Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Hiei's Mistake ❯ Chapter ten ( Chapter 10 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
Yusuke was out walking the streets, brooding. He had just gotten thrown out of his house.
Damn it!!
He just wanted to punch something- or someone. The latter would be *much* nicer.
He continued down the street, unknowingly heading towards the general area of Kurama and Hiei’s apartment building, still brooding. As he was walking, he heard the sounds of someone crying. That finally drew his attention away from his problems and he looked up, wondering what was going on.
His curious gaze landed, unexpectedly, on Kuwabara. At first he did not see the small Koorime standing near him. But soon, he made out the sea-green hair of Hiei's twin. He also heard the distinctive tinker of tear gems striking the floor.
Why is Yukina crying? Did he do something to hurt himself again?
He went over, concerned for his friends.
He tapped Kuwabara on the shoulder, then waited for him to turn around. As he waited, he replaced both hands in his coat pockets, resuming his familiar punk look.
A red-eyed Kuwabara met his gaze. Fresh sets of tears were streaming down his face is face. Oh my god, he’s crying! Did his sister die or something?
"Oi, Kuwa,” he asked, now genuinely worried, “what the hell is wrong, man?"
"It’s the Shrimp,” Kuwabara managed to choke out before he was overtaken by heaving sobs again. He started to fight them down, but was still unable to speak any further.
"Hiei is d-d-dying," Yukina said sadly, her tear gems starting to littler the ground by the dozen.
Kuwabara pulled her to him, hugging her close to try to help take away her pain, even though he was dealing with a good deal of his own. He just wanted to comfort the one he loved in any way he could.
Yusuke just stood there with wide eyes. How the hell could Hiei be dying?! He seemed just fine a few hours ago…?
"What happened?” Yusuke said, puzzled beyond reason, “Last thing I heard, he was going to talk to Kurama…”
"H-he…he’s been- poisoned," Yukina tried to explain, but fresh tears formed and fell, making the recently all-too-familiar, small clicking sounds as they hit the pavement.
Kuwabara finally got himself under control and explained everything as best he could to Yusuke. Then he watched as his best friend got all pale and sickly looking. It made Kuwa wonder why Yusuke was taking it so hard, I mean, the Shrimp was his friend but he was acting like Keiko had died or something...
Yusuke began to cry, cursing fate and the gods.
Hiei was dying?? Hiei the mighty warrior? The great Hiei, wielder of the Kokkuryu-ha? Thoughts raced like wildfire in his mind. He saw all of the images of Hiei he had stored in a precious part of his mind-all the way from the first time they had met in that clearing right up until earlier that day. Damn it!!
Why couldn’t it be that damn cheating, cunning fox?!
Then it hit him like a ton of bricks. He wished that his other, red-head friend would just die. Hiei never deserved this. He had already suffered way too much in his life. Damn it all to hell!! It’s all mine and that fucking kitsune’s fault! Why does Hiei have to deal with our punishments!?
Then he just had to ask, "So, does Kurama know?" Does he even care, bastard kitsune that he is?
"That’s just the thing, Yusuke. When we left their apartment, I felt not just one, but two life-energies weakening,” Kuwa looked at his feet, then continued softly, “When Half-pint dies… so will his life-mate."
With that pure terror filled his features. He then prayed that his friends lives be spared. He felt like grade-A shit for cursing the fox-spirit turned human, not too long before.
God I’m such a bastard!
~Meanwhile, in the apartment~
Youko Kurama was licking his mate’s cheek. Then he would nuzzle his neck, marking him as he always had every night. He cuddled closer to Hiei, curling around him protectively.
He would not allow his mate to die, at least not without letting death take him also. He just couldn’t face a life without Hiei. So the Kitsune tried, in vain, to make his partner warm and to show him love.
His only thoughts were on the sleeping body next to his, and how much he loved that little Jaganshi.
