Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ A Firey Passion ❯ Things Start Heating Up ( Chapter 11 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: Captain yukiko 
From the title i'm assuming you all know that the LEMON IS HERE!!! YES IT IS, so stop reading this and get a move on!
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Hentai / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 11.17.2005 | Updated On: 11.17.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 348 | Status: Completed
From the title i'm assuming you all know that the LEMON IS HERE!!! YES IT IS, so stop reading this and get a move on!
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Hentai / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 11.17.2005 | Updated On: 11.17.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 348 | Status: Completed
WARNING!!!: YAOI, (Boyxboy), LEMON!.. Need I say more... I bet you all just skipped this and went straight to the fic...lol. Seriously though, if you're not into this kind of stuff, hit the high road and beat it. I will not tolerate flames when I have given sufficient warning.
C.S: you all really are a bunch of perverts!... but your perverted minds got mine thinking.... and now I’ve got more then one lemon on my hands that I’m thinking about....and Neko Miu, I think toys would be a lot of fun to write don' t you??
Sorry for the incredibly long wait… I was going through a writers block stage… but two reviewers got my ass moving, and I would like to give them a special thanks!
THANK-YOU SURY, AND MEIKOUHAIKITSUNE!!
On with the fic!
Note from the Beta: Hi! This is Taikai no za Kokoro. I’m the Beta of this insufferable fop. (Pats C.S. on the head playfully.) But I love her anyway. Here is my version of the chapter. I tried to fix as many mistakes as I could in the short amount of time I had left.
A Fiery Passion
Chapter 11: Things start heating up.
Nothing, not one thought of regret was running through his flushed mind. Being thrown over Hiei's shoulder like some kind of slave brought no thoughts of remorse; just dirty, kinky feelings... and the thought that it would be very interesting to be Hiei's slave.
He knew his length was hardening, and it was very pleasurable having the denim fabric rub up against it as Hiei jumped from building to building at an incredibly fast pace... even for a demon. All that filled Yusuke's chest was the bubbly feeling of passion... and not to mention impatience.
'I want to get started already... I mean, seriously, just because it's my first-----' His mouth dropped open for a slight second... YES, he wanted to be with Hiei, there was not doubt about that. But Hiei had probably bedded many other demons through out his long life, and here he was still a virgin... and definitely his first experience with another man.
'What, what if I don't live up to his standards?' The feeling of utter pleasure was soon clouded by a small overcast of very strong depressing thoughts. 'What if I’m not good enough?'
Yusuke shook his head in frustration. These thoughts are not necessary; he and Hiei were finally going to be together. Nothing would be able to tear them apart, not even the feeling that was causing a massive wave of butterflies to erupt in his stomach. Worry and nervousness, not to put too fine a point on it.
All too soon, and not soon enough, Yusuke found himself outside his bedroom…window? If he was not currently brooding or fidgeting from a fit of nerves he probably would have laughed. But the fact was that the window just brought upon more feelings and another wave of worry.
The window was opened with such speed that Yusuke soon found himself sitting on his bed facing a stern looking Hiei before he could have though ‘persnickety’. The demons clawed hand came up and caressed his cheek, a smile creeping upon his lips as Yusuke leaned into his touch.
“Do not think such thoughts. The fact that you’re a virgin,” Yusuke blushed scarlet and turned his head. Hiei scowled at that and placed his hand under his chin. “Look at me Yusuke,” Chocolate glanced back, making eye contact with crimson and holding. “Good, it only means that this moment we both want…” He paused as if for reassurance that Yusuke also wanted their relationship to go to the next level. Yusuke nodded slowly.
“It makes it even more special than it would have already been if you were not. Not only does this complete our bond, but it’s something we both want and accept. Now,” A sly smirk appeared and Yusuke felt a wave of heat shoot straight to his groan.
“Let’s make this a more comfortable situation.” Hiei crawled up onto Yusuke’s waiting lap and straddled it gracefully. He leaned in and nipped at Yusuke’s ear, grinding himself into the teens lap in an attempt to arouse him even more.
Yusuke let out a helpless moan, placing his hands on Hiei’s hips and angling his head so the demon could have more access to his neck. Hiei grinned and took full advantage.
