Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ It Takes Two To Dance ❯ Picnic and Having Fun at the Park ( Chapter 3 )
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By: playful kagome 
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Comedy | Type: Crossover | Uploaded On: 03.31.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 3.4K | Visits: 1.5K | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Comedy | Type: Crossover | Uploaded On: 03.31.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 3.4K | Visits: 1.5K | Status: Completed
Yay! I finally got some reviews! Thanks everyone I have personal responses to your reviews on the bottom. Thanks for making me want to write more! I thought people wouldn't want to read this fic but i guessed wrong haha. I finally got votes on the pairings!
yus/kag = 2
Hiei/kag = 1
Yus/Kag is winning! Yay so if you don't want yus/kag then you have to vote haha.Tell me what you think of the story and everything ok so here goes the story!
Disclaimer: Don't own don't sue
Yusuke: Yay more action for me!
Marylett: We'll see.... if you behave haha
Inuyasha: How come Im not in here?
Marylett: Because you went with that bitch Kikyo remember!
*Inuyasha pulls out tetssaiga*
Kagome: sSssiiiiiTTTTT!
Marylett: Thanks Kagome and for that you get more action!
Miroku/Sango: How come we're not there?
Marylett: Oh sorry your going to be when Kagome finally chooses who to be with or something
Yusuke: Yah and thats me because the voters said it and I said it.
Hiei: Would you just go on with the chapter already!
Marylett: I knew he was jealous... o well here yah go!
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Chapter 3 Picnic and Having Fun at the Park
Last time: " Whatever! " She kicked him right where it hurts. The same place as last time.
Now:
By the time Yusuke came back from unconsiousness Kagome, Kuwabara, Kurama and Hiei were already sitting on a blanket by the tree Kagome was at before. ' I know she likes me , she just won't admit it. I'll make her like me '. When he walked up to the group he wa slightly irritated that Hiei was sitting close to Kagome's left side. So of course he sat on the right equally spaced.
" Ok now that everyone is here... we can have a picnic!, " Kagome said excited. "So how about it?"
" I guess we could do that but we have to discuss some matters with you and Koenma after." Kurama said politley, not to spoil her fun.
" Ok! Whoever that is. I just want to have some fun today!" She put on one of her smiles that make you go weak in the knees, but they were already sitting.Everyone smiled back to her except for Hiei. She gave everyone a sandwich and a drink . She could tell they were hungry because they scarfed it down quickly. So she gave them seconds. But when she gave another one to Hiei his other sandwich was still there.
" Hey aren't you hungry?"
" Hn . I don't eat human food. "
" Come on! It's good! Your gunna like it. Just look how your friends are eating it." She gave another one of those weak in the knees smiles and he started eating the sandwiches.
" I knew you'd like it! " She said hugging him. " Just don't spy on me when im undressing anymore. " He then turned away making her miss his blush.
" Hey Kagome who was that other demon with you? Your boyfriend? " Kuwabara said moving his eyebrows up and down.
" Oh Sesshy? No he's not ! We're just close friends... that's all. "
" Then why did you kiss him on the cheek? "
" Because I told you were just friends... jeez it's not like you have a girlfriend. "Kagome said with a annoyed tone in her voice.
' Yes she doesn't have a boyfriend! Now I can make her like me. Without beating up another guy'. Yusuke had a grin to his face thinking ways to make her like him. He knew he liked her ever since they were 10 but she always had to go back home and come once a year. So he fell in love with Keiko but it just didn't work out.
" I do too have a girlfriend! Her name is Yukina and she loves me! " Kuwabara announced in a cocky manner. Hiei was biting his tounge to hold back his attack on the baka." Oh really I wanna meet her! Maybe we could go shopping together someday." She started going off in her own little world thinking of what she could buy with her allowance. Until she realized her baka cousin was saying something.
" Kagome! Hello anyone there?! "
" Huh oh sorry I was just thinking what to buy. Oh we could all go to the mall tommorrow! Come on I'll buy lunch! " She said with a puppy dog pout that no one could resist coming from her.
" I guess we could ask Koenma when we get there we do need a break once in a while..." Kurama said , again trying not to spoil her fun.
