Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Theif To Detective ❯ Kidnapped! ( Chapter 1 )

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THIEF TO DETECTIVE, A WEREWOLF CONFLICT

Chapter one: Orphaned.

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*-*-*-*Lost memories lie in the forgotten*-*-*-*

Chapter one: Kidnapped

You hummed a half woeful half annoying toon as you draged yourself along the side of the road. You were really sad. You felt abandoned, ashamed, and heart broken.

|"Sorry ! ! but it just won't work out. We are way two diffrent and well...We always have been I guess. I still love you though. I always will. He than leaned over and kissed you once in the cheek and turned away. He walked slowy away and than dissapeared from your site.| You sighed and took out the ? ? colored, ? ? shaped pendent he gave you. You heald it towrd the sun and it shined You then pulled in close to your heart. You loved ? ? ever sense you were childeren. Both of you had grown up at the Zenafree Orphanage in ? ?. You had a some friends there but hardly enoph to brag about. There was Debbie Calshew, En Trance, Zoenel Omikeusin from Africa, and Karanla Toglei from Japan and Her brother Koenchilo. However you need take the good with the evil. There was also two people who made your life misrable Carlie Fancheziclin from France (Sorry if your from French I mean no insolt!) and her boyfriend Alo Polaw. Of course you don't really wanta hear about all that do you? You're probly wishing i'd just skip to the point of this fanfiction huh? Basicly the only point of that was so I can name something. I like to name stuff! Anyway i'll go ahead and get to the point.....

?:"That's it? That's who were suppose ta-."

??'Yes."

?: "But she's ugly!"

???: "If she's so ugly then why are you looking at her butt?"

?: "Hey now! Just because she has an ugly body dosn't mean she's got an ugly butt!"

???: "You shut up."

??: "Please, now is not the time to be arguing about such. We need to hurry up and get this over with before I get sick on my stomach for about what we need to do."

"YOU SHUT UP!!!"

??: "/Sighs/ Let's just go."

???: "I'll do it."

??: "Be careful we don't want to over do it."

You continued to hum the melody as you did draging along the roadside. A small tear slid down your cheek, it shined beautifly, It fell to the groud and droped in a puddle of water. The ripples spreaded apart and arched over top of it. {Wait..} You thought. {Why is there water here. It wasn't raining or drillziling or....} /Plomp/ Down you fell, just like your tear, Into your own puddle of blood.

(I know, sorta short! And that's why i'm including this small preview! Review and i'll update! I'm looking for four reviews and then i'll post chapter two. It gets better! I promise!)

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You: "Ow...My shoulder...."

You: "What happened? Where am I? And what am I doing wherever I am?"

??: "All will be exsplained in due time. Untill then you need to rest and to mend. You will be needed soon."

???: "Well? Is it awake yet?"

??: "It's a she ??? not an it."

?: "It's a girl right?"

??: "Yes."

? and ???: "Than' it's an it!!!"

In the next chapter of "Theif to Detective to Werewolf Detective "Theif"

Ya ain't gonna get no where standing still!