Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Back At One ❯ Chapter#3 ( Chapter 3 )

A/N: here we go again…. I'm assuming that all the haters haven't learned from the shout-out I gave 2 flamer #1 AngelofDarkness28, sad…I don't like being a bitch but I am a defensive person by nature. Let the responsive ass flaming begin; flamer #2 yuki, yuki, yuki. Yes, I had to make them Bro and sis in this fic. The reason, you ask? Oh…well, BECAUSE I FELT LIKE IT!!!! Please understand I do not take any of this shit to heart, it brings a delighted smile to my face.

 

However I do not sit and take it either, and for you I have a special message: Only cowardly anonymous people usually have the nerve to speak out, I only admire people who have the guts to say this shit as a person who has an available e-Mail address or a membership here. I am taking after Nesha's or as she is called now kikyousgurl's example and firing back at flamers! I really admire her, how she doesn't take shit from anyone. So I think of you as a coward ^.^ have a nice day yuki,

 

 

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Flamer's shout out #3 Beth and Pals,

Just so you, and everybody else know I am hysterically laughing at you. I'm laughing because I betting you are pals #1 & #2, and that's pretty funny because you have the nerve to talk down to me when your ass is under anonymous! Like I have said, people who talk shit to other people and speak their twisted mind freely without giving an e-mail address is a flat out coward. So I can guarantee that you are laughed at by all of my friends, and not taken seriously.

I'm out (\) ^_^ (/) Bring it baby, to all the lousy jealous writers out there flaming dedicated YukinaxHiei authors and authoresses! J.O.S.E. “Jealous Ones Still Envy” quoted by Fat Joe! Isn't this saying true, it fits in everyday life for anyone who's been hated on.

 

Last comment 4 the fic*

 

I value what Yukina & Hiei fanfics there are, most of them come from:

Luna stargazer, Starr Yasato, Alastair, myself and other courageous authors. We all deserve some respect and recognition for the outstanding work we all put into our stories, we don't write to be yelled at or flamed. We or at least I do it for the sheer joy of others, for those dedicated fans out there that support Yukina/Hiei fanfiction. We now and maybe forever will remain a small group that exchange glances at each other's stories but maybe that's how it suppose to be.

 

I solemnly believe we all get flamed, no mattered what the pairing no matter what the story is; is out of jealousy. The twin pairing isn't killing you haters is it? So you can squirm dramatically and moan or do whatever you wish to pick at people who have a life just to make yours more interesting. Or whatever, I believe ya'll have nothing better to do. But I cannot deny your sorry asses the right to your own opinions but just remember, we're not the manically depressive fatso lying lazily on the couch. Pondering how to make other peoples live more hectic, you are.

 

Just keep in mind ladies and gentlemen: J.O.S.E. to all the leeching flamers out there!

 

Disclaimer: I do not own YYH, its characters, or the song “ Back at one”.

 

Inspiration: The romantic song Back at one, ugh! That song makes you feel all tingly; Brian McKnight has such a gorgeous voice. The song'll make you melt in your chair; it's a 90s' R&B classic. But it's definitely good,

 

Summery: The two most unlikely people realize their love under heated circumstances; this fic is starring Yukina & Hiei. Yukina is in heat caring for Genkai's shrine while the unknowing old psychic and Yusuke take a training trip, and a certain fire demon makes an appearance.

 

Warning: this fic contains Incest between Yukina & Hiei, lemon and. If you do not approve of incest then leave!

 

Ages: Hiei-15, Yukina-15, in human years! I am aware demon years are different,

 

Back At One

Chapter3: you're the only one for me

 

 

I glared in irritation down at you, I would not be patient and take orders. I was a proud demon warrior, pride was the most overwhelming emotion to exist. Pride can make you do such cruel things, my pride clouded my conscience. From the emotion alone enhance by my jagan, all of my sensitivity was evaporated.

 

That cursed thing, I had only equipped it so I could protect you. But the effect was quite the opposite, no wonder; the name -jagan- meant evil eye. I probably should've thought of why it was translated to that specific title,

 

It was foul, it radiated of pure darkness and blood. If I had only have know, whenever I was overcome with sexual desire it would awaken. Not by myself but on its own, I could hear it's vague whispers. Telling me to act on my urges, sometimes the damned thing would keep me awake for hours on end.

 

My eyes were dry and cringing from my lack of sleep. It was like my darker half, -as if I wasn't dark enough- ` Hiei', it would growl. ` Why do you ignore me? Ignore your `natural' desires'!? I tried desperately to drown out the piercing voice, that taunted my constantly.

 

It only got worse…once, when I was visiting one of Makai's slums on a mission for Mukuro; I was wandering threw one of the narrow alleyways. The darkness was seeping into every crack and a mysterious fog loomed and drifted all through the route I was taking, I'll put it this way; I was barely able to see my hand in front of my face, thanks to my curse - the evil eye - I was able to proceed and navigate my way through.

