaring her, no it was what was waiting for her at the top. But she knew she had put it of long enough, it was one of the reasons why she had wanted to come out by herself.
Her mother had phoned and asked her to come around and visit and she knew why too.
It wasn't long before Kagome and her three mates were at the Shrines inner grounds. All three could sense their pretty mate's nerves and the tension practically screamed from her.
As Kagome went ahead with Hiei leading to her old home. Yusuke whispered to Kurama a few paces behind them.
“What's the matter with her?”
“She's probably nervous because now we are all mated and how her mothers going to act.”
“But her mother already knew.”
Kurama sighed as usual the complexities of a woman's mind where lost to the man.
“She's human and still adjusting to a different way of life and moralities in a society that doesn't really condone it. Tell me Yusuke if several years ago before your demon side awakened someone came alone and told you that you would be sharing a girl with two other men, what would you honestly think?”
Several things came to Yusuke's mind and then he realised just what Kurama was hinting at.
“Ohhh.”, was all that come from the now enlightened detective.
“Not only that her grandfather is a priest and I very much doubt he'll be happy, no matter how her mother has accepted it already.”
Hiei was feeling slightly amused by the wave of nervous tension that came from his mate, he wondered if she realised just how tight of a grip she had on her, his hand would of been aching if he was human.
He had of course heard with ease what Yusuke and Kurama were whispering about and also understood the reasons why she was so unsettled not that he cared what her family thought.
The reason why he was amused was how the onna was behaving, it seemed when it came to being before a demons presence she felt no fear but when it came to her family the girl's courage disappeared.
Of course he did have a certain respect for Kagome's mother but for now he wouldn't tease the girl for acting such away.
Kagome whilst walking to family's home hallway had many expectations and dreaded ominous feelings about what would happen on this visit and in hindsight you could forgive her for her slight lapse in memory and was totally innocent of course of the actions of a certain annoying but elderly beloved relative. A certain habit of his that had irritated a certain inu-hanyou for at least 4 years.
Something in which Hiei had gracefully dodged along with Kagome still holding on tightly to him. However the same couldn't be said for Yusuke who had been currently behind him.
“Begone demon!”, suddenly a piece of paper which was dripping a sticky substance came flying in the air and landed on a surprised detectives forehead with a squelch.
“What the FUCK….” yelled Yusuke as honey started to drip down his face.
Kagome groaned with embarrassment as she covered her face wishing she was else where then. Her grandfather looked on in annoyance to see that the demon hadn't been purified.
“Father!” a warm voice but slightly scolding as Kagome's mother came walking out from the kitchen, her brown eyes twinkling in slight amusement.
“Kagome dear why don't you take Yusuke upstairs and clean him up.”
With a small sign Kagome grabbed Yusuke and pulled the detective up stairs with her with him smirking.
“Ha you just want to take my clothes off again.”
Kunloon was watching, her brown eyes deepened in even more amusement as her now bright red daughter dragged Yusuke upstairs, she turned to her other guests or maybe she could call them son-in-laws now. She could sense the bond had been completed with the four.
“Why don't we have some tea, it has just been made.” Not waiting to see if they followed, she walked back of into the kitchen.
The two demons followed on whilst Grandfather snorted in disgust and mutter under his breathe. `Demons, huh, the ancestors would roll in their graves in shock if they knew.' .
Of course it would be in laughter considering that Miroku was one of his ancestors and Sango would be probably blushing and even shouting `Hentai.'
***
Kagome was now standing in her bedroom looking out at the Goshinboku tree waiting for Yusuke to come back from the bathroom, the sutra had been easy to peel off but the same couldn't be said for the honey which was stuck on his face and hair.
She had filled the sink up from him to dunk in his head and wash of the honey quickly and left to find a clean shirt for him as his was currently sticky too. An old white t-shirt of her fathers will do she thought as she left her mothers bedroom, smiling as she heard Yusuke curse her grandfather underneath his breath from the bathroom. Honestly the man swore more than even Inuyasha sometimes.
A small grunt disturbed Kagome's gaze from her favourite tree as she swirled around to see Yusuke standing in her bedroom. He was using a towel on his hair as he roughly dried it.
“Hell I can't believe how much honey the old geezer got on me.”
Kagome's mouth was in a small `O' shape as she took in Yusuke, her cheeks slightly pink as she took in the drool worthy sight before her with wide eyes and small panting breathes. Yusuke was only wearing black tight jeans with a silver buckled belt on and water was dripping down his naked upper body.
Kagome watched closely as small pearls of water slid down his muscular chest, she licked her lips, feeling rather dry at the moment. `Wow, wow, wow….' was all that came to her blurred mind.
Sure she had only been intimate with the man yesterday but seeing him stand there made her really appreciate his body more, `Yummy.'.