Everyone was finished eating when Yusuke asked "So Kagome how come your wearing that uniform cause you look hot in that. "
Kurama and Kuwabara sweat dropped knowing there would be flirting between them from now on.
" Oh haha thanks... How bout I show you why I'm wearing this " She said with a amused glint in her eyes. She stood up and grabbed Yusuke's hand and pushed him into the spot she wanted him in. Yusuke just stood thier dumbfounded , not knowing what was going to happen next. The other three just sat like an audience waiting for what was going to happen next.
She then bended over to make the same song as last time play. When the music started she started her routine making the guys eyes widen, jaws down. Then she did what she did to Sesshoumaru, grabbing Yusuke's neck and grinding except this time Yusuke joined her in her dance. He started grinding into her too starting thier own little routine in thier own little world. The audience was just dumb struck not knowing what to do. Make them stop or just ignore them.She then faced him and did her body rolls . She added more moves to it making them feel sexual attraction towards each other.
Yusuke could feel him harden by the second and Kagome could feel something warm in her stomach she never felt before. When the music stopped she acted like nothing happened between them and asked " You want to be my dance partner on my dance team? We need more boys and your fun to dance with. " She said this in pleading tone.When he didn't say anything, obviously he was dumb struck that she didn't kiss him, she started talking again. " The reason why I wear this uniform is because Im the captain of my dance team at school. So will you? Please." She did another one of her famous puppy dog pouts badding her eyelashes.
They were so close to kissing when the music stopped but she changed the subject. He was slightly irritated once again but he said " Alright if it means spending more time with you then ok..." " Yay! But I don't know if that's a good thing or bad thing about the last part haha. " She said giving him a tight hug, but she let go before he could take advantage of the situation and turned off the boombox.
" So what you guys think of my dancing? Was I good? " All the boys nodded at the same time. She layed down next to Hiei on her belly while swinging her legs back and forth with her arms supporting her chin making her breast show more and look even bigger. But of course she wasn't aware of that. They all had nothing else to do but stare.
" So you guys still go to the same school?"
"...."
" Hello? Anybody there? Kuwabara? Yusuke? Hiei? Kurama? " IS ANYBODY LISTENING TO ME?!? What's with you guys? Fine I'm going on the swings!. With that she stood up and stretched her arms above her head making the situation worse. Now they could see up her skirt and shirt. Sometimes shes just so clueless.
She ran full speed to the swings. She was almost as fast as Hiei. With a blink of an eye she was there.That's what she gets for running from demons from a year and all.
" Where'd she go? " Yusuke asked looking around.
" Shes on the swing. " Kurama replied pointing to her direction.
When they got to her she was swinging back and forth slowly. " So which one of you guys are going to push me? " Kagome said giggling. Yusuke already was behind her and started pushing her. Kurama and Hiei were just looking under her skirt whenever she would go thier way and Kuwabara was by the swing playing with a stray kitten in the sand.
" Ok who's going to catch me now! " She yelled jumping off and 'accidently' landed on Hiei when he was caught off guard looking up her skirt. ( haha accidently... right... (^ _~) )
Hiei fell on his back with Kagome on top of him with her hands infront of her on his chest. Thier legs were intertwined and thier lips were touching. Kagome moaned from falling and 'accidently' made her lips kiss him. Yet again she didn't know where she was posistioned because she closed her eyes before her fall was broken.Hiei was out cold from getting his breath sucked out of his lungs from the hit and fall.
Kagome was yet again straddling his waist. She brang her hands out to either side of his head with a worried face on. Kurama and Yusuke ran up to them while Kuwabara was still playing with the kitten.
" Ok everyone back up I have to give him mouth-to-mouth! " Kagome put on a determined face on and leaned forward and started breathing air into his mouth. Slowly Hiei opened his eyes to find a girls mouth against his breathing out air into his. He pushed her back and coughed a little.
Kagome was still straddling his waist and arms on either side of his head. " Finally woke up you sleepy head... sorry about falling on you and stuff and... and thanks for breaking my fall. " She said in a good-hearted tone before she kissed him on the cheek.
' Man why does he get all the action. She like kissed him 3 times already in the last 5 minutes! ' Yusuke was angered and jealous. ' I guess theres a little competions now huh.'
