Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Heart of Ice ❯ Control ( Chapter 12 )

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Chapter 12: Control

Kagome stirred and slowly opened her eyes to see a dark ceiling above her. She reached a hand to brush her hair from her face only to realize her hands were shackled above her head. A quiver of fear shot up her spine as she tried to move her legs and found that they too were chained down. She tipped her head to the side and noticed the eerie red sky outside the window. After a quick inspection, she found she was chained to a large bed in a huge dark room. Each leg was tied to a post and her arms were bound to the headboard. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get free. It seemed that precautions had been made to ensure she couldn't use her powers.

`Where the hell am I? Why is it so cold in here? OH MY GOD! Where the hell are my clothes!' Kagome finally realized that she was clad in her underwear and bra. Her skirt and shirt seemed to have vanished. `Please…someone help me.' Kagome froze when she remembered what had occurred with Hiei and then Tsuyoi. `How could I be so stupid and not notice Tsuyoi. Now I'm probably stuck somewhere in his castle where no one can find me, considering we've all been searching for him and have been unable to find his whereabouts.'

“Hello my pet.” Tsuyoi swept into the room, gazing lustily at Kagome's nearly naked form. “I see now why Naraku couldn't resist toying with you and your companions. It is quite fun.” He chuckled as Kagome began to struggle futilely against her bonds again. “Now, now…we wouldn't want you to get hurt.” Tsuyoi climbed onto the bed on top of Kagome and leaned over to lick her neck. He closed his eyes in bliss for a moment. ”So much power.” Kagome shuddered in revulsion but was unable to move. “Soon that power will be mine…after I have some fun that is. No one is coming to save you my dear miko. Even that fire apparition is disgusted with you. What would the mighty Sesshomaru think if he saw you flirting with the enemy, hmmm?” Tsuyoi laughed to himself and then summoned Kanna.

“You called, my master.” Kanna's empty voice sent chills through Kagome.

“Drain her soul and hold onto it for a while. I want to have some fun.” Kanna faced Kagome with the mirror and began to extract her soul from her body.

“No…” Kagome whispered weakly. `This wasn't possible. Kanna didn't have this much power. The mirror should have cracked under the stress. No. I will not be controlled by Tsuyoi. No.' Kagome's body fell limp as her eyes glazed over. A small amount of her soul remained in her body, but it was miniscule and couldn't maintain control of her body.

“Kanna's strength has increased since my own is much stronger than my creator, Naraku.” Tsuyoi waved the small demon away and turned to Kagome. “Look at me my pet. You will do as I say.”

“Yes master Tsuyoi.” `No. What am I saying? I can't control myself.'

“When the apparition comes, he will not see me taking you my dear, but you willingly coming into my arms.” He leaned down and seized her lips in a bruising kiss. He undid the shackles from the bed but left them on her wrists and ankles so she couldn't use her powers should she somehow break from his spell and regain her soul from Kanna. “For now, we'll just have some fun.” Tsuyoi slipped his hand under her panties and pushed two fingers into her in one motion. Kagome jerked in surprise as her body responded to his touch. An evil smirk lit his face as she began to struggle. “Now, now my miko, is that any way to treat your future mate? You will not resist my touch; in fact, you will beg for it.” The malevolent light in his eyes grew brighter as he saw the conflict in her eyes.

Her mind screamed as she tried to resist the sensations and regain control of herself. Tears fell from her eyes as she continued to struggle against his disgusting touch. The amount of soul left in her could see what was occurring but couldn't take control.

“My dear miko…cease your tears. You are happy to be here with me.” Kagome instantly ceased crying as her arms wrapped involuntarily around him.

“Yes master.”

 

 

Hiei's demon nature raged inside him as the Naraku's evil creation's message rang in his mind. `Kagome is MINE.' His jagan was open as he raced back to Genkai's to get Botan to open a portal to Makai. Kurama and Sesshomaru were the first to notice the apparition's approach. Everyone turned when they heard Hiei tear down the shrine door in his haste to find Botan. Even Sesshomaru was surprised that the jagan was open.

Hiei quickly spotted Botan and grabbed her, eliciting a growl from Kurama. “Open a portal to Makai.” Hiei growled at the lady of death.

“Ow. Hiei, let go of me. I'm not authorized to simply open a portal to Makai. I'll have to ask Koenma.” Hiei's grasp tightened.

“Open the damn portal now, onna, or you will die by my blade.” Hiei snarled at Kurama when he made a move to release Botan from his grasp.

“What is the meaning of this?” Sesshomaru asked calmly, holding Hiei's angry gaze.

“Tsuyoi has Kagome.” Hiei growled as he saw he wasn't going anywhere without telling them first.

“What! What do you mean he has Kagome! If he hurts her I'm going to kill you, you bastard!” Inuyasha, who had awoken, raged as he advanced on Hiei.

“My mate's been captured?! I must save her!” Kouga cried out and was promptly knocked unconscious by both Inuyasha and Hiei.

At Sesshomaru's command, Botan opened the portal and they all piled through with the exception of Yukina, Botan, and Genkai. Once in Makai, they could sense the overwhelming evil presence of Tsuyoi. It seems that he had decided to reveal his location. They set out to find Kagome.

 

 

“It seems they are coming for you miko. But it matters not. They will all die. Do you like that? Hmmm…perhaps I will let some of them live and see me take you as my mate. Now wouldn't you like that?”

“Yes master.” Kagome's voice was dull as she answered. `No. Hiei! Please, stay away. Everyone…no…they'll be hurt.'

