Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Cross-dressing ❯ Winter Break ( Chapter 10 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
Shun208: Here comes the dirty scenes, here comes the dirty scenes. Here comes the danmmmm diiirtyy sceeennnneees!
Hiei: Can stop singing that stupid song again!
Shun: You know you love that song!
Hiei: No I don't!
Kurama: In this story, Who will I get to make love with?
Shun: (Name)
Kurama: <change into Yoko> This will be fun! <Evil grin>
Shun: Don't you DARE rape her you shit head! <Hitting Yoko in the head with a bat.>
Yoko: *Nose bleed*
Hiei: hahahahahhahaahah!
Yoko: OW! Come back here SHUN!
Shun: *Running like shit* Oh Fuck! *Fall down, Making Yoko fall on top of her*
Yoko: *Looking down at her* Oh hello! *Smirk*
Shun: *Looking down* AH! My shirt!
Hiei: Get off her! *Runs and holds Shun*
Shun: Enjoy the story!
Winter Break...
Sunday Morning......1:15 A.M.
You opened your eyes and see Yoko on top of you. He was licking your neck. Both your shirt and pants were off. *OMG! He is SSOOO Fine! Wait what am I say! I'm about to get raped! Wait but I do want to! But must wait!*
"Yoko!"
Yoko looked up. Flames burn in your eyes. "GET OFF ME!" You yelled as you get up. Yoko fell on the ground. You slip of the bed into Yoko's arms. You are now on top of him. He smiled as he kissed you. He bit your lower lips softly as you opened your mouth. He
stuck his tongue inside your mouth as you two French kiss. He pushes you over. He was now on top of you. He left your leg. He moved his hand up. Toughing your legs. You wrap one of your legs around Yoko.
He started kissing your neck slowly. He then turned back to Kurama. He kissed you slowly as he pulled the covers over both of you. (Yes! There was a little of this and that! But no lemon...Sorry! Not just yet!:)
6:00 A.M.
You opened your eyes and saw Kurama. You kissed him. You too got up and changed. You then heard laughing out side of the door. You and Kurama gets up. You swing the door open. There stood Shun and Hiei. "SHUN!" Flames burn in your eyes.
She gets up and slaps you on the butt "SECOND BASS!" She runs off. "SHUN!!!!" You run after her like crazy. She runs back and also slaps Kurama on the butt. "YOU DID IT!" She yells and ran like shit. Now both you and Kurama ran after her. She runs into Hiei's arms.
"They didn't go to second bass just yet. They were just making out. A little this and that. But they haven't had sex just yet." Hiei smirked. "You and that jagan of yours!" You run over. Hiei carries Shun and run like hell.
This went on for hours....
9:00...
It started to snow. "I forgot! It's winter break!" You shouted. "WE should call Yusuke and then to come over!" Shun runs over to the phone and called them. Kurama walks to Shun "Tell them to come over to Genkai's, We should stay over there instead. That place is to small." Yusuke said. "Alright then, Yeah my place is to small for Kurama and (Name) to have sex"
Kurama blushed and hit Shun in the head. "Okay then! Bye!" She hung the phone. She got up and walked to Hiei. He was sitting on the window sill, looking outside as it snowed. Kurama runs over and trips her. She starts falling. Hiei turns around and saw Shun falling. Her face lands right onto Hiei's thingy, Hiei blushed.
Shun gets up and blush. "You ASSHOLE!" She runs after Kurama. "Fox! You are so died!" Hiei runs after Kurama also. Kurama trips and fall on top of you. Shun stops running and falls on Kurama. She was on four. Hiei fell down and was on top of Shun. (Doggy style!)
Yusuke and Kuwabara walks in. "Hahahahahhahahha!" They laughed. "Wow! Four some! Don't hurt Kurama, Shun!" Yusuke and Kuwabara joked.
Botan comes and blush. "On my!" Koenma laughed. "Stop laughing! Me and Shun have business" Hiei pulled Shun up. She was now sitting on his lap. Hiei put his hand between Shun's leg. She blushed bright red as Hiei smirked.
