Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Not sure yet.....help with title? ❯ The Biggest Loss Rmembered ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

         Kurama watched in horror as Hiei slowly fell to the ground, blood running from his jagan and dripping down his body. Kurama ran and caught the little fire demon before he hit the ground. "Hiei. Hiei answer me", Kurama yelled. Hiei looked up at the kitsune sadly. "I-im sorry K-kurama.....i should have been stronger", he panted. Yusuke and Kuwabara just stared at the sight. Kurama's eyes filled with tears. "No Hiei...you'll be fine. Please...i kept it a secret", Kurama said and looked away from Hiei. Hiei raised his hand and made Kurama look at him. "W-what Kurama...what is it?" Kurama looked at Hiei with tears streaking his face. "Hiei....before you and I...well....you know...I cast a spell on myself...I'd heard you a while ago saying you wouldnt want anyone but me but you wanted kids...Hiei...the spell made it so i could get pregnant...im going to have your child...YOU CANT LEAVE ME", Kurama said, hugging Hiei close to him. Hiei's eyes went wide. "Kurama...im sorry...i have to leave...", Hiei said, breathing harder. KUrama felt Hiei slip away from him and began crying. Yusuke walked up to Kruama. "What was that all about", he asked. Kurama looked up at him. "Hiei was my boyfriend and i cast a spell on myself to get pregnant so Hiei could have kids like he wanted", Kurama said.
woke up suddenly, sweating and gasping. He looked to the door and saw his daughter Akari. She had her long black and white hair pulled back and her red eyes were glowing slightly. "Daddy...what were you dreaming about", she asked. "Nothing. It was nothing..go back to bed now you have school in the morning and then youre going to meet some friends of mine", Kurama said.

well....another cliffy! IM SORRY!!!
WHYD YOU KILL HIEI!!!!
you baka turn around!!!!!!
AHHH HIEI!! *hugs him*
R&R!