Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Back At One ❯ like a dream come true... ( Chapter 1 )

A/N: Hi everyone! Anime-Alee is BACK! Ooooooh Yeah! I am so sorry for my several month absences but I'm back to create more fics now more than ever! ^-^

 

But the version of this story I first posted had to be censored, due to FF.Net removing it!

 

In case the people reading are fans of my YYH & Inuyasha fics then this Extra: (is for you.) I am posting new stories and updating, I know I've been out for several months, and I hope everyone will welcome me back by enjoying my fics and reviewing. I'm so proud with my success in my four most popular fics: Surprises, Bloody Roses, Bitter, and Caramel. > All Inuyasha fics, I am so pleased. Thank you so much!

 

And thank you all for any little review/response for all of my fics, even if my fic might've been a little stupid. When I first joined the site, my starting fic was flamed beyond belief, and but thanks to the people who new I was new guided me by giving helpful tips.

And to see the popularity of my second Inuyasha fic Surprise skyrocket compared to my other three unsuccessful fics, I was almost at tears. I never knew I could write something that people would like,

 

Then during my work on Surprises I started another fic, Bloody Roses. I was amazed at its sudden success, both fics soon rose over the high 300s in reviews, who knows, while I've been gone they could've risen to 400. Then while working on Bitter and posting it, I once again hit the jackpot!

 

Months later…I decide after downloading the City High song “Caramel” that inspired me to write a Inuyasha fic titled after the song and base the story line on the meaning in the lyrics. It was also a hit but stiller slower to rise then the other fics, that didn't matter, I was just happy getting terrific responses.

 

For the new writers on the site: if your reading this and you are a rookie writer this message is for you. No matter what your reviews are, take'em, good or bad. And if you get advice, I suggest you take their advice. In the long run, it's beneficial.

And if you want a lot of reviews, but you aren't sure what kind of response you'll get when you post you first fanfic. Here is some advice from me to you, kay? No matter if your fic is popular or not, just make sure you are happy with the work you've done writing it. If your not then you begin to get writers' block and lose interest in what you're writing, and even if you only get 5 reviews, it still creates this warm feeling. That people like what you're doing, it's nice. And I'll even give you a tip, is my special secret to make a popular fic:

for example let's say you're writing an Inuyasha fic, hopefully you're a Kag/Inu fan or a Sango/Miroku fan. If not then that's your immediate down fall, basically everyone, who loves Inuyasha the show, loves those two pairings. Therefore creating- along with a good plot and idea- a popular story.

But there are some series where you just don't like the majority's favorite couple, like for me I absolutely hate the fav. Couple to write about in the YYH anarchy, it's a yoai: Hiei and Kurama. Even though I know how to make a likable YYH story, I don't. I write about the character romance I want to,

I'm not gonna tell you which YYH characters I write about, cause I get flamed a lot for doing it, but you gotta learn to write about what you wanna write about, even if people don't like it.

 

Old A/N: Hey there, this is an attempt to write another incest fic. And before you gross out “Shut up” If you don't care for incest leave, I'm not making you read this…am I? Though me, Luna Stargazer, Starr Yasato, Alastair and maybe a few others have written on this adorable couple. Yukina/Hiei are so unbelievably kawaii! I love writing on them,

 

Disclaimer: I do not own YYH, its characters, or the song “ Back at one”.

 

Inspiration: The romantic song Back at one, ugh! That song makes you feel all tingly; Brian McKnight has such a gorgeous voice. The song'll make you melt in your chair; it's sort of a 90s' R&B classic. But it's definitely good,

 

Summery: The two most unlikely people realize their love under heated circumstances; this fic is starring Yukina & Hiei. Yukina is in heat caring for Genkai's shrine while the unknowing old psychic and Yusuke take a training trip, and a certain fire demon makes an appearance.

 

Warning: this fic contains Incest between Yukina & Hiei, lemon and. If you do not approve of incest then leave!

