Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Concrete Angel ❯ Concrete Angel ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: Kagome-must-DIE 
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Drama | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 05.21.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 655 | Visits: 737 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Drama | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 05.21.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 655 | Visits: 737 | Status: Completed
This fic is based on a song called "Concret Angel" you can watch the video on yahoo. This little girl is abused by her mother and her mom abuses her so much that she kills her.
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Tears slid slowly down the fire demon's cheeks as he stood in front of her grave,his-supposed-to-be-mate.
~~~~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
With you
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Hiei was in the forest waiting for you so you and him could run away from your mother. You were stuffing everything you would need into your back pack. You opened the window and climbed out. Your leg got stuck and your mother came in she grabbed your leg and twisted it. "AHHHHHH!!!",you screamed in agony as youre mother still was pulling your now broken leg. After kicking her inb the face 3 times she let go. You ran down the dirt path to the forest. Your mother ran grabbed her gun and started to run after you. With your broken leg you were very slow. Hiei ran to you and picked you up. But,your mom was a demon too. She caught up to you and Hiei and pulled you away from Hiei and beat you on the head with the gun. You felt the top of your head and saw the warm red liquid. You tried to get up but your led and the blood loss stopped you. She shot your leg once. The blood flowed freely from your leg. She punched your face. Her eyes were red with anger and murder. Hiei was surronuded by demons. He tried to kill them but, ofr each one killed 2 mored appeared. Your mom was beating the crap out of you. She took off her belt and pelted you with it. You were losing alot of blood,you felt light heaed.
Yusuke,Kurama,and Kuwabara arrived to help. After all that you managed to get up and try to fight back. "SILENT SCREAM!!!!!!",you screamed as all the power was being sucked out of you to turn your mother's organs inot liquid. Your mother side stepped and said," you will never amount to anything!!! AND YET YOU STILL ASK FOR LOVE!!! YOU DON'T REPESCT ME AT ALL!!!!!!"
After the boys managed to kill all the demons they ran to you. Your mom held the gun to your head. Just as the boys got to you Yusuke pulled your crazed mom off you and killed her. There you were , on the floor like a new born baby. You couldn't move. You felt someone pick you up into their arms.It was Hiei. "I know I never told you this _________ (your name) but I love you and I wanted you to be my mate",he said. Hiei didn't hear a response. Your whole body was limp. Lakken arrived. When she saw you there like that she burst inot tears. You never even knew how it felt to be loved. You didn't know what love was. You died not even telling the love of your life that you truly loved him. She knew that you would've died for any of her friends. Tear filled Hiei's eyes at the site before his eyes. His love was ...dead. "_______." Kurama went to comfort Lakken.
"Hiei,_______,is dead.",Yusuke said. The world seemed to stop spinning right there. The words rang in Hiei's head. Botan came to take you away. Before Hiei gave you to Botan he planted a kiss on your now white lips and gave you a perfect teargem that belonged to him.
End FlashBaack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei sat there replaying the whole thing in his mind. He was about to leave but he pulled out 2 things,a picture frame with a picture of the gang,and a black teargem. He laid it next to your tomb stone and walked away.
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Tears slid slowly down the fire demon's cheeks as he stood in front of her grave,his-supposed-to-be-mate.
~~~~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
With you
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Hiei was in the forest waiting for you so you and him could run away from your mother. You were stuffing everything you would need into your back pack. You opened the window and climbed out. Your leg got stuck and your mother came in she grabbed your leg and twisted it. "AHHHHHH!!!",you screamed in agony as youre mother still was pulling your now broken leg. After kicking her inb the face 3 times she let go. You ran down the dirt path to the forest. Your mother ran grabbed her gun and started to run after you. With your broken leg you were very slow. Hiei ran to you and picked you up. But,your mom was a demon too. She caught up to you and Hiei and pulled you away from Hiei and beat you on the head with the gun. You felt the top of your head and saw the warm red liquid. You tried to get up but your led and the blood loss stopped you. She shot your leg once. The blood flowed freely from your leg. She punched your face. Her eyes were red with anger and murder. Hiei was surronuded by demons. He tried to kill them but, ofr each one killed 2 mored appeared. Your mom was beating the crap out of you. She took off her belt and pelted you with it. You were losing alot of blood,you felt light heaed.
Yusuke,Kurama,and Kuwabara arrived to help. After all that you managed to get up and try to fight back. "SILENT SCREAM!!!!!!",you screamed as all the power was being sucked out of you to turn your mother's organs inot liquid. Your mother side stepped and said," you will never amount to anything!!! AND YET YOU STILL ASK FOR LOVE!!! YOU DON'T REPESCT ME AT ALL!!!!!!"
After the boys managed to kill all the demons they ran to you. Your mom held the gun to your head. Just as the boys got to you Yusuke pulled your crazed mom off you and killed her. There you were , on the floor like a new born baby. You couldn't move. You felt someone pick you up into their arms.It was Hiei. "I know I never told you this _________ (your name) but I love you and I wanted you to be my mate",he said. Hiei didn't hear a response. Your whole body was limp. Lakken arrived. When she saw you there like that she burst inot tears. You never even knew how it felt to be loved. You didn't know what love was. You died not even telling the love of your life that you truly loved him. She knew that you would've died for any of her friends. Tear filled Hiei's eyes at the site before his eyes. His love was ...dead. "_______." Kurama went to comfort Lakken.
"Hiei,_______,is dead.",Yusuke said. The world seemed to stop spinning right there. The words rang in Hiei's head. Botan came to take you away. Before Hiei gave you to Botan he planted a kiss on your now white lips and gave you a perfect teargem that belonged to him.
End FlashBaack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei sat there replaying the whole thing in his mind. He was about to leave but he pulled out 2 things,a picture frame with a picture of the gang,and a black teargem. He laid it next to your tomb stone and walked away.