Yusuke and Kuwabara stopped laughing. Kurama pulled you on top of him. Your chest was touching his. Your legs were wrapped around Kurama. "Can't you see we're busy" Kurama smirked. Botan then closed he door quietly. "Losers!" Shun was gonna get up when Hiei pulled her back down. Flipping her over and kissed her. Kurama fell foreword and kissed you.
Shun and you broke your kisses. "Get off!" Shun pushed Hiei over. "Lets go!" You pushed Kurama off. You and Shun walked out of the door blushing. Hiei and Kurama smirked as they both walked out of the door.
As they walked the Genkai's temple. Shizuru was also there. You picked up two snowballs. You threw it at Kurama and Hiei. "That's what you get Hiei you punk!" "(Name)!" Hiei got a snow ball and threw it at you but missed. You dodged it. Instead it hit Shun right in the face. "Why you! You hit her!" You threw one at Hiei but missed. It hit Yusuke in the head.
"You!" He threw it at you but it hit Botan. She threw one at Yusuke but missed. It hit Kuwabara. He threw it as it hit Koenma in the face. He threw one and hit Yukina in the face. She threw one and hit Keiko. They all fought. "I hate you all!" Shun walked into the temple. "For real" Kurama walked in. Only Shun and Kurama wasn't playing.
"Shun! Come back!" You screamed as you ran to the door. Shun swung the door opened as Kurama threw a snowball at your face. Shun threw one at Hiei. "BO YA!" They both laughed and gave high five to each other. Hiei ran over and grabbed Shun. He jumped into the snow with Shun in his arms.
You grabbed Kurama the threw him into the snow. He grabbed your hand. Making you fall on top of him. You two were gonna kiss when Shun threw a snowball at you. You got up "Shun!" You screamed. Hiei grabbed Shun and pulled her down with him. "AAHH!" She screamed as she fell. Kurama pulled you down also.
"Hiei! Stop!" She laughed. "I love holding you tho!" He smiled. She turned around, about to kiss him.
Botan then threw a sb (From now on! SB Will stand for Snowball!) at Shun. "Botan!" She got up and jumped on Botan. Keiko threw one at you. You got up and ran after her. You and shun then ran into each other. Yusuke threw a large sb at Hiei. Hiei came out of the sb and jumped Yusuke. Kurama ran over and jumped on them both.
You and Shun got up. You threw a sb at Kurama. Shun threw one at Hiei. Hiei got up and ran to her. Shun started running around with her hands in the air. Hiei then caught up with her. He pushed her down and fell on top of her. He kissed her softly.
Mean while....
Kurama ran after you like crazy. You ran into Yusuke and Keiko. You got up and ran and fell. Kurama pined up down and kissed up softly. Yusuke and Keiko kissed as it snowed. Koenma and Botan kissed. Kuwabara and Yukina hugged.
Everything was going just right. Kissing with no one interruption. Kurama was then hit with a sb. "Ha!" Shun laughed. Kurama got up and threw a sb at Hiei. Everyone started the fight again. Shizuru just stood at the door watching them.
Finally, after two hours of fun.....They all went inside.
"We're gonna stay here for the whole winter break." Yusuke smiled. (This was suppose to be about cross-dressing. What happened? Where's the cross-dress? Who cares! I sure don't!)
"Alright Genkai's place!" You jumped on the couch. Shun pulls you. "Gotta find our room first you idiot!" You two walk to the rooms. Yukina's room was first, then Kurama's, Hiei, Yusuke, Kuwabara, Botan and Shizuru.
"Yusuke was the one who chose your room and if you had to room with someone. Yusuke and Keiko, Botan and koenma, Hiei and Shun, Yukina and Shizuru, Kurama and (Name). Kuwabara will have the room to himself.
You didn't mind sharing a room with Kurama. Shun did. *What if Hiei tries something!* she thought as Hiei smirked.
You go into your room. It was the way Kurama wanted it. It was just how you liked too. It had (What you liked). Shun walked into her room. It had Final Fantasy things. A ps2 and everything she loved! "YES!" It was also how Hiei wanted it.
Something them caught both you and Shun's eyes. "YUSUKE!" Both you and Shun screamed. You held Yusuke as Shun held a bat. "I'll removed your dick if you don't put another bed in our room!" Flames burn in her eyes. Yusuke looked at you. You had a scissors. "Hey it was Hiei's and Kurama's idea!" Yusuke yelled.