 

 

Inuyasha released attacks with his claws since he had yet to retrieve tetsusaiga from the Goshinboku (Not even going to try to spell his attacks. -_-;) They were at the gates of Tsuyoi's castle, but they were having difficulties entering. Swarms of saimyoushou hovering around the castle prevented Miroku from using the kazaana, so he could only use his staff and his supply of ofuda. Sango was reduced to fighting on the ground since it was too dangerous to use hiraikotsu when their allies were scattered throughout the demons. Kirara stood faithfully at the taijiya's side; Shippou sat on the fire neko's back as he hurled his illusions and kitsune bi at the demons.

“Spirit gun!” Yusuke shouted as he dodged two massive demons to shoot another. He had never encountered this many demons at once. Each seemed to be extremely powerful as well. Kuwabara fought beside his best friend with his energy sword.

Kurama and Hiei fought relatively near each other, although Hiei was a bit further ahead since his anger fueled him more than it did Kurama. Hiei's sword flashed through the demons, but many of them would reform. (like musou, aka Onigumo when he was expelled from Naraku) Kurama used his rose whip expertly, but he had to be careful not to hit one of his allies who were fighting amongst the masses of demons.

Sesshomaru fought with as much anger as Hiei, but he showed none of it. His cold mask concealed his burning fury. Toukijin was out and tearing through the demons. From time to time, he switched to the energy whip. Blood from the youkai and from themselves splattered on their clothes as they worked their way toward where Kagome was held.

Kouga was fighting a losing battle. Too many youkai surrounded him and he no longer had the speed he possessed when he had the shikon shards. He turned sharply to dodge a clawed hand but couldn't move out of the way when another came from behind and drove right through his stomach. Blood spilled from his wound and from his lips as he fell to his knees. “Kagome…gomen ne.” The ookami youkai fell unconscious as his life blood began to flow from him.

 

 

Inside the castle Tsuyoi sat beside a trembling Kagome. He had decided to save the fun for later and to watch the occurrences outside. Kanna stood in front of them with her mirror showing the battle. Kagome shattered when she saw Kouga fall. A soundless cry came from her lips as tears cascaded down her cheeks. Her heart clenched when she saw all of them fighting through the demons. Each wound caused her to flinch and her tears to flow. “You see what you have caused my miko? They will all die. Your comrades don't stand a chance against me.”

A sob shook her as she gazed into the mirror and saw Kuwabara fall.

 

 

“NO! KUWABARA!” Yusuke rushed to his friend as saw him get torn by a demon. Crimson blood trickled from his mouth as he dropped to the ground. The spirit detective knelt beside his friend and cradled his form in his lap. “Don't you dare die on me Kuwabara! I'll never forgive you! Wake up damn it!” Kuwabara opened his eyes and looked into Yusuke's teary gaze.

“I'm sorry man. Take care of Shizuru and Yukina for me will ya?” Kuwabara coughed and then continued. “Get `em for me Yusuke.” His eyes closed and drew in a ragged breath before his body went limp.

“NO KUWABARA! NO!” Yusuke's aura flashed around him as his anger built. He laid Kuwabara down and stood. With a tortured cry, he threw himself into the battle.

 

The other fighters tried to move over toward Kuwabara's fallen form but were unable as the never-ending stream of youkai continued to beat down on them.

“EVERYONE STAND BACK!” They looked toward Miroku to see his hand on the rosary. Yusuke picked up Kuwabara and fought his way away to Miroku. Inuyasha grabbed Kouga and did the same. The others, Hiei included, moved behind the monk. Miroku grabbed the rosary beads and released the kazaana.

“MIROKU! NO!” Sango screamed as she saw him open the wind tunnel. Tears fell down her face as she saw the demons and saimyoushou get pulled into the void. She rushed to his side as he sealed the void and dropped to his knees.

“It's up to you guys now. Go save Kagome-sama.” Miroku barely whispered before he fell into Sango's arms. Most of the demons were taken by Miroku's tunnel but not all. Yusuke, Kurama, Sango, Kirara, and Shippou stayed behind to watch Miroku, Kouga, and Kuwabara and to kill of the remaining demons. Sesshomaru, Hiei, and Inuyasha rushed ahead to find Kagome.

 

 

`No. This can't be happening again. They're all going to die because of my weakness. Kuwabara, Miroku, Kouga. No. Oh kami no.'

“It is time my dear, they are approaching. Kukuku. The two half-breeds and the king of Makai. Sesshomaru, your brother ne? Now tell me miko, who do you choose, the hanyou, the Forbidden Child, or Sesshomaru. They are weary from the battle, so it will take little to restrain them all.” Tsuyoi chuckled and pulled Kagome closer to him. “Let me introduce you to my creations.” Slowly, around them appeared youkai after youkai. All of them looked just like him. An endless wave of malicious red eyes and flowing black hair. “They are lovely, don't you think? Each is an exact replica of me. So my dear…who do you choose. I'll be nice and let one live. Ahhh…here they come. Remember your orders my pet.”

`No. I can't. No.' Kagome pushed Tsuyoi down on the bed and straddled him. (Ugh…I hate writing this part.) She leaned over him and kissed his neck.

The door flew open as all three demons finally found Kagome. All three males growled in anger and disbelief, but their thoughts were cut short as they found themselves surrounded by a flood of Tsuyois. Their tired bodies combined with their distracted minds allowed the copies of Tsuyoi to bind them with similar shackles as Kagome's.

 

 

A/N: Sorry this chapter sucks. The battle scenes are completely messed up and nothing makes sense. GRRRRRRRR. -_-; x_x <_> I have some major writer's block, and I can't seem to articulate any of my thoughts. Onegai, don't give up on the story because of this lousy chapter. Anyways, stay tuned to see how they get out of this one. Even Sesshy's been shackled!

 

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