“Mmmm, oh god.” Hiei sucked on Yusuke’s pulse and enticed pleasurable moans from his mate and soon-to-be lover. His clawed hands moved under Yusuke’s normal white t-shirt to tease and twist a dark nipple. More moans rumbled through that delicious throat, and soon enough Yusuke was grinding up into Hiei in an attempt to get more pleasure.
“You’ll have to be patient Yusuke.” Another twist of the nipple cut off Yusuke’s sharp retort into a delicious moan. Hiei pushed his mate down against the mattress, seeking the lips he wanted to taste almost as if it was necessary to live.
Yusuke eagerly gave what Hiei wanted.
The kiss was deep, eager, passionate and full of love. Not lust, love. The four letter L word that usually made someone’s life do a complete180. But it empowered Yusuke, and gave him enough courage to do a little exploration of his own.
Moving his hands up his fire demons hips and under Hiei’s shirt, Yusuke let his palms roam the muscular plans of his toned abs.
Hiei ran his tongue across Yusuke’s bottom lip, asking, begging, and pleading for entrance. Once the teen’s mouth was open, he dove in and devoured the caverns treasures. Teasing and enticing Yusuke’s tongue to play back. He couldn’t help but moan when Yusuke cautiously began a battle with his tongue.
“God, Hiei.” Whispered Yusuke once air had become a necessity and the two had to part for a moment. The fire demon smirked down at hit mate.
“I know. Yusuke,” He caught his lovers attention and smiled mischievously. “You haven’t seen anything yet.” With a startled gasp, Yusuke found his hands tied above his head with his own t-shirt, and Hiei licking around one of his nipples.
“That’s--- Not fair.” Yusuke wriggled a bit as he gasped out his statement. Hiei was a little too skilled for his own good. Hiei kept his grip firm on Yusuke’s tied hands, grinning as more moans fell from those luscious lips.
Creeping up and placing one knee on either side of Yusuke’s firm body. Hiei let go momentarily to relieve him of his own shirt.
His claws gently scratched the skin as Hiei made his way determinedly to his desired goal. That is of course until the waist of Yusuke jeans stopped him. Growling, he unbuttoned them and pulled them down and off of Yusuke.
“Mmmmm… Ohh God.” Yusuke moaned as his sex sprang free from its denim prison. Hiei bent down to Yusuke and engulfed all of him in his mouth. Yusuke cried out and thrust upward into Hiei’s cavern. The demon firmly placed his hands on his mates’ hips, stilling his movements. He chuckled when he looked up and saw an adorable pout on Yusuke’s kiss swollen lips.
He moved up and down, and licked along Yusuke’s manhood. The demon felt his own cock harden as he pleasured Yusuke, and when he felt Yusuke was about to reach his peek stopped, and pulled away.
“Wha? No Hiei, come on. Don’t tease.” Hiei chuckled once again, and sat up. He undid his many belts, and slid his clothed pants from his slender hips. Yusuke stared at what he believed a body only a god could possess. He wanted to worship and pleasure that body.
Leaning up onto his elbows, Yusuke was stopped when a clawed hand was placed on his shoulder.
“No Yusuke. Right now, this moment is for you.” Hiei shook his head again, when Yusuke was about to respond. “There will be another time, that’s for sure. But right now I,” He placed himself in between Yusuke legs, and sucked on a couple of fingers. When he took them out, slick with saliva, he leaned forward. “Want you to know extreme pleasure.” With that, his fingers entered Yusuke’s opening.
Twisting and scissoring inside the teen, Yusuke couldn’t help the constant shudders that racked his body with each pleasurable movement. His moans became louder, and his cock pulsed with a wanting of skin against skin.
The fingers were removed, and ‘The Great Urameshi’ let out a pathetic whimper. Hiei took hold of one of his long legs and heaved it over his right shoulder, giving the demon a better position for his… pleasurable intentions.
“Yusuke look at me. I want to see you when we make love.” Make love… he had never used that set of words, least of all said them to anyone. It was always a romp in the sheets and an “It’s been nice, see ya.” It filled Hiei with joy and he smiled down at his mate.
Yusuke nodded and prepared himself for the feeling of Hiei entering him.