Hiei was feeling something he never felt before and didn't know how to except it so he said " Would you get off of me Miko! "
" Now where have I heard that before? " Kagome said sarcastically." And I already told you my name is Kagome Ka-Go-Me! "
" Oh ya and by the way.... nice 6 pack." She said while getting off of him.
' Gosh why is she flirting with him! She should be feeling my 6 pack...' Yusuke thought while he offered a hand out to Kagome to get off the ground. Yet Kagome had another trick up her sleeve and instead of getting up she pulled him down making him eat sand.
" Why you little! "
Kagome knew what was coming so she searched for Kuwabara but he was still playing with the kitten so she saw the next best thing and jumped onto Kurama's back ." Run Kurama Run! " ( haha got it from Forest Gump! haha if you know what that movie is )
Kuwabara finally noticed what was going on when she heard Kagome yell. He was watching in amusement at the funniest thing he ever saw. Off into the far edge of the park you could see Yusuke chasing after Kagome that was having a piggy back ride on Kurama's back. " Kurama faster! Run faster! " " Lady Kagome I don't think I should be apart of this!" Kurama yelled across his shoulder.
" Im going to get you for that Kagome! For this time and the last time when we were 10! "
Hiei was standing up and Kurama and Kagome were about to by pass him when Kagome got off of Kurama's back to Hiei's.
" Hiei come on! Please! I know your a faster runner than me and Kurama. " With that they were off in a flash towards the other edge of the park.
" Hey no fair!" Yusuke said shouting a complaint. 'Man there he goes again with Kagome.'
Kuwabara was laughing at him like a maniac. " Haha she got you again! "
When they got to the other edge of the park she got off of his back and fell over laughing. " Hahahahah I got him again! It works every time! "
" Your childish you know that. "
" Oh shutup you gotta have fun once in a while."
" Hn. "
" You say that too much and i don't even know what it means. You know if you keep yourself from having fun you don't know what your missing. "
" Hn. I do have fun. "
" Oh ya show me then. " Before she knew it she was on her back with a katana at her throat.
" Huh, you wouldn't dare. "
" Hn. "
' Hah I'll show him... ' Kagome then rolled around to switch thier posistions so she was on top and grabbed his katana and threw it somewhere else. But before Kagome could keep him still he did the same thing Kagome did making him on top again. Kagome started blushing when her eyes met his. They just kept staring at each other in a trance neither one of them breaking it until someone interupted...
Botan suddenly appeared out of no where on her oar and that was the first thing she saw when she appeared.
" Hiei...!? "
That's what broke thier eye contact. Both of them looked over to the girl flying on the oar and Kagome on instinct thinking it was just her imagination grabbed the closest thing and hid behind it. Well in this case hid under it. She grabbed on the back Hiei's shirt and pulled him onto her and started rubbing her eyes on his chest.
Kagome started mumbling into his chest. " Don't tell me I just saw a blue haired girl flying on an oar just now. "
" Hn. Guess again. "
Kagome loosened her hold on Hiei and peeked from behind his shoulder to get a closer look. After that she fainted.
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Hiei: Hn you just had to stop there didn't you
Marylett: Yah I still need more votes and stuff sorry guys. Thier tied 3 to 3.
Shippo/Miroku/Sango/Kouga: Hey we weren't in this chapter! When do we show up! *Giving me evil glares*
Marylett: Sorry guys don't worry your going to be later on I won't forget about you guys.
Shippo/Miroku/Sango/Kouga: You better not!
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Hey guys! Finally I finished this chapter. Took me almost half the day because I had writer's block and had to go places. I got contacts today and had to go to church school. Well enough about me heres some responses to you reviewers!
