Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Feelings ❯ Watching ( Chapter 2 )

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ce: *sighs* Hey.

Scottie: *raises eyebrow* What's with you this time?

ce: Nothing. I'm just bored. Just about everyone went on a family vaction this summer and I'm stuck here. *pouts*

Scottie: You're just mad your boyfriend went on vacation.

ce: No. I'm happy he gets to. He's gonna have more fun there than here, anyway, if it keeps raining. I'm just mad I'm stuck with you. *sticks out tongue*

Scottie: Deal with it. Besides, if you went on vacation, you wouldn't be able to give the lovely reviewers another chapter.

ce: There weren't very many. But I'm very grateful that you guys did review! I got more reviews on this than my other stories. Three on both of them. Five on this. Pathetic, huh? I'm still not sure why I have to put the extended chapter up.

Scottie: That might make the lazy people that didn't review last time, decide to ACTUALLY review. Honestly, I think this is a pretty good story, and most of our friends that have read this think it is, too. WHY won't anyone review?!? But like Daisy said, we are very grateful for those to actually take the time to review.

ce: *smiles* Yep! Those few reviews made us decide to post this. Even with so few, they were pretty encouraging. I wish everyone could be nice and review. That'd help us. *goes into deep thought* Maybe we should hold this chapter a few days. Just to see if anyone else will be kind enough to take the short time to review.

Scottie: You've already wrote the thing on paper. Get it wrote on this computer. If you don't...ngh...forget it. Just type it, okay?

ce: *does a mock salute* Yessir!


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Reviewer Thanks:

Mea: Thanks! I really hope it will turn out good and hope you like this chapter!

Araxiel: Yeah. I sorta knew what you meant the first time. *smiles* And you have a good story goin' for you. Hurry and update your story, too!

silverkitsune89: Yeah. Kurama angst. So sad. But, it'll get happier soon!

kuramas_black_rose: Yep. Sad. Basically everyone of my friends have told me this. It's ironic, really. I sincerely hope you like this chapter, as well!

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Disclaimer: Like we've said at least a dozen times, we're both poor, and we're both loons. Do ya really think we could own anything? I think not.

Setting: Okay. This takes place with Hiei. Not in his POV, but with him. At the exact same time as the beginning of the first chapter.

WARNINGS: Yaoi (slash, male/male, male on male relationships, male with another male, sex between two males. You get the point), Shounen-Ai (some soft yaoi), Limes (sort of a lemon, but no actual penetration), some attempted suicide, and last, but not least...YAOI!!!! IF YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THIS, LEAVE!!!!. I will NOT have anyone flame us just because they didn't read the damn warnings. This whole thing basically deals with what is mentioned above. Again, if you have a problem with any of this, don't take it out on us. I have seen many stories, on many different sites, with reviewers who flamed the author because of this.

But if you do flame, they will be used as nightly entertainment for us and our friends. We like critism, just not if it's about something already in the warnings. Please leave if you have any problems with any of them. If you don't leave, and don't like this kind of stuff, the least you can do is try and enjoy it, especially since we've told you plenty of times to leave if you have a problem.

Scottie & ce: Enjoy!

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Feelings-
Chapter Two: Watching
by: colorless egyptian & Scottie

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Hiei sat in his favorite tree.

Thinking. Just thinking.

About what, you ask?

You'd be surprised.

'Why doesn't the fox voice his feelings. Instead of hiding them. Hn. He probably thinks I am none-the-wiser about them.' he smirked inwardly, keeping his outward expression neutral. Even if there was no one around, he couldn't be seen looking as if he were talking to himself, could he? 'Hn. Stupid fox. It does him no good to hide his feelings from one who must hide their own.'

A strong gust of wind blew through his short, spiked, black-and-white streaked hair. His ruby eyes closed briefly, resting them. A drop of rain hit his face. He shivered, and unconsciously pulled his black cloak, closer to his lithe, yet, muscular form. A frown raced over his sharp feautures.