“Calm down Yusuke. If you tense up it’ll hurt more.” The teen nodded and did what was asked of him. Keeping eye contact with his mate, Hiei plunged in.
The pain hit him in a swift wave, and Yusuke unconsciously tensed up. Hiei messaged Yusuke’s thigh, waiting patiently for a sign to begin the better part.
Yusuke let out a sigh, as the pain soon diminished and bliss ran through his entire being. Seeing the boys’ content face, Hiei began a rocking motion, easing the pain away and more pleasure to race through him.
“Hiei, Shit, Hiei. Fuck!”
Hiei couldn’t help but snicker.
“Yes, Yusuke, that is what I am doing.” Yusuke attempted a glare up at the demon riding him faster now, but was subdued by more shudders and moans escaping him. Until a wave of pleasure shot up his spine with such intensity all he could do was blink widely.
“That was your prostate Yusuke.” And angling himself just right, a few more pumps had Hiei hitting it once again.
The teen screamed out his lovers’ name, and met each thrust with his own, each becoming more frantic and greedy. Breathing mingled with moans and gasps, kisses became needy and eager.
Hiei could feel his climax approaching, and roughly grabbed on to Yusuke’s cock, pumping it up and down in tune with their own thrusts. With a strangled cry Yusuke came with such intensity white blotches streaked across his vision. His thick creamy cum sprayed across their chests and Hiei’s hand.
A few thrusts later, Hiei came within Yusuke. All energy leaving him in one whoosh had him collapsing on top of Yusuke. Both men just stayed where they were, completely out of energy, merely gasping for breath. Until Yusuke pulled Hiei to his side, and smiled that cocky smile of his, his brown eyes gleaming with joy.
“Wow!” With that Hiei chuckled, and the two fell asleep in the others arms.
Sorry that the chapter was shorter then I normally have them. I thought it was an okay start after a three month writer’s block. Please R&R I love feed back!!
TnzK: Hi! It’s me again. I finally finished as soon as I could. A MAJOR congrats goes to CS, Sury, and Meikouhaikitsune (whoever that may be. But hey, it said thanks at the top, so I’ll say thanks too!) I hope you all enjoy the beta’ed version. I made a few itty bitty changes and I hope CS doesn’t kill me. See you all later when she decides to send me another chapter! Love ya and please review!
C.S: God i love that girl! I think you all do as well.. cause she fixed all those disgusting spelling errors.
C.S: you all really are a bunch of perverts!... but your perverted minds got mine thinking.... and now I’ve got more then one lemon on my hands that I’m thinking about....and Neko Miu, I think toys would be a lot of fun to write don' t you??
Sorry for the incredibly long wait… I was going through a writers block stage… but two reviewers got my ass moving, and I would like to give them a special thanks!
THANK-YOU SURY, AND MEIKOUHAIKITSUNE!!
On with the fic!
Note from the Beta: Hi! This is Taikai no za Kokoro. I’m the Beta of this insufferable fop. (Pats C.S. on the head playfully.) But I love her anyway. Here is my version of the chapter. I tried to fix as many mistakes as I could in the short amount of time I had left.
A Fiery Passion
Chapter 11: Things start heating up.
Nothing, not one thought of regret was running through his flushed mind. Being thrown over Hiei's shoulder like some kind of slave brought no thoughts of remorse; just dirty, kinky feelings... and the thought that it would be very interesting to be Hiei's slave.
He knew his length was hardening, and it was very pleasurable having the denim fabric rub up against it as Hiei jumped from building to building at an incredibly fast pace... even for a demon. All that filled Yusuke's chest was the bubbly feeling of passion... and not to mention impatience.
'I want to get started already... I mean, seriously, just because it's my first-----' His mouth dropped open for a slight second... YES, he wanted to be with Hiei, there was not doubt about that. But Hiei had probably bedded many other demons through out his long life, and here he was still a virgin... and definitely his first experience with another man.
'What, what if I don't live up to his standards?' The feeling of utter pleasure was soon clouded by a small overcast of very strong depressing thoughts. 'What if I’m not good enough?'