Kage Otome - Thanks for being my very first reviewer! Your so nice! I put you down for Yus/Kag cuz I don't know about Sess/Kag/Yus because I think there's too many Sess/Kag stories but this fic originally came from a Sess/Kag story I wrote on paper but never typed it up. Then I changed the whole ordeal to a crossover instead of being a pure inuyasha fic. Maybe I should put that story up too when I'm done with this one. That is if anyone wants to read it. Well thanks for making me want to write more! Im gunna start reading one of your fics! =]
Serena SilverMoon- Glad you love the fic. I was thinking that no one would like this but I guess I guessed wrong haha. I don't think I seen an episode when Keiko hit Yusuke. Wish I did so I could let Kagome do what she did. Plus stupid cartoonnetwork doesn't show Yu Yu Hakusho no more. I wish i could sue them or go on strike or something! Well anyways you were right that would have been funny if Hiei didn't grab her hand and let Kagome hit him in the face. Maybe I should have let that happen haha. Im glad you can't wait to find out what happens next but don't worry I'm going to update probably every day until I have to go back to school and that will be every other day that I update. That is if I even make this fic that long haha. Well hope to hear from you for this chapter =]
soulasassain - Hey gurlfriend! Im glad you got to read my fic I've been trying to make finally haha! Im probably not as good as you as a writer though because your fic is so damn funny! Haha! you can't make up your mind on the pairings! Well me niether. The votes are tied right now and its making it harder for me to write the next chapters haha. For me I would be happy to write either one of the fics. Let me give you a hint. If its Yus/Kag its going to be a more hands on type of realationship and for Hiei/Kag its going to be one of those relationships when they give each other hints telling that they like each other. Something like that. Im not trying to give you the wrong idea if i explained it wrong haha. well anyways thier both just so darn Cute. Oh yah thanks for the fic recommendation and I'll try to get a certain monk to stop wandering around in Kagome's era.
Marylett: Miroku that means you!
Miroku: Aww man...
And don't cry! I update often haha. Thanks for everything! Keep up the great work with 21st Century Wolf! =]
Dark Chan- Hope you liked this chapter because i know you were waiting haha. I don't know about Kag kissing Kurama becuz it's not a kag/kur fic but I did get him a view of Kagome's :cough underwear cough: and give Kagome a piggy back ride. That counts too right? Thanks for everyhting and haha maybe in the future I'll make a Kag/kur fic =]
Sorry I didn't have time to respond to all of you guys so this is for the ones I didn't get to.
Special thanks to Trini-gyal , Shin01 , kitsunekagome23 and (k).
Im going to update tommorrow again... or I mean today haha it already 12:30 am oops time to watch Inuyasha on Adult Swim. Bye bye! =]
Next Chapter :
Chapter 3: Spirit Detectives? Shikon no What? and a sleepover?
Gawsh It won't let me update this chapter! When i press log in it won't work. You think they shut the site down? Im pissed off right now grr...
yus/kag = 2
Hiei/kag = 1
Yus/Kag is winning! Yay so if you don't want yus/kag then you have to vote haha.Tell me what you think of the story and everything ok so here goes the story!
Disclaimer: Don't own don't sue
Yusuke: Yay more action for me!
Marylett: We'll see.... if you behave haha
Inuyasha: How come Im not in here?
Marylett: Because you went with that bitch Kikyo remember!
*Inuyasha pulls out tetssaiga*
Kagome: sSssiiiiiTTTTT!
Marylett: Thanks Kagome and for that you get more action!
Miroku/Sango: How come we're not there?
Marylett: Oh sorry your going to be when Kagome finally chooses who to be with or something
Yusuke: Yah and thats me because the voters said it and I said it.
Hiei: Would you just go on with the chapter already!
Marylett: I knew he was jealous... o well here yah go!
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Chapter 3 Picnic and Having Fun at the Park
Last time: " Whatever! " She kicked him right where it hurts. The same place as last time.
Now:
By the time Yusuke came back from unconsiousness Kagome, Kuwabara, Kurama and Hiei were already sitting on a blanket by the tree Kagome was at before. ' I know she likes me , she just won't admit it. I'll make her like me '. When he walked up to the group he wa slightly irritated that Hiei was sitting close to Kagome's left side. So of course he sat on the right equally spaced.
" Ok now that everyone is here... we can have a picnic!, " Kagome said excited. "So how about it?"
" I guess we could do that but we have to discuss some matters with you and Koenma after." Kurama said politley, not to spoil her fun.
" Ok! Whoever that is. I just want to have some fun today!" She put on one of her smiles that make you go weak in the knees, but they were already sitting.Everyone smiled back to her except for Hiei. She gave everyone a sandwich and a drink . She could tell they were hungry because they scarfed it down quickly. So she gave them seconds. But when she gave another one to Hiei his other sandwich was still there.