~ In Hiei's dreams~
At first, he was totally surrounded with blackness. Then he felt himself descending in a free-fall. He could here the voices of the women of the village calling him names.
The familiar emotions of anger and resentment flooded through him.
Then, as he touched ground, the scene changed.
Now, he saw a ten-year-old, human, red-head boy. The child smiled at him.
It was the Kurama he had first met.
But why was he remembering this? Kurama was looking at him much like he did when he woke up in the fox’s bed after he healed him after some injury from a fight in the Makai.
Then, with a gust of wind, the scene changed again.
He saw his sister out in the woods playing with some small animals. She looked so innocent. So sweet.
But- he had found her long before he had found the fox! Why were his memories so jumbled?
He started to walk towards her. Then, once again, he found himself looking at a memory of his fox, this time; it was of the night he first found out that his fox loved him.
~ Flashback~
What would it be like to lose him?
Then, I stopped.
I would not lose him. I am after all a great demon. I will simply go tell the fox how I feel. If he denies me, or laughs- I’ll kill him.
No, I don’t think I could *really* kill him. But one good threat, and my disgrace would never be known.
Soon, I am at the tree, looking in his house for him. He’s at his desk, doing more homework, as usual. I then jump on the windowsill, tapping on the window. He looks up. Then, he is wearing a huge smile. He runs over and opens the door.
”Hiei, you’ve come back for a visit? Would you like me to go get you anything?” he asks me.
”Sit down and shut up,” I say. I want to waste no time telling him. Sooner it is out, sooner I will go back to the Makai. There, I will be far enough away that I won’t have to see him.
Well, not in person, at least.
He goes and sits on his bed. His eyes hold questions, but he stays silent like I demanded.
”What I am going to tell you, better not be told to anyone. Unless, of course, you are into painful deaths,” I let that linger. “Kurama, I have realized that there is someone here in this pathetic Ningenkai that I love. No, I am not talking about Yukina. I love you, fox.” I stood there watching his movements. His face lit up.
”Hiei, I love you also,” he says.
~End of flashback~
Yes, that was what had happened.
He had been too shocked to do anything but run away. He had to think about what Kurama had said, that he loved me back.
Then, he thought of their first night of lovemaking…
~Flashback~
I lay there on the tree I had picked. It was then I felt a hand on my shoulder. I quickly looked towards it, wondering why my Jagan hadn’t detected someone coming. Not even my sense’s had picked up on them.
A pair of big, laughing green eyes met mine.
Kurama?? What is he doing here? He removed his hand and sat down next to me on the branch. He runs his hand through his red locks. He was still wearing the clothing he wore when I left him. But that was when I noticed something-different- shining in his eyes.
He is looking at me tenderly!!!
I look again but it was replaced by a calmness that was shown through his eyes and face, but he still wore a smile.
”Kurama- what are you doing here?” I ask him.
”I had to see you, Hiei. I missed you. I needed to be with you,” he says, then looks nervous. Why is he looking like that?
”Baka- I just saw you,” I say in my “leave-me-alone tone.”
His eyes brim with tears. I am making him cry?? But why?
”H-Hiei… I-I…love... you,” he says as tears fall from his eyes. He looks devastated. But wait- did he just utter the words I had longed to hear again?
He has.
I look at him again. My mind is not playing tricks on me.
”Kurama don’t cry. It is a foolish human thing to do,” I say to him.
”Kurama, I feel the same for you,” I said in a small voice, my fear of rejection sucking me in.
His eyes widen. Then he pulls me into an embrace. He hugs me so tight, I feel special.
It is better than I imagined.
His scent falls around me. I start to rub his back. He then pulls back. I start to think he has changed his mind. Then his lips descended down and cover mine. It is light and gentle-at first. I opened my mouth to take a breath. He saw that, and quickly entered.
Now, we are battling for dominance. I want control. So does he. As our tongues battle, my breath is his. His becomes mine. He pulls me even tighter, almost as if he is afraid I would run from him.
