Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ forbidden love(redone) ❯ chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )
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By: military_kitty 
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 05.06.2007 | Updated On: 05.20.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 220 | Status: Work In Progress
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 05.06.2007 | Updated On: 05.20.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.2K | Visits: 220 | Status: Work In Progress
this is the beginning and intro. I don’t own yu yu hakusho but I do own Melanie.
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name: Dagon (real name Ross)
age: looks 19 but is 600
race: darkness demon
description: Dagon is 5ft.9 and has short brown hair. Always wears his school uniform. As Ross he wears upper body armor and black baggy pants. His face is covered with a mask and his body is covered in a cloak.
name: Melanie
age: looks 17 but is 5300
race:1/2 dragon 1/2 wolf (goddess)
description: when not talking to the council with her family or ruling 5 of the 20 dimensions she is in her school uniform. When ruling or talking with the council she wears a formal kimono or dress. she has short shoulder length brown hair and greenish gold eyes. As a wolf demon her hair goes to her mid back and is brownish black. She has a pair of red wolf ears on her head and a long red tail and her eyes turn a blood red. When she is a dragon she looks like she is human with giant black and red dragon wings connected to her back and a long black scaly tail. when she a mix of both her dragon and wolf forms she has looks human but has her dragon wings and wolf ears and tail.
sentri
looks about 17 but is about 491
is half lynx demon half thunder panther
she is about 5ft.9in. she always wears a uniform from the shakaru high school. She has long black hair that falls at her mid back. She has sand colored brown eyes. When she is a demon she has a pair of giant cat ears on her head that are a goldish color and she has a long cat like golden tail.
alysse
is 399 years old but looks 16
she is a full blooded coyote demon
she is 6ft and has long waist length brown hair and has chocolate brown eyes. She like sentri always wears the shakaru high female uniform but she wears knee high boots with the uniform. when she is a demon she has human like pointed ears and she has a brown tail that is like a mix between a wolf and cat.
Carson
is 376 but looks 16
she is a half silver and half shadow fox
she is about 5ft 5in. with short shoulder length brown hair and forest green eyes. when she is a demon she has a pair of kitsune ears on top of her head one ear is white with a black tip the other is black with a white tip. She has a long fox tail that is black with a white tip.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~here is some info on the story~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Melanie rules 5 dimensions out of 20 her mother and father rule the rest. The dimension the spirit detectives are in is called the 3rd secret dimension. those dimensions are free of rule and are only know by certain people or the residents. Dagon is a man that wants to over throw Melanie’s family. dagons real name is Ross and is a wanted killer in Melanie’s fathers home realm. what threw Ross’s plan off is the fact that he falls for Melanie, the same for her, but they don’t know who each other is. Melanie is found at school with sentri, alysse, and Carson. Ross is normally around yusuke, kurama, and hiei.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the beginning~~~~~~~~~~~~
“Melanie do you really want to move here and start school. Besides you cant be yourself. There are no demons in this realm they locked them away. Her father said.
“yes father I want to do this ill even start working for koenma so he wont think im not from the dimension. And besides I don’t like always being princess.” Melanie replied
As she said that she started to walk away to her room to pack her necessities. She also grabbed her spell book and ingredients. ‘cant live without these’ she thought. She put all her things in one bag that could fit and entire castle in it and still not be full(like marlins). With that all done she bragged some money from her vault and went through a portal to the human world in the 3rd secret dimension.
~~~~~~with the spirit detectives 2 years later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“hay Dagon how did you get involved with koenma. I died so that’s how I joined.” asked yusuke
“well I was just found but I definitely didn’t die. So are you heading down to kuwabaras grave. Im so sorry about his death” Dagon replied ‘yes I would be if it wasn’t for the fact that I killed him’
“OH NO! IM LATE IM LATE MY BOSS IS GONNA KILL ME” A 17 year old girl screamed from her apartment as she ran out the door colliding with Dagon as she turned the corner of the street. For a split second she though she felt Ross` energy but it passed faster than it appeared. ”umm im so sorry about that but I woke up late and im .im just so sorry. I have to go.“ the girl muttered and ran off. The spirit detectives just sat there and looked surprised. Dagon just got up and dusted himself off and started to walk toward the cemetery.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with Melanie~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
‘ I cant believe im running late koenma going to kill me. What to do not to mention that the boy I ran into had the energy of Ross. I have to go tell my father to but for now I have work to do. Melanie ran into a room that instantly put her in koenma world. She stopped in front of a huge room with two huge oak doors with the kanji for god on one and goddess on the other. Melanie gently pushed the doors open to find the room empty except for one blue desk stacked with paper with info on souls of the living, dead, demons, humans of all kinds. However there was nothing about Melanie before 2 years ago. Melanie was found unconscious in a river by boton when she went to find yusuke. Ever since then koenma has her working as a spirit assassin(just like the spirit detectives but with cases involving S class demons).
