Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Dear Diary ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )
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By: kuramafangirl 
Hi this is the first time I’m posting a story. So please be nice and tell me what I can do to improve my story. Extreme ooc on Keiko part
Disclaimer: I don’t own Yu Yu Hakusho.
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 10.23.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 529 | Status: Work In Progress
Hi this is the first time I’m posting a story. So please be nice and tell me what I can do to improve my story. Extreme ooc on Keiko part
Disclaimer: I don’t own Yu Yu Hakusho.
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 10.23.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 529 | Status: Work In Progress
Dear Diary
December 30
Dear diary,
I saw them together again. I don’t know why I stay with him. He says he loves me but he always runs off with her. They say he has to go on missions. I know what really happens, I followed them once. And every time I ask Kuwabara or Kurama how the mission went they tell me, there hasn’t been one for months. I think they think I’m blind or just really stupid. They still don’t know I saw them. And the nerve of that jerk he keeps pressuring me to have sex with him. He keeps saying “You’ll do it if you love me” and things like that. I guess it’s my fault his with her I don’t give him what he wants so he goes to her. I just don’t know what to do.
Love, Keiko
He flipped though the next few entries and found they were almost identical. He stopped when he come to this entry.
January 25
Dear diary,
He’s with her almost all the time now. I think the others are starting to notice now. I’ve been having these thoughts lately I don’t know where they’re coming from. They’re of me killing him and they been happening more often. If he keeps pressuring me to have sex with him it will push me over the edge and I might kill him. Awhile a go I would never have had thoughts like these and if I did I would feel terrible about it. I don’t though I feel perfectly fine in fact I might want him to try to force me so I’ll have a reason to kill him. I know this doesn’t sound like me I don’t know what has come over me but… I … I think I like it.
Love, Keiko
He was surprised at what he had just read. He had misjudged her he had thought she was the innocent good girl she made herself out to be. The rest of the entrees were about the same until he skipped to the last entry in the diary the date was earlier that day. It was about 10 p.m. when he read this entry.
February 13
Dear diary,
I can’t stand it. I’m sure everyone knows now and they pretend they don’t when I’m around. Don’t they realize that by not telling me I’ll just get hurt more? Well not really, but if I hadn’t known it I would have been. They must really hate me. I get it, they want to hurt me. They want me to suffer, but starting tomorrow they will be the ones suffering. I know what I’m going to do. Do you want to know? Well I’ll tell you. Since he’s my boyfriend, at least that’s what he says he’ll have to come over tomorrow since it’s St Valentines Day. I know he’ll come he does, that come on holidays and special occasions just to keep up a façade, so I might think we are still dating. To bad for him that it didn’t work. It’ll cost him his life. It’s ironic really I was the one to bring him back, and I’ll be the one to kill him. How can this pathetic girl hope to kill him, you might ask. It’s simple really he trusts me completely. A foolish thing for a cheater to do. So, he’ll never suspect anything, not the drugs I put in the chocolate or me being this mad over him. Well, I’m not mad, not really, I think I might be glad he did this. Really I don’t think he’ll see this coming. After he’s drugged I’m still not sure what to do. Should I kill him myself or should I free his foes and give him to them. It would be easy to get them out of Reikei now that I have trained. No one knows but I have been training with Genkai. She thought I should be able to defend myself since I would be an easy target for any demon after Yusuke. I find it hard to believe not one of them sensed that my spirit energy was above average. Its just more proof that I’m ignored. As long as no demons are after me I’m invisible. It doesn’t mater anyway, I’ll be gone soon and they won’t notice they’ll be too busy looking for Yusuke so unless they find this, I‘ll be gone without a trace. But no matter what happens, Yusuke will be dead againand I’ll be gone.
Love, Keiko
That was the last entry. Koenma was shocked to say the least. ‘This must be a fake there’s no way Keiko would write this. But I better check it out anyway. I’ll ask Genkai if she trained Keiko, if so I’ll have no choice but to look into this further. Until then I’ll consider this a fake.’
He left to Genkai’s temple to confirm whether the diary was fake or the real thing.
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Some where in the pits of Reikei
A dark figure crept in the shadows undetected. A smirk appeared on her face as she reached her goal. A slightly worried look passed quickly over her face as she thought of what she was about to attempt, realizing that it could easily turn on her.
What was she doing here? Getting help for her plan of course. She hoped that they would go along with her plan or at least one of them would. If not then this trip would be a waste of time seeing as she could always just do it herself.
********************************Keiko’s Pov*********************************
As I crept along silently I started thinking about a few of the demons I was about to confront and how they tried to kill me. So I started having second thoughts about the whole thing. I quickly shuck those thoughts out of my head. If I was to succeed I needed to keep calm.
Looking around the corner I saw a few of the tortured souls he put here and I knew that my plan would work perfectly. I could feel the hatred rolling of them in waves, the hatred that made them so much stronger then before.
*******************************Normal Pov**********************************
The dark figure slipped past the guards into the room. She mentally laughed at the pathetic “security” that guarded the room.
Once she entered she felt a few pares of eyes land on her and once again she smirked. The ones that had sensed her are whom she would use. As her eyes scanned them she recognized who they were the first one she saw was Karasu he wouldn’t be of much use since Kurama was the one he wanted dead. The next one was Suzaku she could definitely use him seeing as Yusuke was the one who killed him. The last one who turned was Rando, according to Genkai, the only reason Yusuke, beat him last time was because a fluke. So she had two chances, Rando or Suzaku.