Yusuke shook his head in frustration. These thoughts are not necessary; he and Hiei were finally going to be together. Nothing would be able to tear them apart, not even the feeling that was causing a massive wave of butterflies to erupt in his stomach. Worry and nervousness, not to put too fine a point on it.
All too soon, and not soon enough, Yusuke found himself outside his bedroom…window? If he was not currently brooding or fidgeting from a fit of nerves he probably would have laughed. But the fact was that the window just brought upon more feelings and another wave of worry.
The window was opened with such speed that Yusuke soon found himself sitting on his bed facing a stern looking Hiei before he could have though ‘persnickety’. The demons clawed hand came up and caressed his cheek, a smile creeping upon his lips as Yusuke leaned into his touch.
“Do not think such thoughts. The fact that you’re a virgin,” Yusuke blushed scarlet and turned his head. Hiei scowled at that and placed his hand under his chin. “Look at me Yusuke,” Chocolate glanced back, making eye contact with crimson and holding. “Good, it only means that this moment we both want…” He paused as if for reassurance that Yusuke also wanted their relationship to go to the next level. Yusuke nodded slowly.
“It makes it even more special than it would have already been if you were not. Not only does this complete our bond, but it’s something we both want and accept. Now,” A sly smirk appeared and Yusuke felt a wave of heat shoot straight to his groan.
“Let’s make this a more comfortable situation.” Hiei crawled up onto Yusuke’s waiting lap and straddled it gracefully. He leaned in and nipped at Yusuke’s ear, grinding himself into the teens lap in an attempt to arouse him even more.
Yusuke let out a helpless moan, placing his hands on Hiei’s hips and angling his head so the demon could have more access to his neck. Hiei grinned and took full advantage.
“Mmmm, oh god.” Hiei sucked on Yusuke’s pulse and enticed pleasurable moans from his mate and soon-to-be lover. His clawed hands moved under Yusuke’s normal white t-shirt to tease and twist a dark nipple. More moans rumbled through that delicious throat, and soon enough Yusuke was grinding up into Hiei in an attempt to get more pleasure.
“You’ll have to be patient Yusuke.” Another twist of the nipple cut off Yusuke’s sharp retort into a delicious moan. Hiei pushed his mate down against the mattress, seeking the lips he wanted to taste almost as if it was necessary to live.
Yusuke eagerly gave what Hiei wanted.
The kiss was deep, eager, passionate and full of love. Not lust, love. The four letter L word that usually made someone’s life do a complete180. But it empowered Yusuke, and gave him enough courage to do a little exploration of his own.
Moving his hands up his fire demons hips and under Hiei’s shirt, Yusuke let his palms roam the muscular plans of his toned abs.
Hiei ran his tongue across Yusuke’s bottom lip, asking, begging, and pleading for entrance. Once the teen’s mouth was open, he dove in and devoured the caverns treasures. Teasing and enticing Yusuke’s tongue to play back. He couldn’t help but moan when Yusuke cautiously began a battle with his tongue.
“God, Hiei.” Whispered Yusuke once air had become a necessity and the two had to part for a moment. The fire demon smirked down at hit mate.
“I know. Yusuke,” He caught his lovers attention and smiled mischievously. “You haven’t seen anything yet.” With a startled gasp, Yusuke found his hands tied above his head with his own t-shirt, and Hiei licking around one of his nipples.
“That’s--- Not fair.” Yusuke wriggled a bit as he gasped out his statement. Hiei was a little too skilled for his own good. Hiei kept his grip firm on Yusuke’s tied hands, grinning as more moans fell from those luscious lips.
Creeping up and placing one knee on either side of Yusuke’s firm body. Hiei let go momentarily to relieve him of his own shirt.
His claws gently scratched the skin as Hiei made his way determinedly to his desired goal. That is of course until the waist of Yusuke jeans stopped him. Growling, he unbuttoned them and pulled them down and off of Yusuke.
“Mmmmm… Ohh God.” Yusuke moaned as his sex sprang free from its denim prison. Hiei bent down to Yusuke and engulfed all of him in his mouth. Yusuke cried out and thrust upward into Hiei’s cavern. The demon firmly placed his hands on his mates’ hips, stilling his movements. He chuckled when he looked up and saw an adorable pout on Yusuke’s kiss swollen lips.