" Hey aren't you hungry?"
" Hn . I don't eat human food. "
" Come on! It's good! Your gunna like it. Just look how your friends are eating it." She gave another one of those weak in the knees smiles and he started eating the sandwiches.
" I knew you'd like it! " She said hugging him. " Just don't spy on me when im undressing anymore. " He then turned away making her miss his blush.
" Hey Kagome who was that other demon with you? Your boyfriend? " Kuwabara said moving his eyebrows up and down.
" Oh Sesshy? No he's not ! We're just close friends... that's all. "
" Then why did you kiss him on the cheek? "
" Because I told you were just friends... jeez it's not like you have a girlfriend. "Kagome said with a annoyed tone in her voice.
' Yes she doesn't have a boyfriend! Now I can make her like me. Without beating up another guy'. Yusuke had a grin to his face thinking ways to make her like him. He knew he liked her ever since they were 10 but she always had to go back home and come once a year. So he fell in love with Keiko but it just didn't work out.
" I do too have a girlfriend! Her name is Yukina and she loves me! " Kuwabara announced in a cocky manner. Hiei was biting his tounge to hold back his attack on the baka." Oh really I wanna meet her! Maybe we could go shopping together someday." She started going off in her own little world thinking of what she could buy with her allowance. Until she realized her baka cousin was saying something.
" Kagome! Hello anyone there?! "
" Huh oh sorry I was just thinking what to buy. Oh we could all go to the mall tommorrow! Come on I'll buy lunch! " She said with a puppy dog pout that no one could resist coming from her.
" I guess we could ask Koenma when we get there we do need a break once in a while..." Kurama said , again trying not to spoil her fun.
Everyone was finished eating when Yusuke asked "So Kagome how come your wearing that uniform cause you look hot in that. "
Kurama and Kuwabara sweat dropped knowing there would be flirting between them from now on.
" Oh haha thanks... How bout I show you why I'm wearing this " She said with a amused glint in her eyes. She stood up and grabbed Yusuke's hand and pushed him into the spot she wanted him in. Yusuke just stood thier dumbfounded , not knowing what was going to happen next. The other three just sat like an audience waiting for what was going to happen next.
She then bended over to make the same song as last time play. When the music started she started her routine making the guys eyes widen, jaws down. Then she did what she did to Sesshoumaru, grabbing Yusuke's neck and grinding except this time Yusuke joined her in her dance. He started grinding into her too starting thier own little routine in thier own little world. The audience was just dumb struck not knowing what to do. Make them stop or just ignore them.She then faced him and did her body rolls . She added more moves to it making them feel sexual attraction towards each other.
Yusuke could feel him harden by the second and Kagome could feel something warm in her stomach she never felt before. When the music stopped she acted like nothing happened between them and asked " You want to be my dance partner on my dance team? We need more boys and your fun to dance with. " She said this in pleading tone.When he didn't say anything, obviously he was dumb struck that she didn't kiss him, she started talking again. " The reason why I wear this uniform is because Im the captain of my dance team at school. So will you? Please." She did another one of her famous puppy dog pouts badding her eyelashes.
They were so close to kissing when the music stopped but she changed the subject. He was slightly irritated once again but he said " Alright if it means spending more time with you then ok..." " Yay! But I don't know if that's a good thing or bad thing about the last part haha. " She said giving him a tight hug, but she let go before he could take advantage of the situation and turned off the boombox.
" So what you guys think of my dancing? Was I good? " All the boys nodded at the same time. She layed down next to Hiei on her belly while swinging her legs back and forth with her arms supporting her chin making her breast show more and look even bigger. But of course she wasn't aware of that. They all had nothing else to do but stare.
" So you guys still go to the same school?"
"...."
" Hello? Anybody there? Kuwabara? Yusuke? Hiei? Kurama? " IS ANYBODY LISTENING TO ME?!? What's with you guys? Fine I'm going on the swings!. With that she stood up and stretched her arms above her head making the situation worse. Now they could see up her skirt and shirt. Sometimes shes just so clueless.