Yusuke noticing that Kagome was strangely quiet now and looked up just as his link and mark to Kagome alerted him to her drifting thoughts and rising arousal. He briefly wondered if the other two were aware but that thought left the building as a sadistic idea came to his mind. He hadn't really paid the girl back for the stunt she had done yesterday on him, plus the way she had scampered after their bonding circle also made him set on his plan.
With a small smirk the only clue on his face of his intentions, Yusuke sauntered over closer to his mate to play a little game of tease. Using the towel he had in his hand still he slowly rubbed it in small circles around his chest. The actions were very seductive to Kagome's eyes. She could feel her panties get wet and warm along with a tightening feeling in her chest. Not only that Yusuke's mark on her body was throbbing not in pain though, no the sensations were a lot more pleasurably than that.
Yusuke seeing the way she was getting fired up refrained from yelling in success; instead he bent over her slightly and looked deep into her eyes. He remembered how Keiko had acted when she had watched a romance movie and asked why he didn't ever do it to her; apparently chicks loved the mushy stuff.
To tell the truth he wasn't that comfortable doing it then but with Kagome he did it with a definite pleasure as he took in her eyes swirling in desire from him. It made his body hum with leashed desire for her but he held on with tight will-power. Though his body screamed to take her.
Kagome watched as Yusuke bent down closer, his warm breath tickling her neck and sending shivers down her spine.
“Mmm seems some honey landed on you too, why don`t I clean it off for you.” his voice whispered.
Then his tongue darted out and licked slowly down her cheek to finish at the neck. Then back up he swept with his tongue before moving on to her mouth and sucked ever so gently on her bottom mouth. With one last slide along her mouth with his tongue, Yusuke stood back with a quick movement, grabbed the t-shirt up from her single bed and walked out the room with his usual swagger, his last words echoing from the door.
“That was sweet, I`ll have to get some more for later huh.”
***
Kagome sighed as she reached the last step moving away from her family's Shrine. It hadn't been that bad after all she thought as the tension left her body.
Her Grandfather wasn't happy of course knowing that she was now mated to three demons but he had said he was glad she was alive. He had also mentioned with a ferocious scowl which had even shocked her with its intensity that any of her mates stepped out off line he would purify them to oblivion.
For once she actually believed him as well, she had never seen her grandfather look so determined. Not only that for moment she also felt holy powers similar to Miroku go through the old man before disappearing again which had made her blink for a second.
But after that he seemed to calm down, just murmuring under his breath and then giving her a present of dried demon's liver saying it will give her good luck in her new home which she had promptly give to Buyo who seemed to be having a strange attraction to Hiei's leg till then to her amusement. She didn't know when Buyo had purred louder though. Even after Buyo had finished the demon's liver he went back to Hiei's leg who's scowling face seemed to have no affect on the cat.
Then her mother had started on her favourite subject, Kami she was more embarrassing then grandfather sometimes. She kept going on how she couldn't wait till she held her first of many grandchildren. She had also said she wouldn't mind at all if they had ears and tails like Youko. Kurama had nearly choked on his tea then.
Not only that her mother kept hinting about a wedding ceremony too.
As for herself she had nearly keeled over in shock if it hadn't been for Hiei's quick reflexes at catching her, she would have landed on the floor. He hadn't let go of her after that till they said their goodbyes. Hiei had firmly kept her in his lap and then stared now and then at Yusuke with a smug look. Obviously Yusuke's small game hadn't been un-noticed she thought.
It was what her mother had said that was sending panic signals running around her brain now though. She hadn't even thought about such things until now. Sex education at school definitely hadn't sunk in at school she thought with a small mocking laugh.
What with the curse and raging hormones it had actually been the last thing on her mind; it was only now that it had hit her. What if she had got pregnant, she had had unprotected sex the last three days and she wasn't even on the pill at the moment.
Poor Kagome didn't know this but even if the girl had been on the pill it wouldn't have worked. The demons are known for their virility, he he he…..
Kagome's mind went frantic with worry now and that was something her three mates picked up immediately of course through their marks.
Yusuke was about to say something to her, when his mobile vibrated in his pocket. He bit of a curse and answered it. It was Kuwabara obviously from Yusuke's first words “What do you want baka?” Yusuke drifted behind the group slightly as he talked to him.
Kurama at that moment was having his usual private chat to Youko both worried about their mate, they could pick up the tension along with other things from Kagome but they couldn't actually read her mind, well not just yet, the more intimate they are the more the bond grows.
*`I've never seen a female's emotions change so quick before, even that ningen Keiko wasn't as bad.'* came from an astonished Youko.
#`True she has been rather up and down since we have left the shrine.'#
*`Well then comfort her and ask her what's wrong.' * Youko didn't like that his little miko was so worried and he also didn't like the fact she wasn't confiding in them. The male side of a mating bond was supposed to protect and cherish their mate. He knew it would take a while for her to get more comfortable with them all but he had patience.
