Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Fanfiction ❯ Wait For It ( Chapter 3 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: Eirka Black410 
The gang just finished Chapter 3 of the story and are on to chapter 4. Will Hiei actually smile? Will he laugh?
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Suspense / / Comedy / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 07.23.2004 | Updated On: 07.23.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 796 | Visits: 423 | Status: Work In Progress
The gang just finished Chapter 3 of the story and are on to chapter 4. Will Hiei actually smile? Will he laugh?
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Suspense / / Comedy / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 07.23.2004 | Updated On: 07.23.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 796 | Visits: 423 | Status: Work In Progress
(A/N) Well the good news is that this story can only get better for you and worse for me and a few other possible writer's who might be in this story. gulp I better get hiding runs to a safe place Don't tell Hiei or Kurama where I am, PLEASE!
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WAIT FOR IT
Yusuke and Kuwabara were having a tough time hiding their laughter. With ever word that Keiko read, they laughed even harder. If the story wasn't about him, Hiei might have been laughing as well. Of course, this onna had to write about him.
Keiko had just finished up chapter 3.
"HOW DID THAT ONNA KNOW ABOUT MY TEAR GEM?!" Hiei gritted through his teeth. "AND WHY DID SHE WRITE ABOUT THIS GIRL MASSAGING MY BACK?! NONE OF THIS MAKES ANY SENSE!"
"I think it's kinda cute," teased Yusuke.
Hiei picked Yusuke up by the collar. "TAKE THAT BACK!" he ordered. Yusuke just started laughing all over again.
"Why don't we read the next page?" Yukina suggested.
After a few minutes of reading, Keiko started to laugh as well. "Guys you have to hear this. 'All of a sudden, before they were in view of the dojo, Hiei stopped walking. He then kissed Erika’s cheek.
“What was that for?” asked Erika.
“For that massage you gave me. I need to pay you back some how,” teased Hiei.'," she started laughing as hard as Yusuke and Kuwabara.
Even Kurama started laughing. It wasn't only because of the story, it was also because Hiei was now red from embarrassment.
"WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING AT FOX?!" Hiei demanded.
Kurama just shook his head, still laughing.
"FINE! I'LL CONTINUE READING!" said Hiei.
And that was excatly what he did.
"'“Dare,” answered Yuseke.
“Alright. I dare you to,” thought Cat looking around, “kiss Kuwabara on the lips.”
“WHAT?” yelled Kuwabara and Yuseke.
“You have to do it,” said Cat.
“We better make this quick,” said Yuseke. Yuseke and Kuwabara looked at each other, then closed their eyes. Slowly their lips touched. And man was it gross and funny.'," read Hiei. Now it was his turn to laugh. Actually everyone was laughing except for Yusuke and Kuwabara.
"What? That's not funny!" said Kuwabara.
"STOP LAUGHING!" Yusuke ordered.
They couldn't stop so Yusuke went back to reading. When he came to the part about Kurama kissing Cat with tongue, he laughed again and Kurama stopped.
"I don't know why you think this is funny. I don't even know this girl," said Kurama.
"Come on Fox, you have to admit it's pretty funny," smiled Hiei. (A/N: WOW! Has anyone actually seen Hiei smile a true smile? That's kinda scary and I am a HUGE Hiei fan!)
"Just you wait. This story is about you so you won't be laughing much longer," muttered Kurama. It was his turn to read. "'Erika took a few minutes to think. “Double Dare,” she said knowing she was taking a risk.
Kurama looked at the others and sighed. He knew what he was going to have her do. “I double dare you to kiss Hiei.”
“WHAT? ME KISS POINTY BUTT!” she yelled.
“You have to. That’s the rules of the game,” said Kurama.
“Damn you. Do I at least have a choice?” Erika asked.
“Alright,” said Kurama.
Erika went over to Hiei and softly kissed his cheek. “Now if you will excuse me, I’m going to bed.” And with that she left.
When she was gone, Hiei put his hand over the spot where she kissed him. “No one has ever kissed me. Even if it was on the cheek,” he said.
