Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Heart of Ice ❯ Frozen in Horror ( Chapter 3 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
A/N: Do I really have to say it? PLEASE? Can’t I just forget about it this one time? Alright, alright! I don’t own Inuyasha. ::POUT:: Anyways, sorry for not thanking all my reviewers in the last chapter. It took me so long to write the last chapter, and I wanted to update before you guys came at me with pitchforks! ^__^ I can’t believe I got so many reviews! I was eating a cookie (Umm…chocolate fudge brownie) and when I saw the reviews, I started shouting and choked! Just so you all know, these are reviews from both chapter one and two, so if my responses don’t make sense, sorry! Also, mm.org is giving me problems so if your review isn’t included, don’t be offended. I’m having some computer glitches. ‘…’ thoughts “…” speech <…> telepathy ^…^ Yoko
Here are the reviews:
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MichiruAOZOk—Thanks so much for reviewing! I used to never end with a cliffy, but I found cliffies made more people review. -__-;
InuKitsuneMiko—I’m pretty sure this will be a Hiei/Kag, but ya never know. ^__^ They’ll all find out soon that Kagome is far from weak. ^__*
Mandie—Thanks for reviewing!
ice_princess_1185—Thanks for reviewing! Here’s your update! This should be Hiei/Kag, but ya never know! ^__~
inuyasha92689—Thanks for reviewing!
Evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt—Here’s your update! Thankies!
dark moon—Here’s your update!
fox3290—Me like reviews! Probably going to be Hiei/Kag, but…^__^
unimportant—Thanks for the tip and for telling me it’s called Reikai!
Hiei's gurl—It’s probably going to be a Hiei/Kag, but you never know what might happen! Bwahaha! I control the story! Mwahaha! I’ll think about your suggestion about Kags.
Kanna_Fan—This will probably be a Hiei/Kag pairing, but since I’m the author…hehehe. I’m not sure about bringing Shippou back. I’ll think about it. ^__^
ScentOfLavander—It’ll probably be Hiei/Kag. All who disagree…well, :p. I love long reviews! Thanks for your advice!
toasterwoman360—Thanks for telling me that it’s reikai! IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou IloveyouIloveyou! Thankies! ^______^
Kogas Hentai Luver—Naraku was the one who killed Kagome’s family. As for Inuyasha, you’ll just have to find out!
Megan Consoer—Thanks for reviewing! Review again! Here’s another chappy!
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Sesshomaru13—Thanks for reviewing!
Chaoticwisdom—Thanks for reviewing!
Ptbear—Thanks for reviewing! It’s probably a Hiei/Kag.
Anonymous—Thanks! It’s probably going to be a Hiei/Kag.
waterfox96—Yay! Demon-lulu, your back! You have no idea how happy I am that people actually come back to read my other fics! ^__^
Goddess of life and death—Thanks! ^_~
ladyatchika-thanks for reviewing!
Chapter 3: Frozen in Horror
Hiei ran towards Genkai’s house (Gomen ne but I don’t really remember what her house looks like), glancing around to see where Kagome was. It couldn’t have been a coincidence that she ran the second he heard Yukina’s terrified scream through the power of his jagan eye. ‘That ningen must have heard what I did, but how?’ Hiei flew up the steps of the shrine-like building; a few minutes later, Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara appeared behind him, the latter appearing the last with a much larger time gap. Yusuke and Hiei made a move to charge recklessly into the place where strong pulses of evil energy were being emitted.
“Be careful. Do not let down your guard,” Kurama warned. They entered the large doors together, all ready to draw their weapon at the slightest warning.
Hiei’s eyes were narrowed dangerously. He would slaughter anyone who dared to hurt his sister.
Yusuke readied his spirit gun. Sure Grandma was annoying and bossy but she was his teacher, and even though he would never admit it, he loved her like he would a grandma.
‘Yukina! I’ll save you!’ (Guess who this is. C’mon, ya hafta know.)
Kagome ran from the stunned boys the moment she heard Yukina’s subconscious plea for help. She ran at her top speed (or is it) to Genkai’s and flew through the doors. The room was a mess. One wall had been blown away by some force; the entire room looked like a tornado had passed though. Kagome glanced around, spreading her senses. A flicker of worry danced in her eyes before her usual mask returned. A few shimmering jewels caught her eye. She recognized them, both from the aura and from the appearance, as Yukina’s tear gems. Kagome’s heart stilled for a moment when she saw blood. Not enough to signify death, but enough to make her worry more. She picked up movement at the edge of her senses from two different locations. As she looked toward the entrance, she saw Hiei and his friends enter. From deeper in the house, Yukina and Genkai appeared.
Kagome moved toward the pair, ignoring the four boys for the moment. She could feel the anger and concern rolling off of Hiei and worry from the others. “Yukina, are you okay? Genkai?” Kagome now stood in front of Yukina.
Yukina gazed at Kagome with a pale face. “I’m fine. Just a little cut.” Yukina replied quietly.