 

There beside a heap of garbage lay a drugged up hooker, she was unconscious and mumbled miscellaneous things every once in a while. She was cheap looking, the tragic thing looked around 13 -younger than myself- she was full bred raiden youkai. Those are far less common to glimpse at now a days. Her hair was in dreads of amber with a mixture of ratty golden blonde, her mascara was smeared, and her blazing red lipstick was blotched all down her chin.

She looked fucked up, literally. She wore barely anything; her black leather strapless shirt was patched with various fabrics, her arms were bruised and cut vigorously. And lower her legs were spread open, her panties must've been pulled off as she was out. Her torn skirt was only to her mid-thighs, and her panty hoes were netted with holes patterned down them. She looked: vulnerable

 

I hated myself for the savage thoughts that stained my mind at that moment. I was turned on, my member began to grow and throb against my trousers. I smacked myself at my sudden weakness and began walking away from her motionless body, “ wanna fuck short stuff”? A drowsy voice called out to me, my footfalls stopped abruptly. I winced as I turned to see the shameless woman wolf whistle at me, and fingered me to approach her - she was still pretty out of it - I began to walk again, trying to repress the urge to grab her by the ankles lift them to her

head and fuck her until I was sufficed. But of course I didn't take orders or requests.

 

I rubbed my throbbing temples and sighed, “ You really don't want that, chiisai-raiden”. I told her honestly, sure she was a hooker, and did this sort of thing daily but still; she'd never have an experience like the one she was asking for, with me.

 

She stood wavering to each side every now and then, she grimaced a seductive smirk my way, “ I haven't had a customer who's called me that, `little thunder` huh…and trust me”, she spoke with silent gaps between her sentences “ I've been called many things in my profession. And shorty, I'd do any for the right price…how much you got on you”?

 

I groaned in irritation, I turned slowly to face her. She was `doable' meaning: I could fuck her, but I wouldn't exactly be proud of myself by lowering my standards to drugged up hookers. Hookers were not trust worthy, and we - of course- both males and other females looked down upon them, as if they were the lowest existing creature to ever live. Me paying for a meaningless fuck wasn't something I'd like to get out, especially to the pack of soldiers I monitor and command. I was their strict and harsh general, I was earning their respect by inches and not even the scum we have as soldiers fuck hookers.

 

But ironically enough my implant didn't see eye to eye with my decision. “ Just a quick fuck master, no one will know…you can dispose of `her' afterwards. No one will think less of you if they don't know, right”? It pleaded forwardly, I rolled my original two eyes at my own stupidity of getting it implanted in the first place! It has formed it's own groove into my skull and wrapped and adapted itself into my nervous system, so it's every lecherous thought was exposed to me,

 

Unfortunately they were all gruesome, murderous and gory. Much like my own, but much more morbid, and denying my own body and this wretched thing was nearly impossible. I needed satisfaction soon or it might be by someone I love, and that was something I would die before I'd do that.

 

After I fighting a long and distressing battle within my jagan even takes its needs into its own hands. Since it had full access to my mind it could shut off all my morals, and all my pride. I hated it for the awful things it made me do, I raped and took innocent lives.

 

Normally I wouldn't think twice about it, but not having a say infuriated me. I am not a rapist nor will I ever intentionally be, remember…it is it that rapes and kills defenseless women for the sex it craves…not me,

 

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I stared agape at you, you looked down on me with such lust it was overwhelming to observe. Of course going into this I knew you were going to dominate me but…give the word and have the last? I suppose my heat was bringing out your hi instincts to forcefully take me. At first I wasn't really sure if I cared,

 

From what I have heard hi youkai are the cockiest , most pride filled of all varieties of races existing in makai. They were savage when mating and very primal, that for one summed you up, Hiei. You were confident, I would really know why you acted like your shit didn't stink till you took me. Mmm, that was the greatest most exalted moment of my life, even despite the pain you caused me.

 

You leaned closer, your nose and lips inches -if even that- away from my facial features. “You wanna be dominant”? You teased, “ Though I'd doubt you'd take the job, imoutochan”. You growled low, in fact your deep throat growls began vibrated in your broad chest, evolving into playful purrs.

 

I blushed faintly and nodded timidly, your arm on either side on my head. Your blistered fingers moved to my loose silken sea salted strands, every so often you'd tug on the tips, teasing me to see my flustered reactions.

I smoothed my tongue over my dried lips and spoke “ Hiei…please, I want to mate with you, we have all night for your pleasurable teasing”. I whined, shifting purposely beneath you. And to my prediction you moaned hungrily in response, “ Please”?