You and Shun looked at Hiei and Kurama. You ran after Kurama into the room. Shun ran after Hiei into the room. Kurama pushed you to the bed. "You don't like me?" He said as he smiled. "I do it's just!" He then kissed you.
Hiei grabbed Shun and pinned her down. He then kissed her.
After a while....
"Lunch!" Yusuke yelled. You sat next to Kurama. Hiei sat next to Shun. You all eat some good stuff!
You all then were sitting on the couch. "I'm so bored!" You whined. "Lets play a game!" Yusuke smirked. "What kind?" You asked Yusuke grabbed a bottle. "Spin the bottle!" Yusuke having a perverted look on his face. "No!" Everyone yelled but Shun. "I'm cool, lets play! Anyone else?" Shun asked as she at on the ground.
"I'll play!" Hiei and Kurama sat on the ground. You then sat on the ground. Everyone else then joined. "Okay! Since some people doesn't like it when it lands on the wrong person. You can either French kiss, just a little kiss on the cheek, Or strip one piece of clothes every time you back out. The one with the most kiss with most of there clothes on wins whatever." Yusuke smiled.
Yusuke then spin the bottle. It landed on...on....ON.....You! He kissed you on the cheek knowing that if he FK, then he will loses more then his teeth. You spin. It landed on....Koenma. You kissed him on the cheek. Koenma spins and lands Kurama. Koenma and Kurama decide to skip off his shirt.
Hiei spins and lands on Botan. "No way!" Botan yelled. Hiei then kissed her on the cheek. She blushed. She spin and it landed on Shun. Botan kissed her on the cheek. Shun spin the bottle. It landed on Kurama. She smiled as she pulled Kurama. She french kissed him. There tongues touched. She then broke the kiss. "You all were too much of piss to french kiss!" She smiled. "Go Shun!" Yusuke laughed. Hiei got pissed. You didn't seem to care because you know she liked Hiei and she likes to do those shit.
Kurama spin. It landed on Keiko. The gentleman he was, He kissed her on the cheek. She spin. It landed on Yusuke. She french kissed him. He spin the bottle while blushing. It hit Kuwabara.
"No way!" They both took off there shirts. Kuwabara spin. It landed on Yukina. He kissed her on the cheek. Hiei had flames. She spun the bottle. It landed on Kurama. She kissed him on the cheek. Kurama spun it. It landed on you. As a gentleman, He kissed you on the cheek. He didn't want to fk you in front of everyone. You smiled.
You spin the bottle. It landed on Shun. You kissed her on the cheek. Shun spung it. It landed on Hiei. She smiled. He grabbed her and stick his tongue into her mouth. There tongues touched. She fell on the floor. She then broke the kiss. Everyone stared. Hiei then spun the bottle.
This went on like...FOREVER!
After dinner.....
The only person who didn't take off the clothes was Hiei. Shun had to take off her shirt because Yusuke tried to french kiss. She hit him. "Alright...I'm tried! Lets go crash." Yusuke walked back to his room with two slaps. One from Shun and Keiko.
It was eight o'clock. Shun walked back to the room after a shower. Hiei grabbed her. "I won the game, don't I get a prize?" Hiei smirked. "hmmm...Lets see NO!" She pushed him off. Hiei grabbed her and pushed her to the bed.
"What are you doing!?" She asked. "The door is locked. Don't worry. I'll take good care of you." Hiei untied her robe. "What are you doing!?" She yelled. "Just relax. Trust me...this won't hurt." He sucked on her neck. He carefully took off her bra along with her underwear. She closed her eyes tightly. He left her leg up. "Trust me...." Hiei looked into her eyes. She smiled. He smiled back and kissed her. He turned off the lamp and pulled the sheets over both of them.....
Mean while.....
You come into the room. Kurama grabbed you and kissed you. You kissed him back. Before you knew it, he was taking off your clothes. "What are you doing!" you shout. Kurama fell forward. You were now on the bed. "Shhhh..." Kurama kissed you slowly. He left your leg. "Relax okay..." He kissed your neck. He turned off the lamp. "Don't be scared.." He licked your neck. "I'm not scared. You smiled. He smiled back as he pulled the covers over both of you.....
