Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Saving the world was never this painful ❯ time stands still ( Chapter 5 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

part1
Krystal escapes with the help of a misterous thing. Raizen and The others learn more about the flower maiden
Part2
and why she let them in and why she even exist

Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 04.26.2005 | Updated On: 04.26.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.3K | Visits: 154 | Status: Completed

Saving the World Was Never This Painful

Chap 5

Time Standing Still

Raizen stared in disbelieve. Anom smiled like she had lost her mind. Jinx walked right up to her and said, "Nice to meet you Flower Maiden!!!!" The teenager said, "Call me Lora that's the name my mother gave me." Marku smiled and shook her hand. Mukuro glared at the new friend. Itokuzu jumped out of Raizen's hair and onto Lora's shoulder. She patted him and said, "You have done well little friend." He disappeared. Raizen said, "What, where did he go?" Lora smiled at his confusion and said, "He went back to his world."

Raizen frowned again but stayed quiet. Jinuu lay forgotten in the flowers. Marku laid down and almost fell asleep. Lora watched him and said, "All those who fall asleep in this flower field stay here. Marku sighed and said, "I don't care." Anom walked over to him and grabbed his ear, forcing his to get up. He stood up and nearly fell to the floor. Lora smiled at him and said, "You may sleep in my house." They followed her, but Raizen looked toward the door and sighed thinking, "I wish we could save Krystal..."

Krystal awoke in a room of pure black. She sighed and hoped her mother was ok. She stared at the door and thought, *maybe he stupidly forgo to lock the door.* She got up to check and it was locked. Krystal sighed and went back to sitting on the bed. When someone opened the door and walked it. Who stood there, was a man about 5'7 he goes by the name, Kou Makai. He smiled at her and walked into the room accompanied by an Aka-Takai-Seibutsu.

The Aka-Takai-Seibutsu stepped out the door and closed it behind him. Kou walked over to the bed and sat on it. Krystal jumped up and dashed for the door. Kou beat her and grabbed her shoulders leading her toward the bed. She fought him for the first half of the trip but gave up and let him lead her. Krystal laid down and waited for him to do whatever. He climbed on top of her, when suddenly Iris burst into the room and said, “Kou-sama, you get off of her right now!” He was slightly surprised, and then pissed.

He shot up and charged after her. Iris ran down the hall with Kou hot on her trail. They stupidly left the door open. Krystal ran out the door and looked around. The halls were empty and the once guard was laying on the ground out cold. Krystal ran down the hall and amazingly found the exit without hardly any trouble. Krystal ran down the now dirt road and just ran until she could barely breathe. She sat down and waited for a descent time. Little did she know that a form was watching and had helped her escape?

Raizen, Mukuro, Anom, Marku, and Jinx followed Lora for about an hour before Mukuro yawned and climbed onto Raizen's back. Lora smiled at the loving family and said, “Well aren't you all a bunch of weird kids.” Anom frowned and said, “we are not weird we just…” her voice faded off as she looked at them. Raizen was a Yusuke twin but he had Keiko's hair and the markings of Demon Yusuke. Mukuro had brownish hair, bright brown eyes, and the marks of Yusuke's Demon form also.

Marku was just like Kurama, with red hair, and green eyes. Jinx was just like her mom. She had brownish red hair and bright green eyes. She was very short for her age. Anom was the worst, She had silver hair, gold eyes, a silver fox tail, and silver fox ears. Anom frowned and put Krystal and the others into the mix. Krystal's eyes were gold with a little green mixed in. She had Black hair with a single silver strand running down the left side of her head.

Yomi's hair was red with a little black. His eyes were a bright blue. They were a funny group. Anom sighed and hoped that her cousins were ok. Arnia would be mad when she finds out about Yomi and Krystal. Their mission seem hopeless. Lora smiled at Anom's hopelessness and said, “You all will succeed because you have to.” Jinx smiled and ran ahead. When she got to the top of a hill she stopped and yelled, “WOW!!!!” Raizen set Mukuro so she could see what was so great.