End chapter one
This is my first fanfic ever. Please tell me if I should continue this story.
December 30
Dear diary,
I saw them together again. I don’t know why I stay with him. He says he loves me but he always runs off with her. They say he has to go on missions. I know what really happens, I followed them once. And every time I ask Kuwabara or Kurama how the mission went they tell me, there hasn’t been one for months. I think they think I’m blind or just really stupid. They still don’t know I saw them. And the nerve of that jerk he keeps pressuring me to have sex with him. He keeps saying “You’ll do it if you love me” and things like that. I guess it’s my fault his with her I don’t give him what he wants so he goes to her. I just don’t know what to do.
Love, Keiko
He flipped though the next few entries and found they were almost identical. He stopped when he come to this entry.
January 25
Dear diary,
He’s with her almost all the time now. I think the others are starting to notice now. I’ve been having these thoughts lately I don’t know where they’re coming from. They’re of me killing him and they been happening more often. If he keeps pressuring me to have sex with him it will push me over the edge and I might kill him. Awhile a go I would never have had thoughts like these and if I did I would feel terrible about it. I don’t though I feel perfectly fine in fact I might want him to try to force me so I’ll have a reason to kill him. I know this doesn’t sound like me I don’t know what has come over me but… I … I think I like it.
Love, Keiko
He was surprised at what he had just read. He had misjudged her he had thought she was the innocent good girl she made herself out to be. The rest of the entrees were about the same until he skipped to the last entry in the diary the date was earlier that day. It was about 10 p.m. when he read this entry.
February 13
Dear diary,
I can’t stand it. I’m sure everyone knows now and they pretend they don’t when I’m around. Don’t they realize that by not telling me I’ll just get hurt more? Well not really, but if I hadn’t known it I would have been. They must really hate me. I get it, they want to hurt me. They want me to suffer, but starting tomorrow they will be the ones suffering. I know what I’m going to do. Do you want to know? Well I’ll tell you. Since he’s my boyfriend, at least that’s what he says he’ll have to come over tomorrow since it’s St Valentines Day. I know he’ll come he does, that come on holidays and special occasions just to keep up a façade, so I might think we are still dating. To bad for him that it didn’t work. It’ll cost him his life. It’s ironic really I was the one to bring him back, and I’ll be the one to kill him. How can this pathetic girl hope to kill him, you might ask. It’s simple really he trusts me completely. A foolish thing for a cheater to do. So, he’ll never suspect anything, not the drugs I put in the chocolate or me being this mad over him. Well, I’m not mad, not really, I think I might be glad he did this. Really I don’t think he’ll see this coming. After he’s drugged I’m still not sure what to do. Should I kill him myself or should I free his foes and give him to them. It would be easy to get them out of Reikei now that I have trained. No one knows but I have been training with Genkai. She thought I should be able to defend myself since I would be an easy target for any demon after Yusuke. I find it hard to believe not one of them sensed that my spirit energy was above average. Its just more proof that I’m ignored. As long as no demons are after me I’m invisible. It doesn’t mater anyway, I’ll be gone soon and they won’t notice they’ll be too busy looking for Yusuke so unless they find this, I‘ll be gone without a trace. But no matter what happens, Yusuke will be dead againand I’ll be gone.
Love, Keiko
That was the last entry. Koenma was shocked to say the least. ‘This must be a fake there’s no way Keiko would write this. But I better check it out anyway. I’ll ask Genkai if she trained Keiko, if so I’ll have no choice but to look into this further. Until then I’ll consider this a fake.’
He left to Genkai’s temple to confirm whether the diary was fake or the real thing.
________________________________________________________
Some where in the pits of Reikei
A dark figure crept in the shadows undetected. A smirk appeared on her face as she reached her goal. A slightly worried look passed quickly over her face as she thought of what she was about to attempt, realizing that it could easily turn on her.
What was she doing here? Getting help for her plan of course. She hoped that they would go along with her plan or at least one of them would. If not then this trip would be a waste of time seeing as she could always just do it herself.
********************************Keiko’s Pov*********************************
As I crept along silently I started thinking about a few of the demons I was about to confront and how they tried to kill me. So I started having second thoughts about the whole thing. I quickly shuck those thoughts out of my head. If I was to succeed I needed to keep calm.
Looking around the corner I saw a few of the tortured souls he put here and I knew that my plan would work perfectly. I could feel the hatred rolling of them in waves, the hatred that made them so much stronger then before.
*******************************Normal Pov**********************************
The dark figure slipped past the guards into the room. She mentally laughed at the pathetic “security” that guarded the room.
Once she entered she felt a few pares of eyes land on her and once again she smirked. The ones that had sensed her are whom she would use. As her eyes scanned them she recognized who they were the first one she saw was Karasu he wouldn’t be of much use since Kurama was the one he wanted dead. The next one was Suzaku she could definitely use him seeing as Yusuke was the one who killed him. The last one who turned was Rando, according to Genkai, the only reason Yusuke, beat him last time was because a fluke. So she had two chances, Rando or Suzaku.
End chapter one
This is my first fanfic ever. Please tell me if I should continue this story.