“Kurama you better help him get to bed. I want to talk to Erika,” said Cat, who finally got over the kiss she and Kurama shared.'"
Just as Kurama predicted, Hiei stopped laughing. This was getting funnier and funnier....with only one problem. Hiei was going to find out who write this story sooner or later and when he did, he would kill the onna who wrote this.
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(A/N) Well chapter 3 is done. Do any of you guys know a good place to hide?
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WAIT FOR IT
Yusuke and Kuwabara were having a tough time hiding their laughter. With ever word that Keiko read, they laughed even harder. If the story wasn't about him, Hiei might have been laughing as well. Of course, this onna had to write about him.
Keiko had just finished up chapter 3.
"HOW DID THAT ONNA KNOW ABOUT MY TEAR GEM?!" Hiei gritted through his teeth. "AND WHY DID SHE WRITE ABOUT THIS GIRL MASSAGING MY BACK?! NONE OF THIS MAKES ANY SENSE!"
"I think it's kinda cute," teased Yusuke.
Hiei picked Yusuke up by the collar. "TAKE THAT BACK!" he ordered. Yusuke just started laughing all over again.
"Why don't we read the next page?" Yukina suggested.
After a few minutes of reading, Keiko started to laugh as well. "Guys you have to hear this. 'All of a sudden, before they were in view of the dojo, Hiei stopped walking. He then kissed Erika’s cheek.
“What was that for?” asked Erika.
“For that massage you gave me. I need to pay you back some how,” teased Hiei.'," she started laughing as hard as Yusuke and Kuwabara.
Even Kurama started laughing. It wasn't only because of the story, it was also because Hiei was now red from embarrassment.
"WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING AT FOX?!" Hiei demanded.
Kurama just shook his head, still laughing.
"FINE! I'LL CONTINUE READING!" said Hiei.
And that was excatly what he did.
"'“Dare,” answered Yuseke.
“Alright. I dare you to,” thought Cat looking around, “kiss Kuwabara on the lips.”
“WHAT?” yelled Kuwabara and Yuseke.
“You have to do it,” said Cat.
“We better make this quick,” said Yuseke. Yuseke and Kuwabara looked at each other, then closed their eyes. Slowly their lips touched. And man was it gross and funny.'," read Hiei. Now it was his turn to laugh. Actually everyone was laughing except for Yusuke and Kuwabara.
"What? That's not funny!" said Kuwabara.
"STOP LAUGHING!" Yusuke ordered.
They couldn't stop so Yusuke went back to reading. When he came to the part about Kurama kissing Cat with tongue, he laughed again and Kurama stopped.
"I don't know why you think this is funny. I don't even know this girl," said Kurama.
"Come on Fox, you have to admit it's pretty funny," smiled Hiei. (A/N: WOW! Has anyone actually seen Hiei smile a true smile? That's kinda scary and I am a HUGE Hiei fan!)
"Just you wait. This story is about you so you won't be laughing much longer," muttered Kurama. It was his turn to read. "'Erika took a few minutes to think. “Double Dare,” she said knowing she was taking a risk.
Kurama looked at the others and sighed. He knew what he was going to have her do. “I double dare you to kiss Hiei.”
“WHAT? ME KISS POINTY BUTT!” she yelled.
“You have to. That’s the rules of the game,” said Kurama.
“Damn you. Do I at least have a choice?” Erika asked.
“Alright,” said Kurama.
Erika went over to Hiei and softly kissed his cheek. “Now if you will excuse me, I’m going to bed.” And with that she left.
When she was gone, Hiei put his hand over the spot where she kissed him. “No one has ever kissed me. Even if it was on the cheek,” he said.
“Kurama you better help him get to bed. I want to talk to Erika,” said Cat, who finally got over the kiss she and Kurama shared.'"
Just as Kurama predicted, Hiei stopped laughing. This was getting funnier and funnier....with only one problem. Hiei was going to find out who write this story sooner or later and when he did, he would kill the onna who wrote this.
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(A/N) Well chapter 3 is done. Do any of you guys know a good place to hide?