She ran full speed to the swings. She was almost as fast as Hiei. With a blink of an eye she was there.That's what she gets for running from demons from a year and all.
" Where'd she go? " Yusuke asked looking around.
" Shes on the swing. " Kurama replied pointing to her direction.
When they got to her she was swinging back and forth slowly. " So which one of you guys are going to push me? " Kagome said giggling. Yusuke already was behind her and started pushing her. Kurama and Hiei were just looking under her skirt whenever she would go thier way and Kuwabara was by the swing playing with a stray kitten in the sand.
" Ok who's going to catch me now! " She yelled jumping off and 'accidently' landed on Hiei when he was caught off guard looking up her skirt. ( haha accidently... right... (^ _~) )
Hiei fell on his back with Kagome on top of him with her hands infront of her on his chest. Thier legs were intertwined and thier lips were touching. Kagome moaned from falling and 'accidently' made her lips kiss him. Yet again she didn't know where she was posistioned because she closed her eyes before her fall was broken.Hiei was out cold from getting his breath sucked out of his lungs from the hit and fall.
Kagome was yet again straddling his waist. She brang her hands out to either side of his head with a worried face on. Kurama and Yusuke ran up to them while Kuwabara was still playing with the kitten.
" Ok everyone back up I have to give him mouth-to-mouth! " Kagome put on a determined face on and leaned forward and started breathing air into his mouth. Slowly Hiei opened his eyes to find a girls mouth against his breathing out air into his. He pushed her back and coughed a little.
Kagome was still straddling his waist and arms on either side of his head. " Finally woke up you sleepy head... sorry about falling on you and stuff and... and thanks for breaking my fall. " She said in a good-hearted tone before she kissed him on the cheek.
' Man why does he get all the action. She like kissed him 3 times already in the last 5 minutes! ' Yusuke was angered and jealous. ' I guess theres a little competions now huh.'
Hiei was feeling something he never felt before and didn't know how to except it so he said " Would you get off of me Miko! "
" Now where have I heard that before? " Kagome said sarcastically." And I already told you my name is Kagome Ka-Go-Me! "
" Oh ya and by the way.... nice 6 pack." She said while getting off of him.
' Gosh why is she flirting with him! She should be feeling my 6 pack...' Yusuke thought while he offered a hand out to Kagome to get off the ground. Yet Kagome had another trick up her sleeve and instead of getting up she pulled him down making him eat sand.
" Why you little! "
Kagome knew what was coming so she searched for Kuwabara but he was still playing with the kitten so she saw the next best thing and jumped onto Kurama's back ." Run Kurama Run! " ( haha got it from Forest Gump! haha if you know what that movie is )
Kuwabara finally noticed what was going on when she heard Kagome yell. He was watching in amusement at the funniest thing he ever saw. Off into the far edge of the park you could see Yusuke chasing after Kagome that was having a piggy back ride on Kurama's back. " Kurama faster! Run faster! " " Lady Kagome I don't think I should be apart of this!" Kurama yelled across his shoulder.
" Im going to get you for that Kagome! For this time and the last time when we were 10! "
Hiei was standing up and Kurama and Kagome were about to by pass him when Kagome got off of Kurama's back to Hiei's.
" Hiei come on! Please! I know your a faster runner than me and Kurama. " With that they were off in a flash towards the other edge of the park.
" Hey no fair!" Yusuke said shouting a complaint. 'Man there he goes again with Kagome.'
Kuwabara was laughing at him like a maniac. " Haha she got you again! "
When they got to the other edge of the park she got off of his back and fell over laughing. " Hahahahah I got him again! It works every time! "
" Your childish you know that. "
" Oh shutup you gotta have fun once in a while."
" Hn. "
" You say that too much and i don't even know what it means. You know if you keep yourself from having fun you don't know what your missing. "
" Hn. I do have fun. "
" Oh ya show me then. " Before she knew it she was on her back with a katana at her throat.
" Huh, you wouldn't dare. "
" Hn. "
' Hah I'll show him... ' Kagome then rolled around to switch thier posistions so she was on top and grabbed his katana and threw it somewhere else. But before Kagome could keep him still he did the same thing Kagome did making him on top again. Kagome started blushing when her eyes met his. They just kept staring at each other in a trance neither one of them breaking it until someone interupted...