**`Baka's!'**
#`Hiei! Do you know what's the matter with her?'#, Kurama had been waiting for the hybrid to speak.
*`Yeah firecracker tell us now!'*, frustration coming from a now tense Youko.
**`Hnn. And you say you understand females.'** Hiei's voice was more amused than anything.
***
It was just after 6 o'clock, the sun was setting and Kagome was in a mild panic to the amusement of Yusuke and Kurama.
Kuwabara had invited them all around to his home, Shizuru had decided to put on a party for him as he had done well in his exams which Yusuke thought was funny that the tall guy had passed, `Fucking unbelievable' , was what he actually thought.
Hiei had gone to Genkai's to make sure Yukina who was coming along with Genkai arrived safely apparently.
Kagome at the moment had several outfits spread across her bed as she looked in despair whilst trying to decide what to wear which was what the other two thought was funny, especially when she kept mumbling about how she had nothing appropriate to wear.
“Hell nothing to wear, what did she just buy this afternoon then, rags?” Yusuke murmured to Kurama as they both watched from her doorway to her room.
Both Yusuke and Youko were also thinking what a shame she had never bought that little silver silk skirt. When Kagome had asked Hiei what he had thought of it, the small fire demon had whispered his answer into the girl's ear making her immediately go bright red and also made her instantly put it back on the rack.
Yusuke, Kurama and Youko wondered what exactly Hiei had said but he had refused to answer them and as for Kagome she was remarkably closed mouth about it.
Actually what Hiei had said to her was this -
“How do I feel about that skirt onna? Do you wish for me to take you right here and now? Well that is what I shall do if you buy it!”
Kagome knew by his serious tone that the demon would so, no matter if she was in a busy department store. Though she did want it so much, Kagome thought it best not to chance it.
“Humph bastard next he will probably want me to dress all covered up like a nun.”
Kagome said to herself as she finally decided on what to wear.
***
The party so far was going well, the atmosphere was chilled out even considering the amount of people piled in Kuwabara's apartment though Kurama was glad it was on the ground floor. As the siblings home also had a small back yard with a small patio set placed there. The night was warm so the back door leading from the kitchen was left open on to it.
Yusuke was in an extremely happy mood what with Botan being at the party too. He just couldn't help teasing Kuwabara who every time he even glanced the pretty grim reapers way went a bright tomato red.
Botan too had a slight pink cast to her face, Shizuru standing near by the girl had a grin on as large as Yusuke's. The similarity in their faces was quite scary.
As the party moved on into the night, so did the noise level increase as well. People steadily getting drunker and drunker to Hiei's annoyance as the smell was appalling to his higher senses. Not only that he was already feeling irritated what some of Kuwabara's college mates, the males he noticed seemed to have zoned on to certain females in the flat.
Mostly Kagome and Yukina he thought with a dislike, fortunately for him Kurama was keeping a closer eye on Kagome so he could watch Yukina. Not that he wasn't alert to his mate what with the small growls coming now and then from his way. Some of the party goers curiously kept looking around for a dog when they heard the noise.
Hiei though couldn't blame the ningen men for looking at his miko as she was to his eyes superior to most of the women at the party. Though he wondered where she had bought that skirt, it was very similar to the one she been perusing earlier that day. Hmm she must have slipped it past him.
Kagome was felt rather happy too at the moment. So used to fighting demons and hunting shards in the past, going to a party was well strange for her. So far she was enjoying it too. She was drinking a nice wine which Kurama had gotten for her from the large selection being held at moment on the Shizuru's kitchen table.
It was giving her a happy glow which she was enjoying so far and it also got rid of the slight anxiety she had been feeling before they came here. She had been talking mostly to Yukina and Genkai, the latter teasing her now and then about Hiei. She had noticed the harsh growls now and then. Kagome smiled, she also noticed the glare she got from him when he noticed her outfit, it was similar to the ones she had got from Yusuke and Kurama though not as strong as Hiei's.
She didn't care, she felt nice to be dressed up for a change, instead been covered in blood and demon guts. The outfit she had on had been chosen with great care and even with the looks she had got from her mates didn't mean she couldn't tell that they didn't like it.
The black tulip mini-skirt which showed of her nicely tanned legs which Yusuke stared at first with lusty grin before he had moved on up with scanning eyes to her pretty red bow camisole top which just showed a hint of her cleavage.
Kurama the gentleman he was had helped her put on her new thin black ankle strapped sandals with a small heel. Though the way he had done had that had brought a pit of warmth in her insides, something she knew he picked on with his small smirk as he kneeled done before her before placing her foot on one knee. It was like Prince Charming with the glass slipper, he had even given her a passionate kiss when he had helped her stand up.