“Melanie your late. Why is that.” koenma asked in tone that would make her laugh but instead she just stood there like a motionless toy. She then looked at him and smiled.
“I had a little run in with the new spirit detective Dagon. We collided in the street. don’t worry he didn’t know who I was. Oh and one more small thing. May I take a few weeks off, my finals are coming up.” Melanie said/asked
“sure but do this one last mission.” koenma said as he handed her a file on a band of S class demon. Melanie grabbed the folder and walked into a portal created by boton and ran into a clearing. standing in the clearing were the energy of the band of demons was actually a group of girls dressed in the shakaru high school uniform. “hello my bestest friends. How have you been sentri, alysse, Carson . Oh by the way my boss sent me to kill you guys but I don’t think that will happen. Started to lower you energy level as if im fighting you then knock it out altogether so it looks like your dead I will do the same.” As that was said Melanie and the other girls lowered there energy and dropped it completely so it looks like there dead. Just then they teleported into an underground palace that they share that connects to all the dimensions. “so why have you called us here Melanie I was in the middle of testing.” Carson asked as they all nodded in agreement. “well I have to leave and report something to my father about a highly wanted criminal and I need you to cover for me. I have a clone that looks and acts like me but thinks you all are human along with the rest of the world. Keep her safe and make sure no one knows the difference. I have to leave now I will see you in a few days.” Melanie said.
Melanie walked off into a door with the number 10 on it and arrived in a castle that she had not seen in 2 years.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with koenma~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“BOTON GET IN HERE NOW.” koenma yelled.
“calm down koenma what is wrong.” kurama asked as the others nodded.
“boton we have a problem Melanie’s energy dropped along with the 3 S class demons. I think they killed each other off get the others together and form a search party. Yusuke you and the group can have the week off, boton we have to find her she is our best fighter.
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“FATHER IM HOME” Melanie yelled as she walked through the door. She ran past all the guards and maids, also a few butlers. They all smiled because they didn’t even have to look to see it was the princess. In the other end of the castle stood the king and queen. They both looked at each other as they heard there daughters voice eco in the castle.
“well my dear husband I think our daughter has returned for the first time in 2 years. I wonder why she is back. She wont be out of school for another 2 years.” the queen said.
“Maybe she has found out something that is dire important” the king said.
“father I think I found Ross but im not quite sure I have 2 weeks to find out if its him and I can trail the man as another girl using a spell that is undetectable.” Melanie said in one breath.
“my dearest daughter you are so precious you go do that but I will give you a tip. Don’t trail him become someone else and become his friend. Then trap him when he lest suspects it.” as that was said the king walked away to the desk and began looking at papers. The queen laughed a little and then walked into a room linked with this door. Melanie then ran to her old room and got changed into a royal kimono and went through a portal into a dimension numbered 11.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with the band of girls~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“ Why do we get stuck doing this when she goes through those doors. Also I want to know what’s behind them. All she said was go through the doors and you will die by demons 10 times stronger than you. I don’t get it. One day I will find out what is behind those doors. Hey Carson what do you think about the transfer student hiei isn’t he so cute.” Sentri said as they walked to the school before the bell rang.
“well I think he is scary I like kurama he is so cute. I think he will be perfect for me, smarts, and looks. Its my perfect guy.” Carson said as she drifted off to her fantasy world.
Alysse just stared at them like they where crazy. They all continued to walk as Melanie’s clone came out of the apartment complex and ran towards them smiling like the world was a happy beautiful place to be. The girls brightened up there attitudes and all hugged Melanie and started to walk to class. As they where walking the girls passed the spirit detectives and all but Melanie’s clone glared at them like they would start attacking.
~~~~~~~~~~~~yusuke pov.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“Please tell me you guys just noticed that those girls started to glare at us for no reason. That was weird.” I said
“yes that was but I think they had a reason if you notice the extremely happy one had a weird energy its like its nothing but a spell to make people believe its there.” Hiei said as Dagon nodded
` Shit if those girls find out who I am then my plan is ruined. I have to find out how to get rid of the spirit detectives and those girls for a few days. Now all I have to do is find out what to do to get those girls to fallow me and trap them in a dungeon and have the spirit brats go find them but I have to stay. I will say im sick. Now to get rid off all of them’ Dagon thought as he walked to school a little behind the others.