(Part 2)

Mukuro froze when she hit the top of the hill. Lora had a smile on her face as they approached the top. When they got there even Raizen froze. Standing before them was a huge castle with flowers growing every where. The castle was a bright red and covered with windows. Raizen sighed and Marku fell down the hill. Mukuro and Jinx ran after him. They managed to stop within just a little of a flower. The flower was black with a little bit of pink in it.

Marku was about to pick it when Lora yelled, “don't!!!!” Marku immediately stopped and asked, “Why?” She smiled and said, “I'm the Flower Maiden of Life. These flowers all represent a Life in the universe.” Marku looked at the flower he was about to pick and said, “You mean that, flowers here are living things?” “Yes.” Marku got up and watched everywhere he stepped. Lora smiled and said, “These flowers are the things I watch and why the universe even needs a flower maiden.”

Raizen walked up to the flower Marku was about to pick and said, “Who's is this?” Lora looked at it and said, “I think that one is Hiei.” Raizen laughed and said, “You mean that Hiei's flower has pink in it?” Lora looked surprised and said, “Of course, Hiei is in love that is what the pink tells. But you Raizen have a red flower, with black in the middle.” Raizen sighed and started for the house. Mukuro walked up to Lora and said, “What does Red say?” Lora smiled and said, “It means that he has experienced love. From his family.”

Mukuro smiled and said, “Yes he has.” Jinx and Mukuro ran down to the house and began to play. Anom and Marku joined them at the house. Lora looked down at it and said, “It's nice to have friends around again. Lora made Jinuu appear out of thin air and patted his head thinking, *I hope they can do what they set out to do. It is such a big task for ones so small.* Lora's blonde hair blew as the wind picked up. She sighed and looked down at Hiei's flower. It turned pure black and the pink faded. Lora frowned and walked toward the house and said nothing.

Arnia stayed in the room with Hiei until a teenaged girl came and said, “I am here to take Hiei away.” Hiei growled and said, “No way.” Arnia pulled Hiei closer as the girl entered the room. The girl walked right up to Hiei. He jumped out at her as she approached. Arnia watched the girl put a needle into Hiei's back. Arnia grabbed him and held fast as his body began to shake. The girl laughed and said, “I would let him go woman he will be with us soon enough.

Youko appeared behind her along with Jewel. They stared at her and said, “You may not be effected by the poison but Hiei is.” Arnia stared at the faces around her. Hiei stopped shaking and opened his eyes. Arnia pulled him tight but felt him pulling away. He throw her into the wall and said, “Don't touch me whore.” Arnia frowned and yelled, “How dare you call me that!!!!...” Her voice fell to a whisper as she watched the group start to laugh. Arnia looked straight in to the girl's eyes and said, “Iris?” The girl frowned and said, “How do you know my name bitch?”

Arnia, for the first time in days smiled. Iris was surprised and said, “Whatever.” Hiei frowned at Arnia. Her once beautiful silver hair was in knots and her bright gold eyes were dim. He looked at her and felt something pulling at his heart. He couldn't place it and followed the others out of the room. Youko pulled Jewel into a kiss right after they got into the hall. Hiei sighed and looked back at the room. Iris smiled at Hiei and said, “Once you're in the light your kind of cute.”

As she smiled Hiei felt disgusted. Iris looked hurt and said, “Fine then go to the lifeless bitch in the dungeon.” Hiei looked back at the room and shook off the feeling again. Youko and Iris lead the way out of the castle with the orders to kill. Once on the road they moved swiftly. They slowed their pace as they approached Yomi castle. They were to find Yomi and kill him along with everyone in the castle.

Krystal stood up and walked down the dirt road until it became dense with trees. She sighed and thought about what all had happened. Until she tripped on something. She glared at it for about two second when it registered that is was Prin. She picked him up and put his head in her lap and said, “Prin are you ok?” His eyes opened slowly and he started at her for the longest time. A smile appeared on his face as he said, “Oh, hello Krystal, Do me a favor and make sure the Jinx is ok…thanks.” His eyes closed and they would never open again.

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Me: YA that is chap 5 time standing still. Thank you everyone for being patient with me. Writers block.