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Hiei: Can stop singing that stupid song again!
Shun: You know you love that song!
Hiei: No I don't!
Kurama: In this story, Who will I get to make love with?
Shun: (Name)
Kurama: <change into Yoko> This will be fun! <Evil grin>
Shun: Don't you DARE rape her you shit head! <Hitting Yoko in the head with a bat.>
Yoko: *Nose bleed*
Hiei: hahahahahhahaahah!
Yoko: OW! Come back here SHUN!
Shun: *Running like shit* Oh Fuck! *Fall down, Making Yoko fall on top of her*
Yoko: *Looking down at her* Oh hello! *Smirk*
Shun: *Looking down* AH! My shirt!
Hiei: Get off her! *Runs and holds Shun*
Shun: Enjoy the story!
Winter Break...
Sunday Morning......1:15 A.M.
You opened your eyes and see Yoko on top of you. He was licking your neck. Both your shirt and pants were off. *OMG! He is SSOOO Fine! Wait what am I say! I'm about to get raped! Wait but I do want to! But must wait!*
"Yoko!"
Yoko looked up. Flames burn in your eyes. "GET OFF ME!" You yelled as you get up. Yoko fell on the ground. You slip of the bed into Yoko's arms. You are now on top of him. He smiled as he kissed you. He bit your lower lips softly as you opened your mouth. He
stuck his tongue inside your mouth as you two French kiss. He pushes you over. He was now on top of you. He left your leg. He moved his hand up. Toughing your legs. You wrap one of your legs around Yoko.
He started kissing your neck slowly. He then turned back to Kurama. He kissed you slowly as he pulled the covers over both of you. (Yes! There was a little of this and that! But no lemon...Sorry! Not just yet!:)
6:00 A.M.
You opened your eyes and saw Kurama. You kissed him. You too got up and changed. You then heard laughing out side of the door. You and Kurama gets up. You swing the door open. There stood Shun and Hiei. "SHUN!" Flames burn in your eyes.
She gets up and slaps you on the butt "SECOND BASS!" She runs off. "SHUN!!!!" You run after her like crazy. She runs back and also slaps Kurama on the butt. "YOU DID IT!" She yells and ran like shit. Now both you and Kurama ran after her. She runs into Hiei's arms.
"They didn't go to second bass just yet. They were just making out. A little this and that. But they haven't had sex just yet." Hiei smirked. "You and that jagan of yours!" You run over. Hiei carries Shun and run like hell.
This went on for hours....
9:00...
It started to snow. "I forgot! It's winter break!" You shouted. "WE should call Yusuke and then to come over!" Shun runs over to the phone and called them. Kurama walks to Shun "Tell them to come over to Genkai's, We should stay over there instead. That place is to small." Yusuke said. "Alright then, Yeah my place is to small for Kurama and (Name) to have sex"
Kurama blushed and hit Shun in the head. "Okay then! Bye!" She hung the phone. She got up and walked to Hiei. He was sitting on the window sill, looking outside as it snowed. Kurama runs over and trips her. She starts falling. Hiei turns around and saw Shun falling. Her face lands right onto Hiei's thingy, Hiei blushed.
Shun gets up and blush. "You ASSHOLE!" She runs after Kurama. "Fox! You are so died!" Hiei runs after Kurama also. Kurama trips and fall on top of you. Shun stops running and falls on Kurama. She was on four. Hiei fell down and was on top of Shun. (Doggy style!)
Yusuke and Kuwabara walks in. "Hahahahahhahahha!" They laughed. "Wow! Four some! Don't hurt Kurama, Shun!" Yusuke and Kuwabara joked.
Botan comes and blush. "On my!" Koenma laughed. "Stop laughing! Me and Shun have business" Hiei pulled Shun up. She was now sitting on his lap. Hiei put his hand between Shun's leg. She blushed bright red as Hiei smirked.
Yusuke and Kuwabara stopped laughing. Kurama pulled you on top of him. Your chest was touching his. Your legs were wrapped around Kurama. "Can't you see we're busy" Kurama smirked. Botan then closed he door quietly. "Losers!" Shun was gonna get up when Hiei pulled her back down. Flipping her over and kissed her. Kurama fell foreword and kissed you.
