Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Cry Me A Crystal River Of Tears ❯ Cry Me A Crystal River Of Tears ( Chapter 1 )

Little information before you get started. This scene takes place in Makai, years before Hiei enters the human realm throught the sudo space. So yes, he is in his full demon form. If you like it let me know and i'll post the rest of the story because this is not it. But i'll only post it if you like, review!

Hiei heald her in a tight embrace against his steadaly beaten heart. Nanea's beautiful tears slid down her face once again. They sparkled the same astonding radience like they have in the past. The tears fell beautifuly from her eyes as they formed a most stuning river of water. Then they fell to the ground creating a most moist puddle of tears at her feet.

Hiei: "Nanea...Please don't cry. I'll always be there to protect you."

Nanea: "*Sniff*Sniff Hiei....."

Hiei tightened his grip and moved his right hand up her neck and into her brilant hair. This was the first time he's every heald anybody this close to him. He actully felt the breif sensation of love from her. At least that's what he thought it was. It was just now that Hiei relized that he had always loved Nanea. Even though she was most annoying at times....The way she followed him around saying "I'M GOING TO FOLLOW YOU UNTILL I FIND A WAY TO DEFEAT YOU!!! I can promise you this Hiei, My family will be aveged." The thought make him smirk. And yet, here he was holding her. Close as he could. Nanea's tears so full of joy and faint hope.

Nanea: "Hiei...I am so sorry I...."

Hiei: "Shh...It's alright Nanea."

"But i've spend these last few months trying to come up with ways to kill you and....and do terrible stuff to you..."

"Don't worry. That only means me and you are better suited for one another. I would have done the same to you. Exsept i'd probably have killed you without a second thought in mind."

"Hiei....."

"Nanea......"

There heads then came closer and closer. Slowly but steadly. Then the moment happened. Nanea and Hiei's liped toched and Hiei heald her all the more *close*Then it was like God had stopped time, just for them. Nanea stoped crying and it only helped her to enjoy the kiss more. Nanea started to run out of air and wanted to pull away but Hiei wouldn't let her. He heald her with a firm grip that Nanea could only break through at his own. They continued untill Nanea ran completly out of breath; To the point she would have died waiting any longer. The two then broke up and Nanea gasped despertely for air. Hiei smirked.

"Hn. Stupid human, your lungs are weak."

Nanea: "Yeah I know....Ouch!" She took her hand and placed it on her lip. "Ow...." Her lips were bleeding. "Great job forty eyes, now my lips are bleeding....."

Hiei: "Really? No wonder it tasted so good." Hiei licked his lips, they had her blood on them too. "Why not try again? I'll give you one more chance, But this time you have to do it right. Try and take a deeper breath."

Nanea: "Alright, I guess it couldn't hurt...." *Gleam*

Hiei: "Finally." And so they moved in closer just like before.

Nanea: "Perfect. He's off guard." *Swoosh* And with the swiftness of a fon she took the dagger from behind her back and jamed it stright into Hiei's Jagan eye. Hiei was stuned and remained frozen for a moment before falling to the ground. He was frozen like ice both by pain and emotion and just plain outlandish......Surprise. Three sepret and thick waterfalls of blood fell from his Jagan. Like the color of red wine mixed with black blended mud. I can't exsplain it much better than that.

Nanea crouched down on her knees and started lauphing like a madman. "I CAN'T BELIVE IT! YOU FELL FOR IT!!!"

Hiei just looked up at her. Eyes full of confusion. He could have sworn that she loved him. One tear fell from Hiei's right eye. It slid down his face and turned into a black hiroseki stone. That was the only tear he's ever shed in his intire life.

Hiei: "Na-Nanea.....Ulg." Hiei placed his right hand over his Jagan eye. "How....could you?"

Nanea: "Well Hiei, It's been fun. Now you die! I'll kill you here and now and avenge my family." Nanea took the dagger and heald it above Hiei's head. Hiei was weak and in severe pain, He shuffled. "Your dead."

Hiei: "Uh...."

"HAHAHAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" *SWOOSH* And in a motion faster that could ever be sawn Hiei unshealthed his sword...and cut of Nanea's head. An eight feet fountain of blood flew out of her neck, and her body hit the ground. She was the only one, Hiei ever truely loved, And he killed her. Hiei then walked towrds Nanea's headless body, blood still flowing from his hagerd Jagan eye.

Hiei: "You got what you wanted Nanea. I hope your happy. You should have known better than to betray me, I always backup my treats. This was the perfect end for you, wetch......Ohh......" Hiei then fainted and later awoken to the headless body of his only love.

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Well? Do you like it? If you have any coments at all please share! I'll be happy to write more if you think it's good, but it may take a while. Also, I live on the East Coast so Hurricane Charley is going to go right through my house! O_O I know I didn't need to tell you that but hey! I'm bored! -____- 0 yes I know that's a sorry excuse. But anywayssssss............................You know what to do! Ja Ne for now!