“You know that’s not a ‘little cut’ Yukina. Genkai wouldn’t be supporting you if it were. Come here.” Hiei started forward, not trusting this girl but was stopped by a stern look from Genkai. Kagome sat on the ground and drew Yukina close. Everyone could see the blood soaking the front of her yukata as well as the strange angle her arm was twisted. “Sleep Yukina,” Kagome whispered as she gently laid a hand on her forehead.
Upon hearing these words, Hiei rushed forward with his katana drawn, only to come in contact with a barrier. “Hn. Get away from her.”
Kagome raised her head to glance at him and then ignored him. “Genkai, could you tell the apparition to cease his attempts to beak my barrier? If he doesn’t, I won’t be responsible for his death.” Genkai nodded and stepped from the barrier.
“Yusuke. Tell your partner to stop. There is no way he can break this miko’s barrier.” Hiei stopped abruptly.
“Genkai-sama, may I ask how it is that she’s a miko? Did they not perish?”
“Kurama. Kagome’s story is her own to tell.”
They watched as a soft, pink glow surrounded first the miko and then the ice apparition. The blood around Yukina seemed to return to her, and her arm relocated itself. Yukina’s eyes opened as the pink light faded from around the two girls. “Thanks Kagome,” Yukina said as she slowly sat up. Although Yukina could heal others, she didn’t have the power to heal herself. Kagome let her barrier go and tensed.
She leapt up, one hand catching the rafters at the top of the building, just as a paralyzing smoke seeped into the room. Before Kagome could voice a word of caution to the people below her, they were ensnared in the strange mist. (It’s my fic, so the smoke stays low.) As the miasma reached each person, they froze in place, seeing but unmoving. An ominous chuckle rang through the room.
A figure appeared at the entrance. A flutter of wind brought his wavy, black hair into view. The demon stepped forward, and Yukina’s eyes took on a look of fear. This was the demon who attacked her and Genkai. The one with the sinister, red eyes. The one who looked like Yusuke until he changed shape all of a sudden.
The one that Genkai had been unable to beat.
The demon raised his head and gazed at the girl now sitting on the rafters.
“So we finally meet. Prepare to die as you should have long ago.”
Kagome growled and placed a barrier around herself before dropping smoothly, too smoothly for a human, to the ground. The miasma around her parted like the red sea as she made her way toward the evil youkai. “Prepare to die bastard. For hurting my friends.” Hiei was in a position where he could see the girl’s face. What he saw flicker beneath that cold mask was unbridled hatred, rage, need for revenge, and…grief. These emotions soon vanished from her face as her voice stayed ever steady and emotionless.
“Die miko.” A tentacle shot from the demon toward Kagome. The others looked on, unable to do a thing.
A/N: Sorry guys, but you’ll have to find out what Kagome is in a later chapter. I was going to put it in this chapter, but I wanted to end with this. Who is that demon Kagome was fighting? Can you guess? Hehehe. Who indeed. A character from the past? One from the future? Who? Oh right, also, next chapter, some Kagome/Hiei fluff. ^__^ Sorry if this chapter’s a bit short.
Here are the reviews:
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MichiruAOZOk—Thanks so much for reviewing! I used to never end with a cliffy, but I found cliffies made more people review. -__-;
InuKitsuneMiko—I’m pretty sure this will be a Hiei/Kag, but ya never know. ^__^ They’ll all find out soon that Kagome is far from weak. ^__*
Mandie—Thanks for reviewing!
ice_princess_1185—Thanks for reviewing! Here’s your update! This should be Hiei/Kag, but ya never know! ^__~
inuyasha92689—Thanks for reviewing!
Evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt—Here’s your update! Thankies!
dark moon—Here’s your update!
fox3290—Me like reviews! Probably going to be Hiei/Kag, but…^__^
unimportant—Thanks for the tip and for telling me it’s called Reikai!
Hiei's gurl—It’s probably going to be a Hiei/Kag, but you never know what might happen! Bwahaha! I control the story! Mwahaha! I’ll think about your suggestion about Kags.
Kanna_Fan—This will probably be a Hiei/Kag pairing, but since I’m the author…hehehe. I’m not sure about bringing Shippou back. I’ll think about it. ^__^
ScentOfLavander—It’ll probably be Hiei/Kag. All who disagree…well, :p. I love long reviews! Thanks for your advice!
toasterwoman360—Thanks for telling me that it’s reikai! IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou IloveyouIloveyou! Thankies! ^______^
Kogas Hentai Luver—Naraku was the one who killed Kagome’s family. As for Inuyasha, you’ll just have to find out!
Megan Consoer—Thanks for reviewing! Review again! Here’s another chappy!
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Sesshomaru13—Thanks for reviewing!
Chaoticwisdom—Thanks for reviewing!
Ptbear—Thanks for reviewing! It’s probably a Hiei/Kag.
Anonymous—Thanks! It’s probably going to be a Hiei/Kag.
waterfox96—Yay! Demon-lulu, your back! You have no idea how happy I am that people actually come back to read my other fics! ^__^
Goddess of life and death—Thanks! ^_~
ladyatchika-thanks for reviewing!