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Yay a cliffy. Well I don’t own yu yu hakusho and I however will write another chapter when I get on. Please review but don’t worry if you don’t want to than don’t
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name: Dagon (real name Ross)
age: looks 19 but is 600
race: darkness demon
description: Dagon is 5ft.9 and has short brown hair. Always wears his school uniform. As Ross he wears upper body armor and black baggy pants. His face is covered with a mask and his body is covered in a cloak.
name: Melanie
age: looks 17 but is 5300
race:1/2 dragon 1/2 wolf (goddess)
description: when not talking to the council with her family or ruling 5 of the 20 dimensions she is in her school uniform. When ruling or talking with the council she wears a formal kimono or dress. she has short shoulder length brown hair and greenish gold eyes. As a wolf demon her hair goes to her mid back and is brownish black. She has a pair of red wolf ears on her head and a long red tail and her eyes turn a blood red. When she is a dragon she looks like she is human with giant black and red dragon wings connected to her back and a long black scaly tail. when she a mix of both her dragon and wolf forms she has looks human but has her dragon wings and wolf ears and tail.
sentri
looks about 17 but is about 491
is half lynx demon half thunder panther
she is about 5ft.9in. she always wears a uniform from the shakaru high school. She has long black hair that falls at her mid back. She has sand colored brown eyes. When she is a demon she has a pair of giant cat ears on her head that are a goldish color and she has a long cat like golden tail.
alysse
is 399 years old but looks 16
she is a full blooded coyote demon
she is 6ft and has long waist length brown hair and has chocolate brown eyes. She like sentri always wears the shakaru high female uniform but she wears knee high boots with the uniform. when she is a demon she has human like pointed ears and she has a brown tail that is like a mix between a wolf and cat.
Carson
is 376 but looks 16
she is a half silver and half shadow fox
she is about 5ft 5in. with short shoulder length brown hair and forest green eyes. when she is a demon she has a pair of kitsune ears on top of her head one ear is white with a black tip the other is black with a white tip. She has a long fox tail that is black with a white tip.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~here is some info on the story~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Melanie rules 5 dimensions out of 20 her mother and father rule the rest. The dimension the spirit detectives are in is called the 3rd secret dimension. those dimensions are free of rule and are only know by certain people or the residents. Dagon is a man that wants to over throw Melanie’s family. dagons real name is Ross and is a wanted killer in Melanie’s fathers home realm. what threw Ross’s plan off is the fact that he falls for Melanie, the same for her, but they don’t know who each other is. Melanie is found at school with sentri, alysse, and Carson. Ross is normally around yusuke, kurama, and hiei.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the beginning~~~~~~~~~~~~
“Melanie do you really want to move here and start school. Besides you cant be yourself. There are no demons in this realm they locked them away. Her father said.
“yes father I want to do this ill even start working for koenma so he wont think im not from the dimension. And besides I don’t like always being princess.” Melanie replied
As she said that she started to walk away to her room to pack her necessities. She also grabbed her spell book and ingredients. ‘cant live without these’ she thought. She put all her things in one bag that could fit and entire castle in it and still not be full(like marlins). With that all done she bragged some money from her vault and went through a portal to the human world in the 3rd secret dimension.
~~~~~~with the spirit detectives 2 years later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“hay Dagon how did you get involved with koenma. I died so that’s how I joined.” asked yusuke
“well I was just found but I definitely didn’t die. So are you heading down to kuwabaras grave. Im so sorry about his death” Dagon replied ‘yes I would be if it wasn’t for the fact that I killed him’
“OH NO! IM LATE IM LATE MY BOSS IS GONNA KILL ME” A 17 year old girl screamed from her apartment as she ran out the door colliding with Dagon as she turned the corner of the street. For a split second she though she felt Ross` energy but it passed faster than it appeared. ”umm im so sorry about that but I woke up late and im .im just so sorry. I have to go.“ the girl muttered and ran off. The spirit detectives just sat there and looked surprised. Dagon just got up and dusted himself off and started to walk toward the cemetery.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with Melanie~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
‘ I cant believe im running late koenma going to kill me. What to do not to mention that the boy I ran into had the energy of Ross. I have to go tell my father to but for now I have work to do. Melanie ran into a room that instantly put her in koenma world. She stopped in front of a huge room with two huge oak doors with the kanji for god on one and goddess on the other. Melanie gently pushed the doors open to find the room empty except for one blue desk stacked with paper with info on souls of the living, dead, demons, humans of all kinds. However there was nothing about Melanie before 2 years ago. Melanie was found unconscious in a river by boton when she went to find yusuke. Ever since then koenma has her working as a spirit assassin(just like the spirit detectives but with cases involving S class demons).