 

You rolled your eyes, all three and began pull up your black clad cloak with my weak assistance. And after a few split seconds of cloths rustling, your well-toned chest was finally bare for my glimpsing pleasure. You had and still do have a drool worthy body, that any male would kill for.

 

Kazuma would be so hopelessly jealous if he witnessed how built you were underneath your cloak that conceals you in this mood. Doesn't Mukuro watch you train and spar? Did she not see how desirable you are, and wasn't she seeking a mate then? Well, I suppose that's in the past.

 

You obviously noticed I was enjoying your muscular chest, I was stroking it and pinching your skin to get a response that your every muscle was awaken and would use every ounce of strength on this night.

“ Now, I will submit this time only…Yukina, I will not obey you next time, understand”? You scoffed while sitting back on your heels to unbuckled your trousers, I peered at you with curiosity as you tugged, and pulled at your thin white belt.

 

“ There would be a `next' time”? Not that after kissing you and feeling the way you felt me I wouldn't want it but…I thought you were more of a fling kind of guy? I was stupid, I was about to lose my virginity to my twin and the man I was in love with, and I was lingering on words that you slipped to me. Though I didn't know on what level I cared for you until after we mated. And neither did you,

 

After brushing away my distracting thoughts I saw YOU, I jumped slightly at your um…. Surprise, I'm still a bit shy about saying the word, ****. Anyway, your **** hanging above your target. I blushed the color of a strawberry, and turned my head to the side; tearing my gaze from yours.

 

“this'll hurt, imouto, you'll adapt”, you whispered into my ear causing my entire body to shudder in pleasure. You snuggled your face against the junction of my neck to my shoulder, your tense hands gripped my hips on each side with both hands and plunged in.

 

I gasped in utter shock with a mixture of pain, you had yet to tear through my seal, but it still hurt. You must've been large for your height because my walls were stretching to the point of stinging pain, but in several ways I happily accepted what you were giving to me.

 

I racked my nails into your flesh and you circled my barrier of virginity, the anxiety was enough to kill. But I wasn't ready to throw it all away, I was gonna live it out; one baby step at a time.

 

“ It'll hurt, you'll adapt”, you whispered low. Hoping I'd not hear the part where you emphasized the word hurt, without a single breath being able to escape my throat you ripped through me. I bit my bled lip to brace myself for the minute lasting pain that seemed to never end,

 

“ Hiei”! I cried out, you rested for a mid-second then proceeded in your slick, fast pace you had done with your fingers. I could feel my virgin blood gush through me and drizzle out my previously used opening, and in my white-lighted pain I could feel my pulse beating within.

 

My eyes shut tightly, this wasn't how I would've imagined how my first time would be. With my twin, painful, and permanent.

 

You moved swiftly, my grip around your body tightened. It felt like falling at a rapid pace and all you could do was hold on till you reached the end,

 

You groaned with each slick jerk of the pelvis. I never knew you took sex so seriously as to be a perfectionist, you constantly checked on me, seeing if I felt each heated movement. You saw how much I was enjoying it, and weren't worried.

 

After a whole hour of pumping in and out your back faltered, and felt weak. We both knew your end was coming quick, you were going at such a brisk pace. But then you did something I didn't understand, you wrenched you neck up and pulled out of my swollen hole.

 

I blinked rapidly, I didn't understand why you had stopped. We had enjoyed ourselves, you turned my body so my bottom was against you abdomen. And my palms resting on the forest floor, “Hiei I,” I whispered bewildered.

 

“I know what I'm doing,” You sat back on your heels so your **** was rubbing sensitively against the back of my currently used opening. I had chilly shivers down my spine, I knew this would be fun. You rocked forward pushing it forcefully through,

 

I let out a mournful whimper; I stroked my hair off my bare neck. You had paused to check on my condition, leaning down, your hot breaths against my neck. Your chest vibrating with husky purrs against my back, nuzzling your nose affectionately.

 

“I'm okay,” I whispered, and with that notion was enough to get you back on that slick pace you had begun with. But harder and more anxious,

 

I felt your **** increasing in size within me, and I did not see any chance of your arousal wearing any time soon. But as long as I live, I never want it to stop. I was pure bliss,

 

 

 

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A/N: sorry ya'll, I promised that the a/n: above the chapter would be my last but…you know how it be, I just got any quote from one of my favorite rappers: Jay-z, off his final album The Black Album. In his new joint Dirt off your shoulders, he says “Gotta get that dirt off your shoulders”, remember loyal YukinaxHiei fans and writers, all them haters are just dirt, ya need to brush em' off your shoulders. You're better than them,

And whooooo ^.^ sorry I accidentally write another lemony cliffy, oops!

 

 

Much love ya'll (\/) ^_^ (\/)

 

 

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