He moved up and down, and licked along Yusuke’s manhood. The demon felt his own cock harden as he pleasured Yusuke, and when he felt Yusuke was about to reach his peek stopped, and pulled away.
“Wha? No Hiei, come on. Don’t tease.” Hiei chuckled once again, and sat up. He undid his many belts, and slid his clothed pants from his slender hips. Yusuke stared at what he believed a body only a god could possess. He wanted to worship and pleasure that body.
Leaning up onto his elbows, Yusuke was stopped when a clawed hand was placed on his shoulder.
“No Yusuke. Right now, this moment is for you.” Hiei shook his head again, when Yusuke was about to respond. “There will be another time, that’s for sure. But right now I,” He placed himself in between Yusuke legs, and sucked on a couple of fingers. When he took them out, slick with saliva, he leaned forward. “Want you to know extreme pleasure.” With that, his fingers entered Yusuke’s opening.
Twisting and scissoring inside the teen, Yusuke couldn’t help the constant shudders that racked his body with each pleasurable movement. His moans became louder, and his cock pulsed with a wanting of skin against skin.
The fingers were removed, and ‘The Great Urameshi’ let out a pathetic whimper. Hiei took hold of one of his long legs and heaved it over his right shoulder, giving the demon a better position for his… pleasurable intentions.
“Yusuke look at me. I want to see you when we make love.” Make love… he had never used that set of words, least of all said them to anyone. It was always a romp in the sheets and an “It’s been nice, see ya.” It filled Hiei with joy and he smiled down at his mate.
Yusuke nodded and prepared himself for the feeling of Hiei entering him.
“Calm down Yusuke. If you tense up it’ll hurt more.” The teen nodded and did what was asked of him. Keeping eye contact with his mate, Hiei plunged in.
The pain hit him in a swift wave, and Yusuke unconsciously tensed up. Hiei messaged Yusuke’s thigh, waiting patiently for a sign to begin the better part.
Yusuke let out a sigh, as the pain soon diminished and bliss ran through his entire being. Seeing the boys’ content face, Hiei began a rocking motion, easing the pain away and more pleasure to race through him.
“Hiei, Shit, Hiei. Fuck!”
Hiei couldn’t help but snicker.
“Yes, Yusuke, that is what I am doing.” Yusuke attempted a glare up at the demon riding him faster now, but was subdued by more shudders and moans escaping him. Until a wave of pleasure shot up his spine with such intensity all he could do was blink widely.
“That was your prostate Yusuke.” And angling himself just right, a few more pumps had Hiei hitting it once again.
The teen screamed out his lovers’ name, and met each thrust with his own, each becoming more frantic and greedy. Breathing mingled with moans and gasps, kisses became needy and eager.
Hiei could feel his climax approaching, and roughly grabbed on to Yusuke’s cock, pumping it up and down in tune with their own thrusts. With a strangled cry Yusuke came with such intensity white blotches streaked across his vision. His thick creamy cum sprayed across their chests and Hiei’s hand.
A few thrusts later, Hiei came within Yusuke. All energy leaving him in one whoosh had him collapsing on top of Yusuke. Both men just stayed where they were, completely out of energy, merely gasping for breath. Until Yusuke pulled Hiei to his side, and smiled that cocky smile of his, his brown eyes gleaming with joy.
“Wow!” With that Hiei chuckled, and the two fell asleep in the others arms.
OOOooo
C.S: So how was my first lemon? I am always open to hints and suggestions to make anything better. But I couldn’t go into too much detail because of the limits on Fanfiction.Sorry that the chapter was shorter then I normally have them. I thought it was an okay start after a three month writer’s block. Please R&R I love feed back!!
TnzK: Hi! It’s me again. I finally finished as soon as I could. A MAJOR congrats goes to CS, Sury, and Meikouhaikitsune (whoever that may be. But hey, it said thanks at the top, so I’ll say thanks too!) I hope you all enjoy the beta’ed version. I made a few itty bitty changes and I hope CS doesn’t kill me. See you all later when she decides to send me another chapter! Love ya and please review!
C.S: God i love that girl! I think you all do as well.. cause she fixed all those disgusting spelling errors.