Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Hiei And Kurama's Adventures ❯ Hiei Returns From Makai ( Chapter 1 )

Hiei and Kurama's Adventures Chapter One: Hiei Returns From Makai

In the crowded streets of Ningenkai (also known as The Human World), a little youkai with the name of Hiei was walking. It's been four years since I was here in Ningenkai. One year since I saw Yusuke, two years since I saw Kurama, and four years since I saw that fool, Kuwabara. It's noisy here. Not at all like Makai. Hiei thought to himself. He continued walking, listening to the sounds of this place that he despised so much…. Especially after spending four years in that quiet Makai. He had gone through a lot of training with Mukuro, and he had enjoyed it. He wished to be back there… Also four years since I saw Yukina…. Where is she now, I wonder?. She had been the reason he had come back. Too many stupid places here. Too many baka ningen… The sent of flowers surrounded the area he was in. A person with long, red hair caught his eyes. It's Kurama! Kurama didn't notice him, for he was looking for a new rose to be his Rose Whip. He wanted a nice big red one, like always. Kurama did look different, though. His hair was way longer. All the way down to his bottom ^_^. His ear tails were longer too. Hiei thought about that. Kurama with hair that long? It doesn't exactly fit. Finally Kurama noticed him.

"Hiei!" Kurama shouted out, tears coming down his cheeks (happy tears, of course!)

"Why is he so happy?" Hiei thought, while Kurama ran faster than ever toward him, them came to a screeching halt, not wanted to run into that little youkai, who would easily fall down if he did, because of his height…

"I thought you might never come back to Ningenkai. I am so glad you did." Kurama said, still crying.

"I wasn't going to…" Hiei replied calmly, "Mukuro said I could stay there, or come back here. I was going to stay with her, but then I remembered I had important business here."

"Oh? And what business would that be?" Kurama asked. He could not help it, he was very curious about why Hiei would change is mind about never coming back to Ningenkai again. It must be important.

"This." Hiei said, holding up one of his two identical necklaces, both made from a Koorime gem. "You stupidly would not accept my offer to give this back to her for me." He was, of course, talking about his sister, Yukina, and Kurama knew, because Hiei had asked him before to give it back to her for him.

"That's because you are her brother, and I think you should tell her." Kurama said, still crying…

"Ch, I won't." Hiei replied, very annoyed. He glanced at Kurama, whom he had been avoiding looking right at. Kurama was still crying. Hiei felt very uncomfortable with Kurama crying, and he didn't know why. Maybe because he hasn't seen me in a very long time. Yes, that was definitely it. But, he did wipe Kurama's tears away on one cheek with his hand. "Stop crying. It doesn't suit you. You are supposed to be strong, you are my old partner." He held his hand there for a few seconds, and then very fast he put his hand down.

Kurama decided to change the subject. What would Hiei like to do before he sees Yukina? Hiei has always liked Yusuke… I will take him to him! So, he asked Hiei, "Do you want to see Yusuke? He is married to Keiko now."

"I guess so," said Hiei, pretending not to be interested, but he was.

"All right! Let's go! Then after that, I will take you to Yukina!" Kurama said happily.

"Hn." Was Hiei's reply.

I hope you liked it! My chapters are short, I know. Keep reading PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! If you do, I will read and review all of your stories!!!! PLEASE I BEG YOU!!! I HAVE WANTED PEOPLE TO READ THIS STORY SINCE FOREVER!!!!! And I promise, it will get better. Way more funny. I promise you, I really do. If nobody is satisfied in the end, I will go hit my head on a wall and say "I'm sorry everybody if I have wasted your precious time!!!", and I mean it. But, please give my story a little more of a chance. See you VERY soon!!!!

NOTE LATER ON: Hi! I am going back and editing a little bit. It won't be too much better, but it will be a little better. Enjoy the improvement as best you can ^.~ And the reason the style is different in this one than my others is because this isn't from the top of my head… I drew this one before I wrote it (for all you new comers into the story (if there are any)