 

Ages: Hiei-15, Yukina-15, in human years! I am aware demon years are different,

 

 

Back At One

Chapter1: like a dream come to true

 

 

 

I probably should've told Genkai of my condition before she & Yusuke's departure. I feared my decision was foolish, I- being a koorime-cannot fend for myself. So if I had fallen prey to a demon I would've been vulnerable, but even if it were to have been Kurama or Hiei there with me, my retched scent would've overcome them. I'd rather be raped by a stranger, then carry the shame every moment, in which I'd see one of my friends.

 

I gazed out my bedroom window; the silver moon bathed the cement ground in an eerie glow. It was almost hypnotizing to look at; I shook it off. I had other thoughts grinding at my mind, “ I hope the forest demons cannot smell me from this range”, I prayed silently. I didn't want to be harmed in such a way,

 

I was so paranoid as night had fallen, I tied my sash tightly; so -if worse came to worse- it wouldn't come undone easily. My palms rested on the locked sill, they sweated heavily as I waited out a good portion of the night.

 

“ I really wish my oniisan loved me enough to come here and protect me, especially at times like these, but even if he did, the extreme height of my female hormones would tempt him to have me for himself”. Little did I know his presence was closer than I'd imagine. Protecting me as he always had,

 

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I sat perched in a temple tree, nestled against three rounded limbs. I was relaxed, peering every now and then towards my imoutochan's room. It lay passed the courtyard I was guarding, hn, these filthy unworthy demons that were seeking my twin's body came sneaking towards her every now and then …without success though.

 

Yukina must've gone into heat, why she did not inform anyone I have no idea. Did she honestly want to be taken advantage of? I doubt it, but I still don't understand why she didn't at least ask for my protection, well actually I did know.

 

Remembering my purpose, my senses picked up on another one. I snarled as I watched a rogue shadow slowly creep towards her direction, I moved swiftly, pouncing the lower-level demon and removing his head with my blade cleanly. I felt bad though; I tainted the concrete with the putrid blood of her assailant. It was like purple slosh the mutated and bubbled until there was a acid mark and a dark hideous stain. Yukina had mopped the ground to perfection, and now look what I had done?

 

After the butcher of many disgusting vermin I laid back comfortably in my tree. My feet dangling from the branch, I lowered my eyes to my knees. I had not really thought much of it but as each hour passed by, a growing strain made it way into my stomach, it wasn't painful…but I was afraid of what it was leading to. I knew that feeling all to well,

 

I shifted repeatedly trying to relieve the strain, “ No”! I shook my head, I realized my body had begun to betray me, the affects of the demoness pheromones! Her scent was intoxicating; it engulfed my senses completely in its sweetness. It was like a soft welcoming breeze of ice, of our homeland. it made my whole body shudder in pleasure. It felt so good, but I was furious at my body's response to my sister's.

 

To say she was not the most breath taking being I'd ever laid eyes on would be a lie. Her cerulean long straight tresses were so soft and silken, her skin fair and resembled ivory. Her glossy lips were a lovely shade of violet, and her small frame had perfect petite curves in all the right places. She was so wonderfully sculpted; I had truly pondered how we could've shared the same womb. There it was! I caught my mind drifting to the horrible truth,

 

Yukina-herself-was too innocent and warmhearted for any man or demon alive, and I was no exception. I had soon after her rescue grown to love her in a brotherly way, the way I was suppose to love her.

 

 

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I felt so restless, my ruby eyes gave off a crimson luster. The pheromones began to make me nauseated and dizzy, I dislike demon cycles; they remind me of experiences animals go through when they mate. I hate the similarities us demons have with the common animal, both males & females go through heat cycles. It's ridiculous, I felt like some sort of treacherous beast, hidden under the exterior of a koorime.

 

Some days I thought being an ordinary human girl would be easier, and life itself would be without complication. But even though the koorime were very judgmental, I was proud to be my mother's daughter and I was proud to be my brother's little imouto. But I felt so tense at the time, and when I felt sad or any distressed I would often take soothing strolls along the temple's ground.

 

Maybe I could do it, take a short walk… What harm could come if it were merely a short walk? I pondered, I might sooth my soul. “ Just a short one”, I made up my mind and walked slowly, yet hesitantly the double doors and trembled slight with each step I stood upon.