Botan suddenly appeared out of no where on her oar and that was the first thing she saw when she appeared.
" Hiei...!? "
That's what broke thier eye contact. Both of them looked over to the girl flying on the oar and Kagome on instinct thinking it was just her imagination grabbed the closest thing and hid behind it. Well in this case hid under it. She grabbed on the back Hiei's shirt and pulled him onto her and started rubbing her eyes on his chest.
Kagome started mumbling into his chest. " Don't tell me I just saw a blue haired girl flying on an oar just now. "
" Hn. Guess again. "
Kagome loosened her hold on Hiei and peeked from behind his shoulder to get a closer look. After that she fainted.
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Hiei: Hn you just had to stop there didn't you
Marylett: Yah I still need more votes and stuff sorry guys. Thier tied 3 to 3.
Shippo/Miroku/Sango/Kouga: Hey we weren't in this chapter! When do we show up! *Giving me evil glares*
Marylett: Sorry guys don't worry your going to be later on I won't forget about you guys.
Shippo/Miroku/Sango/Kouga: You better not!
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Hey guys! Finally I finished this chapter. Took me almost half the day because I had writer's block and had to go places. I got contacts today and had to go to church school. Well enough about me heres some responses to you reviewers!
Kage Otome - Thanks for being my very first reviewer! Your so nice! I put you down for Yus/Kag cuz I don't know about Sess/Kag/Yus because I think there's too many Sess/Kag stories but this fic originally came from a Sess/Kag story I wrote on paper but never typed it up. Then I changed the whole ordeal to a crossover instead of being a pure inuyasha fic. Maybe I should put that story up too when I'm done with this one. That is if anyone wants to read it. Well thanks for making me want to write more! Im gunna start reading one of your fics! =]
Serena SilverMoon- Glad you love the fic. I was thinking that no one would like this but I guess I guessed wrong haha. I don't think I seen an episode when Keiko hit Yusuke. Wish I did so I could let Kagome do what she did. Plus stupid cartoonnetwork doesn't show Yu Yu Hakusho no more. I wish i could sue them or go on strike or something! Well anyways you were right that would have been funny if Hiei didn't grab her hand and let Kagome hit him in the face. Maybe I should have let that happen haha. Im glad you can't wait to find out what happens next but don't worry I'm going to update probably every day until I have to go back to school and that will be every other day that I update. That is if I even make this fic that long haha. Well hope to hear from you for this chapter =]
soulasassain - Hey gurlfriend! Im glad you got to read my fic I've been trying to make finally haha! Im probably not as good as you as a writer though because your fic is so damn funny! Haha! you can't make up your mind on the pairings! Well me niether. The votes are tied right now and its making it harder for me to write the next chapters haha. For me I would be happy to write either one of the fics. Let me give you a hint. If its Yus/Kag its going to be a more hands on type of realationship and for Hiei/Kag its going to be one of those relationships when they give each other hints telling that they like each other. Something like that. Im not trying to give you the wrong idea if i explained it wrong haha. well anyways thier both just so darn Cute. Oh yah thanks for the fic recommendation and I'll try to get a certain monk to stop wandering around in Kagome's era.
Marylett: Miroku that means you!
Miroku: Aww man...
And don't cry! I update often haha. Thanks for everything! Keep up the great work with 21st Century Wolf! =]
Dark Chan- Hope you liked this chapter because i know you were waiting haha. I don't know about Kag kissing Kurama becuz it's not a kag/kur fic but I did get him a view of Kagome's :cough underwear cough: and give Kagome a piggy back ride. That counts too right? Thanks for everyhting and haha maybe in the future I'll make a Kag/kur fic =]
Sorry I didn't have time to respond to all of you guys so this is for the ones I didn't get to.
Special thanks to Trini-gyal , Shin01 , kitsunekagome23 and (k).
Im going to update tommorrow again... or I mean today haha it already 12:30 am oops time to watch Inuyasha on Adult Swim. Bye bye! =]
Next Chapter :
Chapter 3: Spirit Detectives? Shikon no What? and a sleepover?
Gawsh It won't let me update this chapter! When i press log in it won't work. You think they shut the site down? Im pissed off right now grr...