He breaks our kissing and hugging to stare at me. His eyes are questioning if this is right. I don’t want the fox to doubt my feelings anymore.
I grab his head and kiss him hard on his sweet lips. I can’t help but think, Is all of him this soft?
As I am kissing him, I start to unbutton his shirt. When I ran into trouble taking a button off, I pulled on it till it came off. I wanted-no- needed to touch him.
His shirt removed, I ran a hand down his chest. His skin is so soft there also, despite his utterly muscular chest and abs. As I run my hand on his chest, a need to make him mine over comes me. I try to hold it at bay. I want our joining to be special.
Hn. I think, taking in more and more of this glorious fox in front of me. He is now helping me to undress.
I am now naked and he is still wearing pants. Not for long. I think.
With that, I grab on to his pant legs and pull them off the fox. A startled sound escapes his thoroughly kissed lips. This excites me even more.
With both of us naked, I begin to place kisses on his slender neck. I can feel myself grow harder the more I touch him. He is playing with my nipples as I kiss and suck the tender parts on his neck. I then bite down. I want to leave my mark. It is how fire demons mark their mates.
Fire demons mate for life.
Youko’s, though, are another matter. I brush those thoughts aside. Kurama loves me, I believe him.
Now I move towards his nipples. I suck on one while playing with the other one. Soon they are hard peaks. His breathing is becoming unstable. So is mine. It is harder to breathe and think, but I must. Tonight is a night we will remember forever.
”Hiei, please,” he asks me. I can tell that his hard on is in need of release.
”Not yet, fox. Not yet,” I tell him.
I then start to nibble on his nipples. Making him to use his hands to stay on the tree.
I smile at that.
The sounds that are coming from his mouth make me feel high- like I am floating around. Soon I devoured his manhood. I begin to slowly go up and down. My left hand is now rubbing his balls. My penis is hard and is filled with need. I take my time, though, making sure that he is as hard as he will get. Wanting him to be ready for me. I then grab his slender legs. I place them on my shoulders. His eyes widen, as he knows what I am about to do.
I insert two fingers in his tight hole. I begin to move them in a scissor type motion. He needs to be wider to accept me. If he was in his demon form, I would of just took him. But in his more fragile human form, I need to make sure he can take all of me.
He groans when the pain comes. I then use my other hand to rub his hard cock. Loving the feeling of his culrly red hairs clinging to my hand. All of him is so perfect. Nothing in all the three worlds is better than this creature that lies before me.
Soon I put a third finger inside him, still needing to open him more. I found that spot that would make him soar.
”Ahhh, Hiei!” he cries as I rub on it. Hearing my name come from his lips does something to me. It makes me want to please him more, want to thrust inside him sooner. I let out a sigh when I feel he is ready for me.
I look at him. Those bright green eyes are staring at me. Then I hit his spot and they close tightly. His expression turns to one of pure pleasure. I am the one that is making him feel that way.
I put my tip next to his hole. Then, I slowly enter him. His tight virgin walls are all around me. Soon, I am all inside him. I hear him take a sharp breath.
”Breathe fox. Get used to me then I will begin”
He smiles at me through his pain. I feel bad for it. But the first time is always the worst, I hear. His breathing becomes normal. I begin to move in him, while making sure to pump him. His cries reach my ears. I, in turn, move faster. Soon we are lost in nothing but wanting to feel eachother’s release. Then we both cum together.
Me and my fox.
Yes, he is now mine. When I pull out, I look at him. He holds out his arms. I lay on top of him. Soon we are sleeping in my tree.
~End of flashback~
A smile of happiness filled his face. Hiei was happy to remember those memories. He had forgotten just what it was like that first time. Then just as he thought he might be able to wake up, another scene began to play itself out.
It was blurred in with a whole other scene.