“Melanie your late. Why is that.” koenma asked in tone that would make her laugh but instead she just stood there like a motionless toy. She then looked at him and smiled.
“I had a little run in with the new spirit detective Dagon. We collided in the street. don’t worry he didn’t know who I was. Oh and one more small thing. May I take a few weeks off, my finals are coming up.” Melanie said/asked
“sure but do this one last mission.” koenma said as he handed her a file on a band of S class demon. Melanie grabbed the folder and walked into a portal created by boton and ran into a clearing. standing in the clearing were the energy of the band of demons was actually a group of girls dressed in the shakaru high school uniform. “hello my bestest friends. How have you been sentri, alysse, Carson . Oh by the way my boss sent me to kill you guys but I don’t think that will happen. Started to lower you energy level as if im fighting you then knock it out altogether so it looks like your dead I will do the same.” As that was said Melanie and the other girls lowered there energy and dropped it completely so it looks like there dead. Just then they teleported into an underground palace that they share that connects to all the dimensions. “so why have you called us here Melanie I was in the middle of testing.” Carson asked as they all nodded in agreement. “well I have to leave and report something to my father about a highly wanted criminal and I need you to cover for me. I have a clone that looks and acts like me but thinks you all are human along with the rest of the world. Keep her safe and make sure no one knows the difference. I have to leave now I will see you in a few days.” Melanie said.
Melanie walked off into a door with the number 10 on it and arrived in a castle that she had not seen in 2 years.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with koenma~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“BOTON GET IN HERE NOW.” koenma yelled.
“calm down koenma what is wrong.” kurama asked as the others nodded.
“boton we have a problem Melanie’s energy dropped along with the 3 S class demons. I think they killed each other off get the others together and form a search party. Yusuke you and the group can have the week off, boton we have to find her she is our best fighter.
____________________________________________________ ____________________
“FATHER IM HOME” Melanie yelled as she walked through the door. She ran past all the guards and maids, also a few butlers. They all smiled because they didn’t even have to look to see it was the princess. In the other end of the castle stood the king and queen. They both looked at each other as they heard there daughters voice eco in the castle.
“well my dear husband I think our daughter has returned for the first time in 2 years. I wonder why she is back. She wont be out of school for another 2 years.” the queen said.
“Maybe she has found out something that is dire important” the king said.
“father I think I found Ross but im not quite sure I have 2 weeks to find out if its him and I can trail the man as another girl using a spell that is undetectable.” Melanie said in one breath.
“my dearest daughter you are so precious you go do that but I will give you a tip. Don’t trail him become someone else and become his friend. Then trap him when he lest suspects it.” as that was said the king walked away to the desk and began looking at papers. The queen laughed a little and then walked into a room linked with this door. Melanie then ran to her old room and got changed into a royal kimono and went through a portal into a dimension numbered 11.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with the band of girls~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“ Why do we get stuck doing this when she goes through those doors. Also I want to know what’s behind them. All she said was go through the doors and you will die by demons 10 times stronger than you. I don’t get it. One day I will find out what is behind those doors. Hey Carson what do you think about the transfer student hiei isn’t he so cute.” Sentri said as they walked to the school before the bell rang.
“well I think he is scary I like kurama he is so cute. I think he will be perfect for me, smarts, and looks. Its my perfect guy.” Carson said as she drifted off to her fantasy world.
Alysse just stared at them like they where crazy. They all continued to walk as Melanie’s clone came out of the apartment complex and ran towards them smiling like the world was a happy beautiful place to be. The girls brightened up there attitudes and all hugged Melanie and started to walk to class. As they where walking the girls passed the spirit detectives and all but Melanie’s clone glared at them like they would start attacking.
~~~~~~~~~~~~yusuke pov.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“Please tell me you guys just noticed that those girls started to glare at us for no reason. That was weird.” I said
“yes that was but I think they had a reason if you notice the extremely happy one had a weird energy its like its nothing but a spell to make people believe its there.” Hiei said as Dagon nodded
` Shit if those girls find out who I am then my plan is ruined. I have to find out how to get rid of the spirit detectives and those girls for a few days. Now all I have to do is find out what to do to get those girls to fallow me and trap them in a dungeon and have the spirit brats go find them but I have to stay. I will say im sick. Now to get rid off all of them’ Dagon thought as he walked to school a little behind the others.
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Yay a cliffy. Well I don’t own yu yu hakusho and I however will write another chapter when I get on. Please review but don’t worry if you don’t want to than don’t