Anyways that had occurred before they had even arrived at Kuwabara's. Hiei she noticed was sitting off to one side in a corner keeping a close eye on Yukina she noticed though now and then she felt his gaze on her, his mark going warm now and then especially if a male other than Yusuke or Kurama got near to her.
She was wondered why Hiei was so careful with Yukina, he always seemed to watching out for the ice-maiden. She had been meaning to ask about it for quite a while now she thought. `Urghhh' she thought, `it's like I'm missing something' , she had a feeling that her spiritual powers would be able to help her.
`Actually' she thought `since I have mated with the three, my power has pretty much gone dormant.' The only thing she was sensitive to at the moment seemed her links through the matings mark she had and it wasn't that dependable yet.
Sometime later when the party was dying down, Kagome found herself talking to Shizuru, Botan and Keiko who had arrived late.
“So I hear congrats is in order then.”, came from a smirking Shizuru.
“Huh!” Botan and Keiko looked on as Kagome blushed even more so when their looks sharpened with a inquisitive intent that made her think she was in for a bad time, god it was like being looked at by Ayumi, Eri and Yuki from school she thought with a slight shiver.
Shizuru interrupted her thoughts with a question she just knew the woman had being dying to say.
“So I've got to ask, who's got the biggest? Inquiring minds want to know?” Shizuru's face was totally straight when she asked whilst her eyes told a different story, they were practically dancing.
“Shizuru…!” Botan gasped out, her face went evener redder than Kagome's.
“So you've finally…?” Keiko couldn't even finish the statement, her mind filled in the answers for her from the obvious state of Kagome's face.
Kagome felt like she could die from the looks she was getting, she was glad for one thing though. Shizuru had asked her when most people had left the party for one thing.
The few hangers on who were left, were either to drunk or out of it to notice anything. Though at the beginning of the party official she was with Kurama but later on Yusuke had been getting more affectionate with her not really caring what other people thought as he got more relaxed from the beer he had been guzzling.
“Yo Kagome are you okay?”
Yusuke came walking over to the group of girls. He had left Kuwabara who had fallen asleep in another room, he had too much drink, he himself was fortunate because of his demon body chemistry, the alcohol didn`t affect him as much. He noticed straight away something was up, what by Kagome and Botan's red faces, Keiko who looked like she had been slapped with paleness and Shizuru who was sniggering.
Kagome was then hugged by a pair of muscular arms as he dragged her closer to him and started to nuzzle her in the neck gently sending a shiver up her spine and a small moan too.
The girls looked on at the display from Yusuke in awe, it was unusual for him to be so sweet in public, Shizuru noticed the slight anger and pain running over Keiko's face, she was hiding it well but it was there. Keiko couldn't help but burst out with something.
“Well you adapted quick to the curse Yusuke. I didn't think you were one for sharing things. Obviously I was wrong.” The snide comment stopping Yusuke as he took his attention from Kagome whose body had gone rigid. He could also feel through his mark that Kagome was upset too.
Before he could answer though, some one else beat him to the punch line.
“Well fortunately for us Kagome accepts us for who we are and as for sharing her. I think we can count our self's lucky to find one such as Kagome. She is a rare jewel amongst humans. I also think you should apologise to Kagome too.”
Kurama's voice was cold and deadly as he came to stand by the women, one hand rested on Yusuke's shoulder to calm him.
Keiko gulped as she realised not only had she angered Yusuke but Kurama as well. She glanced over in one corner trying to hide her gaze in shame as she did so, she found Hiei staring at her. The demon suddenly placed his hand on his sword, the danger intent in his eyes as he looked coldly at her.
“I'm sorry Kagome and Yusuke as well. I was just…”, without finishing Keiko put her head down. Botan looking on quickly grabbed her hand and dragged away into another room, sensing it was safer for everyone that way.
“Shizuru.”
Shizuru looked up at Kurama whose eyes had flickered with gold and also a small secretive smile came on his face too.
“To answer your early question, Kagome of course will vouch for us if you want. Most demons are well endowed and also have extremely good stamina for activities of a certain nature, sometimes lasting up to several days especially when one is in heat. And of course her selection of mates is of the best as well, fire demons are known for their extremely high sexual appetite, I with Youko have access to nearly 1000 years of experience and Yusuke is known for his determination and stamina.”
With that finally note he left the gob smacked and slightly aroused woman and , followed by Yusuke who took Kagome along with him left the room.
“Well I'll be damned, that is one lucky girl.” Shizuru blurted out still shivering from Kurama's seductive voice.
TBC
So was it okay, it took me a while to get back in to it, I think I wrote this chapter about 3 or 4 times, and each time it wasn't right. Oh well hopeful the next chapter will be better.