Shun and you broke your kisses. "Get off!" Shun pushed Hiei over. "Lets go!" You pushed Kurama off. You and Shun walked out of the door blushing. Hiei and Kurama smirked as they both walked out of the door.
As they walked the Genkai's temple. Shizuru was also there. You picked up two snowballs. You threw it at Kurama and Hiei. "That's what you get Hiei you punk!" "(Name)!" Hiei got a snow ball and threw it at you but missed. You dodged it. Instead it hit Shun right in the face. "Why you! You hit her!" You threw one at Hiei but missed. It hit Yusuke in the head.
"You!" He threw it at you but it hit Botan. She threw one at Yusuke but missed. It hit Kuwabara. He threw it as it hit Koenma in the face. He threw one and hit Yukina in the face. She threw one and hit Keiko. They all fought. "I hate you all!" Shun walked into the temple. "For real" Kurama walked in. Only Shun and Kurama wasn't playing.
"Shun! Come back!" You screamed as you ran to the door. Shun swung the door opened as Kurama threw a snowball at your face. Shun threw one at Hiei. "BO YA!" They both laughed and gave high five to each other. Hiei ran over and grabbed Shun. He jumped into the snow with Shun in his arms.
You grabbed Kurama the threw him into the snow. He grabbed your hand. Making you fall on top of him. You two were gonna kiss when Shun threw a snowball at you. You got up "Shun!" You screamed. Hiei grabbed Shun and pulled her down with him. "AAHH!" She screamed as she fell. Kurama pulled you down also.
"Hiei! Stop!" She laughed. "I love holding you tho!" He smiled. She turned around, about to kiss him.
Botan then threw a sb (From now on! SB Will stand for Snowball!) at Shun. "Botan!" She got up and jumped on Botan. Keiko threw one at you. You got up and ran after her. You and shun then ran into each other. Yusuke threw a large sb at Hiei. Hiei came out of the sb and jumped Yusuke. Kurama ran over and jumped on them both.
You and Shun got up. You threw a sb at Kurama. Shun threw one at Hiei. Hiei got up and ran to her. Shun started running around with her hands in the air. Hiei then caught up with her. He pushed her down and fell on top of her. He kissed her softly.
Mean while....
Kurama ran after you like crazy. You ran into Yusuke and Keiko. You got up and ran and fell. Kurama pined up down and kissed up softly. Yusuke and Keiko kissed as it snowed. Koenma and Botan kissed. Kuwabara and Yukina hugged.
Everything was going just right. Kissing with no one interruption. Kurama was then hit with a sb. "Ha!" Shun laughed. Kurama got up and threw a sb at Hiei. Everyone started the fight again. Shizuru just stood at the door watching them.
Finally, after two hours of fun.....They all went inside.
"We're gonna stay here for the whole winter break." Yusuke smiled. (This was suppose to be about cross-dressing. What happened? Where's the cross-dress? Who cares! I sure don't!)
"Alright Genkai's place!" You jumped on the couch. Shun pulls you. "Gotta find our room first you idiot!" You two walk to the rooms. Yukina's room was first, then Kurama's, Hiei, Yusuke, Kuwabara, Botan and Shizuru.
"Yusuke was the one who chose your room and if you had to room with someone. Yusuke and Keiko, Botan and koenma, Hiei and Shun, Yukina and Shizuru, Kurama and (Name). Kuwabara will have the room to himself.
You didn't mind sharing a room with Kurama. Shun did. *What if Hiei tries something!* she thought as Hiei smirked.
You go into your room. It was the way Kurama wanted it. It was just how you liked too. It had (What you liked). Shun walked into her room. It had Final Fantasy things. A ps2 and everything she loved! "YES!" It was also how Hiei wanted it.
Something them caught both you and Shun's eyes. "YUSUKE!" Both you and Shun screamed. You held Yusuke as Shun held a bat. "I'll removed your dick if you don't put another bed in our room!" Flames burn in her eyes. Yusuke looked at you. You had a scissors. "Hey it was Hiei's and Kurama's idea!" Yusuke yelled.
