Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ a moment late,a love lost ❯ Is it 2 late? ( Chapter 1 )

hello everyone (waves)

well this will be my second(woot) fic. probably won't be anybetter than the first,but we can hope :).This will have atleast 2 parts(maybe i could go alot of ways with this,im in a sad mood so it's probably going to be a non happy ending,well idk i guess you'll just have 2 read XD).

Disclaimer: i do not own yyh or its characters.k. i may own this plot but i assume it was thought of before just not the same words,just ideal i will again assume.so there,no sue me now :) r& r please i have a craving for reviews and it may just cheer me yup

warnings: boy/boy love,nothing to bad!maybe swearing, i could add a few choice words,crappy story ect ect may be sad,depends on how much it takes to upset you.

a moment late,a love lost -part 1

Hiei's p.o.v

You told me you loved me,I was pissed off and shocked to say the least,i mean who saw THAT coming.Without thought i slapped you,but hey i was caught up in the moment and didn't have control. I told you i hated you,but it was the opposite of that in truth,I just didn't know it yet.There were unshed tears in your eyes as you fell on your bed.I caught myself feeling guilty,but quickly swatted it away.So i did the only thing i could, i ran.How i regret that now, it probably was the most stupid thing i could have done, it's what sealed your fate,i'm almost sure of that.But i didn't know this then and ran till my legs gave way.My first coherent(sp?? i have no ideal well im workin on using the dictionary,it's a start ^^) thought was of how stupid and weak you were to have those kind of feelings.I guess living in the ningen world had really changed you,opened your eyes to love and what not(heheh hiei thinkin or speaking what not,well i thought it was funny ^^)How the hell could you love me,kitsune?I couldn't ever feel that way for you,or could I? Realization dawned on me,i did have those feelings,and i did love you.(ya corny and bull shitty but im not a good writer so its just going to 'dawn' on hiei that he liked kurama in the way i wrote it,k)I harbored the same feelings for you as you did me. You were the only person(or fox)that had gotten past my barriers.damn and i prided myself on how no thing could get past my walls of ice(well except yukina we all know he would do anything for her).I guess you melted my heart,fox,congratulations(sp??)not anything could do that,but that was before i meet you. I'll me damned(1) if you didn't know.I'm coming Kurama and once i get to you we can start a new chapter in our lives,together.

end of hiei's p.o.v

nobody's p.o.v

A black blur could be seen moving(couldn't find a better word,and yes i know that's pathetic but hey i don't have that big of vocab so deal >-__-< don't know where this face came from but it means im not listening,i put it in for the hell of it ^^)through out the trees.Finally hiei made it to kurama's window sill.The window was open.(good thing 2 cuz hiei may have jus broken it open ^^)

end of nobody's p.o.v

Hiei's p.o.v

I silently made my way into kurama's room,the window was opened so no broken glass to clean up, i doubt kurama would be happy if he had to replace his window.The lights were off so i assumed kurama was in bed, i checked and the futon was empty.It was then that i noticed the bathroom light on stalked over to the door. I quickly slipped inside and to my horror seen a blade in kurama's hand hovering over his left wrist.He looked up to me and it was then i noticed the tear trails on his face,red hair slightly mused.

end of part one

ya i know should have made it a one-shot but,i didn't so ha.well now you have a choice the blade has not made contact to kurama's wrist yet, happy or sad ending. if you read this then please review and tell me what ending you whould prefer! ^^ thankies and please read,till the next chappie i