 

“ You'll be fine Yukina”, I bit my lower lip till it was swollen. Constantly telling myself I'd be fine was making me nervous. Huffs of cold air came from my whispers, I was a koorime though and the cold, harsh winters were nothing I felt.

 

I clenched my chest, I had always had the protection of the Isle during my heat but this was different. I was on solid ground without anyone, I dreaded what awaited me but at the same time curious. No males had come at all?

 

I found that peculiar, but nonetheless I was grateful for no further trouble. My lavender slippers touched the base of the ground, making a loud scratching noise, which startled me a bit.

 

I chuckled nervously at my stupidity, but it was soon shaken off. My stare traveled to my surroundings, checking for a demon presence, I stepped from side to side taking a small whiff of the frozen night air.

 

It's undeniable that we should be together

Its unbelievable how I use to say I found her

The places you need to know, if you don't know how I feel

 

My heart skipped a beat as I picked up on a demon's youki, I wasn't sure to flee or to…investigate, the presence felt warm and familiar. Was it my oniisan? Could it be Kurama, or…someone else? I felt paralyzed, I couldn't get my legs to quickly carry me back up the steps to the temple. But if the presence was familiar why would it be a bad demon, if it was someone I knew why would they be sneaking around the temple so late at night, did they sense the height of my heat? questioned,

 

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I gradually awaited another trespasser, but to much of my surprise they had not come. They must've sensed my arousal….and predicted I'd claim Yukina for myself. I could only dream of having a gorgeous mate, wife and mother of my children; like my twin but there are lines even in demon society that even I wouldn't dare cross. She was too delicate and flawless to ever touch with my rough hands.

 

I hated myself for these incestuous thoughts, I bet that if she knew she'd be ashamed. I didn't deserve her kindness or even a second glance from her intense ruby eyes, I was there only to protect her from the clutches of these inhumane bastards. I had no intention on acting on my demon / male instincts,

 

Then let me show you now that I'm for real

If all things in time, time will reveal

Yeah…

 

I shut my eyes momentarily trying to drive away these horrible thoughts, and as they fluttered open I saw a small figure growing inching closer to my tree. I unsheathed my katana, sitting up ready to dart at this visitor and stealthily dispose of it. When the small demon wandered into the moonlight out of the shadows I saw it was no intruder however, it was you! My anger leveled, and reformed as shock, why were you wandering aimlessly like a fool, but thankfully you didn't yet detect me. I watched you closely as you held your clenched hands to your chest looking around desperately, as if you were on unsure of yourself.

 

You were cloaked in the dark serene, making you look -if even possible- more breath taking. The pheromones radiating off your body nearly made me lose my balance and fall of the branch I was perched on, My own hormones almost made me do other wise.

 

One…you're like a dream come true

Two…just wanna be with you

Three…girl its plain to see, you're the only one for me

 

I was paralyzed, no matter how much I struggled to blur away before you saw me, I just couldn't. My growing desire for untouched body was overwhelming, so much so I could not control my bodily functions. And they betrayed me, freezing me in place.

 

I was fearfully awaited your soft gaze to make contact with my own bloody one. I swallowed hard, hoping I be able to rid the knot in my throat. But to no avail, and in some time you shivered frighten as the limb beneath me cracked lightly. You hesitantly stared up at me, you gasped in fear where you saw the look on my face, along with my sword out “ Hiei”!?

 

I cringed, I had wanted you to think of me as nothing more then a mere shadow. But now, you knew of me and if you made kind gestures towards me I might not be able to control myself, I had to distance myself from you. your scent was intriguing for any male, and me being her oniisan did not diminish the risk.

 

Four…repeat steps one, two, three

Five…make you fall in love with

If I ever I believe our work is done, I'll start on back at one

 

To be continued…

 

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New A/N: Once again hoped you liked it, love Alee.

 

Old A/N: Hey peeps, I hope you like the first chapter…if NOT then I'd appreciate it if you kept your comments to yourself, I hope ya'll be open minded. And I swear if one of you cowards say I'm sick or something I'll hunt your ass down and flame you and give ya a piece of my mind!

 

Much love (^_^)

[Anime-Alee]