Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ clichés ❯ The Beginning! ( Chapter 1 )

Yo, this is Number one! It's not really a chapter...it's more like a preview, or a prologue. I don't own the fabulous Yuu Yuu Hakusho characters...it's very sad. Whatever.

I'm annoyed with all the Yuu Yuu Hakusho cliché's ...so I made a story dedicated to telling all of them...with new little bits added on. Onward, Onward! And please review! Just so you know…Hiei will be normal and Hiei-ish most of the time, but when a cliché' starts he'll go all….emo-ish.

Hiei sits in his tree staring at Kurama in his slightly stalker like way… looking for all the world like one big-ass bird…lost in his thoughts. Like most people who are lost in their thoughts, Hiei is not aware of his surroundings and doesn't not realize that the branch he's perched on has begun to bend.

Darkness, it is a useful alley if you know how to control it. Darkness hides you. The night holds all secrets. However it also bounds…

I stare into the window below, and am met with a most beautiful face…it's his face. Kurama…I see you writing at your desk, your silky red hair falling gently over your pale flawless body, your face is a look of concentration. Everyday you do this, enduring this horrible place, talking and pretending that you're one of these damned fool humans.

You don't seem to mind though…is it because you enjoy it? No…it's because of her. It's always because of her. It must be nice to love that much.

The branch is cracking…bits and pieces are falling to the ground…all the other woodland creatures on the branch abandon it.

Sometimes I hate her though. How she gets all of your love, and never seems to realize it. She doesn't see how you have no love left for anybody else. No love left for me.

I know I will never have his love, because I am the dark one. The Forbidden one. Nobody can love me; I should know that by now.

Yet…when you tease me about my sister, or when you care for my wounds, or even when you press your back against mine in battle…I feel as if perhaps there is love in you for even me.

Kurama…I lo-

The branch collapses, sending the surprised Hiei tumbling down past Kurama's window and on to the hard ground. Branches can only take so much angst weight for so long. Hiei gets up slightly disoriented and whizzes off…. only to smash into another tree. Ow. It's not Hiei's day.

Kurama startled looks around outside his window, “What was that then?” Looking down he sees a small very familiar shape lying on the ground cursing.

“OH, SONAVABITCH!”

“Hiei?”

Yaaaaay! The first one, please give me suggestions! AND REVIEW! I've never really written good angst so I would like feedback. I know I got silly at the end…. think I got away with it?