~*Another* flashback ~
His heart dropped somewhere by his feet. It lay in a thousand, shattered pieces. His breath vanished and all he could do was watch the scene before him play itself out. Yusuke was on their bed with his legs wrapped around Hiei. His mouth was opened and moans could be heard. With each moan a small tear fell from the red-headed fox’s eyes. Hiei was moaning and thrusting inside Yusuke. Both, not noticing that they had an audience, climaxed and called out the other’s name.
Kurama let out a small whimper much like one would hear from a hurt dog. Red and brown eyes met green. Then things got so slow and fast all at the same time. Kurama spun around and ran out the door. In a flash Yusuke and Hiei followed- one out the window, the other the door. Both now fully dressed.
Pain shot through Kurama’s heart. It felt like someone was jabbing his chest with ice and needles. Tears fell and he paid no attention to anyone. All he wanted was to flee.
" Kurama!!" Hiei yelled
Just the sound of his voice made Kurama run faster. He ran into the street, hearing both Yusuke and Hiei call out to him.
He heard someone scream. Then he felt something collide with his body. He felt his ribs break right as his body flew in the air.
Hiei watched in horror as his mate was hit by a speeding truck. The driver had been careless and had run over his fox! Hiei wanted nothing more than to kill the driver, but Yusuke, his secret lover, held him back.
Kurama lay so lifeless on the ground. Hiei pulled away and went to the fox’s side. He couldn’t understand why the fox had acted the way he did, but Hiei knew that things were only going to get worse.
~End of flashback~
"No!!" he screamed out as it began to play itself out.
Then, to his horror, another memory resurfaced to torture him.
~Flashback *once again*~
With that, Hiei followed the doctor to Shuichi’s room. On the bed lay the redheaded fox demon. Hiei went and stood next to his mate. Both Kurama and himself had made a lifetime commitment to each other. That was the way they had both wanted it. They were eachother’s other-half.
But Hiei had betrayed Kurama. Now Kurama lay in a bed in a human hospital. It sent shivers down the fire demons spine.
Kurama opened his eyes. When he saw Hiei, he gasped." Get out!" he whispered.
"Nani?" Hiei said, unsure if he just heard what he thought he heard.
Kurama sat up. His eyes grew cold and distant- the look he used with his enemies.
Kurama ran a hand threw his hair. Then green eyes stared into crimson. No emotion was on that gorgeous face-nothing was.
"I want both you and Yusuke to leave. If I ever see you two again you will find out how my death tree feels," he said without a hint of emotion.
No, no, no, no, no, no, no!! kept running threw his head. This couldn’t be happenning.
Kurama thought of him as the enemy! No!!!
~End of flashback~
Hiei lie crying on the ground inside his torn mind. Hearing his fox wish him dead over and over again. Agony ripped his fragile heart and emotions into shreds. He curled into a tight ball and shivered in pain.
He didn’t think he could face consciousness ever again.
~Reikai~
George came into Koenma’s room. He held in his hands a death paper. When Koenma saw that Hiei's soul was getting ready to die he was shocked. Then, just a few minutes later, another paper came in the room. On it was the name Minamino, Shuichi a.k.a. Youko Kurama.
His pacifier fell out of his mouth.
He had no choice but to interfere. After all- they were his friends. He couldn’t just let them die, even if they would both die within hours of each other.
He sent Botan to look for Yusuke. She had the knowledge to fix things like this. But one single detail could mean the life or death of the half-Koorime boy.
~ Botan’s POV~
I hurried out to look for Yusuke. After everything I was just told, I felt like crying myself. Two-well, one of my friends might die in three days- his mate just two hours before him.
It saddened me to think that Kurama might die. He was such a sweet, polite and good man.
I don’t have time for this!! I must find Yusuke. I flew to his house.
Not seeing him there, I began to fly all over Tokyo. I soon found him, along with Yukina and Kuwabara. As I flew in to tell them what had happened only one question remained…
Could he do what needed to be done?
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