You and Shun looked at Hiei and Kurama. You ran after Kurama into the room. Shun ran after Hiei into the room. Kurama pushed you to the bed. "You don't like me?" He said as he smiled. "I do it's just!" He then kissed you.
Hiei grabbed Shun and pinned her down. He then kissed her.
After a while....
"Lunch!" Yusuke yelled. You sat next to Kurama. Hiei sat next to Shun. You all eat some good stuff!
You all then were sitting on the couch. "I'm so bored!" You whined. "Lets play a game!" Yusuke smirked. "What kind?" You asked Yusuke grabbed a bottle. "Spin the bottle!" Yusuke having a perverted look on his face. "No!" Everyone yelled but Shun. "I'm cool, lets play! Anyone else?" Shun asked as she at on the ground.
"I'll play!" Hiei and Kurama sat on the ground. You then sat on the ground. Everyone else then joined. "Okay! Since some people doesn't like it when it lands on the wrong person. You can either French kiss, just a little kiss on the cheek, Or strip one piece of clothes every time you back out. The one with the most kiss with most of there clothes on wins whatever." Yusuke smiled.
Yusuke then spin the bottle. It landed on...on....ON.....You! He kissed you on the cheek knowing that if he FK, then he will loses more then his teeth. You spin. It landed on....Koenma. You kissed him on the cheek. Koenma spins and lands Kurama. Koenma and Kurama decide to skip off his shirt.
Hiei spins and lands on Botan. "No way!" Botan yelled. Hiei then kissed her on the cheek. She blushed. She spin and it landed on Shun. Botan kissed her on the cheek. Shun spin the bottle. It landed on Kurama. She smiled as she pulled Kurama. She french kissed him. There tongues touched. She then broke the kiss. "You all were too much of piss to french kiss!" She smiled. "Go Shun!" Yusuke laughed. Hiei got pissed. You didn't seem to care because you know she liked Hiei and she likes to do those shit.
Kurama spin. It landed on Keiko. The gentleman he was, He kissed her on the cheek. She spin. It landed on Yusuke. She french kissed him. He spin the bottle while blushing. It hit Kuwabara.
"No way!" They both took off there shirts. Kuwabara spin. It landed on Yukina. He kissed her on the cheek. Hiei had flames. She spun the bottle. It landed on Kurama. She kissed him on the cheek. Kurama spun it. It landed on you. As a gentleman, He kissed you on the cheek. He didn't want to fk you in front of everyone. You smiled.
You spin the bottle. It landed on Shun. You kissed her on the cheek. Shun spung it. It landed on Hiei. She smiled. He grabbed her and stick his tongue into her mouth. There tongues touched. She fell on the floor. She then broke the kiss. Everyone stared. Hiei then spun the bottle.
This went on like...FOREVER!
After dinner.....
The only person who didn't take off the clothes was Hiei. Shun had to take off her shirt because Yusuke tried to french kiss. She hit him. "Alright...I'm tried! Lets go crash." Yusuke walked back to his room with two slaps. One from Shun and Keiko.
It was eight o'clock. Shun walked back to the room after a shower. Hiei grabbed her. "I won the game, don't I get a prize?" Hiei smirked. "hmmm...Lets see NO!" She pushed him off. Hiei grabbed her and pushed her to the bed.
"What are you doing!?" She asked. "The door is locked. Don't worry. I'll take good care of you." Hiei untied her robe. "What are you doing!?" She yelled. "Just relax. Trust me...this won't hurt." He sucked on her neck. He carefully took off her bra along with her underwear. She closed her eyes tightly. He left her leg up. "Trust me...." Hiei looked into her eyes. She smiled. He smiled back and kissed her. He turned off the lamp and pulled the sheets over both of them.....
Mean while.....
You come into the room. Kurama grabbed you and kissed you. You kissed him back. Before you knew it, he was taking off your clothes. "What are you doing!" you shout. Kurama fell forward. You were now on the bed. "Shhhh..." Kurama kissed you slowly. He left your leg. "Relax okay..." He kissed your neck. He turned off the lamp. "Don't be scared.." He licked your neck. "I'm not scared. You smiled. He smiled back as he pulled the covers over both of you.....
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