Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Secrets of the mind ❯ The beginning. ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

Neptunes Daughter: I don't own YYH or any of the characters, as you all well know so why do we have to include a disclaimer. Oh well. I'm working on this fic now k.

Narrator's POV

Well maybe the beginning is a little confusing there. I'll back up a bit and tell you how Kurama came to be chained to a wall.

Hiei's POV

How is it that they always think this is is is a big deal? I could beat all these youkai alone.

"Kurama what are you doing?" I say noticing that he's pointing his rose whip in a somewhat defeated position. Yet he seems to be fighting something. Then I notice the others are all looking defeated and realize the enemy must have tricked them somehow.

"Hiei, Stop them NOW before I completely give in," says Kurama, evidently the victim of some sort of mind control.

Only affects humans I guess. I cut up a few more youkai, attempting to save the others. They retreat leaving Yusuke and the Baka behind. However, they get away with Kurama. Oh Damn, this isn't good.

Yusuke's POV

"Where am I?" I think aloud. Last thing I remember we were fighting.

"You, the Baka, and Kurama were subjected to some sort of mind control. You and the Baka got away but it was necessary to knock you out," says Hiei.

That has to be the longest sentence I have ever heard out of HIM.

"What about Kurama?" I ask worried, I don't like losing people.

"Kidnapped." Ok, back to one word sentences.

"Then we have to save him"

"Probably."

"Where's Kuwabara?"

"Unconscious," says Hiei, somewhat maliciously.

"Hiei, how hard did you hit him?" I ask, wondering if we needed to call an ambulance over it.

"He's alive," well at least he answered.