'Why does the fox not want me to know of his feelings?' he questioned himself.

'Why else?' a voice countered. 'You are the Forbidden One. He thinks you could never return his feelings of deep care. It is only natural to think.'

Hiei's dark eyes narrowed, and he growled, deeply.

'Who are you?!?' he asked. The koorime hated not being in control of all his surroundings, and this, was not an exception.

'I am you.' it replied.

'What the hell are you talking about?!?'

'I am your inner voice...conscience...if you will.' it said back. (a/n: Sorry if we spelled that wrong.)

'Get out of...' the fire demon's thoughts trailed off, as he saw someone on the cliff above the valley. He cocked his head to the side, wondering who in their right mind, would have the guts to do it. He sniffed the air, trying to find out if it was a demon, or a ningen, (a/n: Is that spelled right?) but couldn't tell, because the wind had not let up, yet.

Hiei narrowed his eyes again, trying to find an energy source from, whoever, or whatever, it was, but it appeared that, too, would be unsuccessful. The figure had somehow hidden his ki. 'It must be a demon. No ningen could hide their energy source from me.'

Hiei stared at the figure, trying to watch it, through the rain, that continued to fall.

'Aren't you going up to see who it is?' the annoying voice asked.

'Why should I?'

He heard a sigh. (a/n: That would be weird, ne? Hearing a sigh from a voice in your head? Scottie: *opens mouth to say something* ce: *glares* Dont. Even. Think. About. It. Scottie: *shrugs*) 'You are hopeless. And you wonder why so many think of you as a cold, heartless demon.' it drawled, lazily.

Hiei scowled, and looked back at the cliff-top, seeing the figure step closer to the edge. He heard it say something, and then...

...it jumped...

...lightning flashed, showing blood-red locks...

Hiei's heart jumped to his throat. He looked down. Directly below the cliff, there were sharp, jagged rocks. 'Kurama...' he thought, before jumping down from his tree.

He ran.

He ran as fast as his body would allow.

He leapt on one of the jagged rocks, and went higher.

Higher.

Higher.

The lightning flashed again. He saw the kitsune's body slam into a sharp, protruding rock.

Hiei's eyes widened. He reached out his arms, grabbing onto the fox's pink-ish uniform, and pulled him into his strong arms.

He looked down, seeing that he was about ten feet above the rocks, and leapt over a fraction of an inch. Just enough to land them onto the ground safley, without harming either of them. Hiei landed gracefully, and collasped onto the ground beneath them, lied the youko down, and looked him over.

The kitsune had gotten quite a bit of damage, just by that one hit. The side of his face had a long, slender gash upon it. His right sleeve had been torn, and below it, was a deeper gash, than the one on his face. On his side, just below the rib-cage, was a side-long slash, that enabled you to see a small portion of his ribs, that Hiei knew, would be needed to be treated before it was infected. The rest of his torso was covered in small scratches, not really anything to be worried about. He had also passed out sometime during the fall. (a/n: Okay, I don't really know if you can get that much damage from hitting one sharp, rock, but that's how it works out in this story.)

'Well, are you just going to sit here, letting him die from blood loss?' the irritating voice asked him.

Hiei snarled, and picked up the limp body. 'He will not die. Not if I can help it.' he snapped.

"He will not die." he stated firmly, before launching himself to the direction of Genkai's temple.


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ce: Okay. So it's not long either. But, please,please tell us what you think.

Scottie: It'll really, really encourage us to continue this.

ce: We already have most of the third chapter typed, we just need a few more ideas. If you have any ideas, tell us in your review.

Scottie: If you don't review, you won't get another chapter.

ce: Please review!!!! *pouts* Please?

Scottie: *smirks* You're desperate.

ce: For reviews anyway.

Scottie: *shakes head in amusement* Crazy girl. PEACE OUT, PEOPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!