Chapter 3: Frozen in Horror
Hiei ran towards Genkai’s house (Gomen ne but I don’t really remember what her house looks like), glancing around to see where Kagome was. It couldn’t have been a coincidence that she ran the second he heard Yukina’s terrified scream through the power of his jagan eye. ‘That ningen must have heard what I did, but how?’ Hiei flew up the steps of the shrine-like building; a few minutes later, Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara appeared behind him, the latter appearing the last with a much larger time gap. Yusuke and Hiei made a move to charge recklessly into the place where strong pulses of evil energy were being emitted.
“Be careful. Do not let down your guard,” Kurama warned. They entered the large doors together, all ready to draw their weapon at the slightest warning.
Hiei’s eyes were narrowed dangerously. He would slaughter anyone who dared to hurt his sister.
Yusuke readied his spirit gun. Sure Grandma was annoying and bossy but she was his teacher, and even though he would never admit it, he loved her like he would a grandma.
‘Yukina! I’ll save you!’ (Guess who this is. C’mon, ya hafta know.)
Kagome ran from the stunned boys the moment she heard Yukina’s subconscious plea for help. She ran at her top speed (or is it) to Genkai’s and flew through the doors. The room was a mess. One wall had been blown away by some force; the entire room looked like a tornado had passed though. Kagome glanced around, spreading her senses. A flicker of worry danced in her eyes before her usual mask returned. A few shimmering jewels caught her eye. She recognized them, both from the aura and from the appearance, as Yukina’s tear gems. Kagome’s heart stilled for a moment when she saw blood. Not enough to signify death, but enough to make her worry more. She picked up movement at the edge of her senses from two different locations. As she looked toward the entrance, she saw Hiei and his friends enter. From deeper in the house, Yukina and Genkai appeared.
Kagome moved toward the pair, ignoring the four boys for the moment. She could feel the anger and concern rolling off of Hiei and worry from the others. “Yukina, are you okay? Genkai?” Kagome now stood in front of Yukina.
Yukina gazed at Kagome with a pale face. “I’m fine. Just a little cut.” Yukina replied quietly.
“You know that’s not a ‘little cut’ Yukina. Genkai wouldn’t be supporting you if it were. Come here.” Hiei started forward, not trusting this girl but was stopped by a stern look from Genkai. Kagome sat on the ground and drew Yukina close. Everyone could see the blood soaking the front of her yukata as well as the strange angle her arm was twisted. “Sleep Yukina,” Kagome whispered as she gently laid a hand on her forehead.
Upon hearing these words, Hiei rushed forward with his katana drawn, only to come in contact with a barrier. “Hn. Get away from her.”
Kagome raised her head to glance at him and then ignored him. “Genkai, could you tell the apparition to cease his attempts to beak my barrier? If he doesn’t, I won’t be responsible for his death.” Genkai nodded and stepped from the barrier.
“Yusuke. Tell your partner to stop. There is no way he can break this miko’s barrier.” Hiei stopped abruptly.
“Genkai-sama, may I ask how it is that she’s a miko? Did they not perish?”
“Kurama. Kagome’s story is her own to tell.”
They watched as a soft, pink glow surrounded first the miko and then the ice apparition. The blood around Yukina seemed to return to her, and her arm relocated itself. Yukina’s eyes opened as the pink light faded from around the two girls. “Thanks Kagome,” Yukina said as she slowly sat up. Although Yukina could heal others, she didn’t have the power to heal herself. Kagome let her barrier go and tensed.
She leapt up, one hand catching the rafters at the top of the building, just as a paralyzing smoke seeped into the room. Before Kagome could voice a word of caution to the people below her, they were ensnared in the strange mist. (It’s my fic, so the smoke stays low.) As the miasma reached each person, they froze in place, seeing but unmoving. An ominous chuckle rang through the room.
A figure appeared at the entrance. A flutter of wind brought his wavy, black hair into view. The demon stepped forward, and Yukina’s eyes took on a look of fear. This was the demon who attacked her and Genkai. The one with the sinister, red eyes. The one who looked like Yusuke until he changed shape all of a sudden.
The one that Genkai had been unable to beat.
The demon raised his head and gazed at the girl now sitting on the rafters.
“So we finally meet. Prepare to die as you should have long ago.”
Kagome growled and placed a barrier around herself before dropping smoothly, too smoothly for a human, to the ground. The miasma around her parted like the red sea as she made her way toward the evil youkai. “Prepare to die bastard. For hurting my friends.” Hiei was in a position where he could see the girl’s face. What he saw flicker beneath that cold mask was unbridled hatred, rage, need for revenge, and…grief. These emotions soon vanished from her face as her voice stayed ever steady and emotionless.
“Die miko.” A tentacle shot from the demon toward Kagome. The others looked on, unable to do a thing.
A/N: Sorry guys, but you’ll have to find out what Kagome is in a later chapter. I was going to put it in this chapter, but I wanted to end with this. Who is that demon Kagome was fighting? Can you guess? Hehehe. Who indeed. A character from the past? One from the future? Who? Oh right, also, next chapter, some Kagome/Hiei fluff. ^__^ Sorry if this chapter’s a bit short.